内容正文:
考前特训
期中考 书面表达 仿真模拟 考前特训(浙江专用)
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
特 训 范 围
Unit 1 Animal friends
Unit 2 No Rules, No Order
Unit 3 Keep Fit
Unit 4 Eat Well
Passage 1
假如你是李华,你的笔友Peter想了解你在学校的就餐情况,请写一封80词左右的信向他介绍你午餐喜欢的饮食,并谈谈喜欢的理由。
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【答案】One possible version:
Hi, Peter,
I have lunch at school every day. I like to eat rice very much. I sometimes eat noodles and dumplings. For meat, I like beef, fish and chicken. For vegetables, I like tomatoes, potatoes and carrots. And for fruit, I like to eat apples, oranges, bananas and strawberries. There are some drinks in our dining hall, too. I like to have egg soup, milk or yogurt. I like these foods and drinks because they are delicious and healthy for me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:介绍午餐喜欢的饮食及理由,词数80左右。
[写作步骤]
第一步,问候并点明主题,简要介绍日常午餐内容;
第二步,详细说明最喜欢的菜及理由,补充其他食物和就餐习惯。
[亮点词汇]
①delicious美味的
②healthy健康的
[高分句型]
I like these foods and drinks because they are delicious and healthy for me. (because引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 2
饮食习惯决定了你的健康状况。你的饮食习惯健康吗?请根据以下提示,写一篇文章,介绍你的饮食习惯。
提示内容:
1.你有哪些好的饮食习惯?(至少3项)
2.你有哪些不好的饮食习惯?(至少3项)
3.你是如何看待你的饮食习惯的?你打算如何改进?
写作要求:
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数80左右。
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【答案】例文:
My Eating Habits
I have some good eating habits. I always eat breakfast on time, have more vegetables and fruit every day, and drink enough water. But I also have bad ones. I often eat too much junk food, like chips and candy. I sometimes eat quickly and skip dinner when I’m busy. I know my bad habits are bad for my health. So I plan to eat less junk food, chew food slowly, and never skip meals again. I want to keep healthy with good eating habits.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时(描述现有的饮食习惯及相关计划);
③提示:涵盖自身的良好饮食习惯(按时吃早餐、多吃蔬果、多喝水)、不良饮食习惯(吃太多垃圾食品、吃得快、忙时不吃晚餐)及改善计划(少吃垃圾食品、细嚼慢咽、不挑食),内容完整,逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点明自己有一些好的饮食习惯,列举具体表现(按时吃早餐、多吃蔬果、多喝水);
第二步:转折说明自己也有不良饮食习惯,列举具体情况(常吃太多垃圾食品、有时吃得快、忙时不吃晚餐);
第三步:表明知道坏习惯对健康有害,提出改善计划(少吃垃圾食品、细嚼慢咽、不再漏餐),并表达想通过良好饮食习惯保持健康的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①eating habits饮食习惯
②on time按时
③junk food垃圾食品
④skip跳过
⑤healthy健康的
[高分句型]
①I always eat breakfast on time, have more vegetables and fruit every day, and drink enough water.(用三个并列动词短语列举良好习惯,条理清晰)
②So I plan to eat less junk food, chew food slowly, and never skip meals again.(用三个并列动词短语提出改善计划,具体可行)
Passage 3
假如你是Bob,你校体育俱乐部正在招收新成员。请你根据提示写一篇英语短文,介绍一下自己和你喜爱的体育运动。
要点:1. 你在哪个班级;
2. 你喜爱哪些体育运动;
3. 你有哪些体育用品及你的看法。
要求:1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 词数80左右,可适当发挥。
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【答案】例文
Hello! I’m Bob. I’m a student from Class Two, Grade Seven.
I love sports very much. My favorite sports are playing basketball and swimming. I often practice them in my free time. They make me strong and relaxed.
I have a new basketball and a pair of nice sports shoes. I think doing sports is good for our health. It can also help us make more friends. I hope I can join the sports club.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:介绍性记叙文,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:班级信息、喜爱的体育运动、体育用品及看法
确定人称:第一人称
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:自我介绍,引出对体育运动的喜爱
主体段:分别介绍喜爱的体育运动和拥有的体育用品
结尾段:阐述对体育运动的看法,表达加入体育俱乐部的愿望
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:班级信息
自我介绍:I’m...from.../My name is...and I’m in...
