Unit4 课内和课外作文 2025-2026学年沪教版八年级英语上册

一、A题【课内】传统手工艺人 写作思路分析 段落 内容要点 写作策略 第1段 基本信息 开门见山介绍手工艺人姓名、年龄、从事的手艺种类及从业年限，可用定语从句或现在分词短语增强表达 第2段 工作内容和过程 使用时间顺序词（first, then, after that, finally）和动作描写，具体描述制作步骤，体现专业性 第3段 你的看法 表达敬佩之情，升华到手艺的文化价值和传承意义，可用感叹句或强调句 高分句型 & 词组 介绍人物 be known as / be skilled at / devote oneself to / with over ... years of experience / at the age of 描述过程 be made of / be carved into / go through several steps / it takes patience to do / first...then...after that...finally 表达看法 in my opinion / what impresses me most is that / play an important role in / pass down from generation to generation / it is ... that ... (强调句) 高分范文 A Traditional Craftsman I Admire My grandfather, Mr. Zhang, is a paper-cutting artist in his seventies. He has been devoted to this traditional art for over fifty years and is well-known in our local community. Every morning, he sits quietly by the window with a pair of small scissors and several pieces of red paper. First, he folds the paper smoothly and skillfully. Then, he carefully cuts along the lines he imagines in his mind. From simple Chinese characters like “Fu” to lively animals such as dragons and phoenixes, every piece goes through dozens of delicate steps. He often tells me, “Patience and concentration are the soul of paper-cutting.” In my opinion, what impresses me most is not his incredible skill but his persevering spirit. Craftsmen like him keep our traditional culture alive. I truly believe they play an important role in passing down our national heritage from generation to generation. 二、B题【课外】志愿者申请信 写作思路分析 段落 内容要点 写作策略 开头 表明身份及申请意图 简洁直接，表达热切期望，可用现在分词短语说明原因 第1段 申请原因 结合个人兴趣与文化认同感，用first/second或for one thing/for another结构 第2段 个人优势 突出语言能力、性格特点、相关经验，可用as for / besides / furthermore衔接 第3段 能为展区做什么 具体列举服务内容，如讲解、引导、协助体验活动，用if chosen / if given the opportunity 结尾 表达感谢与期待 礼貌收束，使用经典套语 高分句型 & 词组 申请原因 have a strong passion for / be eager to / a great opportunity to / be driven by 个人优势 be fluent in / have a good command of / be an outgoing person / work well in a team / a responsible person 能为展区做什么 introduce ... to / help visitors experience / answer questions about / assist in organizing / do my best to 结尾套语 be grateful if / look forward to / I would be honored to / thank you for considering 高分范文 Dear Organizing Committee, I am Li Hua, a junior high school student with a strong passion for traditional Chinese culture. I am writing to apply for the volunteer position at the Traditional Culture pavilion of the upcoming China International Cultural Industries Fair. My application is based on two main reasons. First, I am eager to introduce our splendid culture to visitors from home and abroad. Second, I see this as a valuable chance to improve myself and contribute to such a meaningful event.As for my personal strengths, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, which allows me to communicate with international visitors without difficulty. I am also an outgoing, patient, and responsible person who enjoys teamwork. Furthermore, I have learned paper-cutting and basic calligraphy, so I can help visitors experience these traditional arts firsthand. If chosen, I will do my best to guide visitors, answer their questions, and assist in organizing cultural activities. I would be grateful if you could consider my application. I look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $