内容正文:
专题02 阅读理解应用文
目录
命题·趋势·定位 1
热点·角度·拆解 2
析典例·建模型 3
研考点·通技法 4
破类题·提能力 5
(2026·东城·期末) 5
刷模拟 7
(2026·西城·期末) 7
(2026·朝阳·期末) 7
(2026·海淀·期末) 8
(2026·丰台·期末) 8
刷真题 9
(2024·北京·高考真题) 9
(2023·北京·高考真题) 9
(2022·北京·高考真题) 9
(2021·北京·高考真题) 10
内容导航
【命题解码·定方向】命题趋势+3年高考真题热点角度拆解
【解题建模·通技法】析典例,建模型,技法贯通破类题/变式
【实战刷题·冲高分】精选高考大题+名校模拟题,强化实战能力,得高分
命题·趋势·定位
1. 选材特点
- 全部来自真实校园/生活/国际交流场景
5年题目全是李华给外国好友Jim写邮件,属于青少年真实交际场景,完全贴合高考“实用交际”导向。
- 主题高度集中
· 国际交流/活动建议(2025、2024、2023)
· 学习帮助邀请(2022)
· 约会改期致歉(2021)
- 话题贴近课标:环保、文化交流、国家发展、校园活动、学习互助、日常社交,全是高中英语核心话题。
- 无生僻题材:不考复杂专业内容,全部是学生能写、能懂、能套模板的友好题型。
2. 语篇结构(5年完全一致)
北京卷应用文结构超级固定,标准三段式:
1. 开头:点明来意
道歉/邀请/提建议/说明背景
2. 中间:覆盖全部要点
按题目要求写2–3点,每点1–2句
3. 结尾:礼貌收尾
期待回复 / 表示感谢 / 送上祝福
逻辑连接词高度重复:
to begin with, however, in addition, hopefully, looking forward to
3. 命题热点(高频规律)
- 体裁绝对稳定:电子邮件 E-mail(5年全是)
- 人物固定:李华 → 外国朋友 Jim
- 考查能力固定:
1. 信息完整(不漏要点)
2. 句式正确(简单句+定语从句/状语从句)
3. 语气礼貌(建议、邀请、道歉)
- 最热主题:
1. 建议信(2025、2024、2023)★★★★★
2. 邀请信(2022)
3. 致歉信(2021)
- 命题趋势:
越来越结合时事(联合国倡议、中国发展、绿色环保),但写作难度不变,依然是套模板就能高分。
热点·角度·拆解
2023-2025高考考点细目(阅读理解说明文)
卷别
词数
主题
话题
命题形式
2025・北京卷
100 左右
人与社会
联合国全球青少年倡议征集,给外国好友 Jim 提建议
建议类电子邮件
2024・北京卷
100 左右
人与社会
新中国成立 75 周年,给外国好友 Jim 的校报投稿提建议
建议类电子邮件
2023・北京卷
100 左右
人与自然
“绿色北京” 主题社团活动策划,给英国好友 Jim 提建议
建议类电子邮件
2022・北京卷
100 左右
人与自我
邀请英国好友 Jim 为班级做英语写作线上经验交流
邀请类电子邮件
2021・北京卷
100 左右
人与自我
因故无法赴约,给英国好友 Jim 致歉并改期
致歉 + 建议类电子邮件
析典例·建模型
2025年高考(北京卷)
应用文写作题
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友Jim打算参加,为此发来邮件,就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 提出的建议;
2. 建议的理由。
提示词:倡议 proposal
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
范文
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers. Here’s my advice.
I suggest focusing on environmental protection. As we know, the environment is facing serious problems, which affect everyone’s life. If we can raise awareness about it and encourage more people to take action, it will make a big difference. Another idea is to promote cultural exchange. We live in a world where different cultures coexist. By sharing our cultures and learning from each other, we can build a more harmonious global community.
I hope these suggestions help! Let me know if you need more ideas.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
写作思路
一、开头衔接(固定模板,简洁自然)
直接呼应Jim的邮件,表达开心之情,引出建议,贴合题目给出的开头,无需额外发挥,如范文中“I’m glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers. Here’s my advice.”,既礼貌又点题。
二、核心建议+理由(2条为宜,贴合青少年身份,易展开)
1. 建议选择贴近全球青少年、易产生共鸣的主题(范文选环保+文化交流,适配要求),避免过于宏大或小众的话题(如避免战争、政治类,聚焦青少年能参与的领域)。
2. 理由撰写逻辑:先点出主题的现状/问题(环保:环境面临严重问题;文化交流:不同文化共存),再说明青少年参与的意义(环保:提升意识、带动行动;文化交流:促进理解、构建和谐社区),理由简洁易懂,符合100词左右的要求,不堆砌复杂句式。
三、结尾收尾(固定模板,呼应开头)
表达祝愿,主动提供进一步帮助,贴合题目给出的结尾,如范文中“I hope these suggestions help! Let me know if you need more ideas.”,礼貌且完整。
四、语言注意事项
1. 句式以简单句、并列句为主,适当加入宾语从句、定语从句(如范文中“the environment is facing serious problems, which affect everyone’s life”),符合高三英语水平。
2. 用词准确,紧扣提示词“proposal”,避免生僻词,保证行文流畅,开头结尾已给出,中间核心内容控制在60-80词。
【解题建模】
第一步,明确核心要求:锁定身份(李华,高三学生)、对象(外国好友Jim)、文体(邮件建议信),牢记2条建议+对应理由、100词左右的核心要求,不遗漏提示词proposal。
第二步,构思建议+理由:选取2个贴合全球青少年、易展开的主题(如环保、文化交流、身心健康等),每条建议搭配1-2句理由(先讲现状/问题,再讲意义),避免过于复杂或小众的话题。
第三步,套用句式,规范书写:用建模中的提建议、讲道理句式,衔接开头结尾(题目已给),控制正文字数,使用高中常见词汇和简单从句,保证书写工整、无语法错误。
研考点·通技法
应用文写作考查考生精准完成写作任务、清晰表达观点的能力。不论写哪类应用文,只要明确写作核心与要求,均可通过以下三步解题:
第一步
明确写作要求
1. 锁定身份:高三学生李华,写给外国好友 Jim
2. 确定文体:邮件形式的建议信
3. 牢记核心要点:提出 2 条倡议建议 + 对应理由
4. 控制要求:词数 100 左右,开头结尾已给出不计入总词数,需使用提示词 proposal
第二步
构思写作内容
1. 选定倡议主题:优先选贴合青少年且易展开的话题(如环保、文化交流、青少年身心健康等)
2. 搭建内容逻辑:每条建议配 1-2 句理由,理由可从 “现状问题”“参与意义” 两方面展开
3. 梳理行文结构:开头衔接题目固定句,中间分点写建议 + 理由,结尾套用题目固定收尾句
第三步
规范书写成文
1. 套用句式:用 “I suggest...”“Another idea is...” 等提建议句式,结合定语从句、条件句等丰富表达
2. 核对细节:检查词数是否符合、要点是否齐全、语法拼写是否无误、提示词是否合理使用
3. 优化流畅度:用连接词(besides, moreover 等)衔接内容,保证行文自然连贯
破类题·提能力
(2026·东城·期末)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校上周开展了主题为"运动邂逅青春" 的活动。你的外国好友Jim来信就此询问。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 活动情况;
2. 你的感受。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
Glad to share with you the “Sports Meet Youth” activity held in our school last week.
The event lasted for a week. On the first day, three famous young athletes came and joined us in various sports, like ball games and running. In the following days, we participated in different sports competitions. My favorite was group rope skipping. It was super fun and my class won the first prize! Exciting, right?
All of us find the event truly meaningful for us youth. Personally, I’m convinced that in addition to improving our physical health, doing sports helps us reduce stress and bring us closer. And I have decided to take regular exercise in future.
I’m really looking forward to playing a basketball game with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
“运动邂逅青春”主题邮件回复·写作思路
第一步,明确核心要求:锁定身份(红星中学高三学生李华)、对象(外国好友Jim)、文体(邮件告知信);牢记需涵盖**活动情况**、**个人感受**两大核心要点,词数控制在100左右,开头结尾已给出不计入总词数,贴合高三学生的表达水平。
第二步,构思内容与逻辑:先梳理活动具体信息,明确时间、环节、亮点(如嘉宾参与、具体项目、获奖情况),让内容具体可感;再聚焦个人感受,从身心两方面谈收获(如强身健体、缓解压力、增进同学情谊),最后补充后续计划,让情感表达更真挚,遵循“活动介绍→个人感悟”的逻辑展开,避免空泛表述。
第三步,套用句式,规范书写:用“Glad to share with you...”衔接开头,用“The event lasted for...”“My favorite was...”介绍活动,用“I’m convinced that...”“Personally, I find...”表达感受,搭配高三常用连接词和基础从句;严格核对要点是否齐全、词数是否达标、语法拼写无误,确保行文流畅自然。
【结构解析】
○ 开头直接呼应好友询问,点明要分享“运动邂逅青春”活动,开门见山,契合邮件回复的语境;
○ 中间段按时间顺序介绍活动情况,先说明活动时长,再讲首日运动员互动环节,接着描述后续的体育竞赛,还加入个人最爱的集体跳绳及班级获奖的细节,内容具体且贴合“活动情况”的写作要求;
○ 结尾先表达整体活动对青年的意义,再谈个人感受,点明运动对健康、减压、增进感情的作用,最后加入和好友一起打球的期待,让邮件情感更真挚,收尾自然。
语言亮点
○ 运用“in addition to”表递进,精准衔接运动的多重益处,逻辑清晰;
○ 使用宾语从句“I’m convinced that...”表达个人观点,句式丰富,符合高三写作要求;
○ 时态运用准确,一般过去时描述活动过程,一般现在时表达感受和决定,时态切换自然;
○ 用“super fun”“Exciting, right?”等口语化表达,贴合给好友写邮件的非正式语境,语气亲切。
写作思路提示:
1.活动情况:可描述活动形式(如趣味运动会、班级接力赛、运动知识讲座等)、参与情况(全校师生参与,氛围热烈);
2.你的感受:强调运动带来的活力、同学间的协作精神,以及青春与运动结合的意义(如释放压力、增强凝聚力等)。
(建议用时:45分钟)
刷模拟
A
(2026·西城·期末)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim 想参加China Daily 举 办的“Photo Beijing”照片征集活动。为此发来邮件,就拍摄内容询问你的建议。 请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 提出的建议;
2. 建议的理由。
注意: 1.词数100 左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(2026·朝阳·期末)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你参加了题为“描绘城市色彩” (The Color of A City) 的英语征文活动,你的外国好友Jim 对你的征文内容很感兴趣,发来邮件询问。请你用英 文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 你选择的城市和它的色彩;
2. 说明色彩选择的理由。
注意:1. 词数100 左右;
开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(2026·海淀·期末)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你班即将举行主题为"驻足一角,感悟北京"的英语演讲 活动,你打算参加。现在你需要准备一份演讲稿,分享自己的相关经历,内容包括:
1.你的经历;
2.你的感悟。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear all,
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening.
(2026·丰台·期末)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校英语社团正在举办以 “Becoming a Better Self”为主题的征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 你的理解;
2. 你的做法。
注意: 1. 词数100 左右;
标题已给出,不计入总词数。
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
刷真题
(2024·北京·高考真题)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1) 建议投稿内容;
(2) 就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意:(1) 词数100左右;(2) 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
(2023·北京·高考真题)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1) 活动形式;
(2) 活动内容。
注意:(1) 词数100左右;(2) 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
(2022·北京·高考真题)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 建议交流的具体内容及其原因;
2. 交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
(2021·北京·高考真题)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达歉意并说明原因;
2. 提出建议并给出理由。
注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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专题02 阅读理解应用文
目录
命题·趋势·定位 1
热点·角度·拆解 2
析典例·建模型 3
研考点·通技法 4
破类题·提能力 5
(2026·东城·期末) 5
刷模拟 7
(2026·西城·期末) 7
(2026·朝阳·期末) 9
(2026·海淀·期末) 10
(2026·丰台·期末) 11
刷真题 13
(2024·北京·高考真题) 13
(2023·北京·高考真题) 14
(2022·北京·高考真题) 14
(2021·北京·高考真题) 15
内容导航
【命题解码·定方向】命题趋势+3年高考真题热点角度拆解
【解题建模·通技法】析典例,建模型,技法贯通破类题/变式
【实战刷题·冲高分】精选高考大题+名校模拟题,强化实战能力,得高分
命题·趋势·定位
1. 选材特点
- 全部来自真实校园/生活/国际交流场景
5年题目全是李华给外国好友Jim写邮件,属于青少年真实交际场景,完全贴合高考“实用交际”导向。
- 主题高度集中
· 国际交流/活动建议(2025、2024、2023)
· 学习帮助邀请(2022)
· 约会改期致歉(2021)
- 话题贴近课标:环保、文化交流、国家发展、校园活动、学习互助、日常社交,全是高中英语核心话题。
- 无生僻题材:不考复杂专业内容,全部是学生能写、能懂、能套模板的友好题型。
2. 语篇结构(5年完全一致)
北京卷应用文结构超级固定,标准三段式:
1. 开头:点明来意
道歉/邀请/提建议/说明背景
2. 中间:覆盖全部要点
按题目要求写2–3点,每点1–2句
3. 结尾:礼貌收尾
期待回复 / 表示感谢 / 送上祝福
逻辑连接词高度重复:
to begin with, however, in addition, hopefully, looking forward to
3. 命题热点(高频规律)
- 体裁绝对稳定:电子邮件 E-mail(5年全是)
- 人物固定:李华 → 外国朋友 Jim
- 考查能力固定:
1. 信息完整(不漏要点)
2. 句式正确(简单句+定语从句/状语从句)
3. 语气礼貌(建议、邀请、道歉)
- 最热主题:
1. 建议信(2025、2024、2023)★★★★★
2. 邀请信(2022)
3. 致歉信(2021)
- 命题趋势:
越来越结合时事(联合国倡议、中国发展、绿色环保),但写作难度不变,依然是套模板就能高分。
热点·角度·拆解
2023-2025高考考点细目(阅读理解说明文)
卷别
词数
主题
话题
命题形式
2025・北京卷
100 左右
人与社会
联合国全球青少年倡议征集,给外国好友 Jim 提建议
建议类电子邮件
2024・北京卷
100 左右
人与社会
新中国成立 75 周年,给外国好友 Jim 的校报投稿提建议
建议类电子邮件
2023・北京卷
100 左右
人与自然
“绿色北京” 主题社团活动策划,给英国好友 Jim 提建议
建议类电子邮件
2022・北京卷
100 左右
人与自我
邀请英国好友 Jim 为班级做英语写作线上经验交流
邀请类电子邮件
2021・北京卷
100 左右
人与自我
因故无法赴约,给英国好友 Jim 致歉并改期
致歉 + 建议类电子邮件
析典例·建模型
2025年高考(北京卷)
应用文写作题
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友Jim打算参加,为此发来邮件,就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 提出的建议;
2. 建议的理由。
提示词:倡议 proposal
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
范文
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers. Here’s my advice.
I suggest focusing on environmental protection. As we know, the environment is facing serious problems, which affect everyone’s life. If we can raise awareness about it and encourage more people to take action, it will make a big difference. Another idea is to promote cultural exchange. We live in a world where different cultures coexist. By sharing our cultures and learning from each other, we can build a more harmonious global community.
I hope these suggestions help! Let me know if you need more ideas.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
写作思路
一、开头衔接(固定模板,简洁自然)
直接呼应Jim的邮件,表达开心之情,引出建议,贴合题目给出的开头,无需额外发挥,如范文中“I’m glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers. Here’s my advice.”,既礼貌又点题。
二、核心建议+理由(2条为宜,贴合青少年身份,易展开)
1. 建议选择贴近全球青少年、易产生共鸣的主题(范文选环保+文化交流,适配要求),避免过于宏大或小众的话题(如避免战争、政治类,聚焦青少年能参与的领域)。
2. 理由撰写逻辑:先点出主题的现状/问题(环保:环境面临严重问题;文化交流:不同文化共存),再说明青少年参与的意义(环保:提升意识、带动行动;文化交流:促进理解、构建和谐社区),理由简洁易懂,符合100词左右的要求,不堆砌复杂句式。
三、结尾收尾(固定模板,呼应开头)
表达祝愿,主动提供进一步帮助,贴合题目给出的结尾,如范文中“I hope these suggestions help! Let me know if you need more ideas.”,礼貌且完整。
四、语言注意事项
1. 句式以简单句、并列句为主,适当加入宾语从句、定语从句(如范文中“the environment is facing serious problems, which affect everyone’s life”),符合高三英语水平。
2. 用词准确,紧扣提示词“proposal”,避免生僻词,保证行文流畅,开头结尾已给出,中间核心内容控制在60-80词。
【解题建模】
第一步,明确核心要求:锁定身份(李华,高三学生)、对象(外国好友Jim)、文体(邮件建议信),牢记2条建议+对应理由、100词左右的核心要求,不遗漏提示词proposal。
第二步,构思建议+理由:选取2个贴合全球青少年、易展开的主题(如环保、文化交流、身心健康等),每条建议搭配1-2句理由(先讲现状/问题,再讲意义),避免过于复杂或小众的话题。
第三步,套用句式,规范书写:用建模中的提建议、讲道理句式,衔接开头结尾(题目已给),控制正文字数,使用高中常见词汇和简单从句,保证书写工整、无语法错误。
研考点·通技法
应用文写作考查考生精准完成写作任务、清晰表达观点的能力。不论写哪类应用文,只要明确写作核心与要求,均可通过以下三步解题:
第一步
明确写作要求
1. 锁定身份:高三学生李华,写给外国好友 Jim
2. 确定文体:邮件形式的建议信
3. 牢记核心要点:提出 2 条倡议建议 + 对应理由
4. 控制要求:词数 100 左右,开头结尾已给出不计入总词数,需使用提示词 proposal
第二步
构思写作内容
1. 选定倡议主题:优先选贴合青少年且易展开的话题(如环保、文化交流、青少年身心健康等)
2. 搭建内容逻辑:每条建议配 1-2 句理由,理由可从 “现状问题”“参与意义” 两方面展开
3. 梳理行文结构:开头衔接题目固定句,中间分点写建议 + 理由,结尾套用题目固定收尾句
第三步
规范书写成文
1. 套用句式:用 “I suggest...”“Another idea is...” 等提建议句式,结合定语从句、条件句等丰富表达
2. 核对细节:检查词数是否符合、要点是否齐全、语法拼写是否无误、提示词是否合理使用
3. 优化流畅度:用连接词(besides, moreover 等)衔接内容,保证行文自然连贯
破类题·提能力
(2026·东城·期末)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校上周开展了主题为"运动邂逅青春" 的活动。你的外国好友Jim来信就此询问。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 活动情况;
2. 你的感受。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
Glad to share with you the “Sports Meet Youth” activity held in our school last week.