班级表达:Class...,Grade...
要点二:喜爱的体育运动
运动选择:playing basketball/swimming/running/playing football/playing tennis等
喜爱原因:make me strong/relaxed/healthy/happy等
要点三:拥有的体育用品及对体育运动的看法
物品选择:a basketball/a pair of sports shoes/a football/a tennis racket等
看法表达:doing sports is good for our health/help us make more friends/improve our teamwork ability等
Passage 4
为了鼓励学生养成健康的生活方式,学校的英语校刊正在向全校同学征集,有关健康生活的建议。请你围绕下图所示的思维导图,用英文写一篇短文投稿。
注意:
1. 围绕表格内容进行写作,可根据行文适当增减。
2. 文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
3. 词数80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Enjoy Healthy Life
It’s important for us to keep healthy. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Enjoy Healthy Life
It’s important for us to keep healthy. Good health helps us study well and live happily. Without it, we can’t do anything we like.
To keep healthy, we can do many things. First, we should eat healthy food, like fruits and vegetables, to get enough nutrition. Second, doing sports every day, such as running or playing ball games, can make us strong. Also, we need to have enough sleep and keep a good mood.
I hope everyone can form a healthy lifestyle and enjoy a happy life.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:围绕健康生活展开,阐述健康生活的重要性以及保持健康生活的方式
确定人称:第三人称(we/our)和第一人称(I)结合
注意事项:文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;词数80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:点明主题,阐述健康生活的重要性
主体段:从不同方面说明保持健康生活的方式
结尾段:表达期望,希望大家养成健康生活方式
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:健康生活的重要性
常用表达:Good health helps us study well and live happily. Without it, we can’t do anything we like./Good health is the foundation for us to achieve our goals. Without good health, we’ll have no energy to pursue our dreams.
作用效果:强调健康对学习和生活的重要性,引出下文对保持健康生活方式的阐述
要点二:保持健康生活的方式
饮食方面:
常用表达:First, we should eat healthy food, like fruits and vegetables, to get enough nutrition./First, we ought to have a balanced diet, including grains, proteins, fruits and vegetables, so that we can obtain sufficient nutrients.
活动方面:
常用表达:Second, doing sports every day, such as running or playing ball games, can make us strong./Second, engaging in regular physical activities every day, for example, swimming or cycling, helps us build up our strength.
要点三:表达期望
常用表达:I hope everyone can form a healthy lifestyle and enjoy a happy life./I sincerely hope that all of us can develop a healthy lifestyle and lead a joyful life.
Passage 5
假如你是Alice,你想给你的笔友Mike写一封邮件介绍自己喜欢和不喜欢的校规,并发表自己对这些校规的看法。请你根据以下提示,完成这封邮件。
校规
感受
1. 上学日穿校服;
2. 在课堂上保持安静;
3……
1. 手机锁进储物柜;
2. 不准在教室里吃东西;
3……
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数80左右 (文中已给出内容不计入总词数)。
Dear Mike,
We have many rules at school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What do you think about school rules in your school?
Yours,
Alice
【答案】Dear Mike,
We have many rules at school. I like some of them but dislike others.
I like wearing school uniforms on school days because it makes us look tidy. I also think keeping quiet in class is necessary for good learning.
However, I don’t like the rule that phones must be locked in lockers. Sometimes I need my phone to call my parents. Also, we can’t eat in the classroom. I feel hungry after class and want a small snack.
What do you think about school rules in your school?
Yours,
Alice
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
文体:应用文(电子邮件),以一般现在时为主
明确要点:喜欢的校规及感受、不喜欢的校规及感受、发表看法
人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构
开头段:总起,引出校规话题
主体段:分别介绍喜欢和不喜欢的校规及理由
结尾段:询问对方看法,保持书信格式
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:喜欢的校规及感受
wear school uniforms/look tidy/keeping quiet in class/necessary for good learning
要点二:不喜欢的校规及感受
phones locked in lockers/need to call parents/can’t eat in the classroom/feel hungry
要点三:发表看法
like some but dislike others/give reasons
Passage 6
动物是人类的好朋友,忠诚友善的狗,活泼可爱的兔子,精灵古怪的猴子……现你们学校的网站正在开展以“My Favourite Animal”为主题的英文征文活动。假如你是李华,请根据以下提示问题用英语写一篇短文投稿,说说你最喜欢的动物是什么,它长什么样子以及你喜欢它的原因。
What’s your favourite animal?
