Unit 3 What's great about jobs? 作文提优指导 （专项训练）-2025-2026学年沪教版英语四年级下册

Unit 3 What's great about jobs? 作文提优指导 一、方法指导 描述职业特点，应该用一般现在时（主语为第三人称单数时，动词要加-s/-es）。可按「三步四要素法」写作： • 第一步：写开头，引出话题（介绍自己/他人喜欢的职业） • 第二步：写正文，介绍职业的工作内容、工作地点、职业优点、相关人物四要素 • 第三步：写结尾，表述自己对该职业的向往、感受或总结 二、素材积累 模块 必备词汇 必备句型 开头 job, great, want to be, like, dream • I want to talk about my dream job. • There are many great jobs in the world. • My favourite job is... • I want to be a... in the future. 正文 职业：teacher, doctor, nurse, driver, cook, fireman, policeman, writer, artist 工作内容：teach students, help sick people, drive a car, cook food, put out fires, catch bad people 工作地点：school, hospital, restaurant, fire station, police station 优点：helpful, interesting, great, wonderful, important, cool 人物：I, my parents, people, students • I want to be a teacher, because I like teaching students. • A doctor can help sick people, it's a great job. • A fireman puts out fires and keeps people safe. • My mother is a nurse, she works in a hospital. • Teachers work at school and help students learn. 结尾 great, wonderful, cool, important, happy • It's a great and important job. • I want to be a... when I grow up. • I think this job is wonderful. • I love this job very much. 三、以读促写（阅读范文，完成思维导图，体悟写法） I want to be a teacher in the future. I think being a teacher is a great job. Teachers work at school. They teach students knowledge and help them grow. They are kind and patient. Teachers can help many students learn new things, and they can make friends with students. It's a very important and wonderful job. I love this job, and I will work hard to be a good teacher. 思维导图填空 My dream 1.__________ Job & Place What's great about it | | Job: 2.______ teach students knowledge Work place: 3.______ help students grow be kind and patient | How: great, 4.______ and wonderful 四、翻译练习 1. 我将来想成为一名医生。 _________________________________________________________________________ 2. 我认为医生是一份很棒的工作。_________________________________________________________________________ 3. 医生在医院工作，帮助生病的人。_________________________________________________________________________ 4. 消防员灭火，保护人们的安全。 _________________________________________________________________________ 5. 厨师在餐厅工作，做美味的食物。_________________________________________________________________________ 6. 警察抓坏人，让城市更安全。_________________________________________________________________________ 7. 老师在学校工作，教学生知识。_________________________________________________________________________ 8. 这是一份重要又伟大的工作。 _________________________________________________________________________ 9. 我非常喜欢我的工作。_________________________________________________________________________ 五、大展身手 假设你长大了想从事一份职业，给大家介绍一下这份职业的优点吧！_________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ 填空答案 1. job 2. teacher（可替换其他职业） 3. school 4. important（可替换 helpful/interesting） 翻译练习 1. I want to be a doctor in the future. 2. I think being a doctor is a great job. 3. Doctors work in the hospital and help sick people. 4. Firemen put out fires and keep people safe. 5. Cooks work in the restaurant and cook delicious food. 6. Policemen catch bad people and make the city safe. 7. Teachers work at school and teach students knowledge. 8. It's an important and great job. 9. I like my job very much. 大展身手 My dream job is to be a doctor. I think it's one of the greatest jobs in the world. Doctors work in big hospitals. They help sick people get better, and save people's lives. They are brave and hard-working. Even when they are tired, they still help people. It's a very important job. I want to be a good doctor when I grow up, and I will study hard to make my dream come true. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $