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专题08 知识运用之书面表达
主题01 人与自我——家务劳动;健康生活;课余生活;生活技能;朋友关系;责任感
Passage 1
(24-25八下·湖南株洲荷塘区某某学校·期中)英语课上,老师要求以“Labor (劳动) Makes Life Better”为话题开展三人一组的讨论。假定你是李华,讨论结束后,你将作为代表向全班反馈你们小组的讨论情况,请根据以下信息写一篇英文发言稿。
(1)介绍你们经常做的家务劳动;
(2)谈谈你们对劳动的看法。
Cindy
I always do the dishes and sweep the floor at home. It’s relaxing after the hard study.
Frank
I sometimes water flowers at home. It’s good for health.
Li Hua
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注意:
(1)文中不得出现可能透露考生真实身份的信息;
(2)写作词数为80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua from Group One.
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That’s all. Thank you.
Passage 2
(24-25八下·湖南衡阳蒸湘区蒸湘区联考·期中)假设你是Sally,请你根据提示写一篇英语短文,在下一节英语课上介绍你和家人通常是如何分担家务的?
提示:
1.你和爸爸、妈妈分别做哪些家务?
2.关于分担家务,你的看法是什么?
要求:
1.语言通顺,行文连贯,内容充实,可适当发挥;
2.词数80左右。
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Passage 3
(24-25八下·湖南永州蓝山县·期中)本学期,学校发起了“劳动之星”的评选活动,请你以“A Helper at Home”为题,写一篇英文竞选文章,谈谈你经常做的家务和你对做家务的看法及收获。提示如下:
Housework you often do at home
Your opinions about doing chores and the things you have learned
◆ do the dishes
◆ sweep the floor
◆ make the bed
◆ fold the clothes
◆…
◆ get life skills
◆ develop independence
◆ Help take care of ourselves
◆ understand the idea of fairness
◆…
要求:1. 根据自身情况适当发挥;
2. 不得使用真实姓名和地名;
3. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
4. 总词数:80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
A Helper at Home
Hello, everyone! I am a student in Class 1. I
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Passage 4
(24-25八下·湖南张家界慈利县·期中)假如你是李明,你想参加某英文报社举办的以“We Should Do Chores at Home”为题的征文活动。请根据以下内容提示撰写一篇短文,参加征文活动。
内容提示:
注意:
①文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息;
②写作词数不少于70,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
We Should Do Chores at Home Nowadays, many students think that doing chores is a waste of time. They believe chores are their parents’ responsibilities.
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Passage 5
(24-25八下·湖南邵阳新邵县·期中)提示词汇与短语:balanced diet(均衡饮食);junk food(垃圾食品);exercise regularly(规律锻炼);enough sleep(充足睡眠);mental health(心理健康);stay away from(远离);develop good habits(养成好习惯)
写作要求:
(1)围绕“保持健康”主题,结合提示词汇,给出至少3条建议;
(2)词数80-100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
How to Keep Healthy
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Passage 6
(24-25八下·湖南岳阳·期中)2025年全国两会期间,“体重管理”成了最出圈的关键词之一。请结合你了解的健康知识,写一篇题目为“The Ways to Keep Healthy”的短文。
要求:
1.语言表达准确,内容客观;
2.写作词数为80左右。
The Ways to Keep Healthy
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Passage 7
(24-25八下·湖南湘潭岳塘区·期中)初中生会考已经进入倒计时,但在4月全市生地模考中,有的同学成绩不理想,因此有些焦虑,倍感压力。Jane正有这样的烦恼,假设你是她的好朋友李华,请写一封信给她,安慰她并给她一些缓解焦虑和压力的建议,鼓励她继续努力。
要点如下:
1. 早睡早起,健康饮食,多锻炼。
2. 制定学习计划。
3. 与朋友、老师、父母交流,寻求帮助。
4. ……
提示词: make a… plan; communicate with. . . ; ask… for
要求:
(1)包含以上要点,可适当发挥,语句通顺,语意连贯;
(2)不少于80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名 。
Dear Jane,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some pressure about your study and exams. Don’t be so worried. It’s normal to have these feelings. I’m writing to tell you some good ways to deal with it.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 8
(24-25八下·湖南长沙望城区·期中)假如你是Lily,你最好的朋友Alice写信告诉你她最近的困惑,请回信给她,安慰她,针对她的问题谈谈你的看法并给出建议。
Dear Lily,
I am not happy these days. My parents take me to lots of after-school classes on weekends. So I don’t have time to do what I love to do. I don’t know what to do. Can you help me?
I also get sick recently because the weather changes often. I have a cold easily.
Look forward to your reply.
Alice
要求:
(1)词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)回复须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、顺畅;
(3)文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Alice,
I’m sorry to hear that you feel unhappy these days.
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Passage 9
(24-25八下·湖南邵阳城步苗族自治县城步十校·期中)5月20日是“全国学生营养日”。针对学生的身体状况,在这一天,邵阳市一中的同学们在学校进行了问卷调查,其调查结果令人堪忧。假若你是Guo Jia,Tang Jie和Liu Hong的好朋友。请根据表格内容给他们出现的问题提出一些建议,写一篇80词左右的短文。
Problem
Should
Shouldn’t
Guo Jia
虚弱、疲劳
早点休息
看太多的电视
Tang Jie
紧张、烦躁
听些音乐,多吃些阴性的食物,像豆腐
学得太晚
Liu Hong
肥胖
多参加运动
吃太多的肉和垃圾食品
Guo Jia says she is very __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 10
(24-25八下·湖南岳阳云溪区九校联考·期中)最近有些同学感觉学习压力很大,总是很焦虑。请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,给他们提建议,帮助他们正确面对压力,学会放松。
要点如下:
1. 多与老师、父母和朋友交谈,说出自己的烦恼;
2. 积极参加体育锻炼,有一个健康的身体。
Advice
communicate with teachers, parents and friends
tell your troubles
exercise (ride a bike, run)
listen to music, read books
要求:
1、80词左右(标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3、文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
It’s very important for us students to face stress in a right way and learn to relax. _
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Passage 11
(24-25八下·湖南邵阳武冈·期中)近期你们班召开班会,讨论如何安排自己的课余生活,从关爱家人,提升自己,关心他人的角度进行讨论并提出自己的建议。请以Enjoy Our After-school Life为题写一篇文稿向学校报刊投稿,向全校学生介绍健康的课余生活。
关爱家人
参与家务劳动……
提升自己
参加体育锻炼,培养兴趣爱好……
关心他人
参加志愿活动……
要求:1. 包括所有提示的内容,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯; 2. 70词左右。
Thanks to the double reduction policy, our spare time is much longer than before. So we have more free time to do what we like. But how to better use our free time?
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Passage 12
(24-25八下·湖南湘潭益智中学·期中)假如你是 Li Hua,你校英文报新设了名为Take Care of Yourself的专栏,现在正以“A Small Life Skill Helps a Lot”为题进行征文。请你根据中文和英文的提示,用英文写一篇短文投稿,主要谈谈你想学的一个生活技能、选择这个技能的原因以及为了学会这个技能将做的计划等。
要求: (1)短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息,并适当发挥;
(2)词数80左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名和地名。
A Small Life Skill Helps a Lot
Life skills are necessary for teenagers. To better take care of myself, I decide to learn _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 13
(24-25八下·湖南永州新田县·期中)“奋斗是青春最亮丽的底色,行动是青年最有效的磨砺。有责任有担当,青春才会闪光。”责任是一种非常宝贵的品质。每个人都应该对自己负责。同时,也需要对别人负责。
某英语网站正在开展以“责任”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李宇,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍自己勇于承担责任的一次经历,并分享你的收获,或者谈谈你对责任的理解。
注意:
(1) 文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名;
(2) 不少于80词。
参考词汇: take responsibility 负责,承担责任
be responsible for 对……负责
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主题02 人与社会——社会服务
Passage 1
(24-25八下·湖南邵阳新宁县十校联考·期中)假设你是李明,本周班会上,你将代表老师用英语通知学生参加一次敬老院的公益活动。
要点包括:1.星期天早上8:30在校门口集合,乘公共汽车前往;
2.给老人们赠送班级礼物;
3.打扫卫生,整理房间;
4.唱歌、跳舞、讲故事、聊天,给老人们带去快乐;
5.活动很有意义,希望积极参与公益活动。
要求:1.要点齐全;
2.词数80词左右。
提示:the old people’s home(敬老院) gift(礼物) the elderly(老年人) chat with(与……聊天) meaningful(有意义的)
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Passage 2
(24-25八下·湖南岳阳湘阴县城南四校联考·期中)Volunteers are like superheroes without capes—they help others and make our community brighter. Share your story!
(志愿者就像没有披风的超级英雄,他们帮助他人,让社区更美好。请分享你的故事!)
内容包括:
1. Where did you do your volunteer work?
2. What did you do?
3. How do you feel?
作文要求
(1)不能照抄原文;不能在文中出现真实姓名和地点。
(2)语句连贯,词数 60 词左右。
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Passage 3
(24-25八下·湖南岳阳岳阳县·期中)人们常说: “服务他人,快乐自己。”你准备利用即将到来的劳动节去社区做一些服务工作。请根据以下表格中的提示内容,给你们学校的英文报写一篇短文,介绍你的计划。
Places
Activities
Community center
帮助老人,唱歌,讲故事……
Community hospital
分发健康饮食宣传册……
Community park
捡垃圾,浇花……
……
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参考词汇:leaflets宣传册
要求:1.参考表格提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.不少于80词。(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。)
As we all know, “Serving others can bring us happiness.” Labor Day is coming, I will
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Passage 4
(24-25八下·湖南娄底直学校联合体·期中)假定你是李华,上周你和同学参加了养老院志愿者活动。学校英语角将举办“Volunteering makes a difference”的主题演讲活动,请根据以下信息,可适当拓展,写一篇英文发言稿。
1.具体的志愿活动内容:clean the room,…
2.参与此次志愿活动的原因:Helping others is the best way to help ourselves...
3.你对这次志愿活动的看法:get a strong feeling of satisraction,...
注意:
(1)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息:
(2)写作词数为80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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主题01 人与自我——家务劳动;健康生活;学习压力;挫折应对;社会服务
Passage 1
(24-25八下·湖南衡阳船山实验中学·期中)友谊是“桃花潭水深千尺,不及汪伦送我情”的那份真诚,但最近李华与他最好的朋友Dave发生了一些争吵,李华感到非常难过,希望跟Dave道歉和好,却不知道如何去做。请你以Doctor Alice的身份,根据下面的要点提示,给李华写一封关于如何和好的建议信。
提示:
(1)say sorry to…
(2)take him to a ball game…
(3)buy him a gift…
(4)…
要求:
1. 语句通顺,表达正确,积极向上;
2. 短文须包括至少2项提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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Passage 2
(24-25八下·湖南娄底冷水江·期中)李华所在的小区 (neighborhood) 上周发生了一场火灾。幸运的是,消防员 (fireman) 及时赶到扑灭 (put out) 了这场大火,没有伤亡。假如你是李华,请根据以下表格提示,写一篇英语小短文,记录火灾发生时和你家人的活动。
你
看电视
妈妈
清洁厨房
姐姐
和朋友打电话
爸爸
看报
要求:
1.语句通顺、条理清晰;
2.包含以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
3. 80词左右。
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Passage 3
(24-25八下·湖南张家界桑植县·期中)假定你是Jerry,你收到了朋友Emily的一封倾诉信,请根据来信要点写一封回信并给出建议。
问题
建议
家庭方面
Parents are too busy…feel lonely…
和父母多分享你的感受
学习方面
Feel hard to learn English…
1. 多向老师求助;2. …
人际方面
Got into a fight with friends…
……
要求:(1) 词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。(2) 涵盖所有要点,并适当发挥,语意连贯,书写规范。(3) 文中请勿出现真实的校名、班级和姓名等个人信息。
Dear Emily,
I feel sorry to hear about your problems. In your letter, you said that
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Yours,
Jerry
Passage 4
(24-25八下·湖南常德鼎城区校联考·期中)假如你是李华,近期你在“树洞聊天室”看到一则Nancy发布的留言,谈到自己在学习和生活方面遇到的问题,如学习压力大、课外班多、与朋友发生争吵等。请你结合下面的图示,给她写一封邮件,帮助她克服焦虑情绪,轻松、快乐地学习和生活。
要求:
1. 必须包含图示中的所有要点,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息;
3. 不少于70词 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Nancy,
I’m sorry to hear about your problems.
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
Passage 5
(24-25八下·湖南株洲荷塘区·期中)为了庆祝五一劳动节,校刊英文专栏正在以 “We Should Do Chores at Home” 为题进行征文比赛活动。请你根据表格中的英文提示,写一篇短文参加比赛。
包括以下内容:
What are you going to do?
Why?
Initiative (倡议)
1. do the dishes;
2. sweep the floor;
3. make the bed;
4. fold the clothes
……
1. Doing chores helps to develop our independence;
2. Doing chores teaches us how to look after ourselves
……
Let’s do chores at home now!
注意:
(1)写作词数为80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
We Should Do Chores at Home
May Day is coming. And I am going to do some chores at home. I am going to do the dishes. . .
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Passage 6
(24-25八下·湖南长沙浏阳·期中)国家喊你减肥啦!为了人们的健康,3月8日国家卫健委主任提出将持续推动体重管理体重年行动。肥胖将引起很多慢性病或心脑血管疾病,严重影响人们的健康。那么作为青少年我们应当如何避免肥胖保持健康呢?请以“how to keep healthy”为题,根据以下要点写篇文章。
提示:
keep healthy
food
1. eat regularly (有规律地)
2. eat fruit and vegetables
3.…
sports
1. run at least twice a week
2.…
living habits
1. don’t play computer games or mobile phones for too long
2.…
要求:1.必须包含以上所有要点并适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3.80词左右(标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays, health is becoming more and more important.
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Passage 7
(24-25八下·湖南永州道县·期中)假如你是李华,最近,你们班的英语老师组织了一场关于“中学生是否应该做家务”的班级讨论会。同学们各抒己见:有人认为做家务会占用学习时间,应该由父母负责;也有人认为做家务能培养独立能力,是每个家庭成员的责任。请你结合自身经历,写一篇短文,表达你的观点并说明理由。
1. 词数不少于80词;文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不能出现真实的校名、人名;
3. 语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。
Last week, our English teacher organized a class discussion about whether teenagers should do housework. Different people have different views.
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Passage 8
(24-25八下·湖南衡阳八中教育集团·期中)假如你是李华,你的好朋友Peter前不久给你来信,告诉你他在学习、生活中遇到的以下4个问题。请你用英语写一封回信,就Peter遇到的问题,给他提供一些合理建议,能简单说明理由更好。
Peter’s problems
He can’t get on well with his parents.
He has no friends.
He often has a cold.
He gets too much stress from his schoolwork.
要求:1.内容应包括所有提示要点,可以适当发挥;
2.不包括所给开头以及结尾,词数不少于80词。
Dear Peter,
I am sorry to hear about your problems. It’s normal for teenagers to meet these problems in life. Here is my advice for you.
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I hope my advice will help you out soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 9
(24-25八下·湖南郴州·期中)假如你是李华,“双休”政策来临,学生课余时间增加,你所在的学校针对“学生应该上课后兴趣补习班吗?”对200名学生做了一项调查。请你根据下面的调查结果,写一篇以“Should Students Take After-school Classes?”为题的英文报道。
有必要 (40%)
没必要 (60%)
帮助孩子们进入好高中和好大学
父母逼的太紧,太多压力
帮助孩子们在学校提升自信(self-confidence)
应该有时间放松和玩
帮助孩子们学习重要的技能,放松自己
如何学习和如何成为一个快乐的学习者更重要
你的看法:……
要求:
1.表达准确,语句通顺;
2.短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
3.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Should Students Take After-school Classes?
Is it necessary for students to take after-school classes? We did a survey about this.
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Passage 10
(24-25八下·湖南邵阳大祥区·期末)作为八年级学生,我们在学习和生活中难免会遇到烦恼,为了更好地发现并解决同学们存在的问题,班上开展了一次以“Face Problems Bravely(勇敢地)”为主题的英语班会。假如你是李华,请你根据下面的班会笔记,就其中的两到三个问题,提出你的建议,并谈一谈自己的看法。
Problems:
1. can’t get on with parents
2. don’t get enough sleep
3. have lots of pressure
...
Advice:
1. communicate with
2. finish homework quickly
3. set small goals
...
注意:1. 短文须包括提示中的三个要点,可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名,校名和人名。
3. 词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Face Problems Bravely
Problems and worries are normal in life.
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Let’s face problems bravely. Things will go well if we work out them with patience.
Passage 11
(24-25八下·湖南邵阳武冈·期中)近期你们班召开班会,讨论如何安排自己的课余生活,从关爱家人,提升自己,关心他人的角度进行讨论并提出自己的建议。请以Enjoy Our After-school Life为题写一篇文稿向学校报刊投稿,向全校学生介绍健康的课余生活。
关爱家人
参与家务劳动……
提升自己
参加体育锻炼,培养兴趣爱好……
关心他人
参加志愿活动……
要求:1. 包括所有提示的内容,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯; 2. 70词左右。
Thanks to the double reduction policy, our spare time is much longer than before. So we have more free time to do what we like. But how to better use our free time?
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Passage 12
(24-25八下·湖南长沙明德教育集团·期中)多彩的社团活动丰富了我们的校园生活,来自深圳外国语学校的李华对校园社团十分热衷,但近期他因未能加入心仪的社团而感到失落。作为李华的笔友,请你用英语给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)描述李华的问题并安慰;
(2)提出你对社团的看法;
(3)就李华面临的问题给出你的建议(ask your teacher for help, prepare better the next time, ...)
要求:
(1)80词左右(开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Li Hua,
I have received your e-mail.
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Best Wishes,
Your pen pal
Passage 13
(24-25八下·湖南长沙周南教育集团联考·期中)作为八年级学生,我们在学习和生活中难免会遇到一些烦恼,为了更好地发现及解决同学们存在的问题,班上开展了一次以“Face Problems Bravely”为主题的英语班会。假如你是李华,请你根据下面的班会笔记,谈谈同学们最常见的三个问题,并给出你的建议。
同学们常见的问题
1. too much stress about schoolwork
2. difficult relations with families and friends
3. …
你的建议
1. play sports to get relaxed ...
2. communicate properly with families and friends ...
3. …
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名等信息
(2)内容必须包括所提供的信息,并在此基础上,进行拓展;
(3)词数:80词左右。
Nowadays, we students in Grade Eight have had quite a lot of problems in our daily lives. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 14
(24-25八下·湖南常德安乡县·期中)假如你是李华,你们班就“青少年在家是否应当做家务”为主题做了一个问卷调查。以下是根据问卷调查的结果生成的饼状图,请根据图内信息,用英语写一份调查报告,并谈一谈你自己的看法。
注意:
1. 词数:不少于80 词(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 调查报告必须包含图中所有信息,并谈一谈自己的看法。
Whether teenagers should do chores
Last week, we did a survey about whether teenagers should help with household chores. Here are the results....
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Passage 15
(24-25八下·湖南张家界永定区·期中)服务他人,快乐自己。如今,越来越多的人喜欢在业余时间做志愿者工作。假如你是李华,你的英语老师得知你有成为志愿者的意愿后,向你分享了一些Mr. Brown招募志愿者的信息。请你根据提示内容,选择一个项目,给Mr. Brown写一封自荐信,说明你的意向。
提示:1. Why do you want to be a volunteer?
2. What are you good at?
3. When can you volunteer?
要求:1. 包含提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,语法正确,行文连贯,书写工整;
3. 80词左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I’m Li Hua from XXX school.
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Thanks for thinking about my application.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
主题02 人与社会——家庭沟通
Passage 1
(24-25八下·湖南长沙长郡集团·期中)假设你是李华,每到周末你都在父母的要求下上至少四个课外班,你感到压力很大,疲惫不堪,决定给父母写信,表明自己对课外班的看法,请根据所提示的信息用英语写一封信。
要点如下:1.课外班太多,压力大;
2.周末应该休息,少上或不上课外班;
3.应该多做户外运动,锻炼身体,缓解学习压力;
4.理解父母的苦心,也希望得到父母的理解;
要求:1.内容包含上述要点并可适当发挥;
2.词数80词左右,已给出的句子不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现你的真实姓名,学校名及地名。
Dear father and mother,
I’m really tired these days.