What does it look like?
Why do you like it?
Something more about your favourite animal.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数80词左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favourite Animal
Hello, my name is Li Hua. My favourite animal is
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【答案】例文
My Favourite Animal
Hello, my name is Li Hua. My favourite animal is the rabbit.
Rabbits are cute with two long ears, soft fur, and a little pink nose. They can jump very high and also have a special ability to hear very well. Even when they are sleeping, they can hear the sound. I like rabbits not only because they are lovely but also because they are gentle and friendly. They don’t make much noise and are always happy. I also like to watch them eat carrots and greens. It’s so funny! I hope to have a pet rabbit in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,明确自己最喜欢的动物;
第二步,描述该动物的外貌特征;
第三步,说明喜欢它的原因,并补充一些相关细节。
[亮点词汇]
①have a special ability to do sth.有做某事的特殊能力
②not only…but also…不仅……而且……
③in the future在将来
[高分句型]
①Even when they are sleeping, they can hear the sound. (even when引导的让步状语从句)
②I like rabbits not only because they are lovely but also because they are gentle and friendly. (because引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 7
现如今,世界上有很多珍稀动物濒临灭绝,比如熊猫、蓝鲸等。我们应该拯救这些野生动物,创造一个人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。假设你是王一鸣,你的朋友爱丽丝Alice通过电子邮件询问你关于保护动物的话题。现在请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,回一封电子邮件,介绍一下你最想保护的动物。
最想保护的动物
介绍你最喜欢的濒危动物
(外貌、喜好等)
濒危的原因
(2点)
保护它们的建议
(2点)
注意:1. 可在思维导图的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 语句连贯,词数80左右,作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I’m glad to receive your letter.
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Yours,
Wang Yiming
【答案】例文:
Dear Alice,
I’m glad to receive your letter. My favourite animals are pandas. They’re white and black. They like climbing trees.
But their situation is difficult. They’re in danger. First, pandas don’t have many babies and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller and smaller. So we should do something for pandas. We can set up nature parks and plant more bamboo so that pandas can have enough food. It’s also a good idea to raise money for them.
I hope everyone can protect them.
Yours,
Wang Yiming
【详解】【第一步:审题立意】
确定文体:介绍性说明文,用一般现在时为主。
明确要点:最喜欢的濒危动物、濒危的原因及保护的措施。
确定人称:第三人称 (They/pandas)。
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称。
【第二步:构思布局】
三段式结构:
开头段:开头问候,直接点明最想保护的动物 (熊猫),简单描述外貌与习性。
主体段:分别说明濒危原因及保护建议。
结尾段:结尾呼吁共同努力。
【第三步:要点展开】
要点一:最喜欢的濒危动物
喜欢的动物:My favourite animals are pandas.
外貌与习性:white and black/climbing trees等
要点二:濒危的原因
原因一:pandas don’t have many babies and baby pandas often die.
原因二:pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller and smaller.
要点三:保护建议
具体说明:set up nature parks/plant more bamboo/raise money等
Passage 8
无规矩不成方圆。我们的生活中总是充满了各种各样的规则。假设你们学校组织了一次演讲比赛,请你根据以下提示内容写一篇演讲稿参加这次比赛,介绍你生活中的一些规则。
提示内容:1.介绍你生活中的一些规则(至少4项);
2.表达你对这些规则的观点或看法,并描述你的打算。
写作要求:1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2.词数80左右。
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【答案】例文:
Rules shape our lives
Hello, everyone. Today I want to tell you about some rules around me.
There are many rules in life! Every morning I have to make my bed before breakfast. And I have to arrive at my school on time. Besides, I have to wear the uniform. What’s more, after school I must finish my homework first. Finally, I can’t hang out with my friends on weekdays.
