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沪教七下期中必背作文范文
Unit 1 — Unit 4 单元主题写作
话题分析 + 写作结构 + 经典范文 | 考前背诵·轻松应对
Unit 1 · 美丽城市 — 深圳 / 家乡介绍
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话题分析
本单元常考“介绍一座城市/家乡”
,要求描述地理位置、
自然风光、人文景点、购物美食等。写作时注意人称以第三人称为主
,时态用一般
现在时
,适当运用形容词和there
be句
型
,让文章生动具体。
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写作结构
·
开头:
城市名称、位置、总体印象(如“modern city”, “garden
city”)
·
主体:
主题公园/海滩/购物中心/美食 → 分点描述
,可用“
It
is called...”, “You
can...”等句型
结尾:
表达喜爱并邀请对方来访
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焱 范文一 · Shenzhen — A Modern Garden City
Shenzhen is a beautiful modern city in the south of China. It is called “a garden city” because there are many different kinds of theme parks. People like to relax in these parks.
If you want to enjoy the seaside and go swimming in the sea, come to Shenzhen. There are long beautiful beaches and clean water. Shenzhen also has many large shopping malls. Here, you can buy things from all over the world. After shopping, you can enjoy delicious food,
such as seafood and dim sum.
At night, you can go to the Citizen Square to enjoy the wonderful electric light show. What a magical night you can have! Shenzhen is a great place to visit. I’m sure you will fall in love with it.
亮点词汇:garden city, theme park, seaside, shopping malls, electric light show, fall in love with
Unit 2 · 旅游推荐 — 北京 / 文化之都
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话题分析
向外国朋友介绍一座旅游城市
,重点描述历史古迹、传统美食、文化艺术。写作时需注意
逻辑顺序
,可按照“古迹—美食—文化活动”展开
,使用建议句型“You can.
..”,
“
Don’t forget to...”。
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写作结构
·
开头:
热情欢迎
,点明城市特色(历史悠久/现代化)
·
主体:
著名景点(故宫/天安门)、美食(北京烤
鸭)、文化体验(京剧)
结尾:
表达祝愿
,期待来访
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Δ 范文二 · Welcome to Beijing
Welcome to Beijing, the capital of China. It is a city with a long history and modern energy.
You can visit the Forbidden City, which was once the imperial palace. It keeps thousands of artworks and tells stories of ancient China. Tian’anmen Square is the largest public square in the world. It is an important place in modern Chinese history.
For a taste of traditional Beijing food, head to Wangfujing Snack Street. There, you can try
delicious Peking duck and Mongolian hotpot. If you want a cultural experience, please watch a performance of the Peking Opera. The beautiful singing and colorful costumes will amaze you.
Beijing is so beautiful that you will fall in love with it at first sight. I hope you have a wonderful time here!
亮点句型:the capital of..., a city with a long history, fall in love with it at first sight, cultural experience
Unit 3 · 保护环境 — 植树节活动 & 树木的价值
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话题分析
本单元两个常考文体:
1) 现场报道
(描述植树节当天的活动
,用现在进行时
)
;
2) 说明文
(阐述树木对人类的重要性
,提出保护措施)。写作时要熟练运用
“现在进行时”及“use
of trees”相关句型。
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写作结构
(报道)
·
时间/地点/目的 → 学生们分组劳动细节(挖坑、浇水
、扶苗)→ 呼吁更多人参与
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写作结构 (重要性)
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总述树木重要 → 分点作用(净化空气、提供木材、提供食物)→
保护措施(停止滥伐、节约用纸)
)
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范文三
· Tree
Planting
Day
Report
(现场报道)
Hello, tree lovers! Today is
12th March — Tree Planting Day. I
am
at People’s
Pa
rk.
Come
with
me
to
see
what
is
happening
.
Right now, the students are full of
energy and working
in
g
roups.
Some
are
digging
holes
with shovels. It’s hard work, but they keep going. Others are
carefully
carrying
saplings to
the
holes
and
placing
them
in
.
Then
,
they
cover
the
roots
with
soil
.
Look!
Some students are finding sticks and tying
them
to
the
saplin
gs
with
ropes
to
keep
them
upright
.
Meanwhile
,
others
are
getting
water
from
a
nearby
river
and
watering
the
new
saplings.
These students are doing a great
job making our
city
greener.
Do
you
want
to
help
us plant trees
?
If
yes
,
come
over
to
People
’
s
Park
right
now
!
语法亮点:现在进行时
(are digging, are carrying, are tyin
g) ,号召性结尾。
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范文四
· Trees Are
Important
(说明文)
Trees are the biggest and oldest living things on Earth.