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Passage 2
(24-25八下·湖南岳阳湘阴县·期中)假如你是Jerry,你的朋友Jack和父母在沟通方面存在问题,请你用英语写一封信给Jack,给予他一些建议。内容包括:
1. 讲述你与父母的一次沟通经历(包括时间、地点、事件、结果);
2. 对如何与父母沟通提出至少2点建议;
要求:不少于80词
Dear Jack,
I know that you have trouble communicating with your parents. And I had the same experience.
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Yours,
Jerry
Passage 3
(24-25八下·湖南衡东一中教育集团·期中)生地会考在即,John压力大但却沉迷手机游戏,甚至和父母产生争吵。假如你是他的朋友李华,请你根据以下要点和要求写一封信给他,给他建议。
参考词汇:lose oneself in (沉迷于),become poor in study,get angry with,communicate with
要求:
(1)沉迷手机游戏不对;
(2)建议他用手机做更多有益学习的事情;
(3)希望他多和父母沟通交流并获得一些放松自我的方法;
(4)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
(5)词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear John,
I am sorry to hear that you argued with your parents about playing mobile phone games. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 4
(24-25八下·湖南长沙长郡教育集团·期中)根据要求完成短文写作。
假定你是李华,是学校英文校刊Teens Talk专栏的负责人。同学刘明发来邮件,向你诉说他的困扰:在课余时间,他的父母给他安排了大量的补习,令他十分疲惫。因此,他向你询问课余时间的其他活动和好处,以及如何同父母沟通。请结合第一节(回答问题)以及所给提示,给他写一封建议信。
要求:
(1)短文需包括以下要点,可适当发挥:
·What activities can he do in the free time?
·What can he learn from the activities?
·How can he communicate with his parents?
(2)80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Liu Ming,
It’s not easy being our age, and it’s normal to have these feelings.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
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专题08 知识运用之书面表达
主题01 人与自我——家务劳动;健康生活;课余生活;生活技能;朋友关系;责任感
Passage 1
(24-25八下·湖南株洲荷塘区某某学校·期中)英语课上,老师要求以“Labor (劳动) Makes Life Better”为话题开展三人一组的讨论。假定你是李华,讨论结束后,你将作为代表向全班反馈你们小组的讨论情况,请根据以下信息写一篇英文发言稿。
(1)介绍你们经常做的家务劳动;
(2)谈谈你们对劳动的看法。
Cindy
I always do the dishes and sweep the floor at home. It’s relaxing after the hard study.
Frank
I sometimes water flowers at home. It’s good for health.
Li Hua
...
注意:
(1)文中不得出现可能透露考生真实身份的信息;
(2)写作词数为80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua from Group One.
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That’s all. Thank you.
【答案】范文
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua from Group One. Let me share our discussion on “Labor Makes Life Better”.
Cindy always does the dishes and sweeps the floor at home. She says it helps her relax after hard study. Frank sometimes waters flowers at home, and he thinks this activity is good for his health. As for me, I often clean my room and take out the trash. We all believe labor isn’t just hard work—it makes our homes nicer and teaches us responsibility, truly making life better.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
② 时态:为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明身份与目的,引出讨论主题;
第二步,依次介绍小组三人经常做的家务劳动及各自的劳动感受;
第三步,总结小组对劳动的共同看法,呼应“劳动让生活更好”的主题。
[亮点词汇]
① do the dishes 洗碗
② sweep the floor 扫地
③ water flowers 浇花
④ take out the trash 倒垃圾
⑤ teach sb responsibility 教会某人责任感
[高分句型]
She says it helps her relax after hard study.(省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25八下·湖南衡阳蒸湘区蒸湘区联考·期中)假设你是Sally,请你根据提示写一篇英语短文,在下一节英语课上介绍你和家人通常是如何分担家务的?
提示:
1.你和爸爸、妈妈分别做哪些家务?
2.关于分担家务,你的看法是什么?
要求:
1.语言通顺,行文连贯,内容充实,可适当发挥;
2.词数80左右。
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【答案】例文
I’m Sally. In my family, we do housework together. Although my father is busy with his work in the daytime, he sweeps the floor and does the dishes after work. My mother cooks delicious meals for us. She also does the washing on the weekend. As for me, I do a little housework. I make the bed, fold the clothes and take out the rubbish.
I think it’s necessary for us to help our parents with housework. Doing housework not only teaches me how to take care of myself but also develops my independence.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己和家人是如何分担家务的,可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题;
第二步,具体介绍自己和家人分别做哪些家务;
第三步,表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①be busy with忙于
②on the weekend在周末
③take care of照顾
[高分句型]
①Although my father is busy with his work in the daytime, he sweeps the floor and does the dishes after work. (although引导让步状语从句)
②I think it’s necessary for us to help our parents with housework. (宾语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25八下·湖南永州蓝山县·期中)本学期,学校发起了“劳动之星”的评选活动,请你以“A Helper at Home”为题,写一篇英文竞选文章,谈谈你经常做的家务和你对做家务的看法及收获。提示如下:
Housework you often do at home
Your opinions about doing chores and the things you have learned
◆ do the dishes
◆ sweep the floor
◆ make the bed
◆ fold the clothes
◆…
◆ get life skills
◆ develop independence
◆ Help take care of ourselves
◆ understand the idea of fairness
◆…
要求:1. 根据自身情况适当发挥;
2. 不得使用真实姓名和地名;
3. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
4. 总词数:80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
A Helper at Home
Hello, everyone! I am a student in Class 1. I
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【答案】例文
A Helper at Home
Hello, everyone! I am a student in Class 1. I often help my parents do housework at home. I do the dishes after meals, sweep the floor every weekend, make the bed in the morning, and fold the clothes when they are dry.
In my opinion, doing chores is not only helpful but also meaningful. I have learned many life skills and become more independent. It also helps me take care of myself better and understand the idea of fairness. I will keep doing chores and become a real helper at home.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,竞选“劳动之星”的英语短文;
②时态:一般现在时为主;
③提示:围绕“做的家务、看法与收获”三个方面展开,语言要通顺、表达真情实感。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开头表明身份和写作目的;
第二步:介绍自己在家经常做的几项家务;
第三步:说明做家务的收获和体会,并表达积极态度。
[亮点词汇]
①do the dishes 洗碗
②sweep the floor 扫地
③make the bed 整理床铺
④fold the clothes 叠衣服
⑤take care of 照顾
[高分句型]
①and fold the clothes when they are dry.(时间状语从句)
②Doing chores is not only helpful but also meaningful.(not only...but also并列结构)
Passage 4
(24-25八下·湖南张家界慈利县·期中)假如你是李明,你想参加某英文报社举办的以“We Should Do Chores at Home”为题的征文活动。请根据以下内容提示撰写一篇短文,参加征文活动。
内容提示:
注意:
①文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息;
②写作词数不少于70,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
We Should Do Chores at Home Nowadays, many students think that doing chores is a waste of time. They believe chores are their parents’ responsibilities.
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【答案】例文
We Should Do Chores at Home
Nowadays, many students think that doing chores is a waste of time. They believe chores are their parents’ responsibilities. However, I disagree with this view.
I often do chores like making the bed, cleaning the room, and taking out the rubbish. These tasks might seem small, but they help me learn important life skills.
In my opinion, chores are the responsibility of every family member. Doing chores helps us learn responsibility and time management. It’s a great way to contribute to our family and home. We should all take part in household chores.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:内容要点已给出,考生应按要求完成写作,不可遗漏信息提示,适当添加细节,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头讲述了许多学生对于做家务的看法,并给出自己的判断;
第二步,介绍自己做的家务有哪些;
第三步,阐述自己对于做家务的具体看法,呼吁大家做家务。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion 在我看来
②take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①Doing chores helps us learn responsibility and time management. (动名词作主语)
② It’s a great way to contribute to our family and home. (it的固定句型)
Passage 5
(24-25八下·湖南邵阳新邵县·期中)提示词汇与短语:balanced diet(均衡饮食);junk food(垃圾食品);exercise regularly(规律锻炼);enough sleep(充足睡眠);mental health(心理健康);stay away from(远离);develop good habits(养成好习惯)
写作要求:
(1)围绕“保持健康”主题,结合提示词汇,给出至少3条建议;
(2)词数80-100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
How to Keep Healthy
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【答案】参考范文:
How to Keep Healthy
Health is the most important thing in our life. Here are some ways to help us stay healthy.
First, we should have a balanced diet. Eat more vegetables, fruits and whole grains instead of too much junk food like chips or candy. Second, exercise is necessary. For example, we can play basketball, swim, or just take a walk every day. Third, getting enough sleep is important for both our body and mental health. Teenagers need 8-9 hours of sleep each night.
Besides, we should stay away from bad habits such as staying up late or using phones for too long. Let’s develop good habits to make our life healthier!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示及要求进行写作,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、介绍健康的重要性,引出话题;
第二步、从饮食、运动、睡眠以及远离坏习惯等方面介绍如何保持健康;
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①stay healthy保持健康
②instead of而不是
③take a walk散步
④stay away from远离
[高分句型]
①Here are some ways to help us stay healthy. (倒装句)
Passage 6
(24-25八下·湖南岳阳·期中)2025年全国两会期间,“体重管理”成了最出圈的关键词之一。请结合你了解的健康知识,写一篇题目为“The Ways to Keep Healthy”的短文。
要求:
1.语言表达准确,内容客观;
2.写作词数为80左右。
The Ways to Keep Healthy
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【答案】One possible version
The Ways to Keep Healthy
Recently in China, managing weight has become a hot topic, highlighting how important health is. Keeping fit isn’t difficult; daily habits make a big difference.
First, choose healthier eating. Fill your plate with fruits, vegetables, and whole grains. Drink water instead of sugary drinks, and avoid too much sugar or fried food. Second, move your body regularly. Aim for at least 60 minutes of exercise most days—walking, running, dancing, or playing sports all count. Finally, sleep well. If you get 8-10 hours of rest each night, it helps your body and mind recover and grow strong.
