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应用文
类型 欢迎信 宣传稿 叙旧信 邀请信 活动报道 建议信 投稿 告知信 演讲稿 推荐信
应用文话题 学校生活 传统文化 文化生活 文化生活 劳动类 学校生活 运动与健康 学校生活 社会现象 学校生活
考情分析
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授课对象:陈同学
学校:温州中学
年级:高三
成绩:100/150, 有一定的语法基础但是作文中体现不出非谓语等高级结构以及各种从句长难句
授课目标:1.掌握建议信基本框架以及写作思路
2.学会运用建议信体裁相关的高级词汇和句型,提升写作分数
考情分析
目录
CONTENTS
导入真题
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写作框架
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高级句型与句式
课程小结
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导入-信件结构
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【例题】
假如你是高三学生李华,上周收到好友Tom的来信,从而得知他最近感到学习压力很大,学习效果甚微。请你回一封电子邮件,帮助他放松身心,提高学习效率。内容要点:
1. 转变心态,正确对待学习压力;
2. 听听歌曲,释放学习压力;
3. 多与同学交流,互相鼓励;
注意:
词数80左右;
可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
Lead in
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【范文】
Dear Tom,
How are you? I’m sorry to know that you are suffering from the disturbing pressure from study. Here are some suggestions which are expected to be practical for you.
Firstly, since pressure is an inevitable part of students’ life, why not choose to hold an optimistic attitude towards it and even transform it into motivation? Besides, listening to music is also an means you can try to alleviate pressure. Last but not least, try to communicate with your classmates as much as possible, through which not only can you incontrovertibly gain some support, but also receive encouragement to overcome the difficulties.
Hope these can benefit you.
Yours,
Li Hua
侧重于建议内容,incontrovertibly肯定,一定
Inevitable不可避免的,动机
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写作框架
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写作框架
开头段
中间段
结尾段
问候:How are you?
交代写信背景(收件人哪方面需要建议?)
交代写信目的(给建议)
●具体建议+建议理由/好处
●表达期待/总结建议/祝愿
建议信
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建议信高级句型句式-首段
首段:交代背景,交代目的
背景:压力大
【例题】
假如你是高三学生李华,上周收到好友Tom的来信,从而得知他最近感到学习压力很大,学习效果甚微。请你回一封电子邮件,帮助他放松身心,提高学习效率。内容要点:
1. 转变心态,正确对待学习压力;
2. 听听歌曲,释放学习压力;
3. 多与同学交流,互相鼓励;
某人正在遭受:sb be suffering from ...
某人做某事有困难:sb be having trouble (in) doing sth
某人纠结某件事情:sb be struggling with sth
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首段:交代背景,交代目的
背景:压力大
【例题】
假如你是高三学生李华,上周收到好友Tom的来信,从而得知他最近感到学习压力很大,学习效果甚微。请你回一封电子邮件,帮助他放松身心,提高学习效率。内容要点:
1. 转变心态,正确对待学习压力;
2. 听听歌曲,释放学习压力;
3. 多与同学交流,互相鼓励;
Learning that +写作背景, I’m writing to offer you some suggestions which may help you.
Learning that you are suffering from the disturbing pressure from study, I’m writing to offer you some suggestions which may help you.
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首段:交代背景,提出邀请
Learning that you are suffering from the disturbing pressure from study, I’m writing to offer you some suggestions which may help you.
No sooner had I learned that+写作背景+than+句子
No sooner had I learned that you were suffering from the disturbing pressure from study than I promptly wrote to share some practical suggestions with you.
【思考】升级句式-还可以更好吗?
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首段:交代背景,提出邀请
No sooner had I learned that+写作背景+than I promptly wrote to share some practical suggestions with you.
No sooner had I learned that you were suffering from the disturbing pressure from study than I promptly wrote to share some practical suggestions with you.
句式亮点:
1.no sooner...than...的部分倒装
2.that引导的宾语从句
3.高级词汇 promptly;share sth with sb
句式易错点:
1. 时态时间是过去 2. than连词不可省
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首段:交代背景,提出邀请
基础版:How are you ? Learning that +写作背景, I’m writing to offer you some suggestions which may help you.
进阶版:Hope this letter finds you well . No sooner had I learned that+写作背景
+ than I promptly wrote to share some practical suggestions with you.