The event lasted for a week. On the first day, three famous young athletes came and joined us in various sports, like ball games and running. In the following days, we participated in different sports competitions. My favorite was group rope skipping. It was super fun and my class won the first prize! Exciting, right?
All of us find the event truly meaningful for us youth. Personally, I’m convinced that in addition to improving our physical health, doing sports helps us reduce stress and bring us closer. And I have decided to take regular exercise in future.
I’m really looking forward to playing a basketball game with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
“运动邂逅青春”主题邮件回复·写作思路
第一步,明确核心要求:锁定身份(红星中学高三学生李华)、对象(外国好友Jim)、文体(邮件告知信);牢记需涵盖**活动情况**、**个人感受**两大核心要点,词数控制在100左右,开头结尾已给出不计入总词数,贴合高三学生的表达水平。
第二步,构思内容与逻辑:先梳理活动具体信息,明确时间、环节、亮点(如嘉宾参与、具体项目、获奖情况),让内容具体可感;再聚焦个人感受,从身心两方面谈收获(如强身健体、缓解压力、增进同学情谊),最后补充后续计划,让情感表达更真挚,遵循“活动介绍→个人感悟”的逻辑展开,避免空泛表述。
第三步,套用句式,规范书写:用“Glad to share with you...”衔接开头,用“The event lasted for...”“My favorite was...”介绍活动,用“I’m convinced that...”“Personally, I find...”表达感受,搭配高三常用连接词和基础从句;严格核对要点是否齐全、词数是否达标、语法拼写无误,确保行文流畅自然。
【结构解析】
○ 开头直接呼应好友询问,点明要分享“运动邂逅青春”活动,开门见山,契合邮件回复的语境;
○ 中间段按时间顺序介绍活动情况,先说明活动时长,再讲首日运动员互动环节,接着描述后续的体育竞赛,还加入个人最爱的集体跳绳及班级获奖的细节,内容具体且贴合“活动情况”的写作要求;
○ 结尾先表达整体活动对青年的意义,再谈个人感受,点明运动对健康、减压、增进感情的作用,最后加入和好友一起打球的期待,让邮件情感更真挚,收尾自然。
语言亮点
○ 运用“in addition to”表递进,精准衔接运动的多重益处,逻辑清晰;
○ 使用宾语从句“I’m convinced that...”表达个人观点,句式丰富,符合高三写作要求;
○ 时态运用准确,一般过去时描述活动过程,一般现在时表达感受和决定,时态切换自然;
○ 用“super fun”“Exciting, right?”等口语化表达,贴合给好友写邮件的非正式语境,语气亲切。
写作思路提示:
1.活动情况:可描述活动形式(如趣味运动会、班级接力赛、运动知识讲座等)、参与情况(全校师生参与,氛围热烈);
2.你的感受:强调运动带来的活力、同学间的协作精神,以及青春与运动结合的意义(如释放压力、增强凝聚力等)。
(建议用时:45分钟)
刷模拟
A
(2026·西城·期末)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim 想参加China Daily 举 办的“Photo Beijing”照片征集活动。为此发来邮件,就拍摄内容询问你的建议。 请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 提出的建议;
2. 建议的理由。
注意: 1.词数100 左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
范文:
Dear Jim,
Glad to know you are interested in joining the “Photo Beijing” activity. I suggest you focus on the combination of modern life and ancient culture in Beijing. You could capture modern buildings and historic sites together in the same photo. For instance, behind the Temple of Heaven, rises a backdrop of skyscrapers. Or modern cafés and old courtyards stand side by side in the hutongs.
These images clearly show how traditional culture and modern civilization coexist harmoniously in Beijing. They not only present the city’s long history, but also demonstrate its rapid development. Such photos can leave a deep impression on readers and fully reflect the charm of Beijing.
I’m confident your work will shine brightly.
