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Period V
Reading for writing
青少年时养成的好习惯能让人受益终身。
———亚里士多德
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Warming-up
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online class
off-line class
VS
Which learning style do you prefer?
Write a letter of advice
Teaching objectives:
1. Figure out the organization and language feature of a letter of advice.
2.Identify the useful expressions and patterns to make suggestions from the reading text.
3. Write a letter of advice by using the language in the reading text.
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Self-learning task I:Some useful expressions
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(1)ask for advice/suggestions 寻求建议
(2)be worried about 为……而担心,忧虑
(3)be attracted to 喜爱
(4)be addicted to (doing)sth. 对(做) 某事上瘾
(5)focus on/concentrate on 集中精力于
(6)encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
(7)computer games 电脑游戏
(8)the online/Internet world 网络世界
(9)feel lonely 感到孤单
(10)give you some suggestions/advice 给你一些建议
Self-learning task I:Some useful expressions
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Self-learning task II:the structure of a letter of advice
Close
Wishes
Signature
Yours,
xxx
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Self-learning task II:the structure of a letter of advice
Date
day/month/year
Greeting
Dear ... (friend / Sir / Mr.Smith)
Body
Two paragraphs
A letter alway includes
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What is Worried Friend's problem?
What are Susan Luo's advice?
Questions:
Worried Friend thinks that his friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
Worried Friend can talk to his friend about his behaviour and encourage his friend to try new hobbies.
Self-test I:the content of the letter
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Self-test II:useful sentence patterns
Translate the following sentences
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Self-test II:useful sentence patterns
(1)我的老师建议我参加辩论俱乐部。(recommend that...)
My teacher recommend that I should take part in the debate club.
(2) 为什么不和你的朋友谈一下这个问题呢?(Why not...)
Why not discuss the problem with your friend?
(3) 我认为当面对困难时, 你应该和你的父母沟通。(I think...)
I think you should communicate with your parents when facing problems.
(4) 你们这个年龄阶段的青少年喜欢电脑游戏和网络世界是司空见惯的。(It is not unusual for sb. to do sth....)
It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.
Translate the following sentences
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C.This is my advice and reason(s).
D. I think my advice will help.
Are Part A, B and D necessary?
Activity 1 Read for the organisation
Find and mark the parts of the letter that match the following points.
What expressions does Susan use to show her understanding? Circle them.
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Activity 1. Read for the language features
I understand quite well that ...
I understand how you feel.
It is common for teenagers to ...
What expressions does Susan use to make suggestions? Circle them.
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I recommended that you should....
I think you should....
Why not ....
Tip:
Good suggestions should be followed by good reasons.
Activity 1. Read for the language features
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pay attention to the manner of speaking
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How to write a letter of advice
Conclusion
What problems do you have in your daily life?
generation gap with parents代沟
puppy love
早恋
being addicted to the Internet/computer games
great pressure(压力) from heavy school work
feeling lonely
conflicts(矛盾) between friends/classmates
high expectations(期望) from parents and teachers
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Facing these problems, how will you seek for help ?
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communicating sincerely face to face
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turning to trustworthy friends for help
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asking for advice on social media
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writing a letter to a professional adviser
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ringing help hotlines
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Activity 2 Get ready to write
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Activity 2 Get ready to write
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Can you give some suggestions to your students, and help them overcome the difficulities.
Choose one of the challenges and
think about it. Then give your suggestions and express brief reasons.
Name Suggestion Reason
study pressure
• Keep enough sleep
• Take exercise regularly.
•Enough sleep can help you refresh yourself the next day.
• Exercise will c release your pressure.
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possible suggestions and reasons.
• Turn to your teacher for
help.
• Your teacher will give your useful suggestions.
Name Suggestion Reason
generation gap
disagree with friend
• Sit down and have a talk face to face.
• Go travelling together.
• You and your parents have more time to stay together and understand each other better.
• Get inside someone else’s mind(换位思考).
• Communicate sincerely face to face
• It will be able to help you break the ice(破冰,打破沉默, 打破僵局)and solve the misunderstanding.
• It will help you understand your friend better.
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Activity 3: Draft your letter according to the outline below.
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You wrote that _______________.
I understand that ___________________.
First, I recommend _________, because _____________________.Second, you should_________________.
I am sure that ___________________.
Show the reader that you know what the problem is.
Tell the reader that you understand how he/she feels.
Tell the reader what you think he/she should do.
Explain your reason(s).
Tell the reader what you think will happen.
开头:To begin with…; First/Firstly,…
What’s more, …; Besides, …; In addition, …; Second/ Secondly,…
结尾:Last but not least…; In a word/In short…; Third/ Thirdly, …
While-writing -- Linking Words 连接词
The beginning:
It is important to...
It should be a good idea to...
I think it would be more helpful if you could...
Why don't you/Why not...?
You had better...
I think you should...
In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to...
I'm glad to receive your letter for asking me how to…
After I read your letter, I'm sorry to know that…
Making suggestions:
I hope you’ll take my advice into account.
I am looking forward to...
I think you will find these suggestions useful.
The ending:
first, second, third, fourth…
first of all
and then
besides
what’s more
Other useful expressions:
as well
last but not least
finally
in the end
Post-writing
Use the checklist to give feedback on your draft.
√ Are all the parts of a letter included and organised in a good order?
√ Does the writer give reasons for the advice?
√ Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions?
√ Does the writer use commas and stops correctly?
√ Is the handwriting easy to read?
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Samples
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10 September 2018
Dear Xu Ting,
You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because your parents work in another city. I understand how you feel. It is common for teenagers to feel lonely when they live away from their parents. I think you can try joining a volunteer group that helps other people. This will give you a chance to meet and be around others. It will also help you realise that you are not alone in having problems and that many other people have problems, too. Helping other people also makes us feel better. You can also connect with your parents online. Just because your parents are far away,it doesn’t mean you can’t talk to them. I am sure that you’ll make new friends and get a chance to speak to your parents more often. This will help drive away your loneliness.
Best wishes,
Susan Luo
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10 September 2018
Dear Eric,
You wrote that you are worried that your parents won't listen when you tell them things. I understand that you are anxious and feel terrible.
I think you must always keep in mind that you have to respect them because they are your parents. Try to understand your parents. Your parents may think differently from you. Tell your parents what you think, what you care about and why. I am sure that if you can put yourself in their shoes, you may find a better way out to communicate with your parents.
Best wishes,
Susan Luo
10 September 2018
Dear Xu Ting,
You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because your parents work in another city. I understand that you need parents' love and care greatly, which is natural/necessary. I think you can find another way to communicate with your parents Besides, why don't you talk about these feelings with your friends/ teachers? They will be helpful, because they spend lots of time with you and may understand you better. I am sure that in this way you will feel relaxed and much better
Best wishes,
Susan Luo
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Consolidation
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假设你是校英文报编辑李华,近期收到一封署名为Anxiety的求助信,在信中该同学表示由于考试临近压力剧增。请用英文给该同学回信,内容要点如下:
1.表示安慰;
2.提出建议;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Anxiety,
I’m sorry to know that you are experiencing a tough time now. Actually, everyone will encounter such a period when they are under great pressure, so there is no need to worry too much.
In my opinion, sharing your feelings with your friends is a wise choice as you can remove your negative emotions. Another effective suggestion is that you should take more physical exercise, which can lift your spirit. Also, keep an optimistic attitude towards life about your future.
I hope my advice will be of benefit to you. May you get rid of your trouble soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dream it
possible
THE END
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