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专题04 书面表达(书信)
Passage 1
(22-23高一下·北京丰台·期中)
假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你校正在举办主题为The People I Admire的征文活动,请你写一篇征文投稿,内容包括:
1.你敬佩的人是谁;
2.该人物的主要事迹;
3.该人物对你的影响。
注意:词数100左右。
The People I Admire
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【答案】 The People I Admire
One of the people I admire is Zhong Nanshan, who has become a household name for his great contributions to defeating virus. He is a leading figure in the battles against SARS in 2003 and COVID in 2019, winning him the worldwide respect. Every time I see the pictures, in which he is fighting to save people’s lives, I cannot help being moved by him. What impresses me most is that aged 84, he rushed to the front line of the epidemic area without hesitation at the beginning of the outbreak of COVID 19. Dangerous though it was, Zhong Nanshan and his workmates worked hard day and night to treat the patients infected with COVID 19. With their efforts, remarkable results were achieved and the COVID 19 was finally under control. Influenced by him, I have made up my mind to be a doctor in the future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇征文投稿,介绍一位对他产生影响的人物。
【详解】1.词汇积累
影响:influence → impact/affect
人物:figure → person
显著的:remarkable → outstanding
决定:make up one’s mind to do→ be determined to do
2.句式拓展
陈述句变强调句
原句:With their efforts, remarkable results were achieved and the COVID 19 was finally under control.
拓展句:It was with their efforts that remarkable results were achieved and the COVID 19 was finally under control.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Every time I see the pictures, in which he is fighting to save people’s lives, I cannot help being moved by him. (运用了every time引导的时间状语从句、介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Dangerous though it was, Zhong Nanshan and his workmates worked hard day and night to treat the patients infected with COVID -19. (运用了让步状语从句的倒装,过去分词短语作后置定语)
Passage 2
(21-22高一下·北京昌平·期中)
假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你们学校的留学生Jim对你校的艺术社团很感兴趣并发来邮件询问。请你给他回复邮件,向他推荐一个艺术社团,内容包括:
1.社团名称;
2.社团活动;
3.推荐理由。
注意:1.词数不少于100;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m more than delighted to know you are interested in the art club of our school. I’d like to recommend Peking opera club to you, which I believe you will enjoy a lot.
I recommend this club to you for the following reasons. First, Peking opera is like a pearl in Chinese traditional art. Joining this club can give you a taste of Chinese traditional art forms and even have a hands-on experience. Besides, the club will regularly organize various activities, such as inviting famous actors to perform, and drawing Peking opera make-ups. Considering your interest in Chinese history, I believe getting close to Peking opera will also be a good way of learning more about it.
Hope my suggestions can be of help. If you want to learn anything more, don’t hesitate to contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你们学校的留学生Jim回复一封邮件,向他推荐一个艺术社团。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted →pleased/happy
相信: believe →be convinced
建议: advice/proposals →suggestions
是有帮助的:be of help →be helpful
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句:Considering your interest in Chinese history, I believe getting close to Peking opera will also be a good way of learning more about it.
拓展句:Considering that you are interested in Chinese history, I believe getting close to Peking opera will also be a good way of learning more about it.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
I'd like to recommend Peking opera club to you, which I believe you will enjoy a lot.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
If you want to learn anything more, don't hesitate to contact me.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 3
(21-22高一下·北京·期中)
假设你是红星中学高一学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在北京留学,暑假将至,你想邀请他一起去看一个展览。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 展览相关信息(时间、地点、内容等);
2. 邀请他去看该展览的理由。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Summer vacation is coming. I would like to invite you to visit the Chinese painting exhibition, which will be held from the second to eighth of August in the Art Museum in our city.
A lot of famous Chinese traditional painting by top artists will be exhibited there. Additionally, you can see some famous painters drawing Chinese paintings on the spot,which I think, will certainly attract the visitors eyes. I think you can learn more about traditional culture through this exhibition and further enhance your understanding of China.
Would you like to go to the exhibition with on the second of August? I’m looking forward to your reply.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友写一封邮件,邀请他去参观展览。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想要做某事:would like to do sth.→want to do sth.
展览:exhibit→display
除此之外:additionally→besides
增强:enhance→improve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:A lot of famous Chinese traditional painting by top artists will be exhibited there.
拓展句:A lot of famous Chinese traditional painting by top artists will be exhibited there, which will let us understand the characteristics of Chinese painting.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I would like to invite you to visit the Chinese painting exhibition, which will be held from the second to eighth of August in the Art Museum in our city.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Additionally, you can see some famous painters drawing Chinese paintings on the spot,which I think, will certainly attract the visitors eyes. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
Passage 4
(21-22高一下·北京·期中)
假设你是红星中学高一学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在北京留学,暑假将至,你想邀请他一起去看一个展览。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 展览相关信息(时间、地点、内容等);
2. 邀请他去看该展览的理由。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】 Summer vacation is coming. I would like to invite you to visit the Chinese painting exhibition, which will be held from the second to eighth of August in the Art Museum in our city.
A lot of famous Chinese traditional painting by top artists will be exhibited there. Additionally, you can see some famous painters drawing Chinese paintings on the spot,which I think, will certainly attract the visitors eyes. I think you can learn more about traditional culture through this exhibition and further enhance your understanding of China.
Would you like to go to the exhibition with on the second of August? I’m looking forward to your reply.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友写一封邮件,邀请他去参观展览。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想要做某事:would like to do sth.→want to do sth.
展览:exhibit→display
除此之外:additionally→besides
增强:enhance→improve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:A lot of famous Chinese traditional painting by top artists will be exhibited there.
拓展句:A lot of famous Chinese traditional painting by top artists will be exhibited there, which will let us understand the characteristics of Chinese painting.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I would like to invite you to visit the Chinese painting exhibition, which will be held from the second to eighth of August in the Art Museum in our city.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Additionally, you can see some famous painters drawing Chinese paintings on the spot,which I think, will certainly attract the visitors eyes. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
Passage 5
(24-25高一下·北京·期中)
假定你是校学生会主席李华,你校将举办一场校园音乐节。请给你校的英国留学生Jim写一封邮件邀请他来参加,内容包括:
1、时间地点;
2、活动内容;
3、欢迎他表演节目。
注意:1. 词数不少于80词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hope this email finds you well. I’m Li Hua, President of the Student Union. I’m writing to invite you to our upcoming Campus Music Festival.
The festival is scheduled to kick off at 7 p.m. this Friday in the school auditorium. During the event, you’ll be treated to a variety of musical performances. Some students will present classic Chinese folk songs, using traditional instruments like the guzheng and erhu, which will surely transport you to the heart of Chinese culture. Meanwhile, there will also be popular Western hits, sung by our talented school bands. Additionally, we’ve arranged a group sing-along session, where everyone can join in and enjoy the joy of music together.
We sincerely hope you can join us and showcase your musical talent on stage. It would be a wonderful opportunity to share different musical styles.
Looking forward to your presence.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国留学生Jim写一封邮件邀请他来参加校园音乐家。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开始:kick off→start
展示:showcase→display
机会:opportunity→chance
此外:additionally→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Meanwhile, there will also be popular Western hits, sung by our talented school bands.
拓展句:Meanwhile, there will also be popular Western hits, which will be sung by our talented school bands.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Some students will present classic Chinese folk songs, using traditional instruments like the guzheng and erhu, which will surely transport you to the heart of Chinese culture. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It would be a wonderful opportunity to share different musical styles. (运用了不定式作后置定语)
Passage 6
(24-25高一下·北京·期中)
假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Jim想要参加学校的中国文化周,因此写信向你询问中国的传统节日。请你给他写一封回信,重点介绍一下中国的春节。内容包括:
1.春节在中国人心中的地位;
2.春节前人们要做的准备;
3.春节期间人们的欢庆方式。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
In your letter, you asked me about Chinese traditional festivals. Now I would like to tell you something about the most important festival in China — the Spring Festival.
A few days before the festival, houses are cleaned and red couplets are put up. People put on their delicate clothes and set off firecrackers during the festival. Besides, presents and big dinners are prepared to celebrate the happy reunion of family and relatives. They have dumplings and enjoy the Spring Festival Gala on Lunar New Year’s Eve. Customs may vary from place to place, but the same happy atmosphere is to be found everywhere in the country.
Now, I hope you have some idea of our Spring Festival. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Jim写一封回信,重点介绍一下中国的春节。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要:important→vital
庆祝:celebrate→observe
此外:besides→in addition
快乐的:happy→joyful
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:Customs may vary from place to place, but the same happy atmosphere is to be found everywhere in the country.