By following these steps, you will not only manage your weight better but also feel energetic and ready for each day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作话题已给出,结合自己了解的健康知识,有条理地阐述,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,指出“体重管理”背景;
第二步,围绕“均衡饮食、规律运动、充足睡眠”三要素,具体说明如何保持健康;
第三步,总结意义,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①make a big difference产生很大的影响
②instead of代替
③at least至少
[高分句型]
①If you get 8-10 hours of rest each night, it helps your body and mind recover and grow strong. (条件状语从句)
②By following these steps, you will not only manage your weight better but also feel energetic and ready for each day. (not only...but also句型)
Passage 7
(24-25八下·湖南湘潭岳塘区·期中)初中生会考已经进入倒计时,但在4月全市生地模考中,有的同学成绩不理想,因此有些焦虑,倍感压力。Jane正有这样的烦恼,假设你是她的好朋友李华,请写一封信给她,安慰她并给她一些缓解焦虑和压力的建议,鼓励她继续努力。
要点如下:
1. 早睡早起,健康饮食,多锻炼。
2. 制定学习计划。
3. 与朋友、老师、父母交流,寻求帮助。
4. ……
提示词: make a… plan; communicate with. . . ; ask… for
要求:
(1)包含以上要点,可适当发挥,语句通顺,语意连贯;
(2)不少于80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名 。
Dear Jane,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some pressure about your study and exams. Don’t be so worried. It’s normal to have these feelings. I’m writing to tell you some good ways to deal with it.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Jane,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some pressure about your study and exams. Don’t be so worried. It’s normal to have these feelings. I’m writing to tell you some good ways to deal with it.
First of all, keeping a healthy lifestyle is important. Go to bed early and get up early. A balanced diet with enough fruits, vegetables and grains can provide you with the energy you need. Also, do some exercise regularly, like running or playing badminton. It can not only build up your body but also relax your mind. Secondly, make a proper review plan. List out all the subjects and divide your study time reasonably. This can help you study more efficiently. Moreover, don’t hesitate to communicate with your parents. Talk to your teachers when you have problems with study. They can give you useful advice. Share your feelings with your classmates, too. You may find that you’re not alone in this. Remember, every setback is a step towards success. I hope these suggestions can help you. You can get good grades in the next examination.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为 “一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、引入话题,表达关心和安慰;
第二步、分三点给出建议,包括:健康的生活方式;复习计划和交流求助;
第三步、最后鼓励Jane。
[亮点词汇]
①build up your body 增强你的体质
②not only…but also…不但……而且……
③communicate with…和……沟通
[高分句型]
Talk to your teachers when you have problems with study. (when引导时间状语从句)
Passage 8
(24-25八下·湖南长沙望城区·期中)假如你是Lily,你最好的朋友Alice写信告诉你她最近的困惑,请回信给她,安慰她,针对她的问题谈谈你的看法并给出建议。
Dear Lily,
I am not happy these days. My parents take me to lots of after-school classes on weekends. So I don’t have time to do what I love to do. I don’t know what to do. Can you help me?
I also get sick recently because the weather changes often. I have a cold easily.
Look forward to your reply.
Alice
要求:
(1)词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)回复须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、顺畅;
(3)文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Alice,
I’m sorry to hear that you feel unhappy these days.
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【答案】范文:
Dear Alice,
I’m sorry to hear that you feel unhappy these days. I understand how you feel. It’s important to talk to your parents about your feelings. Maybe you can tell them you need some free time to relax and do what you love. Also, try to plan your time well so you can balance study and hobbies.
I’m sorry to hear you’re sick. The weather changes a lot these days, so remember to wear warm clothes and drink more water. I hope you feel better soon.
Don’t worry too much. Everything will be fine.
Yours,
Lily
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信类材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据所给内容要点完成写作,注意语言简洁、语气亲切,并给出合理建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达对朋友情绪的理解;
第二步,针对课外班问题提出建议;
第三步,对健康问题表示关心并给出建议;
第四步,结尾鼓励朋友。
[亮点词汇]
①balance平衡
②free time空闲时间
③feel better感觉更好
[高分句型]
①It’s important to talk to your parents about your feelings.(it作形式主语)
②Also, try to plan your time well so you can balance study and hobbies.(so引导目的状语从句)
Passage 9
(24-25八下·湖南邵阳城步苗族自治县城步十校·期中)5月20日是“全国学生营养日”。针对学生的身体状况,在这一天,邵阳市一中的同学们在学校进行了问卷调查,其调查结果令人堪忧。假若你是Guo Jia,Tang Jie和Liu Hong的好朋友。请根据表格内容给他们出现的问题提出一些建议,写一篇80词左右的短文。
Problem
Should
Shouldn’t
Guo Jia
虚弱、疲劳
早点休息
看太多的电视
Tang Jie
紧张、烦躁
听些音乐,多吃些阴性的食物,像豆腐
学得太晚
Liu Hong
肥胖
多参加运动
吃太多的肉和垃圾食品
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【答案】例文
Guo Jia says she is very weak and tired. She should go to bed early. She shouldn’t watch too much TV in the evening. Tang Jie says he is stressed out and angry. He should listen to some music. And he should also eat more yin foods like tofu. He shouldn’t study late. It’s bad for his health. Liu Hong looks heavy. She may have bad eating habits. She should take more exercise and eat less meat and junk food. And I hope they get better soon.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已通过表格形式给出,考生需根据表格中Guo Jia、Tang Jie和Liu Hong的问题,分别给出相应的建议,并注意不要遗漏信息,同时适当组织语言,使文章连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作背景与意图。简要介绍5月20日“全国学生营养日”及邵阳市一中的问卷调查情况,引出要给朋友们提建议的主题;
第二步,具体阐述建议内容。根据表格,分别针对Guo Jia、Tang Jie和Liu Hong的问题给出建议;
第三步,书写结语。以鼓励或期望的话语结束,表达希望朋友们能改善状况的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be stressed out 感到紧张/有压力的
②be bad for 对……有害
③take more exercise 多锻炼
[高分句型]
①She should go to bed early. She shouldn’t watch too much TV in the evening.(should后接动词原形表示建议的句型)
②He should listen to some music. And he should also eat more yin foods like tofu.(and连接两个并列句)
Passage 10
(24-25八下·湖南岳阳云溪区九校联考·期中)最近有些同学感觉学习压力很大,总是很焦虑。请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,给他们提建议,帮助他们正确面对压力,学会放松。
要点如下:
1. 多与老师、父母和朋友交谈,说出自己的烦恼;
2. 积极参加体育锻炼,有一个健康的身体。
Advice
communicate with teachers, parents and friends
tell your troubles
exercise (ride a bike, run)
listen to music, read books
要求:
1、80词左右(标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3、文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
It’s very important for us students to face stress in a right way and learn to relax. _
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【答案】例文
It’s very important for us students to face stress in a right way and learn to relax. Firstly, we should communicate with our teachers, parents, and friends. We can tell them our troubles and get their advice. Secondly, we should take an active part in sports. For example, we can ride a bike, run, or play ball games. A healthy body can help us deal with stress better. Besides, we can listen to music or read books to relax ourselves. In a word, we should face stress in a right way and learn to relax.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,为记叙文。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中给有压力的学生提供的一些建议的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“帮助他们正确面对压力,学会放松。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“多与老师、父母和朋友交谈、积极参加体育锻炼等”几个方面重点介绍给有压力的学生提供的一些建议的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语,表达“总之,我们应该以正确的方式面对压力,学会放松”的总结。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with与……交流;
②take part in参加;
③deal with处理;
④in a word总之。
[高分句型]
①It’s very important for us students to face stress in a right way and learn to relax. (“It is+形容词+for sb to do sth”句型)
②Besides, we can listen to music or read books to relax ourselves. (动词不定式作目的状语)
Passage 11
(24-25八下·湖南邵阳武冈·期中)近期你们班召开班会,讨论如何安排自己的课余生活,从关爱家人,提升自己,关心他人的角度进行讨论并提出自己的建议。请以Enjoy Our After-school Life为题写一篇文稿向学校报刊投稿,向全校学生介绍健康的课余生活。
关爱家人
参与家务劳动……
提升自己
参加体育锻炼,培养兴趣爱好……
关心他人
参加志愿活动……
要求:1. 包括所有提示的内容,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯; 2. 70词左右。
Thanks to the double reduction policy, our spare time is much longer than before. So we have more free time to do what we like. But how to better use our free time?
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【答案】例文
Enjoy Our After-school Life
Thanks to the double reduction policy, our spare time is much longer than before. So we have more free time to do what we like. But how to better use our free time?
Here is some of my advice. First, it’s important to care for our family. Since our parents are busy with their work, we can share some housework like sweeping the floor, cleaning the rooms and doing the dishes. This can not only help develop our independence, but also make our parents relaxed and happy. Secondly, why not do something to improve ourselves? We can do some sports to keep healthy or take up a new hobby. Last but not least, it’s a good idea to take part in the volunteer activities and help others. For example, we can visit the old people’s home or help the young children study. When we help others, we can also get a strong feeling of satisfaction.
All in all, let’s enjoy our after-school time and make it meaningful and colorful!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:本文主要根据题干中的提示内容,介绍应如何享受快乐的课后生活,可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,表示有更多的时间享受课后生活;
第二步,从关爱家人、提升自己、关心他人的角度对同学们的课余生活提出建议;
第三步,书写结语,鼓励大家让课余生活更丰富更有意义。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also不但……而且……
②take up a new hobby培养新爱好
③a strong feeling of satisfaction一种强烈的满足感
[高分句型]
①Since our parents are busy with their work, we can share some housework like sweeping the floor, cleaning the rooms and doing the dishes.. (since引导的原因状语从句)
②When we help others, we can also gain a strong sense of satisfaction. (when引导的时间状语从句)
Passage 12
(24-25八下·湖南湘潭益智中学·期中)假如你是 Li Hua,你校英文报新设了名为Take Care of Yourself的专栏,现在正以“A Small Life Skill Helps a Lot”为题进行征文。请你根据中文和英文的提示,用英文写一篇短文投稿,主要谈谈你想学的一个生活技能、选择这个技能的原因以及为了学会这个技能将做的计划等。
要求: (1)短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息,并适当发挥;
(2)词数80左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名和地名。
A Small Life Skill Helps a Lot
Life skills are necessary for teenagers. To better take care of myself, I decide to learn _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
A Small Life Skill Helps a Lot
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To better take care of myself, I decide to learn cooking.
First, I am very interested in cooking. It’s wonderful to create my own dishes. What’s more, I hope I can develop my independence and help my family when they are busy. Learning to look after my family is also my wish.
In order to develop my cooking skill, I will first ask my mother for help. I think the dishes she cooks are the most delicious in the world. And it’s also a good idea to take online classes to learn cooking. Also, I plan to practice cooking every weekend.
All in all, the earlier we learn some life skills, the better it is for our future. Let’s start learning now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出“学习一些生活技能”的主题;
第二步,具体介绍说明自己想学习的内容、选择烹饪的原因和如何做的;
第三步,书写结语,呼吁大家开始学习生活技能。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of照顾
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③in order to为了
[高分句型]
①To better take care of myself, I decide to learn cooking. (不定式作目的状语从句)
②I think the dishes she cooks are the most delicious in the world. (省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 13
(24-25八下·湖南永州新田县·期中)“奋斗是青春最亮丽的底色,行动是青年最有效的磨砺。有责任有担当,青春才会闪光。”责任是一种非常宝贵的品质。每个人都应该对自己负责。同时,也需要对别人负责。
某英语网站正在开展以“责任”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李宇,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍自己勇于承担责任的一次经历,并分享你的收获,或者谈谈你对责任的理解。
注意:
(1) 文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名;
(2) 不少于80词。
参考词汇: take responsibility 负责,承担责任
be responsible for 对……负责
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【答案】例文
Responsibility plays an important part in our life.
Last Friday, when I came home from school, I found my house was in a mess. I started to sweep the floor at once. In my opinion, parents work hard to give us a better life. Since we live in one house with our parents, we should do our part in keeping the house clean and tidy. It took me an hour to clean the room. And I got such a strong feeling of satisfaction when I saw the look of joy on my mother’s face.
I got a lot from this experience. It provided me with an opportunity to develop my independence and responsibility. We should not only be responsible for ourselves, but also for other people. As long as everyone tires his best to take responsibility, everyone has the ability to make a difference to the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文为一篇话题作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:要点内容已给出,注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己勇于承担责任的一次经历;
第二步,分享自己的收获并谈谈自己对责任的理解。
[亮点词汇]
① play an important part in在……起重要作用
② in a mess一团糟
③ at once立刻
④ be responsible for 对……负责
⑤ make a difference产生影响
[高分句型]
① Last Friday, when I came home from school, I found my house was in a mess.(when引导的时间状语从句)
② Since we live in one house with our parents, we should do our part in keeping the house clean and tidy.(since引导的原因状语从句)
③ As long as everyone tires his best to take responsibility, everyone has the ability to make a difference to the world.(as long as引导的条件状语从句)
主题02 人与社会——社会服务
Passage 1
(24-25八下·湖南邵阳新宁县十校联考·期中)假设你是李明,本周班会上,你将代表老师用英语通知学生参加一次敬老院的公益活动。
要点包括:1.星期天早上8:30在校门口集合,乘公共汽车前往;
2.给老人们赠送班级礼物;
3.打扫卫生,整理房间;
4.唱歌、跳舞、讲故事、聊天,给老人们带去快乐;
5.活动很有意义,希望积极参与公益活动。
要求:1.要点齐全;
2.词数80词左右。
提示:the old people’s home(敬老院) gift(礼物) the elderly(老年人) chat with(与……聊天) meaningful(有意义的)
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【答案】例文
Fellow students,
This is Li Ming. I have an important notice about a meaningful activity.
This Sunday, we will visit the old people’s home. Please meet at the school gate at 8:30 am. We will go there by bus together. Remember to be on time.
At the home, we will first present our class gifts to the elderly. Then, we will help clean up and tidy their rooms. After that, we will sing, dance, tell stories and chat with them. We want to bring them happiness.
This activity is very meaningful. It helps the elderly and teaches us kindness. I hope everyone can join in and do good things for others.
Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇通知;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明周日要参加一次敬老院的公益活动;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍时间,交通方式,去做的事情等;
第三步,书写结语。发表自己对这次活动的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①on time准时
②clean up清理,打扫
③chat with sb和某人聊天
[高分句型]
①Then, we will help clean up and tidy their rooms. (and连接并列句)
②I hope everyone can join in and do good things for others. (宾语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25八下·湖南岳阳湘阴县城南四校联考·期中)Volunteers are like superheroes without capes—they help others and make our community brighter. Share your story!
(志愿者就像没有披风的超级英雄,他们帮助他人,让社区更美好。请分享你的故事!)
内容包括:
1. Where did you do your volunteer work?
2. What did you do?
3. How do you feel?
作文要求
(1)不能照抄原文;不能在文中出现真实姓名和地点。
(2)语句连贯,词数 60 词左右。
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【答案】例文:
A Memorable Volunteer Experience
I did my volunteer work at a community library which was in need of some order. I sorted out the books on the shelves and helped the staff organize a book-donation event. We also guided kids to find the books they liked. It was fulfilling to see children’s happy faces when they got the right books.
After this volunteer work, I felt a deep sense of fulfillment. Knowing that I could bring a little joy to their lives made me realize the true meaning of helping others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意要点齐全,可适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接引出自己在社区图书馆做志愿者这件事。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。描述在图书馆做的工作。
第三步,书写结语。表达做完志愿者工作后的深刻感悟,升华了帮助他人的主题。
[亮点词汇]
①sorted out整理
②fulfilling令人满足的
③realize意识到
[高分句型]
1 It was fulfilling to see children’s happy faces when they got the right books. (when引导的时间状语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25八下·湖南岳阳岳阳县·期中)人们常说: “服务他人,快乐自己。”你准备利用即将到来的劳动节去社区做一些服务工作。请根据以下表格中的提示内容,给你们学校的英文报写一篇短文,介绍你的计划。
Places
Activities
Community center
帮助老人,唱歌,讲故事……
Community hospital
分发健康饮食宣传册……
Community park
捡垃圾,浇花……
……
……
参考词汇:leaflets宣传册
要求:1.参考表格提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.不少于80词。(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。)
As we all know, “Serving others can bring us happiness.” Labor Day is coming, I will
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【答案】例文
As we all know, “Serving others brings us happiness.” Labor Day is coming. I’ll do some service in my community to make it better.
First, I’ll go to our community center to help and cheer up the old people. For example, I can sing songs or tell them some interesting stories. Second, I’m going to hand out the leaflets on healthy diets at our community hospital or other places. What’s more, I’m also planning to pick up and sort rubbish with my friends in our community park, as well as watering flowers. Last but not least, I will help the kids with their lessons and look after them as well.
I’m sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以一般将来时为主;
③提示:根据所给的提示要点,介绍自己在劳动节即将要进行的一些社区服务工作。写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,详细介绍要做的社区服务工作;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①cheer up使振奋
②hand out分发
③pick up捡起
[高分句型]
①First, I’ll go to our community center to help and cheer up the old people. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②I’m sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday. (宾语从句)
Passage 4
(24-25八下·湖南娄底直学校联合体·期中)假定你是李华,上周你和同学参加了养老院志愿者活动。学校英语角将举办“Volunteering makes a difference”的主题演讲活动,请根据以下信息,可适当拓展,写一篇英文发言稿。
1.具体的志愿活动内容:clean the room,…
2.参与此次志愿活动的原因:Helping others is the best way to help ourselves...
3.你对这次志愿活动的看法:get a strong feeling of satisraction,...
注意:
(1)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息:
(2)写作词数为80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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【答案】例文
Good morning, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. Last week, my classmates and I volunteered at a nursing home. First, we cleaned the rooms and watered plants. Besides, we chatted with the elderly, sang songs, and even taught them simple exercises. It was a meaningful experience.
Why did we do this? I believe helping others is the best way to help ourselves. By caring for the elderly, we learn patience and responsibility. What’s more, their smiles made us realize the joy of giving.
In my opinion, volunteering brings a strong feeling of satisfaction. It connects us with people in need and makes our world warmer. Let’s continue to spread kindness!
Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“我和同学在养老院做志愿。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——具体的志愿活动内容、原因及看法等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①care for关心
②What’s more而且
③continue to do sth.继续做某事
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, volunteering brings a strong feeling of satisfaction. (动名词作主语)
2 Let’s continue to spread kindness! (祈使句)
主题01 人与自我——家务劳动;健康生活;学习压力;挫折应对;社会服务
Passage 1
(24-25八下·湖南衡阳船山实验中学·期中)友谊是“桃花潭水深千尺,不及汪伦送我情”的那份真诚,但最近李华与他最好的朋友Dave发生了一些争吵,李华感到非常难过,希望跟Dave道歉和好,却不知道如何去做。请你以Doctor Alice的身份,根据下面的要点提示,给李华写一封关于如何和好的建议信。
提示:
(1)say sorry to…
(2)take him to a ball game…
(3)buy him a gift…
(4)…
要求:
1. 语句通顺,表达正确,积极向上;
2. 短文须包括至少2项提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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【答案】例文
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear you had a fight with Dave. It’s normal to have disagreements with friends sometimes, but it’s important to fix things.
First, you should say sorry to him sincerely. Tell him how much he means to you and that you regret the argument. Then, why not take him to a ball game? You both love sports, so it’ll be a good chance to talk and have fun. If you want, buy him a small gift, like his favorite snack. It can show your care.
I’m sure Dave will appreciate your efforts. Good luck!