They
are
very
important
for human
beings and
animals.
Trees are very useful. First, they can keep the air cool
and
cle
an
and make
our
environment
more beautiful.
Second, trees take in harmful gases and produce oxygen. Third, trees help
fight against pollution. Fourth, we get wood from trees to make many things — for
example, most
furniture
is
made
of
wood
.
Finally
,
trees
provide
us
with
delicious
food
like
apples
,
oranges and
so
on.
In short, trees help us in many different wa
ys.
So we must protect them. We
should
stop
cutting
down
too
many
trees
and
plant
more
instead
.
Also
,
we
had
better
use
both
sides
of
the paper to save wood. Let’s take action now!
逻辑词:
First, Second, Third,
Finally,
I
n short 让文章层次清晰。
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Unit 4 · 动物朋友 — 感人故事 & 保护倡议
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话题分析
本单元强调动物与人类的友谊
,考查两种体裁:
记叙文
(动物帮助人的小故事
,用一般过
去时)和
议论文/倡议书
(动物的重要性及保护措施)。注意故事要有起伏
和真情实感
,说
明文要分点清晰。
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写作结构
(故事)
·
背景(时间/地点/人物)→ 遇到困难(迷路/危险)→
动物出现并帮助 → 结局安全,
友谊加深
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写作结构
(倡议)
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总起:动物是朋友 → 作用(食物、工作、陪伴)→
当前困境 → 呼吁保护措施
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骝 范文五 · From Fear to Safety: Lily and Her Dog Coco (故事记叙)
Last Sunday afternoon, it was sunny. Twelve-year-old Lily went for a walk in the forest near her home. She was excited to explore nature.
As she walked deeper, the colorful flowers and singing birds attracted Lily. She was so
happy, but soon she got lost. She couldn’t find the way back — everything looked the same. She started to feel afraid.
Just when Lily was almost in despair, her pet dog Coco appeared. Coco had been looking for her. Coco barked happily and ran to Lily, then led the way.
Lily followed Coco closely. Soon, they found the way out. Lily was so happy. She hugged Coco and patted it again and again.
Thanks to Coco, Lily was safe. She realized Coco was not just a cute pet, but a hero. From then on, their friendship grew stronger.
记叙文要素:时间、地点、起因、经过、结果;运用连接词 Just when, Then, Thanks to使故事连贯。
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范文六
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Animals
Are
Our
Friends
(倡议/说明)
Animals are our friends and they
are
a part
of
our
life.
Animals
are
of
great
importance
to
us
.
Firstly
,
they
offer
us
different
kinds
of
food
.
For
example, we get milk and meat from cows and pigs.
Secondl
y,
some
animals help us work.
Dogs can guard our houses and keep us safe. Horses
can help
carry heavy
things.
Besides, animals bring us
joy. We enjoy watching lovely pandas and smart monkeys in t
he
zoo. Wild
animals
also
play
a
big
role
in
nature
—
they
help
keep
the
environment
healthy
and
balanced
.
However, many animals are in danger now. We should take
action
to protect
them. We
can
start by not hurting them or destroying their homes. We can also plant more trees and
avoid littering. Let’s work together to protect our dear animal friends and make the
world
a better place
for
them
!
亮点短语:offer
us food, guard
our
houses,
play a
big
role,
in
danger, take
action,
make the world a
better
pla
ce.
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✒ 写作提分加油站 · 期中必用衔接词 & 句型
0 常用过渡词:
First / First of all, ... Second / Besides / What's more, ...
Finally / Last but not least, ...
For example / such as ... In short / In a word, ...
✨ 高分句型:
It is called ... because ... There are so many things to see and do.
I’m sure you will fall in love with ...
Thanks to ... , sb. was safe.
We should take action to ...
⏱ 时态提示:
介绍城市/说明重要性 → 一般现在时
植树节现场报道 → 现在进行时
动物救人故事 → 一般过去时
重点短语归纳 · Unit 1-4
Unit 1-2 城市描写: be located in, a garden city, theme parks, shopping malls, delicious food, fall in love with, at first sight, cultural experience
Unit 3 树木&环保: dig holes, carry saplings, cover the roots, take in harmful gases, produce oxygen, fight against pollution, be made of, protect trees, cut down, use both sides of paper Unit 4 动物朋友: get lost, in despair, led the way, grew stronger, guard our houses, play a big role, in danger, take action, destroy their homes, keep the environment balanced
写作万能结尾: I hope you have a wonderful time. / Let’s work together to... / From then on, their friendship grew stronger. / What a magical night you can have!
沪教牛津版 七年级下册 期中复习必备 · 单元主题写作范文
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