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考前押题10 英语作文题 话题归纳·内容导航 话题1投稿 话题4个人经历 话题2推荐信 话题5观点看法 话题3邮件 话题6介绍 话题通关·靶向提分 话题1投稿 Passage 1 假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你校英文报《英语拾零》(English Sidelights)正庆祝创刊十周年，请 你写一篇文章投稿，内容包括： ●读报的经历： ●喜爱的栏目： ●期望和祝福。 (文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称) Passage 2 假设你是大同中学的学生，学校将在暑假期间改造操场，团学联正在开展征文活动，题目为“What you can do to make the playground more convenient'”。你有意投稿，撰写一篇文章，内容包括： 1.描述你想提出的意见： 2.说明你的理由。 Passage 3 假设你是旦华中学高一学生李明，鉴于最近校内有数名学生在体育课上受伤，学校英语报针对这一情 况开展主题为“如何提高学生身体素质”的征文活动。写一篇投稿，内容须包括： 1)两条有助于改善身体素质的建议 2)你提出这些建议的理由 话题2推荐信 Passage 1 假如你是明启中学高一学生李华，你的笔友David要来中国旅游，因为对中国文化很感兴趣，他发邮 件请你推荐一个旅游景点。在老街古镇和博物馆之间你会推荐哪一个？理由是什么？ Passage 2 假定你是李华，外教Chris计划于下周六组织一次春游活动(spring outing)，现面向全班同学征集活 动建议。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： (1)具体活动： (2)你理由。 注意： (1)写作词数应为80个左右： (2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, Yours Li Hua Passage 3 假设你是明启中学高二学生李明，是The English World"这份英语杂志的忠实读者。最近，这份杂志正 在考虑取消纸质版，只在电子阅读器上提供电子版供读者阅读，并就这一计划征求读者意见。写一封邮件 给该杂志“读者来信”专栏，内容须包括： 1.你是否赞成杂志的这一计划： 2.你的理由。 话题3邮件 Passage 1 假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Tall”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访 谈。内容包括： 1.节目介绍： 2.访谈的时间和话题。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右： 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Caroline, Yours sincerely, Li Hua Passage 2 假设你是明启中学高一学生李明。你校拟为高一学生增设“唐诗英译(Translating Tang Poems into English)” 社团，并就此征询学生意见。请写封邮件给负责人朱老师，在邮件的主体段落： 1)表明你是否会加入该社团： 2)陈述你的理由。 Passage 3 你是明启中学高二学生李华，本学期学校计划组织全年级学生去多个外地中学研学(study tour)。现就两 种组织方案征求学生意见。一是以班级为单位，学校随机决定研学地点：二是由学生各自申请想去的中学， 学校根据各处报名人数统筹安排。请写一封信给校长谈谈你的看法，信件内容需包括： 1)你选择哪个方案； 2)你选择该方案的理由。 话题4个人经历 Passage 1 端午已至，明启中学举办了“诗书雅颂吟端午”文化周活动，请你在晨会课上围绕爱国诗人屈原的名句“路 曼曼其修远兮，吾将上下而求索，"long,long had been my road and far,.far was the journey,I would go up and down to seek my heart's desire)发表演讲，结合自己的经历谈谈对这句话的理解。 Passage 2 假如你是明启中学高一学生李明，在你校英语报读到如下征文启事：从小学至今，每个人都制定过许 多计划，有过许多新学期愿景，其中有些中途放弃了，有些坚持到底了。请你就“坚持还是放弃”这个话题写 一篇征文，内容需包括： ●简单描述你曾经中途放弃或坚持到底的某个计划； ●阐述你中途放弃或坚持到底的原因以及对你的启示。（文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称） Passage 3 假定你是李华，国庆节假期期间你到一所山区初中做了两天志愿者(volunteer),请给你的外教Mr.Brown 写一封邮件，介绍这次活动。主要内容如下： 1.活动月的： 2.活动过程（带礼物，演节目，帮助学习等）； 3.你的收获。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 注意：词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Mr.Brown, Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 话题5观点看法 Passage 1 你是明启中学的王磊，你班本学期剩余一笔总额三千元的班费class fee结余，目前有两个方案：1.为 教室添加一台空气净化器；2.为每位同学订阅一份英语周报Shanghai Students'Post。请你给班委会class committee写一封信，谈谈你的看法，必须包括： 1.你赞同的方案： 2.你赞同该方案的理由： 3.你对于执行此方案的建议。 Passage 2 你是天镇中学的高一学生黎明。学校拟采购添置一批设备物资，用于改善学生的校园生活品质。校方 提供了三个物品选项，征求全体学生的意见。请给校长写封信，就“最值得购买的物品”提出自己的看法，并 说明理由。 1 自动贩卖机vending machine 2 空调air-conditioner 3 微波炉microwave oven Passage 3 假设你是王明，你的好友李华在暑假里与父母一起去了欧洲旅游。在旅途中，他发邮件给你，说他不 喜欢旅游，宁愿在家里玩游戏。回复李华一封邮件，告诉他旅游是非常有意义的。在邮件中，你必须： 1.指出李华的认识误区， 2.结合具体例子来说明旅游的好处。 注意：文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 话题6介绍 Passage 1 广西即将迎来广西壮族自治区成立60周年庆典，许多外国友人将到南宁旅游参观。请用英语简要介绍 南宁，内容需包括以下： 1.地理位置，面积：6500平方公里，人口：约740万；2.气候及环境；3.旅游及交通等。 字数：100字左右。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Passage 2 WuLi在北京大学任教长达近二十年，工作出色，为此《中国日报》准备刊登他的照片。请你根据下 面的提示，写一图片说明，简要介绍他的情况。 姓名：Wu Lei 性别：男 出生年月：1964年5月 职业：英语教师 简历：1985年大学毕业，从那时至今在北京大学任教。 主要事迹 1.热爱教育事业： 2.刻苦钻研业务，专心搞好工作； 3.教学方法多样，课堂教学生动活泼： 4.多次被评为模范教师，深受师生尊敬和爱戴。 注意：词数120左右。 参考词汇：教育事业the educational cause Passage 3 假设你是明启中学英语校报专栏作者李华，你计划在下一期into China栏目做一期关于传统冬季习俗的 专栏，专栏内容包括： 1)介绍一项中国传统冬季习俗； 2)该习俗的意义与传承。考前押题10 英语作文题 话题1 投稿 话题4 个人经历 话题2 推荐信 话题5 观点看法 话题3 邮件 话题6 介绍 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 话题1 投稿 Passage 1 假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你校英文报《英语拾零》（English Sidelights）正庆祝创刊十周年，请你写一篇文章投稿，内容包括： ● 读报的经历； ● 喜爱的栏目； ● 期望和祝福。 （文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 English Sidelights and Me I have been an avid reader of English Sidelights since the day my teacher recommended it to me. I remember that the first time I picked up a copy of the paper, I was struck by the quality of the writing and the depth of the coverage. Since then, I have made it a habit to read it every day. One of my favorite sections is the Opinion. I appreciate the diverse range of views and perspectives presented in this section. The editorials are well-researched and thought-provoking, and the guest commentaries offer fresh insights into a variety of issues. I expect the paper to stay true to its core values and to continue to provide readers with high-quality reporting and analysis. On this special occasion of the 10th anniversary of English Sidelights, I hope the paper will thrive and grow in the years ahead. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校英文报《英语拾零》正庆祝创刊十周年，要求考生按照要求写一篇文章投稿。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 热衷的：avid→ keen 呈现：present→ show 提供：offer→ provide 各种各样的：a variety of→ various 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I appreciate the diverse range of views and perspectives presented in this section. 拓展句：I appreciate the diverse range of views and perspectives that are presented in this section. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I remember that the first time I picked up a copy of the paper, I was struck by the quality of the writing and the depth of the coverage.（运用了that引导的宾语从句、the first time引导的时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】On this special occasion of the 10th anniversary of English Sidelights, I hope the paper will thrive and grow in the years ahead.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句） Passage 2 假设你是大同中学的学生，学校将在暑假期间改造操场，团学联正在开展征文活动，题目为“What you can do to make the playground more convenient”。你有意投稿，撰写一篇文章，内容包括： 1. 描述你想提出的意见； 2. 说明你的理由。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 What You Can Do to Make the Playground More Convenient As a student of Datong Middle School, I am excited about the upcoming renovation of our playground during the summer vacation. I believe there are several ways we can contribute to making our playground more convenient for everyone. Firstly, I propose to introduce of a smart booking system. Moreover, I suggest installing additional benches and shelters. This will provide students with a place to rest and take a break from their activities, especially during hot summer days. Finally, I believe it is crucial to involve our student community in the planning process. In conclusion, by implementing these measures, we can contribute to making our playground more convenient and enjoyable for everyone. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“What you can do to make the playground more convenient”为题写一篇投稿文章。 【详解】1.词汇积累 相信：believe→hold the belief that 一些：several→some 建议：propose to do→suggest doing 重要：crucial→vital 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：I believe there are several ways we can contribute to making our playground more convenient for everyone. 拓展句：I hold the belief that there are several ways we can contribute to making our playground more convenient for everyone. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I believe there are several ways we can contribute to making our playground more convenient for everyone. (运用了省略that的定语从句修饰ways) [高分句型2] Finally, I believe it is crucial to involve our student community in the planning process. (运用了省略that的宾语从句) Passage 3 假设你是旦华中学高一学生李明，鉴于最近校内有数名学生在体育课上受伤，学校英语报针对这一情况开展主题为“如何提高学生身体素质”的征文活动。写一篇投稿，内容须包括： 1）两条有助于改善身体素质的建议 2）你提出这些建议的理由 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Improving Students’ Physical Health My name is Li Ming, a freshman at Danhua High School. Recently, several students have been injured during PE classes, highlighting the need for better physical health. I have two suggestions to improve our physical fitness. Firstly, the school should mandate regular warm-up and cool-down sessions, which can help prevent injuries. These exercises increase flexibility and slowly prepare the body for rigorous activities. Secondly, I recommend incorporating more diverse sports activities into the curriculum. Sports like swimming and yoga, which are less injury-prone, provide excellent full-body workouts and enhance endurance. These suggestions are essential because they not only minimize the risk of injuries but also promote long-term health benefits. A well-rounded exercise program ensures that students are physically fit, which will improve their overall well-being and academic performance. By implementing these changes, we can foster a healthier and safer school environment. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校英文报以“如何提高学生身体素质”为主题写一篇文章投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 受伤：injured→wounded 增强：improve→enhance 多样的：diverse→variety 必不可少的：essential→necessary 2.句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：By implementing these changes, we can foster a healthier and safer school environment. 同义句：By putting these modifications into effect, we can cultivate a more healthful and secure atmosphere within our educational institution. 【点睛】【高分句型1】A well-rounded exercise program ensures that students are physically fit, which will improve their overall well-being and academic performance. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】These suggestions are essential because they not only minimize the risk of injuries but also promote long-term health benefits. (运用了not only…but also引导的并列句) 话题2 推荐信 Passage 1 假如你是明启中学高一学生李华，你的笔友David 要来中国旅游，因为对中国文化很感兴趣，他发邮件请你推荐一个旅游景点。在老街古镇和博物馆之间你会推荐哪一个？理由是什么？ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear David, I’m thrilled to hear that you’re planning a trip to China! Given your keen interest in Chinese culture, I would highly recommend visiting an ancient town like Laojie. Laojie offers a unique glimpse into traditional Chinese life. Walking through its narrow lanes, you’ll be surrounded by ancient buildings, traditional crafts, and local delicacies. The atmosphere is rich in history and culture, allowing you to immerse yourself in the authentic essence of China. In contrast, museums, though informative, lack the lived-in feel and authentic charm of a place like Laojie. I’m confident that a visit to Laojie will leave you with unforgettable memories and a deeper understanding of Chinese culture. I look forward to hearing about your adventures! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生写信给David，推荐一个中国的旅游景点。 【详解】1.词汇积累 围绕：surround→enclose 本质：essence→nature 激动：thrilled→excited 难忘：unforgettable→memorable 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The atmosphere is rich in history and culture, allowing you to immerse yourself in the authentic essence of China. 拓展句：The atmosphere is rich in history and culture, which allows you to immerse yourself in the authentic essence of China. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Walking through its narrow lanes, you’ll be surrounded by ancient buildings, traditional crafts, and local delicacies. (运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2] I’m confident that a visit to Laojie will leave you with unforgettable memories and a deeper understanding of Chinese culture. (运用了that引导宾语从句) Passage 2 假定你是李华，外教Chris计划于下周六组织一次春游活动（spring outing），现面向全班同学征集活动建议。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： （1）具体活动； （2）你理由。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Chris, I’m glad to hear that we’ll have a spring outing next Saturday. I suggest we go to the botanical garden. There, we can admire various plants and learn about different species, which is both educational and relaxing. Also, we can have a picnic in the garden. It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other. I’m looking forward to the activity. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生给外教Chris写封信，就其计划于下周六组织一次春游活动一事给出自己的建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad→ delighted 建议：suggest→ advise 各种各样的：various→ a variety of 机会：chance→ opportunity 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：Also, we can have a picnic in the garden. It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other. 拓展句：Also, we can have a picnic in the garden, which will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m glad to hear that we’ll have a spring outing next Saturday.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】There, we can admire various plants and learn about different species, which is both educational and relaxing.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） Passage 3 假设你是明启中学高二学生李明，是“The English World”这份英语杂志的忠实读者。最近，这份杂志正在考虑取消纸质版，只在电子阅读器上提供电子版供读者阅读，并就这一计划征求读者意见。写一封邮件给该杂志“读者来信”专栏，内容须包括： 1.你是否赞成杂志的这一计划; 2.你的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Editor of “The English World”, I am Li Ming, a loyal reader of your magazine from Mingqi High School. I am writing to express my thoughts on the proposed plan to discontinue the physical edition of “The English World” and transition to an electronic-only format. While I appreciate the convenience and environmental benefits of digital reading, I must confess that I am not entirely in favor of this transition. As a student, I find the physical copy of the magazine not only easier to access but also more conducive to focused reading.  It allows them to immerse themselves in the language and culture, free from the distractions of digital devices. Thank you for considering my opinion. I remain a dedicated reader of “The English World” and look forward to its continued success. Sincerely, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给该杂志“读者来信”专栏，论述对于杂志考虑取消纸质版，只在电子阅读器上提供电子版供读者阅读这一做法的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 表达：express→extend 支持：be in favor of→approve 此外：moreover→besides 考虑：consider→take into account 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Moreover, the physical edition serves as a valuable resource for language learners, especially those in areas with limited access to technology. 