Yours,
Doctor Alice
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:向李华提供与朋友Dave和好的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头表达对李华与朋友争吵的理解,点明解决矛盾的重要性。
第二步,中间分点给出具体建议,包括真诚道歉、带朋友去看球赛、送小礼物等,并说明建议的合理性。
第三步,结尾表达对李华努力的肯定和祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①sincerely真诚地;诚恳地
②regret后悔;懊悔
③appreciate感激;欣赏
④efforts努力;尝试
[高分句型]
①It’s normal to have disagreements with friends sometimes, but it’s important to fix things.(此句使用“it作形式主语+不定式作真正主语”的结构,使句子结构清晰,表达简洁。)
②You both love sports, so it’ll be a good chance to talk and have fun.(运用了“so”引导的结果状语从句,说明带朋友去看球赛的好处,逻辑连贯。)
Passage 2
(24-25八下·湖南娄底冷水江·期中)李华所在的小区 (neighborhood) 上周发生了一场火灾。幸运的是,消防员 (fireman) 及时赶到扑灭 (put out) 了这场大火,没有伤亡。假如你是李华,请根据以下表格提示,写一篇英语小短文,记录火灾发生时和你家人的活动。
你
看电视
妈妈
清洁厨房
姐姐
和朋友打电话
爸爸
看报
要求:
1.语句通顺、条理清晰;
2.包含以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
3. 80词左右。
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【答案】例文:
Last week, there was a big fire in my neighborhood. I still remember what my family were doing at that time. I was watching TV while my elder sister was talking to her friend on the phone. My mother was cleaning up the kitchen. She saw the light of fire first and then asked us to get out quickly. My father was reading newspapers in the living room then. Hearing my mom’s words, he called the firemen at once. Luckily, the fire was put out in a short time and nobody got hurt.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要采用“过去进行时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍火灾发生的时间和地点;
第二步,介绍火灾发生时我和家人正在做什么;
第三步,介绍火灾的结果。
[亮点词汇]
①clean up清理
②at once立刻
③in a short time在短时间内
[高分句型]
I was watching TV while my elder sister was talking to her friend on the phone. (while引导时间状语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25八下·湖南张家界桑植县·期中)假定你是Jerry,你收到了朋友Emily的一封倾诉信,请根据来信要点写一封回信并给出建议。
问题
建议
家庭方面
Parents are too busy…feel lonely…
和父母多分享你的感受
学习方面
Feel hard to learn English…
1. 多向老师求助;2. …
人际方面
Got into a fight with friends…
……
要求:(1) 词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。(2) 涵盖所有要点,并适当发挥,语意连贯,书写规范。(3) 文中请勿出现真实的校名、班级和姓名等个人信息。
Dear Emily,
I feel sorry to hear about your problems. In your letter, you said that
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Yours,
Jerry
【答案】Dear Emily,
I feel sorry to hear about your problems. In your letter, you said that you were lonely and your parents were always busy, I suggest that you find some time to sit down and have a talk with them, and tell them your feelings and thoughts, which will help you to study in peace of mind. To solve the problems of your English learning, you should ask your teachers for help if you can’t understand in class and practice your English with your classmates if you can’t speak in front of your classmates. You can also take part in some English corner activities after class. I’m sorry to hear that you quarreled with your friend. But don’t worry, please remember communication is the most important. Find out the key to the problem and say sorry to him. I’m sure he’ll forgive you soon.
Hope my suggestions can help you, waiting for your good news.
Yours,
Jerry
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。引出作者Jerry针对Emily的烦恼提出的建议;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。具体讲述作者在家庭、学习和人际方面对Emily提出的建议;
第三步,书写结语。作者进行总结并希望自己的建议能对Emily有所帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①find some time to do sth. 找时间做某事
②have a talk with sb. 与某人谈话
③tell sb. sth. 告诉某人某事
④ask sb. for help 向某人寻求帮助
⑤take part in 参加
⑥quarrel with sb. 与某人争吵
[高分句型]
①In your letter, you said that you were lonely and your parents were always busy, I suggest that you find some time to sit down and have a talk with them, and tell them your feelings and thoughts, which will help you to study in peace of mind. (含有that的宾语从句;which引导的定语从句)
②To solve the problems of your English learning, you should ask your teachers for help if you can’t understand in class and practice your English with your classmates if you can’t speak in front of your classmates. (不定式作目的状语;if引导的条件状语从句)
3 But don’t worry, please remember communication is the most important. (祈使句;省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 4
(24-25八下·湖南常德鼎城区校联考·期中)假如你是李华,近期你在“树洞聊天室”看到一则Nancy发布的留言,谈到自己在学习和生活方面遇到的问题,如学习压力大、课外班多、与朋友发生争吵等。请你结合下面的图示,给她写一封邮件,帮助她克服焦虑情绪,轻松、快乐地学习和生活。
要求:
1. 必须包含图示中的所有要点,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息;
3. 不少于70词 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Nancy,
I’m sorry to hear about your problems.
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Nancy,
I’m sorry to hear about your problems. Everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes. I hope you can live a happy life. It’s all right to tell others when you are anxious. It’s good to communicate with your friends, teachers or parents when you are in trouble. Thus, you can solve the problems from study or life easily. Listening to music or watching movies is another way to help you get relaxed. Try to smile at yourself and never keep silent about your problems. Please do remember: you’re not alone.
No matter how many difficulties we have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生写作时应注意围绕提示要求写,不要遗漏图片中的建议,需结合图片内容针对Nancy学习和生活问题提建议;根据实际情况可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,回应Nancy的问题,表达共情;
第二步,结合图示,阐述“Learn to relax (如看电影、听音乐)”,“Communicate with parents and friends”及补充要点 (如合理规划课外班、主动和朋友和解等),并说明理由;
第三步,给予鼓励,表达相信她能克服困难、快乐生活。
[亮点词汇]
① feel worried 感到担忧
② communicate with 和……交流
③ get relaxed 放松
④ smile at 对……微笑
⑤ keep silent about 对……保持沉默
[高分句型]
① It’s good to communicate with your friends, teachers or parents when you are in trouble. (含有时间状语从句的复合句)
② Listening to music or watching movies is another way that can help you get relaxed. (含有定语从句的复合句)
③ No matter how many difficulties you have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end. (含有让步状语从句和宾语从句的复合句)
Passage 5
(24-25八下·湖南株洲荷塘区·期中)为了庆祝五一劳动节,校刊英文专栏正在以 “We Should Do Chores at Home” 为题进行征文比赛活动。请你根据表格中的英文提示,写一篇短文参加比赛。
包括以下内容:
What are you going to do?
Why?
Initiative (倡议)
1. do the dishes;
2. sweep the floor;
3. make the bed;
4. fold the clothes
……
1. Doing chores helps to develop our independence;
2. Doing chores teaches us how to look after ourselves
……
Let’s do chores at home now!
注意:
(1)写作词数为80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
We Should Do Chores at Home
May Day is coming. And I am going to do some chores at home. I am going to do the dishes. . .
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【答案】例文:
We Should Do Chores at Home
May Day is coming. And I am going to do some chores at home. I am going to do the dishes after dinner every day. Then, I plan to sweep the floor and make my bed every morning. Also, I will fold my clothes neatly. Sometimes I will even clean my room.
Why should we do chores? Doing chores helps us become more independent. For example, when we clean our rooms, we learn to organize our things. Besides, it teaches us how to look after ourselves. After doing chores, I feel proud and responsible.
So let’s start now! Doing chores makes our home cleaner and helps us grow. Everyone should join in. Let’s do chores at home now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”与“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题,承接上文,引起下文准备做的家务;
第二步,具体阐述准备做的具体家务以及原因;
第三步,提出一起做家务的倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do sth.计划做某事
②neatly整齐地
③look after照顾
[高分句型]
For example, when we clean our rooms, we learn to organize our things.(when引导的时间状语从句)
Passage 6
(24-25八下·湖南长沙浏阳·期中)国家喊你减肥啦!为了人们的健康,3月8日国家卫健委主任提出将持续推动体重管理体重年行动。肥胖将引起很多慢性病或心脑血管疾病,严重影响人们的健康。那么作为青少年我们应当如何避免肥胖保持健康呢?请以“how to keep healthy”为题,根据以下要点写篇文章。
提示:
keep healthy
food
1. eat regularly (有规律地)
2. eat fruit and vegetables
3.…
sports
1. run at least twice a week
2.…
living habits
1. don’t play computer games or mobile phones for too long
2.…
要求:1.必须包含以上所有要点并适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3.80词左右(标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays, health is becoming more and more important.
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【答案】例文
How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays, health is becoming more and more important. In order to live better and learn better, we must keep healthy. I would like to tell you some useful ways to keep healthy.
First, we should pay attention to the food we eat. It’s necessary to eat regularly. For example, we need to have three meals a day. Also, we’d better eat fruit, vegetables and some meat. At the same time, we should eat less junk food. What’s more, we can do more sports. It’s healthy for our mind and body to run at least twice or three times a week. And we can take a walk after dinner every day. In addition, we can develop some good living habits. On the one hand, we shouldn’t play computer games or mobile phones for too long. On the other hand, as teenagers, we have to get 7~8 hours of sleep every night.
All in all, it is important for us to keep healthy. If we are healthy, we can have a better life and get better grades.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借用文章已给开头,引出主题是保持健康;
第二步,根据题干表格的要点,从食物,运动和生活习惯上给出具体建议;
第三步,发出号召并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①in addition此外
②keep healthy保持健康
[高分句型]
①All in all, it is important for us to keep healthy.(it is adj for sb to do sth固定句型)
②If we are healthy, we can have a better life and get better grades.(if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 7
(24-25八下·湖南永州道县·期中)假如你是李华,最近,你们班的英语老师组织了一场关于“中学生是否应该做家务”的班级讨论会。同学们各抒己见:有人认为做家务会占用学习时间,应该由父母负责;也有人认为做家务能培养独立能力,是每个家庭成员的责任。请你结合自身经历,写一篇短文,表达你的观点并说明理由。
1. 词数不少于80词;文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不能出现真实的校名、人名;
3. 语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。
Last week, our English teacher organized a class discussion about whether teenagers should do housework. Different people have different views.
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【答案】例文
Last week, our English teacher organized a class discussion about whether teenagers should do housework. Different people have different views. I think teenagers should do housework, and here are my reasons.