写作背景:收信人哪些方面有困难
某人正在遭受:sb be suffering from ...
某人做某事有困难:sb be having trouble/difficulty/problem (in) doing sth
某人纠结某件事情:sb be struggling with sth
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【首段练习1】
假定你是李华,你的朋友在融入新学校非常困难向你求助,请你给他一些建议帮助他适应新学校的生活。
首段练习1
背景
No sooner had I learned that+写作背景+than I promptly wrote to share some practical suggestions with you.
No sooner had I learned that ________________________________________
than I promptly wrote to share some practical suggestions with you.
假定你是李华,你的朋友在融入新学校非常困难向你求助,请你给他一些建议帮助他适应新学校的生活。
写作背景
写信目的
you were having trouble adapting to your new school
首段练习1
Learning that +写作背景, I’m writing to offer you some suggestions which may help you.
【25-26学年安庆一模】
假定你是李华,你们班来自澳大利亚的外教Smith将在下学期开设一门英语选修课,学校为此征求各班学生的意见。请你就此情况给Smith写一封建议信。
Learning that you will develop an optional course next term, I’m writing to offer you some suggestions which may help you.
No sooner had I learned that you would develop an optional course next term than I promptly wrote to share some practical suggestions with you.
No sooner had I learned that+写作背景+than +句子
开设一门英语选修课
首段练习2 -试写段落
建议信高级句型句式-中段
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假如你是高三学生李华,上周收到好友Tom的来信,从而得知他最近感到学习压力很大,学习效果甚微。请你回一封电子邮件,帮助他放松身心,提高学习效率。内容要点:
1. 转变心态,正确对待学习压力;
2. 听听歌曲,释放学习压力;
3. 多与同学交流,互相鼓励;
中段:具体建议+建议理由
First and foremost, since(由于) + 句子,why not do sth(建议1)?
假如你是高三学生李华,上周收到好友Tom的来信,从而得知他最近感到学习压力很大,学习效果甚微。请你回一封电子邮件,帮助他放松身心,提高学习效率。内容要点:
1. 转变心态,正确对待学习压力;
2. 听听歌曲,释放学习压力;
3. 多与同学交流,互相鼓励;
中段:具体建议+建议理由
First and foremost, since(由于) + 句子,why not do sth(建议1)?
Additionally, doing sth (建议2) is also bound to be an effective means you can attempt to do sth(建议2益处).
假如你是高三学生李华,上周收到好友Tom的来信,从而得知他最近感到学习压力很大,学习效果甚微。请你回一封电子邮件,帮助他放松身心,提高学习效率。内容要点:
1. 转变心态,正确对待学习压力;
2. 听听歌曲,释放学习压力;
3. 多与同学交流,互相鼓励;
中段:具体建议+建议理由
First and foremost, since(由于) + 句子,why not do sth(建议1)?
Additionally, doing sth (建议2) is also bound to be an effective means you can attempt to do sth(建议2益处).
Moreover, were I you, I would do sth(建议3), through which not only can you incontrovertibly do sth(建议3益处1), but also do sth(建议3益处2).
假如你是高三学生李华,上周收到好友Tom的来信,从而得知他最近感到学习压力很大,学习效果甚微。请你回一封电子邮件,帮助他放松身心,提高学习效率。内容要点:
1. 转变心态,正确对待学习压力;
2. 听听歌曲,释放学习压力;
3. 多与同学交流,互相鼓励;
中段:具体建议+建议理由
1.First and foremost, since(由于) + 句子,why not do sth(建议1)?
2.Additionally, doing sth (建议2) is also bound to be an effective means you can attempt to do sth(建议2益处).
3.Moreover, were I you, I would do sth(建议3), through which not only can you incontrovertibly do sth(建议3益处1), but also do sth(建议3益处2).
中段:具体建议+建议理由
First and foremost, since(由于) + 句子,why not do sth(建议1)?
Additionally, doing sth (建议2) is also bound to be an effective means you can attempt to do sth(建议2益处).
Moreover, were I you, I would do sth(建议3), through which not only can you incontrovertibly do sth(建议3益处1), but also do sth(建议3益处2).
建议内容/益处?