拓展句：Moreover, the physical edition serves as a valuable resource for language learners, especially those who are in areas with limited access to technology. 【点睛】[高分句型1] While I appreciate the convenience and environmental benefits of digital reading, I must confess that I am not entirely in favor of this transition. (运用了while引导让步状语从句) [高分句型2] Thank you for considering my opinion. (运用了动名词作宾语) 话题3 邮件 Passage 1 假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括： 1. 节目介绍； 2. 访谈的时间和话题。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Caroline, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Caroline, This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请你的外教Caroline来你校的广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”做一次访谈。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参加：attend→participate in 建立：establish→set up 帮助：aid→assistance 许多：plenty of→a lot of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. 拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot. 【点睛】[高分句型1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略结构) Passage 2 假设你是明启中学高一学生李明。你校拟为高一学生增设“唐诗英译(Translating Tang Poems into English)”社团，并就此征询学生意见。请写封邮件给负责人朱老师，在邮件的主体段落： 1)表明你是否会加入该社团； 2)陈述你的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Mr. Zhu, I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to express my thoughts on the newly proposed “Translating Tang Poems into English” club for first-year students at Mingqi High School. As an avid reader of Tang poetry and someone who has always been fascinated by the art of translation, I would definitely consider joining this club. I believe that this opportunity would not only enhance my understanding of Chinese literature but also improve my English language skills, especially in the realm of literary translation. Moreover, I find the idea of bridging cultural gaps through translation incredibly appealing and think it would be a rewarding experience to share the beauty of Tang poems with others in a different language. Thank you for considering my feedback. I look forward to hearing more about the club’s development. Yours, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写封邮件给负责人朱老师，表明是否会加入“唐诗英译”社团以及陈述理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 加强：enhance→strengthen 机会：opportunity→chance 此外：moreover→besides 考虑：consider→take into account 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Thank you for considering my feedback. 拓展句：I would appreciate it if you can consider my feedback. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I believe that this opportunity would not only enhance my understanding of Chinese literature but also improve my English language skills, especially in the realm of literary translation. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] Thank you for considering my feedback. (运用了动名词作宾语) Passage 3 你是明启中学高二学生李华，本学期学校计划组织全年级学生去多个外地中学研学(study tour)。现就两种组织方案征求学生意见。一是以班级为单位，学校随机决定研学地点;二是由学生各自申请想去的中学，学校根据各处报名人数统筹安排。请写一封信给校长谈谈你的看法，信件内容需包括： 1)你选择哪个方案; 2)你选择该方案的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear principal, I’m Li Hua, a senior high 2 student of our school. I’m glad to learn that the school plan to organize all the students of our grade to go to many out-of-town schools for a study tour this term. As for the two organizational projects proposed by the school, I suggest that students apply for the schools they want to go to and that our school make overall arrangements according to the number of applicants. The reasons why I choose this project are as follows. First of all, allowing students to choose schools by themselves can help stimulate their enthusiasm and increase their desire to study. Secondly, students can learn the knowledge and relevant information of the school they want to go to in advance so as to make full preparation for the study. Last but not least, our school can make various arrangements ahead of time according to the number of students applying to ensure the smooth progress of study tour. If you could take my advice into account, I would appreciate it. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就本学期学校计划组织全年级学生去多个外地中学研学事宜，对学校提出的两种组织方案，提出自己的意见和建议，表明自己选择哪种方案，并说明理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： 计划：plan→project 建议：suggest→propose 激励、激发：stimulate→inspire 提前：in advance→ahead of time 考虑：take...into account→consider 2. 