Yours,
Li Hua
结构解析
○ 开头先对好友参加活动表示开心,随即给出核心建议——拍摄北京现代与古文化的融合,直接回应好友的询问,观点明确;
○ 中间段通过具体例子说明拍摄思路,如天坛与摩天大楼、胡同里的现代咖啡馆与老四合院,让建议更具可操作性,理由支撑更充分;
○ 结尾阐释该拍摄思路的意义,点明照片能展现北京传统与现代的融合之美,还能给读者留下深刻印象,最后鼓励好友,呼应主题,结构完整。
语言亮点
○ 运用“capture”“coexist harmoniously”等词汇,表达精准且贴合摄影和城市文化的主题,提升写作质感;
○ 用“For instance”举例,衔接自然,让内容更有条理;
○ 使用“not only...but also...”并列结构,全面阐述照片的价值,句式工整,增强表达力度;
○ 用“I’m confident your work will shine brightly.”表达对好友的期待,句式简洁,情感真挚。
写作思路提示:
建议内容:可推荐拍摄老北京胡同(如南锣鼓巷)、现代地标(如鸟巢、大兴机场)、传统民俗场景(如茶馆品茶、剪纸工艺)等;
建议理由:突出北京“传统与现代交融”的特色,照片能展现城市文化底蕴与发展活力,符合征集活动主题。
(2026·朝阳·期末)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你参加了题为“描绘城市色彩” (The Color of A City) 的英语征文活动,你的外国好友Jim 对你的征文内容很感兴趣,发来邮件询问。请你用英 文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 你选择的城市和它的色彩;
2. 说明色彩选择的理由。
注意:1. 词数100 左右;
开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Jim,
Knowing your interest in my essay for the competition, “The Color of a City”, I’m delighted to share some details with you.
Having grown up in Beijing, I naturally chose it as the focus, with red as its defining color. My choice is based on two main reasons. First, red is central to Beijing’s visual identity. You can see it through our national flag, the grand walls of the Forbidden City, and the festive lanterns during celebrations. Beijing is red not only in appearance but also in spirit. Red represents the warmth I’ve felt growing up here. To me, it symbolizes both the city’s well-known culture of hospitality and the warm-hearted spirit of Beijingers, connecting its past and present.
What do you think? I’d be thrilled to show you around “red Beijing” some day!
Yours,
Li Hua
结构解析
○ 开头回应好友对征文的兴趣,表明要分享细节,契合邮件回复的写作场景,过渡自然;
○ 中间段先明确选择的城市是北京、代表色是红色,再从视觉标识和城市精神两个角度说明理由,层次分明,理由具体且贴合“描绘城市色彩”的征文主题;
○ 结尾用问句询问好友看法,再发出游览北京的邀请,让邮件互动性更强,收尾亲切自然。
语言亮点
○ 运用“defining color”“visual identity”等专业表达,精准描述城市与色彩的关联,词汇运用地道;
○ 用“not only...but also...”衔接北京的外在色彩与内在精神,逻辑递进,让理由更有深度;
○ 使用定语从句“you can see it through our national flag, the grand walls of the Forbidden City, and the festive lanterns during celebrations”,丰富句式,细节描写更生动;
○ 用“symbolizes”点明红色的象征意义,贴合征文的抒情与议论结合的写作要求。
写作思路提示:
选择城市与色彩:如选择北京,色彩为“红与灰”;选择苏州,色彩为“青与白”;
理由:结合城市特色(如北京的红墙、灰瓦,象征传统与庄重;苏州的青石板、白墙,体现江南水乡的温婉与宁静)。
(2026·海淀·期末)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你班即将举行主题为"驻足一角,感悟北京"的英语演讲 活动,你打算参加。现在你需要准备一份演讲稿,分享自己的相关经历,内容包括:
1.你的经历;
2.你的感悟。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear all,
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening.
答案与解析
Dear all,
As a Senior Three student, I’m always under great pressure. To relax, I paid a visit to Lao She Teahouse, a well-known place full of Beijing’s traditional culture. It gave me a wonderful and unforgettable experience.
Upon entering, I was attracted by the lively atmosphere. There was warm applause and nice tea smell everywhere. What impressed me most was the shadow puppet show. Many teenagers and their parents watched it happily, enjoying the beauty of traditional art together.
This short visit made me realize Beijing’s special charm lies in these warm places. It not only calmed my mind but also helped me relax from study stress. I love this city more because of such lovely moments.
Thanks for listening.