I know it’s hard to obey them, but rules can help to make the world better. I will follow the rules because they help me become a better person.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态是一般现在时为主(描述日常规则)和一般将来时(表达打算);
③提示:列举至少4项生活规则,然后表达自己的观点(规则的重要性),最后描述自己的未来行动(遵守并变得更好)。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开场问候,然后引出规则主题句(总起)。
第二步,逐条列举规则(至少4项)。
第三步,表达自己观点(规则虽难但有益),并描述自己的打算(遵守并变得更好)。
[亮点词汇]
①shape塑造
②besides此外
③follow遵守
[高分句型]
①I know it’s hard to obey them, but rules can help to make the world better.(运用了but表转折,突出规则的双面性)
② I will follow the rules because they help me become a better person.(运用了because表原因,表达未来行动)
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期中考书面表达仿真模拟考前特训(浙江专用)
学校:
姓名:
班级:
考号:
特训范围
Unit 1 Animal friends
Unit 2 No Rules,No Order
Unit 3 Keep Fit
Unit 4 Eat Well
期
中
仿
真
Passage 1
假如你是李华,你的笔友Peter想了解你在学校的就餐情况,请写一封80词左右的信
向他介绍你午餐喜欢的饮食,并谈谈喜欢的理由。
Passage 2
饮食习惯决定了你的健康状况。你的饮食习惯健康吗?请根据以下提示,写一篇文
章,介绍你的饮食习惯。
提示内容:
1你有哪些好的饮食习惯?(至少3项)
2你有哪些不好的饮食习惯?(至少3项)
3你是如何看待你的饮食习惯的?你打算如何改进?
写作要求:
1文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称:
2.词数80左右。
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Passage 3
假如你是Bob,你校体育俱乐部正在招收新成员。请你根据提示写一篇英语短文,介
绍一下自己和你喜爱的体育运动。
要点:1.你在哪个班级:
2.你喜爱哪些体育运动:
3.你有哪些体育用品及你的看法。
要求:1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称:
2.词数80左右,可适当发挥。
Passage 4
为了鼓励学生养成健康的生活方式,学校的英语校刊正在向全校同学征集,有关健
康生活的建议。请你围绕下图所示的思维导图,用英文写一篇短文投稿。
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考前特训
Enjoy Healthy Life
Importance
Ways
Hope
Why should we keep
How do we keep
healthy?
healthy?
注意:
1.围绕表格内容进行写作,可根据行文适当增减。
2.文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名:
3.词数80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Enjoy Healthy Life
It's important for us to keep healthy
期
中
模
拟
Passage 5
假如你是Alice,你想给你的笔友Mike写一封邮件介绍自己喜欢和不喜欢的校规,并
发表自己对这些校规的看法。请你根据以下提示,完成这封邮件。
校规
感受
3/6
乐思英语
考前特训
1.上学日穿校服:
2.在课堂上保持安静:
3.…
1.手机锁进储物柜:
●
2.不准在教室里吃东西:
3.…
写作要求:
1.文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥:
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称:
3.词数80左右(文中已给出内容不计入总词数)。
Dear Mike,
We have many rules at school.
What do you think about school rules in your school?
Yours,
Alice
Passage 6
动物是人类的好朋友,忠诚友善的狗,活泼可爱的兔子,精灵古怪的猴子…现你
们学校的网站正在开展以“My Favourite Animal'”为主题的英文征文活动。假如你是李华,
请根据以下提示问题用英语写一篇短文投稿,说说你最喜欢的动物是什么,它长什么样子
以及你喜欢它的原因。
What's your favourite animal?
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What does it look like?
Why do you like it?
Something more about your favourite animal.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息:词数80词左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favourite Animal
Hello,my name is Li Hua.My favourite animal is
Passage 7
现如今,世界上有很多珍稀动物濒临灭绝,比如熊猫、蓝鲸等。我们应该拯救这些
野生动物,创造一个人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。假设你是王一鸣,你的朋友爱丽丝
Alice通过电子邮件询问你关于保护动物的话题。现在请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,回
一封电子邮件,介绍一下你最想保护的动物。
最想保护的动物
介绍你最喜欢的濒危动物
濒危的原因
保护它们的建议
(外貌、喜好等)
(2点)
(2点)
注意:1.可在思维导图的基础上适当拓展信息:
2.语句连贯,词数80左右,作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I'm glad to receive your letter.
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Yours,
Wang Yiming
Passage 8
无规矩不成方圆。我们的生活中总是充满了各种各样的规则。假设你们学校组织了
一次演讲比赛,请你根据以下提示内容写一篇演讲稿参加这次比赛,介绍你生活中的一些
规则。
提示内容:1介绍你生活中的一些规则(至少4项):
2表达你对这些规则的观点或看法,并描述你的打算。
写作要求:1文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2.词数80左右。
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