句式拓展： 同义句转换： 原句：Secondly, students can learn the knowledge and relevant information of the school they want to go to in advance so as to make full preparation for the study. 拓展句：Secondly, students can learn the knowledge and relevant information of the school they want to go to in advance in order that they can make full preparation for the study. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As for the two organizational projects proposed by the school, I suggest that students apply for the schools they want to go to and that our school make overall arrangements according to the number of applicants.（运用了两个以连接词that引导的并列宾语从句和虚拟语气。） 【高分句型2】The reasons why I choose this project are as follows.（运用了以关系副词why引导的定语从句。） 话题4 个人经历 Passage 1 端午已至，明启中学举办了“诗书雅颂吟端午”文化周活动，请你在晨会课上围绕爱国诗人屈原的名句“路曼曼其修远兮，吾将上下而求索，”(long, long had been my road and far, far was the journey; I would go up and down to seek my heart’s desire ) 发表演讲，结合自己的经历谈谈对这句话的理解。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear teachers and fellow students, Today, I’d like to share my thoughts on the inspiring words of Qu Yuan, “Long, long had been my road and far, far was the journey; I would go up and down to seek my heart’s desire.” Personally, I’ve encountered obstacles that seemed insurmountable, but Qu Yuan’s perseverance serves as a beacon. Last year, when I am preparing for a science competition, the path ahead seemed daunting. Yet, with the spirit of “going up and down to seek,” I persevered, sought guidance, and eventually overcame the challenges. This quote encourages us to embrace adversity, to keep striving, and to never lose sight of our aspirations. It’s a testament to the human spirit’s capacity for growth and discovery. As we celebrate the traditions of Duanwu, let us also honor Qu Yuan’s legacy by continuing our own quests, facing life’s journey with courage and determination. Thank you. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。端午已至，明启中学举办了“诗书雅颂吟端午”文化周活动，请考生在晨会课上围绕爱国诗人屈原的名句“路曼曼其修远兮，吾将上下而求索，”发表演讲，结合自己的经历谈谈对这句话的理解。 【详解】1.词汇积累 想法：thought→ idea 鼓舞人心的：inspiring→ encouraging 遇到：encounter→ meet 用作，充当：serves as→ act as 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Personally, I’ve encountered obstacles that seemed insurmountable, but Qu Yuan’s perseverance serves as a beacon. 拓展句：Personally, it is obstacles that I’ve encountered, which seemed insurmountable, but Qu Yuan’s perseverance serves as a beacon. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Personally, I’ve encountered obstacles that seemed insurmountable, but Qu Yuan’s perseverance serves as a beacon.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Last year, when I am preparing for a science competition, the path ahead seemed daunting.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句） Passage 2 假如你是明启中学高一学生李明，在你校英语报读到如下征文启事：从小学至今，每个 人都制定过许多计划，有过许多新学期愿景，其中有些中途放弃了，有些坚持到底了。请你就“坚持还是放弃”这个话题写一篇征文，内容需包括： ●  简单描述你曾经中途放弃或坚持到底的某个计划； ●  阐述你中途放弃或坚持到底的原因以及对你的启示。 (文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Dilemma of Persistence and Surrender As a freshman at Mingqi High School, I have encountered many forks in the road of my life. Among the numerous plans and aspirations I’ve set for myself, one stands out — my decision to learn the piano. Initially, the thought of mastering this elegant instrument filled me with enthusiasm, but soon, the rigorous practice and complex theory took their toll. I surrendered, overwhelmed by the challenge. Looking back, I realize that my surrender was a result of my lack of resilience. I failed to persevere when faced with difficulties. This experience taught me a valuable lesson: giving up too easily can lead to missed opportunities and unfulfilled dreams. Now, I strive to be more determined, understanding that true growth lies in overcoming obstacles, not avoiding them. Persistence, not surrender, is the key to success. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“坚持还是放弃”这个话题写一篇征文。 【详解】1.词汇积累 遇到：encounter→run into 意识到：realize→be aware of 努力：strive to→struggle to 障碍：obstacle→barrier 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Initially, the thought of mastering this elegant instrument filled me with enthusiasm, but soon, the rigorous practice and complex theory took their toll. 拓展句：Initially, although the thought of mastering this elegant instrument filled me with enthusiasm, soon, the rigorous practice and complex theory took their toll. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Looking back, I realize that my surrender was a result of my lack of resilience. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] I failed to persevere when faced with difficulties.(运用了状语从句的省略) Passage 3 假定你是李华，国庆节假期期间你到一所山区初中做了两天志愿者（volunteer）。请给你的外教Mr. Brown写一封邮件，介绍这次活动。主要内容如下： 1．活动目的； 2．活动过程（带礼物，演节目，帮助学习等）； 3．你的收获。 注意：1．词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 注意：词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Mr. Brown, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing to tell you about my voluntary experience during the National Day holiday to help the junior middle students in the mountain area. During the holiday, I took part in a two-day voluntary activity. Not only did we bring them some gifts, including notebooks, coats and other daily necessities, but we also had a party where we performed a number of interesting programs on the first day. On the second day, we helped them with their study, especially English. I feel it my duty to make contributions to helping those in need. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给外教Mr. Brown写一封邮件，介绍自己国庆节假期期间到一所山区初中做了两天志愿者（volunteer）的活动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 帮助：help→assist 参加：take part in→get involved in 尤其/特别是：especially→particularly 责任/义务：duty→responsibility 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I am writing to tell you about my voluntary experience during the National Day holiday to help the junior middle students in the mountain area. 拓展句：I am writing to tell you about my voluntary experience during the National Day holiday, whose aim is to help the junior middle students in the mountain area. 【点睛】[高分句型1]Not only did we bring them some gifts, including notebooks, coats and other daily necessities, but we also had a party where we performed a number of interesting programs on the first day.（运用了not only位于句首的部分倒装，where引导限制性定语从句） [高分句型2] I feel it my duty to make contributions to helping those in need.（运用了it作形式宾语，动词不定式作真正的宾语）。 话题5 观点看法 Passage 1 你是明启中学的王磊，你班本学期剩余一笔总额三千元的班费class fee结余，目前有两个方案：1．为教室添加一台空气净化器；2．为每位同学订阅一份英语周报Shanghai Students’ Post。请你给班委会class committee写一封信，谈谈你的看法，必须包括： 1．你赞同的方案； 2．你赞同该方案的理由； 3．你对于执行此方案的建议。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear class committee, As we all know, there is a class fee balance of 3,000 yuan remaining for this semester. At present, there are two ways to spend it: one is to add an air purifier to the classroom; the other is to subscribe to the Shanghai Students’ Post for each student. I am in favor of subscribing to the Shanghai Students’ Post. For one thing, the Shanghai Students’ Post is a good journal for our English studies. For another, it contains a lot of useful information and some interesting stories for us to read, which broaden our horizons. We should set aside two classes every week for our students to read it, and find an opportunity to let the students report on what they have read. Yours, Wang Lei 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给班委会写一封信，谈谈对如何使用本学期剩余班费方案的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 学期：semester → term 目前：at present → now 支持：be in favor of → support 机会：opportunity → chance 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：For one thing, the Shanghai Students’ Post is a good journal for our English studies. For another, it contains a lot of useful information and some interesting stories for us to read, which broaden our horizons. 拓展句：Not only is the Shanghai Students’ Post a good journal for our English studies, but also it contains a lot of useful information and some interesting stories for us to read, which broaden our horizons. 【点睛】[高分句型1] For another, it contains a lot of useful information and some interesting stories for us to read, which broaden our horizons.(运用了关系代词which 引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] We should set aside two classes every week for our students to read it, and find an opportunity to let the students report on what they have read.(运用了连接代词what引导宾语从句) Passage 2 你是天镇中学的高一学生黎明。学校拟采购添置一批设备物资，用于改善学生的校园生活品质。校方提供了三个物品选项，征求全体学生的意见。请给校长写封信，就“最值得购买的物品”提出自己的看法，并说明理由。 