结构解析
○ 开头段点明高三学生的身份与学习压力,说明前往老舍茶馆的目的,总述体验难忘,开篇自然、点题清晰,顺利引出下文;
○ 中间段聚焦茶馆现场氛围与皮影戏核心见闻,场景具体、画面感强,作为主体内容充实完整,紧扣“驻足城市一角”的写作要求;
○ 结尾段升华城市感悟,结合放松身心的个人收获,抒发对北京的喜爱,收尾扣题、情感真挚,符合“感悟北京”的主题。
语言亮点
○ 运用不定式作目的状语、Upon doing…、主语从句、现在分词伴随状语、not only…but also…等多种高分句型,句式丰富有层次;
○ 使用under great pressure、pay a visit to、be attracted by、what impressed me most等高考高频短语,表达地道、适配考场写作;
○ 氛围描写生动,lively atmosphere、warm applause、special charm等用词精准,画面感与感染力强;
○ 逻辑层层递进,从压力、出行、见闻到感悟连贯自然,内容与主题高度契合。
写作思路提示:
经历:描述驻足的具体场景(如故宫角楼的黄昏、什刹海的冬日、老书店的角落),细节可包括看到的景象、遇到的人(如守店老人、写生的学生);
感悟:联系场景体现北京的历史厚重感、生活气息,或感悟到“平凡角落藏着城市灵魂”“慢下来才能发现美好”等。
(2026·丰台·期末)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校英语社团正在举办以 “Becoming a Better Self”为主题的征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 你的理解;
2. 你的做法。
注意: 1. 词数100 左右;
标题已给出,不计入总词数。
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
答案
Becoming a Better Self
To me, “becoming a better self” involves not only personal excellence but also a sense of social responsibility. This involves actively expanding my knowledge and skills, while linking one’s own development to the broader fate of society.
To translate this into action, I will explore subjects beyond the classroom, using online resources and joining discussion groups that challenge my thinking, which would broaden my thinking and nurture my creativity. I can also consistently help those around me through daily actions, such as volunteering regularly and supporting peers, which strengthens my connection to and responsibility for others.
By following this path, I am confident that I can move steadily toward becoming a better version of myself. (123w)
结构解析
○ 开头直接给出对“成为更好的自己”的理解,将个人优秀与社会责任结合,立意深刻,贴合征文主题;
○ 中间段分两点阐述具体做法,一是拓展课堂外的知识、培养创新思维,二是日常帮助他人、培养社会责任感,做法具体且与前文的理解相呼应,知行合一;
○ 结尾用“By following this path”衔接前文做法,表达成为更好自己的信心,收尾简洁有力,结构完整。
语言亮点
○ 运用“involves”“link...to...”“nurture”“strengthen one’s connection to”等高级词汇和短语,表达精准,提升写作档次;
○ 多次使用非谓语动词(如using/joining/supporting)和定语从句(如which would broaden my thinking...),句式多样,避免单一;
○ 用“consistently”修饰帮助他人的行为,体现坚持的态度,让做法更有说服力;
○ 行文逻辑清晰,用“To translate this into action”“also”等过渡词,衔接理解与做法,层次分明。
写作思路提示:
1.你的理解:可定义“成为更好的自己”为“不断突破舒适区、弥补不足、保持成长”;
2. 你的做法:举例说明(如坚持每日阅读提升语感、主动参与小组讨论克服内向、制定学习计划培养自律等)。
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(2024·北京·高考真题)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1) 建议投稿内容;
(2) 就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意:(1) 词数100左右;(2) 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article.
To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
本文为介绍类建议邮件,贴合时事主题。
1. 高分句型:使用which引导非限定性定语从句、because引导原因状语从句,提升句式复杂度。
2. 话题词汇:economic growth(经济增长)、technological advancements(科技进步)、Belt and Road Initiative(一带一路),贴合主题且词汇高级。
3. 结构逻辑:总起→分述三个建议及理由→结尾期待,符合邮件写作规范。
(2023·北京·高考真题)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1) 活动形式;
(2) 活动内容。
注意:(1) 词数100左右;(2) 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
本篇为活动策划建议类邮件,要点明确。
1. 非谓语开篇:Hearing that...现在分词作状语,是高考高分开头句式。
2. 核心短语:carry out(开展)、garbage classification(垃圾分类)、sharing economy(共享经济),贴合环保主题。
3. 行文逻辑:说明来意→给出活动形式→列举活动内容→结尾祝福,衔接自然。
(2022·北京·高考真题)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 建议交流的具体内容及其原因;
2. 交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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范文
Dear Jim,
How’s everything?
I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. Our classmates seem to be weak in organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay?
The talk will last about an hour, and you can decide on a date at your convenience. Please let me know which platform you’ll use. It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
本文为邀请类邮件,侧重学习交流。
1. 疑问词+不定式:how to connect sentences logically,简洁且符合高考语法考点。
2. 礼貌用语:Would you please...、at your convenience,符合英文邮件礼貌表达习惯。
3. 要点覆盖:完整包含邀请目的、交流内容、时间安排、补充事项,无要点遗漏。
(2021·北京·高考真题)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达歉意并说明原因;
2. 提出建议并给出理由。
注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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范文
Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won’t cause you too much trouble.