中段:具体建议+建议理由
建议内容/益处
丰富校园生活/课余生活
拓展视野
提升...水平
减缓学习压力
提高合作能力
激发...兴趣
劳逸结合
收到鼓励克服困难
enrich one’s campus/extracurriculum life
broaden one’s horizon
enhance one’s proficiency in ...
alleviate one’s pressure from study
better one’s cooperative capability
intrigue one’s passion for ...
strike a balance between work and leisure
receive encouragement to spurn the stumbling block
中段模板总结
建议益处拓展:
丰富校园生活/课余生活 enrich one’s campus/extracurriculum life
拓展视野 broaden one’s horizon
提升...水平 enhance one’s proficiency in ...
舒缓学习压力 alleviate one’s pressure from study
提高合作能力 better one’s cooperative capability
激发...兴趣 intrigue one’s passion for ...
劳逸结合 strike a balance between work and leisure
收到鼓励克服困难 receive encouragement to spurn the stumbling block
First and foremost, since(由于) + 句子,why not do sth(建议1)?
Additionally, doing sth (建议2) is also bound to be an effective means you can attempt to do sth(建议2益处).
Moreover, were I you, I would do sth(建议3), through which not only can you incontrovertibly do sth(建议3益处1), but also do sth(建议3益处2).
First and foremost, since(由于) + 句子,why not do sth(建议1)?
假如你是高三学生李华,上周收到好友Tom的来信,从而得知他最近感到学习压力很大,学习效果甚微。请你回一封电子邮件,帮助他放松身心,提高学习效率。内容要点:
1. 转变心态,正确对待学习压力;
2. 听听歌曲,释放学习压力;
3. 多与同学交流,互相鼓励;
First and foremost, since pressure is an inevitable part of students’ life, why not choose to hold an optimistic attitude towards it and even transform it into motivation?
中段:具体建议+建议理由
Additionally, doing sth (建议2) is also bound to be an effective means you can attempt to do sth(建议2益处).
假如你是高三学生李华,上周收到好友Tom的来信,从而得知他最近感到学习压力很大,学习效果甚微。请你回一封电子邮件,帮助他放松身心,提高学习效率。内容要点:
1. 转变心态,正确对待学习压力;
2. 听听歌曲,释放学习压力;
3. 多与同学交流,互相鼓励;
Additionally, listening to music is also bound to be an effective means you can attempt to alleviate pressure.
中段:具体建议+建议理由
Moreover, were I you, I would do sth(建议3), through which not only can you incontrovertibly do sth(建议3益处1), but also do sth(建议3益处2).
假如你是高三学生李华,上周收到好友Tom的来信,从而得知他最近感到学习压力很大,学习效果甚微。请你回一封电子邮件,帮助他放松身心,提高学习效率。内容要点:
1. 转变心态,正确对待学习压力;
2. 听听歌曲,释放学习压力;
3. 多与同学交流,互相鼓励;
Moreover, were I you, I would communicate with your classmates as much as possible, through which not only can you incontrovertibly gain some support, but also receive encouragement to spurn the stumbling block.
.
中段:具体建议+建议理由
【24-25学年台州一模】
假定你是李华,你的美籍网友约翰被北京一所高中录取,他写信希望你能给他提供一些关于学习和生活方面的建议,请注意以下提示,给他回一封电子邮件,你的建议应该包括以下内容:
1.合理安排时间
2.课前,课上课后的注意事项
3.注意劳逸结合
课堂练习
中段:具体建议+建议理由
【24-25学年台州一模】
假定你是李华,你的美籍网友约翰被北京一所高中录取,他写信希望你能给他提供一些关于学习和生活方面的建议,请注意以下提示,给他回一封电子邮件,你的建议应该包括以下内容:
1.合理安排时间
2.课前,课上课后的注意事项
3.注意劳逸结合
中段:具体建议+建议理由
First and foremost, since(由于) + 句子,why not do sth(建议1)?
First and foremost, since time management is of great significance,why not work out a reasonable timetable?
【24-25学年台州一模】
假定你是李华,你的美籍网友约翰被北京一所高中录取,他写信希望你能给他提供一些关于学习和生活方面的建议,请注意以下提示,给他回一封电子邮件,你的建议应该包括以下内容:
1.合理安排时间
2.课前,课上课后的注意事项
3.注意劳逸结合
中段:具体建议+建议理由
Additionally, doing sth (建议2) is also bound to be an effective means you can attempt to do sth(建议2益处).