1 自动贩卖机 vending machine 2 空调 air-conditioner 3 微波炉 microwave oven _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Dear Principal, As a freshman, I really appreciate the initiative to enhance our campus life through new acquisitions. Among the options presented—vending machines, air conditioners, and microwave ovens—I firmly advocate for the installation of air conditioners. The rationale behind this choice is that, while vending machines and microwave ovens offer convenience, they do not address the fundamental issue of thermal comfort, which is paramount for academic success. As we all know, the comfort of a regulated temperature is crucial for our learning environment, especially during extreme weather conditions. Therefore, by ensuring a comfortable classroom temperature, air conditioners will not only improve our concentration but also foster a healthier and more productive learning atmosphere. Thank you for considering my perspective. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以黎明的身份，给校长写信，就学校物资的采购发表意见，从所给的三个物品选项中选出自己认为最值得购买的物品，并说明理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 改善：enhance→improve 解决：address→handle, tackle 至关重要的：paramount→principal 确保：ensure→guarantee 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Among the options presented—vending machines, air conditioners, and microwave ovens—I firmly advocate for the installation of air conditioners. 拓展句：Among the options presented—vending machines, air conditioners, and microwave ovens—I firmly advocate that our school should install air conditioners. 【点睛】[高分句型1] The rationale behind this choice is that, while vending machines and microwave ovens offer convenience, they do not address the fundamental issue of thermal comfort, which is paramount for academic success. (运用了that引导表语从句、while引导让步状语从句、which引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] As we all know, the comfort of a regulated temperature is crucial for our learning environment, especially during extreme weather conditions. (运用了as引导非限制性定语从句) Passage 3 假设你是王明，你的好友李华在暑假里与父母一起去了欧洲旅游。在旅途中，他发邮件给你，说他不喜欢旅游，宁愿在家里玩游戏。回复李华一封邮件，告诉他旅游是非常有意义的。在邮件中，你必须： 1. 指出李华的认识误区; 2. 结合具体例子来说明旅游的好处。 注意：文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Li Hua,   I hope this email finds you well. I was disappointed to read your recent email expressing your dislike for traveling. While I understand your preference for staying at home and playing games, I want to shed some light on the value of travel.   Travel is much more than just seeing new places; it’s an eye-opening experience that broadens our horizons. Just think of the countless historical landmarks and cultural artifacts you encountered during your European trip. These experiences help us understand the world better and appreciate its diversity.   For instance, when you visited the Eiffel Tower, didn’t you feel a sense of wonder and excitement? That same feeling is what travel is all about. It’s about experiencing new things, meeting new people, and learning about different ways of life.   Moreover, travel is a great way to de-stress and recharge. Getting away from the familiar environment and routine can rejuvenate our minds and bodies. I know you mentioned you would rather stay at home and play games, but I believe the benefits of travel far outweigh the comforts of home.   I hope my words resonate with you, and maybe even inspire you to embrace travel more fully in the future. Remember, the world is a big place full of history, culture, and beauty waiting to be discovered. Yours, Wang Ming 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的好友李华在暑假里与父母一起去了欧洲旅游。在旅途中，他发邮件给你，说他不喜欢旅游，宁愿在家里玩游戏，要求考生给他回复一封邮件，告诉他旅游是非常有意义的。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 表达：express→show 欣赏：appreciate→admire 另外：moreover→furthermore 激励：inspire→encourage 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I was disappointed to read your recent email expressing your dislike for traveling. 拓展句：I was disappointed to read your recent email, which expressed your dislike for traveling. 【点睛】[高分句型1]While I understand your preference for staying at home and playing games, I want to shed some light on the value of travel.(while引导的让步状语从句) [高分句型2]Travel is much more than just seeing new places; it’s an eye-opening experience that broadens our horizons.(that引导的定语从句) 话题6 介绍 Passage 1 广西即将迎来广西壮族自治区成立60周年庆典，许多外国友人将到南宁旅游参观。请用英语简要介绍南宁，内容需包括以下： 1．地理位置，面积：6500平方公里，人口：约740万；2．气候及环境；3．旅游及交通等。 字数：100字左右。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ ______________ 【答案】 Nanning, capital of Guangxi, is a city with a long history. It is located in the south of Guangdong province, with Beihai to its south and Guilin to its north. It covers a total area of 6500 square kilometers with a population of about 7.4 million. The climate here is pleasant, neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter and it is rich in natural resources such as bananas, tea leaves sugarcane and so on. Nanning enjoys many tourist attractions, among which Qingshan Mountain and the Nanhu Lake are the most popular. With the convenient transportation, Nanning attracts a large number of tourists at home and abroad every year. 