First, doing chores helps us learn life skills. For example, I clean my room every day and help my parents cook on weekends. Through these tasks, I’ve learned how to take care of myself. Second, sharing housework brings families closer. Last month, my family cleaned the house together. We laughed and talked while working, which made me feel happy and loved. Finally, it teaches responsibility. When I finish my chores quickly, I feel proud because I’m contributing to my family.
In short, doing housework is not a waste of time. It helps us grow into responsible and independent people. Let’s start helping at home today!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:根据题干写作,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头,表达自己的观点;
第二步、说明理由;
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①do housework做家务
②take care of照顾
③a waste of time浪费时间
[高分句型]
①We laughed and talked while working, which made me feel happy and loved.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
②When I finish my chores quickly, I feel proud because I’m contributing to my family.(when引导时间状语从句;because引导原因状语从句)
Passage 8
(24-25八下·湖南衡阳八中教育集团·期中)假如你是李华,你的好朋友Peter前不久给你来信,告诉你他在学习、生活中遇到的以下4个问题。请你用英语写一封回信,就Peter遇到的问题,给他提供一些合理建议,能简单说明理由更好。
Peter’s problems
He can’t get on well with his parents.
He has no friends.
He often has a cold.
He gets too much stress from his schoolwork.
要求:1.内容应包括所有提示要点,可以适当发挥;
2.不包括所给开头以及结尾,词数不少于80词。
Dear Peter,
I am sorry to hear about your problems. It’s normal for teenagers to meet these problems in life. Here is my advice for you.
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I hope my advice will help you out soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Peter,
I am sorry to hear about your problems. It’s normal for teenagers to meet these problems in life. Here is my advice for you.
For getting on well with parents, try to communicate more. Share your ideas and listen to theirs. Understanding each other can reduce conflicts. To make friends, be active in group activities. Show your kindness and enthusiasm. People will be more willing to befriend you. Regarding frequent colds, do more exercise and keep a balanced diet. A strong body can resist diseases. For schoolwork stress, plan your time well. Break tasks into small parts and complete them step by step. This can make study more manageable.
I hope my advice will help you out soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:以一般现在时为主;
③提示:需涵盖针对4个问题的建议及理由,词数不少于80词,开头结尾已给,要完整覆盖问题,建议合理且可适当拓展。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借开头自然回应Peter来信,引出要提建议的内容,开启书信主体。
第二步,具体阐述内容。针对每个问题依次提建议并说明理由,并覆盖全部问题,建议具体且有逻辑。
第三步,书写结语。表达对Peter的期待,简洁自然。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate more多沟通
②be active in积极参与
③balanced diet均衡饮食
④break tasks into拆分任务
[高分句型]
To make friends, be active in group activities. Show your kindness and enthusiasm.(不定式表目的)
Passage 9
(24-25八下·湖南郴州·期中)假如你是李华,“双休”政策来临,学生课余时间增加,你所在的学校针对“学生应该上课后兴趣补习班吗?”对200名学生做了一项调查。请你根据下面的调查结果,写一篇以“Should Students Take After-school Classes?”为题的英文报道。
有必要 (40%)
没必要 (60%)
帮助孩子们进入好高中和好大学
父母逼的太紧,太多压力
帮助孩子们在学校提升自信(self-confidence)
应该有时间放松和玩
帮助孩子们学习重要的技能,放松自己
如何学习和如何成为一个快乐的学习者更重要
你的看法:……
要求:
1.表达准确,语句通顺;
2.短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
3.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Should Students Take After-school Classes?
Is it necessary for students to take after-school classes? We did a survey about this.
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【答案】例文
Should Students Take After-school Classes? Is it necessary for students to take after-school classes? We did a survey about this. 40% of the 200 students think it’s necessary. They believe these classes help students get into better high schools and universities, improve self-confidence at school, and learn important skills to relax. However, 60% of the students disagree. They say parents push too hard, causing much pressure. Students need time to relax and play. Also, learning how to study happily is more important.
In my opinion, after-school classes can be useful, but we shouldn’t have too many. It’s important to balance study and free time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“我们针对学生上课后兴趣补习班做了调查”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述必要性观点三个理由及反对观点的三个理由。
第三步:个人的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①improve self-confidence提升自信
②balance study and free time平衡学习和自由时间
[高分句型]
They believe these classes help students get into better high schools and universities, improve self-confidence at school, and learn important skills to relax. (宾语从句)
Passage 10
(24-25八下·湖南邵阳大祥区·期末)作为八年级学生,我们在学习和生活中难免会遇到烦恼,为了更好地发现并解决同学们存在的问题,班上开展了一次以“Face Problems Bravely(勇敢地)”为主题的英语班会。假如你是李华,请你根据下面的班会笔记,就其中的两到三个问题,提出你的建议,并谈一谈自己的看法。
Problems:
1. can’t get on with parents
2. don’t get enough sleep
3. have lots of pressure
...
Advice:
1. communicate with
2. finish homework quickly
3. set small goals
...
注意:1. 短文须包括提示中的三个要点,可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名,校名和人名。
3. 词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Face Problems Bravely
Problems and worries are normal in life.
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Let’s face problems bravely. Things will go well if we work out them with patience.
【答案】范文:
Face Problems Bravely
Problems and worries are normal in life. In the face of our daily problems, what should we do? Here is my advice.
Firstly, when it comes to not getting on well with parents, I think you should communicate with your parents and listen to them carefully. This can help you understand each other better. Secondly, if you don’t get enough sleep, besides finishing homework quickly, you should also develop a good living habit and avoid reading or playing online games too late. Good sleep is the key to keeping healthy. Lastly, if you have lots of pressure, I think that you should set small goals and take breaks when needed.
Let’s face problems bravely. Things will go well if we work out them with patience.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头,引出话题;
第二步、根据班会笔记上记录的问题,提出自己的建议;
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in the face of面对
②get on well with sb.与某人相处融洽
③take breaks休息一下
[高分句型]
①Firstly, when it comes to not getting on well with parents, I think you should communicate with your parents and listen to them carefully.(when引导的时间状语从句;省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 11
(24-25八下·湖南邵阳武冈·期中)近期你们班召开班会,讨论如何安排自己的课余生活,从关爱家人,提升自己,关心他人的角度进行讨论并提出自己的建议。请以Enjoy Our After-school Life为题写一篇文稿向学校报刊投稿,向全校学生介绍健康的课余生活。
关爱家人
参与家务劳动……
提升自己
参加体育锻炼,培养兴趣爱好……
关心他人
参加志愿活动……
要求:1. 包括所有提示的内容,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯; 2. 70词左右。
Thanks to the double reduction policy, our spare time is much longer than before. So we have more free time to do what we like. But how to better use our free time?
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【答案】例文
Enjoy Our After-school Life
Thanks to the double reduction policy, our spare time is much longer than before. So we have more free time to do what we like. But how to better use our free time?
Here is some of my advice. First, it’s important to care for our family. Since our parents are busy with their work, we can share some housework like sweeping the floor, cleaning the rooms and doing the dishes. This can not only help develop our independence, but also make our parents relaxed and happy. Secondly, why not do something to improve ourselves? We can do some sports to keep healthy or take up a new hobby. Last but not least, it’s a good idea to take part in the volunteer activities and help others. For example, we can visit the old people’s home or help the young children study. When we help others, we can also get a strong feeling of satisfaction.
All in all, let’s enjoy our after-school time and make it meaningful and colorful!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:本文主要根据题干中的提示内容,介绍应如何享受快乐的课后生活,可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,表示有更多的时间享受课后生活;
第二步,从关爱家人、提升自己、关心他人的角度对同学们的课余生活提出建议;
第三步,书写结语,鼓励大家让课余生活更丰富更有意义。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also不但……而且……
②take up a new hobby培养新爱好
③a strong feeling of satisfaction一种强烈的满足感
[高分句型]
①Since our parents are busy with their work, we can share some housework like sweeping the floor, cleaning the rooms and doing the dishes.. (since引导的原因状语从句)
②When we help others, we can also gain a strong sense of satisfaction. (when引导的时间状语从句)
Passage 12
(24-25八下·湖南长沙明德教育集团·期中)多彩的社团活动丰富了我们的校园生活,来自深圳外国语学校的李华对校园社团十分热衷,但近期他因未能加入心仪的社团而感到失落。作为李华的笔友,请你用英语给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)描述李华的问题并安慰;
(2)提出你对社团的看法;
(3)就李华面临的问题给出你的建议(ask your teacher for help, prepare better the next time, ...)
要求:
(1)80词左右(开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Li Hua,
I have received your e-mail.
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Best Wishes,
Your pen pal
【答案】Dear Li Hua,
I have received your e-mail. I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems. You love the clubs in your school and you want to take part in them, but you failed. Don’t worry about it. It’s not a big problem.
In my mind, the club is really a good way to enrich your school life. You can make many new friends and learn a lot from them.
Don’t be afraid of failure. If you have a problem, you can ask your teacher for help. What’s more, you can prepare better and join the clubs next time.
Best Wishes,
Your pen pal
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。描述李华的问题并安慰,然后提出你对社团的看法并就李华面临的问题给出你的建议。
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加……
②worry about担心……
③make friends交朋友
④be afraid of害怕……
[高分句型]
①If you have a problem, you can ask your teacher for help. (If引导的条件状语从句)
②You love the clubs in your school and you want to take part in them, but you failed. (并列句)
Passage 13
(24-25八下·湖南长沙周南教育集团联考·期中)作为八年级学生,我们在学习和生活中难免会遇到一些烦恼,为了更好地发现及解决同学们存在的问题,班上开展了一次以“Face Problems Bravely”为主题的英语班会。假如你是李华,请你根据下面的班会笔记,谈谈同学们最常见的三个问题,并给出你的建议。
同学们常见的问题
1. too much stress about schoolwork
2. difficult relations with families and friends
3. …
你的建议
1. play sports to get relaxed ...
2. communicate properly with families and friends ...
3. …
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名等信息
(2)内容必须包括所提供的信息,并在此基础上,进行拓展;
(3)词数:80词左右。
Nowadays, we students in Grade Eight have had quite a lot of problems in our daily lives. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Nowadays, we students in Grade Eight have had quite a lot of problems in our daily lives.