Additionally, following the basic rules of study,including previewing lessons in advance, listening to your teachers attentively during classes and reviewing notes afterwards, is also bound to be an effective means you can attempt to study scientifically .
【24-25学年台州一模】
假定你是李华,你的美籍网友约翰被北京一所高中录取,他写信希望你能给他提供一些关于学习和生活方面的建议,请注意以下提示,给他回一封电子邮件,你的建议应该包括以下内容:
1.合理安排时间
2.课前,课上课后的注意事项
3.注意劳逸结合
中段:具体建议+建议理由
Moreover, were I you, I would do sth(建议3), through which not only can you incontrovertibly do sth(建议3益处1), but also you can do sth(建议3益处2).
Moreover, were I you, I would strike a balance between work and leisure, through which not only can you incontrovertibly develop diverse hobbies but also alleviate your pressure from study.
【24-25学年台州一模】
假定你是李华,你的美籍网友约翰被北京一所高中录取,他写信希望你能给他提供一些关于学习和生活方面的建议,请注意以下提示,给他回一封电子邮件,你的建议应该包括以下内容:
1.合理安排时间
2.课前,课上课后的注意事项
3.注意劳逸结合
中段:具体建议+建议理由
First and foremost, since time management is of great significance, why not work out a reasonable timetable?Additionally, following the basic rules of study,including previewing lessons in advance, listening to your teachers attentively during classes and reviewing notes afterwards, is also bound to be an effective means you can attempt to study scientifically. Moreover, were I you, I would strike a balance between work and leisure, through which not only can you incontrovertibly develop diverse hobbies but also alleviate your pressure from study.
中段模板总结
建议益处拓展:
丰富校园生活/课余生活 enrich one’s campus/extracurriculum life
拓展视野 broaden one’s horizon
提升...水平 enhance one’s proficiency in ...
舒缓学习压力 alleviateone’s pressure from study
提高合作能力 better one’s cooperative capability
激发...兴趣 arouse/boost/light up one’s passion for ...
劳逸结合 strike a balance between work and leisure
收到鼓励克服困难 receive encouragement to spurn the stumbling block
First and foremost, since(由于) + 句子,why not do sth(建议1)?
Additionally, doing sth (建议2) is also bound to be an effective means you can attempt to do sth(建议2益处).
Moreover, were I you, I would do sth(建议3), through which not only can you incontrovertibly do sth(建议3益处1), but also do sth(建议3益处2).
建议信高级句型句式-尾段
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Hope these can be conducive(=helpful) to you !
I would be appreciative if my humble suggestions(拙见,表谦虚) received your favorable consideration.
尾段:总结建议表达祝愿
建议信范文
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Dear Mr.Craige,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
How are you ? No sooner had I learned that you were suffering from the disturbing pressure from study than I promptly wrote to share some practical suggestions with
you.
First and foremost, since pressure is an inevitable part of students’ life, why not choose to hold an optimistic attitude towards it and even transform it into motivation? Additionally, lisening to music is also bound to be an effective means you can attempt to alleviate pressure. Moreover, were I you, I would communicate with your classmates as much as possible, through which not only can you incontrovertibly gain some support, but also receive encouragement to spurn the stumbling block.
Hope these can be conducive to you !
交代背景,交代目的
总结建议+表达祝愿
具体建议+建议理由
课程小结
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开头段
中间段
结尾段
问候语
交代背景
交代目的
●具体建议
●建议理由
●总结建议
●表达祝愿
建议信
建议信总结
How are you ? No sooner had I learned that+写作背景+than I promptly wrote to share some practical suggestions with you.
Hope these can be conducive to you !
I would be appreciative if my humble suggestions(拙见,表谦虚) received your favorable consideration.
First and foremost, since(由于) + 句子,why not do
sth(建议1)?
Additionally, doing sth (建议2) is also bound to be an
effective means you can attempt to do sth(建议2益处).
Moreover, were I you, I would do sth(建议3), through
which not only can you incontrovertibly do sth(建议3益处1), but also do sth(建议3益处2).
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