拓展句:Although customs may vary from place to place, the same happy atmosphere is to be found everywhere in the country.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Customs may vary from place to place, but the same happy atmosphere is to be found everywhere in the country.(运用了but表示转折以及不定式的to be done形式)
【高分句型2】Now, I hope you have some idea of our Spring Festival.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 7
(24-25高二下·北京·期中)
假设你是李华,是红星中学的高二学生。你得知故宫正在招募暑期义务英文讲解员(docent),请你给相关部门负责人写一封申请信,内容包括:
1. 介绍你的基本信息;2. 说明你的优势;3. 表示你希望被录用。
Dear Madam/Sir,
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Yours,
LiHua
【答案】Dear Madam/Sir,
I am writing to apply for the opportunity to be the voluntary English guide during the course of the Summer Vacation. Here are some reasons which I considered to make me stand out.
I am a Senior-3 student from the Hongxing High School, dreaming to be a translator in the future. Having participated in every English speech competition of our school, I improved my oral English a lot. In addition, what is a great plus to me is that I scored 117 in TOEFL, indicating my incredible sense of English. It is also equally important that I am a local Beijing boy and I visit the Forbidden City each summer, appreciating the scenery as well as learning about it.
I would appreciate it if you could consider favorably of my application and grant me at your convenience. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给相关部门负责人写一封申请信,申请成为故宫暑期义务英文讲解员。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:participate in→join in
比赛:competition→contest
此外:in addition→what’s more
本地人:local→native
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Having participated in every English speech competition of our school, I improved my oral English a lot.
拓展句:I participated in every English speech competition of our school so that I have improved my oral English a lot.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Here are some reasons which I considered to make me stand out.(运用了which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】In addition, what is a great plus to me is that I scored 117 in TOEFL, indicating my incredible sense of English.(运用了what引导主语从句,that引导表语从句)
【高分句型3】It is also equally important that I am a local Beijing boy and I visit the Forbidden City each summer, appreciating the scenery as well as learning about it.(运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句)
Passage 1
(23-24高一下·北京·期中)
假设你是红星中学高一学生李华,你们学校正举办主题为“An Admirable Person In My Eyes”的英文征文活动,请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.人物简介及事迹
2.对你的影响
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
An Admirable Person in My Eyes
I consider ... a respectable person.
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【答案】
An Admirable Person in My Eye
I consider Zhong Nanshan a respectable person. He has become a household name for his great contributions to defeating virus. He is a leading figure in the battles against SARS in 2003 and COVID in 2019, winning him the worldwide respect. Every time I see the pictures, in which he is fighting to save people’s lives, I cannot help being moved by him. What impresses me most is that aged 84, he rushed to the front line of the epidemic area without hesitation at the beginning of the outbreak of COVID 19. Dangerous though it was, Zhong Nanshan and his workmates worked hard day and night to treat the patients infected with COVID 19. With their efforts, remarkable results were achieved and the COVID 19 was finally under control. Influenced by him, I have made up my mind to be a doctor in the future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇短文投稿,介绍一位自己敬佩的人物及其对自己的影响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
人物:figure → person
显著的:remarkable → outstanding
影响:influence → impact
决定:make up one’s mind to do→ be determined to do
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:With their efforts, remarkable results were achieved and the COVID 19 was finally under control.
拓展句:It was with their efforts that remarkable results were achieved and the COVID 19 was finally under control.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Every time I see the pictures, in which he is fighting to save people’s lives, I cannot help being moved by him. (运用了every time引导的时间状语从句、介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】With their efforts, remarkable results were achieved and the COVID 19 was finally under control. (运用了一般过去时的被动语态)
Passage 2
(24-25高一下·北京·期中)
你是红星中学高一学生李华,你的英国好友 Jim 写信来和你讨论“The key to success”这个话题,请你给他写一封回信,以你心目中的一个成功人物为例,表达你关于这个话题的观点。
内容包括:
1.你的观点;
2.该人物的事迹及主要成就。
注意:词数不少于60词。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear from you. Your point of view about keys to success has aroused my interest and I’d like to share with you my opinion.
I think motivation and determination are the keys to success, and Yuan Longping, the father of hybrid rice, has set a great example. When Mr. Yuan was young, he saw many people die of hunger every year in his hometown, so he was determined to devote his entire life to agriculture to help remove starvation. Having spent countless days researching on a special type of rice in the mountains of Hunan, he, together with his team, finally managed to work out the hybrid rice breeding strategy.