The most common problems are as follows. First, many students feel too much stress about schoolwork. They often stay up late to finish homework, which makes them tired. Second, some students have difficult relations with families and friends. Misunderstandings often happen due to lack of communication. Third, quite a few students become addicted to mobile games, wasting much study time.
To solve these problems, I have some suggestions. First, students should play sports regularly to relax, like running or playing basketball. It helps reduce stress effectively. Second, communicate properly with families and friends. Talk openly about feelings and listen to others’ opinions. Finally, set clear rules on phone use. For example, limit playing games to half an hour a day. With these ways, we can face problems bravely and live a better life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文属于议论文,围绕八年级学生常见问题及解决建议展开论述,目的是分析问题并提出可行的解决办法。
②时态:主要采用一般现在时,描述学生日常存在的问题以及通用的解决建议。
③提示:题目要求根据给定的学生常见问题,并针对每个问题提出建议,写作时需涵盖所有要点,合理拓展内容,保证逻辑连贯、语言流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直接点明主题,指出八年级学生在日常生活中存在诸多问题,引出下文对具体问题和建议的阐述。
第二步,阐述常见问题,比如学业压力、人际关系等问题,并针对问题提出合理的建议,帮助学生有效解决这些问题。
第三步,总结全文,强调通过这些方法能够勇敢面对问题,过上更好的生活,升华主题,使文章结构完整。
[亮点词汇]
①as follows如下
②due to由于
③addicted to沉迷于
④effectively有效地
[高分句型]
①They often stay up late to finish homework, which makes them tired.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Talk openly about feelings and listen to others’ opinions.(祈使句)
Passage 14
(24-25八下·湖南常德安乡县·期中)假如你是李华,你们班就“青少年在家是否应当做家务”为主题做了一个问卷调查。以下是根据问卷调查的结果生成的饼状图,请根据图内信息,用英语写一份调查报告,并谈一谈你自己的看法。
注意:
1. 词数:不少于80 词(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 调查报告必须包含图中所有信息,并谈一谈自己的看法。
Whether teenagers should do chores
Last week, we did a survey about whether teenagers should help with household chores. Here are the results....
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【答案】例文:
Whether teenagers should do chores
Last week, we did a survey about whether teenagers should help with household chores. Here are the results.
45% of the people in the survey hold the opinion that kids should help out in their homes. They think it as a good chance to learn life skills, and it is necessary for teenagers to share housework with parents. However, 30% are against it. They think teenagers already have too much pressure of schoolwork. 25% think it all depends on time and energy. In my opinion, doing chores at home is a good way for teenagers to learn to be independent. It is good for their future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步,介绍调查结果;
第二步,谈谈自己的看法;
[亮点词汇]
①help out帮助
②share sth. with sb.与某人分享某物
③depend on取决于
④in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
1 In my opinion, doing chores at home is a good way for teenagers to learn to be independent.(动名词作主语)
Passage 15
(24-25八下·湖南张家界永定区·期中)服务他人,快乐自己。如今,越来越多的人喜欢在业余时间做志愿者工作。假如你是李华,你的英语老师得知你有成为志愿者的意愿后,向你分享了一些Mr. Brown招募志愿者的信息。请你根据提示内容,选择一个项目,给Mr. Brown写一封自荐信,说明你的意向。
提示:1. Why do you want to be a volunteer?
2. What are you good at?
3. When can you volunteer?
要求:1. 包含提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,语法正确,行文连贯,书写工整;
3. 80词左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I’m Li Hua from XXX school.
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Thanks for thinking about my application.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Brown,
I’m Li Hua from XXX school. I’m eager to be a volunteer at the History Museum.
Serving others can bring me a strong sense of achievement, and I really love history. I’m good at communicating and storytelling. I’ve read many history books, so I can vividly introduce historical stories behind the exhibits. Also, I’m patient and good at answering various questions. I’m free on weekends. I’m confident I can be a great guide and help visitors better understand history.
Thanks for thinking about my application.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明身份与意愿;
第二步,阐述缘由与优势;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①a sense of achievement成就感
②be eager to渴望
③be good at擅于
[高分句型]
①I’ve read many history books, so I can vividly introduce historical stories behind the exhibits. (结果状语从句)
②I’m confident I can be a great guide and help visitors better understand history. (宾语从句)
主题02 人与社会——家庭沟通
Passage 1
(24-25八下·湖南长沙长郡集团·期中)假设你是李华,每到周末你都在父母的要求下上至少四个课外班,你感到压力很大,疲惫不堪,决定给父母写信,表明自己对课外班的看法,请根据所提示的信息用英语写一封信。
要点如下:1.课外班太多,压力大;
2.周末应该休息,少上或不上课外班;
3.应该多做户外运动,锻炼身体,缓解学习压力;
4.理解父母的苦心,也希望得到父母的理解;
要求:1.内容包含上述要点并可适当发挥;
2.词数80词左右,已给出的句子不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现你的真实姓名,学校名及地名。
Dear father and mother,
I’m really tired these days.
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【答案】例文
Dear father and mother,
I’m really tired these days. I have so many extracurricular classes that I feel under great pressure. I think I should have a rest on weekends and do less or no extracurricular classes. I also think I should do more outdoor sports and exercise. Because it can relieve the pressure of study so that I can study better. Of course, I understand that you are doing this to make me better. But I also want you understand me.
Yours
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:一般现在时;
③ 提示:内容要点已给出,语言需简洁连贯,词数控制在80左右。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明压力大的原因;
第二步,表明自己对课外班的看法;
第三步,表达希望父母理解。
[亮点词汇]
①have a rest休息
②do more outdoor sports做更多的户外活动
③relieve the pressure of study缓解学习压力
[高分句型]
①I have so many extracurricular classes that I feel under great pressure.(结果状语从句)
②Because it can relieve the pressure of study so that I can study better.(原因状语从句和目的状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25八下·湖南岳阳湘阴县·期中)假如你是Jerry,你的朋友Jack和父母在沟通方面存在问题,请你用英语写一封信给Jack,给予他一些建议。内容包括:
1. 讲述你与父母的一次沟通经历(包括时间、地点、事件、结果);
2. 对如何与父母沟通提出至少2点建议;
要求:不少于80词
Dear Jack,
I know that you have trouble communicating with your parents. And I had the same experience.
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Yours,
Jerry
【答案】参考范文
Dear Jack,
I know that you have trouble communicating with your parents. And I had the same experience.
Last Saturday, I wanted to hang out with my friends, but my parents didn’t allow me to go. I sat down and communicated with them to tell them my feelings. Finally, they agreed.
Here is some advice for you to communicate better with your parents. Firstly, it’s good to calm down and think of a good way to communicate with them, for example face to face communication. Writing a letter or a note is also a good idea. Secondly, we’d better tell our parents our feelings and reasons, so they can understand us.
I hope you can have a good communication with your parents and get along well with them.
Yours,
Jerry
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封书信;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据题干中的提示要点给对方提出一些建议,可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,并介绍你与父母的一次沟通经历;
第二步,详细介绍对如何与父母沟通提出的建议;
第三步,书写结语,表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①hang out with sb.和某人闲逛
②communicate with sb.和某人交流
③get along well with sb.和某人相处得好
[高分句型]
①Firstly, it’s good to calm down and think of a good way to communicate with them. (动词不定式作主语以及动词不定式作定语)
②Secondly, we’d better tell our parents our feelings and reasons, so they can understand us. (so连接的并列句)
Passage 3
(24-25八下·湖南衡东一中教育集团·期中)生地会考在即,John压力大但却沉迷手机游戏,甚至和父母产生争吵。假如你是他的朋友李华,请你根据以下要点和要求写一封信给他,给他建议。
参考词汇:lose oneself in (沉迷于),become poor in study,get angry with,communicate with
要求:
(1)沉迷手机游戏不对;
(2)建议他用手机做更多有益学习的事情;
(3)希望他多和父母沟通交流并获得一些放松自我的方法;
(4)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
(5)词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear John,
I am sorry to hear that you argued with your parents about playing mobile phone games. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear John,
I am sorry to hear that you argued with your parents about playing mobile phone games. I understand you feel stressed before the geography and biology exam, but losing yourself in games is not a good way to relax. It may make you become poor in study.
Why not use your phone to help with learning? You can watch educational videos or use apps to review key points. Also, try to communicate with your parents calmly. They care about you and might suggest better ways to relax, like taking short walks or listening to music.
I hope you can balance study and rest. You’ll do well in the exam if you focus!
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为信件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达关心,指出沉迷游戏的危害;
第二步,建议合理使用手机学习;
第三步,强调沟通与放松的重要性;
第四步,鼓励并结尾祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①review key points复习重点
②communicate with与……沟通
③balance study and rest平衡学习和休息
[高分句型]
①Also, try to communicate with your parents calmly.(祈使句)
②I hope you can balance study and rest.(宾语从句)
③You’ll do well in the exam if you focus!(if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 4
(24-25八下·湖南长沙长郡教育集团·期中)根据要求完成短文写作。
假定你是李华,是学校英文校刊Teens Talk专栏的负责人。同学刘明发来邮件,向你诉说他的困扰:在课余时间,他的父母给他安排了大量的补习,令他十分疲惫。因此,他向你询问课余时间的其他活动和好处,以及如何同父母沟通。请结合第一节(回答问题)以及所给提示,给他写一封建议信。
要求:
(1)短文需包括以下要点,可适当发挥:
·What activities can he do in the free time?
·What can he learn from the activities?
·How can he communicate with his parents?
(2)80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Liu Ming,
It’s not easy being our age, and it’s normal to have these feelings.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Liu Ming,
It’s not easy being our age, and it’s normal to have these feelings.
First, I think you need to communicate with your parents and tell them how you feel. Second, you’d better make a study plan. When you study hard and make progress in study, your parents will understand you. Third, you can take an active part in all kinds of activities, like sports meeting, football game and singing competition. These activities teach you teamwork, creativity, and time management. You will feel relaxed and happy through these activities.
So I think if you do as I say, your problem will go away.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头,建议如何与其父母沟通;
第二步、推荐其业余时间可以参加的活动以及好处;
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with sb.与某人沟通
②take an active part in积极参与
③all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①When you study hard and make progress in study, your parents will understand you.(when引导的时间状语从句)
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