内容正文:
A letter of advice
建议信
书面表达
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike由于父母工作变动,要转到另外一个城市的学校上学。他发邮件向你询问如何尽快融入新班级,请你给他回复。内容包括:
1. 多交朋友;
2. 多参加活动;
3.其他建议
写作三部曲:
第一步:审题
第二步:谋篇
第三步:写作
第一步:审题
审题材
审时态
审人称
审内容
回复信:建议信
第二人称:you
一般将来时
第二步:谋篇
分三段
Dear Mike,
Sorry to hear that you are having difficulty adapting to the new school. Here are my suggestions.
First, you should get along well with your classmates and make friends with them. In this way, you will get to know each other better. Second, try to take part in as many school activities as possible, which are good for developing friendship with other students.Last but not least, consider turning to your teachers for help who can usually give you some valuable suggestions.
I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you.
yours,
Li Hua
得知你的困难
给你建议(写信目的)
建议1+原因
希望我的建议能对你有所帮助
第一段:背景信息+写信目的
1.Sorry to hear that you are having difficulty (in) doing sth.
2. You are worried that...
1. 表达“得知你的困难”
2. 表达“理解你的难处”
1.Everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don't have to worry so much.
2. I know your feelings, because I had the same experience before.
3. 写信目的
1. I am writing to give you some advice.
2. Here are my suggestions.
A
B
C
D
E
F
I think you should...
I recommend that you (should)...
I advise you to...
If I were you, I would...
You'd better...
Why not...
第二段:建议+原因
表达“原因”:
表达“建议”:
A
B
C
In this way ,you will...
They can help you...
, which are good for ...
建议之间用过渡词链接:
First
Second
At last/Third/Last but not least
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1. I do hope you will take my advice into consideration.
2. (In the end,) I do hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful.
3. I hope my suggestions/advice will be of help/use to you.
4. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.
第三段:表达“希望建议有所帮助”
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the letter of advice
Dear _________,
You wrote that ___________
I understand that _________
I think __________________
because ________________.
I am sure that ___________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
10 September 2022
Dear Xu Ting,
You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because your parents work in another city. I understand how you feel. It is common for teenagers to feel lonely when they live away from their parents.
I think you can try joining a volunteer group that helps other people. This will give you a chance to meet and be around others.
It will also help you realise that you are not alone in having problems and that many other people have problems, too. Helping other people also makes us feel better. You can also connect with your parents online. Just because your parents are far away, it doesn’t mean you can’t talk to them.
I’m sure that you’ll make new friends and get a chance to speak to your parents more often. This will help drive away your loneliness.
Best wishes,
Susan Luo
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