It was his motivation and determination to save people from hunger that enabled Mr. Yuan to persist in his work and finally made great contributions to the world. I believe as long as we have a strong desire and are determined, we have held the keys to success.
Do you agree with me? I hope to have further discussions with you .Can’t wait to hear from you soon!
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封回信,以心目中的一个成功人物为例,表达关于“The key to success”这个话题的观点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
奉献:devote→commit
帮助:help→assist
消除:remove→get rid of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Your point of view about keys to success has aroused my interest and I’d like to share with you my opinion.
拓展句:Your point of view about keys to success has aroused my interest so much that I’d like to share with you my opinion.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When Mr. Yuan was young, he saw many people die of hunger every year in his hometown, so he was determined to devote his entire life to agriculture to help remove starvation.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】It was his motivation and determination to save people from hunger that enabled Mr. Yuan to persist in his work and finally made great contributions to the world.(运用了强调句型)
【高分句型3】I believe as long as we have a strong desire and are determined, we have held the keys to success.(运用了省略that引导的宾语从句,as long as引导的条件状语从句)
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专题04书面表达(书信)
基础
必练
Passage 1
(22-23高一下·北京丰台·期中)
假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你校正在举办主题为The People I Admire的征文活动,请你写一篇征
文投稿,内容包括:
1你敬佩的人是谁;
2.该人物的主要事迹:
3该人物对你的影响。
注意:词数100左右。
The People I Admire
Passage 2
(21-22高一下·北京昌平·期中)
假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你们学校的留学生Jm对你校的艺术社团很感兴趣并发来邮件询问。
请你给他回复邮件,向他推荐一个艺术社团,内容包括:
1社团名称;
2.社团活动:
3.推荐理由。
注意:1.词数不少于100;
2开头和结尾己给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Passage 3
(21-22高一下·北京·期中)
假设你是红星中学高一学生李华,你的英国朋友Jm在北京留学,暑假将至,你想邀请他一起去看一
个展览。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.展览相关信息(时间、地点、内容等);
2.邀请他去看该展览的理由。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
LiHua
Passage 4
(21-22高一下·北京·期中)
假设你是红星中学高一学生李华,你的英国朋友m在北京留学,暑假将至,你想邀请他一起去看一
个展览。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.展览相关信息(时间、地点、内容等);
2.邀请他去看该展览的理由。
Dear Jim,
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Passage 5
(24-25高一下·北京·期中)
假定你是校学生会主席李华,你校将举办一场校园音乐节。请给你校的英国留学生J写一封邮件邀
请他来参加,内容包括:
1、时间地点;
2、活动内容;
3、欢迎他表演节目。
注意:1.词数不少于80词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
LiHua
Passage 6
(2425高一下·北京·期中)
假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Jm想要参加学校的中国文化周,因此写信向你询问中国的传统节日。
请你给他写一封回信,重点介绍一下中国的春节。内容包括:
1春节在中国人心中的地位:
2春节前人们要做的准备:
3.春节期间人们的欢庆方式。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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www.zxxk.com
让教与学更高效
Dear Jim,
Yours,
LiHua
Passage 7
(24-25高二下·北京·期中)
假设你是李华,是红星中学的高二学生。你得知故宫正在招募暑期义务英文讲解员(docent0,请你给相
关部门负责人写一封申请信,内容包括:
1.介绍你的基本信息;2.说明你的优势;3.表示你希望被录用。
Dear Madam/Sir.
Yours,
LiHua
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Passage 1
(23-24高一下·北京·期中)
假设你是红星中学高一学生李华,你们学校正举办主题为“An Admirable Person In My Eyes”的英文征文
活动,请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.人物简介及事迹
2.对你的影响
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注意:1.词数100左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
An Admirable Person in My Eyes
I consider...a respectable person.
Passage 2
(24-25高一下·北京·期中)
你是红星中学高一学生李华,你的英国好友Jim写信来和你讨论“The key to success”这个话题,请你给
他写一封回信,以你心目中的一个成功人物为例,表达你关于这个话题的观点。
内容包括:
1你的观点:
2.该人物的事迹及主要成就。
注意:词数不少于60词。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
LiHua