How about going out next Saturday morning? If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at the school gate at 9:00. Please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available anytime next weekend.
In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers together.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
本篇为道歉+建议类邮件,是高考高频体裁。
1. 定语从句:who was suddenly admitted to the hospital,修饰grandfather,丰富句式。
2. 建议句型:How about...?、If it’s convenient for you...,自然提出改期建议。
3. 情感表达:先致歉说明原因,再给出解决方案,符合人际交往逻辑。
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专题06应用文写作
(建议用时:45分钟)
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2026·东城·期末 答案
Dear Jim,
Glad to share with you the “Sports Meet Youth” activity held in our school last week.
The event lasted for a week. On the first day, three famous young athletes came and joined us in various sports, like ball games and running. In the following days, we participated in different sports competitions. My favorite was group rope skipping. It was super fun and my class won the first prize! Exciting, right?
All of us find the event truly meaningful for us youth. Personally, I’m convinced that in addition to improving our physical health, doing sports helps us reduce stress and bring us closer. And I have decided to take regular exercise in future.
I’m really looking forward to playing a basketball game with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
2026·西城·期末 答案
Dear Jim,
Glad to know you are interested in joining the “Photo Beijing” activity. I suggest you focus on the combination of modern life and ancient culture in Beijing. You could capture modern buildings and historic sites together in the same photo. For instance, behind the Temple of Heaven, rises a backdrop of skyscrapers. Or modern cafés and old courtyards stand side by side in the hutongs.
These images clearly show how traditional culture and modern civilization coexist harmoniously in Beijing. They not only present the city’s long history, but also demonstrate its rapid development. Such photos can leave a deep impression on readers and fully reflect the charm of Beijing.
I’m confident your work will shine brightly.
Yours,
Li Hua
2026·朝阳·期末 答案
Dear Jim,
Knowing your interest in my essay for the competition, “The Color of a City”, I’m delighted to share some details with you.
Having grown up in Beijing, I naturally chose it as the focus, with red as its defining color. My choice is based on two main reasons. First, red is central to Beijing’s visual identity. You can see it through our national flag, the grand walls of the Forbidden City, and the festive lanterns during celebrations. Beijing is red not only in appearance but also in spirit. Red represents the warmth I’ve felt growing up here. To me, it symbolizes both the city’s well-known culture of hospitality and the warm-hearted spirit of Beijingers, connecting its past and present.
What do you think? I’d be thrilled to show you around “red Beijing” some day!
Yours,
Li Hua
2026·海淀·期末 答案
Dear all,
As a Senior Three student, I’m always under great pressure. To relax, I paid a visit to Lao She Teahouse, a well-known place full of Beijing’s traditional culture. It gave me a wonderful and unforgettable experience.
Upon entering, I was attracted by the lively atmosphere. There was warm applause and nice tea smell everywhere. What impressed me most was the shadow puppet show. Many teenagers and their parents watched it happily, enjoying the beauty of traditional art together.
This short visit made me realize Beijing’s special charm lies in these warm places. It not only calmed my mind but also helped me relax from study stress. I love this city more because of such lovely moments.
Thanks for listening.
2026·丰台·期末 答案
Becoming a Better Self
To me, “becoming a better self” involves not only personal excellence but also a sense of social responsibility. This involves actively expanding my knowledge and skills, while linking one’s own development to the broader fate of society.
To translate this into action, I will explore subjects beyond the classroom, using online resources and joining discussion groups that challenge my thinking, which would broaden my thinking and nurture my creativity. I can also consistently help those around me through daily actions, such as volunteering regularly and supporting peers, which strengthens my connection to and responsibility for others.
By following this path, I am confident that I can move steadily toward becoming a better version of myself.
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2024·北京·高考真题 答案
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article.
To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
2023·北京·高考真题 答案
Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
2022·北京·高考真题 答案
Dear Jim,
How’s everything?
I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. Our classmates seem to be weak in organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay?
The talk will last about an hour, and you can decide on a date at your convenience. Please let me know which platform you’ll use. It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
2021·北京·高考真题 答案
Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won’t cause you too much trouble.
How about going out next Saturday morning? If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at the school gate at 9:00. Please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available anytime next weekend.
In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers together.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
2025年高考(北京卷)典例范文答案
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers. Here’s my advice.
I suggest focusing on environmental protection. As we know, the environment is facing serious problems, which affect everyone’s life. If we can raise awareness about it and encourage more people to take action, it will make a big difference. Another idea is to promote cultural exchange. We live in a world where different cultures coexist. By sharing our cultures and learning from each other, we can build a more harmonious global community.
I hope these suggestions help! Let me know if you need more ideas.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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