【分析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇地方简介。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一篇地方简介：广西即将迎来广西壮族自治区成立60周年庆典，许多外国友人将到南宁旅游参观。请用英语简要介绍南宁，内容需包括以下：1．地理位置，面积：6500平方公里，人口：约740万；2．气候及环境；3．旅游及交通等。 第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：capital of Guangxi,（广西省会）；located in the south of Guangdong province（坐落在广东省南边）；rich in natural resources（有丰富的自然资源）；With the convenient transportation,（有方便的交通）等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】本文是一篇地方简介，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。Nanning, capital of Guangxi, is a city with a long history.句中介词短语作后置定语；Nanning enjoys many tourist attractions, among which Qingshan Mountain and the Nanhu Lake are the most popular.句中使用which引导的非限制性定语从句。 Passage 2 Wu Lei在北京大学任教长达近二十年，工作出色，为此《中国日报》准备刊登他的照片。请你根据下面的提示，写一图片说明，简要介绍他的情况。 姓名：Wu Lei　　　性别：男　　　出生年月：1964年5月 职业：英语教师 简历：1985年大学毕业，从那时至今在北京大学任教。 主要事迹： 1．热爱教育事业； 2．刻苦钻研业务，专心搞好工作； 3．教学方法多样，课堂教学生动活泼； 4．多次被评为模范教师，深受师生尊敬和爱戴。 注意：词数120左右。 参考词汇：教育事业the educational cause ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: This is Wu Lei, a male teacher who has taught English for nearly twenty years in Beijing University. Born in May 1964, Wu Lei graduated from Beijing University in 1965, after which he has been devoted to English teaching. He loves the educational cause very much. In the past two decades he has put his heart and soul into his work and study. He always applies different approaches to his teaching in order to make his classes lively and interesting. And his lectures are not easily forgotten. He has won the respect and love of all the teachers and students, and has been given the honor of “Model Teacher” for many times. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。题目要求考生根据提示为《中国日报》刊登的Wu Lei照片写一则图片说明，简要介绍该人物的情况。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 投身于：be devoted to→be committed to, be dedicated to 热爱：love→delight in, have a passion for, take great pleasure in 不同的：different→various, a variety of 为了：in order to→in a bid to, for the purpose of, in an effort to 有趣的：interesting→absorbing, engrossing, engaging 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：He always applies different approaches to his teaching in order to make his classes lively and interesting. And his lectures are not easily forgotten. 拓展句：He always applies different approaches to his teaching in order to make his classes lively and interesting, as a result of which his lectures are not easily forgotten. 【点睛】【高分句型1】This is Wu Lei, a male teacher who has taught English for nearly twenty years in Beijing University.（运用了who引导限制性定语从句修饰先行词a male teacher） 【高分句型2】Born in May 1964, Wu Lei graduated from Beijing University in 1965, after which he has been devoted to English teaching.（运用了过去分词短语Born…作状语、after which引导非限制性定语从句） Passage 3 假设你是明启中学英语校报专栏作者李华，你计划在下一期into China栏目做一期关于传统冬季习俗的专栏，专栏内容包括： 1）介绍一项中国传统冬季习俗； 2）该习俗的意义与传承。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Title: Embracing the Warmth of Winter: The Tradition of Eating Laba Porridge In the heart of Chinese winter traditions, the custom of eating Laba porridge stands out as a cherished and time-honored practice. Celebrated on the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month, this tradition involves cooking a nutritious porridge made from various grains, beans, nuts, and dried fruits. The Laba Festival, as it is known, marks the beginning of the preparations for the Chinese New Year. The significance of eating Laba porridge extends beyond its delicious taste. It symbolizes a time of family reunion and gratitude for the harvest. The custom is deeply rooted in Buddhist culture, commemorating the enlightenment of the Buddha. Families gather to cook and enjoy the porridge, sharing stories and warmth. In modern times, the tradition is passed down through generations, with schools and communities organizing activities to make Laba porridge, ensuring the custom thrives and adapts to contemporary life. This simple yet profound tradition continues to foster a sense of togetherness and cultural identity during the cold winter months. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生介绍一项中国传统冬季习俗以及该习俗的意义与传承。 【详解】1.词汇积累 美味的：delicious→tasty 象征：symbolize→stand for 感激：gratitude→appreciation 标志：mark→signal 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Celebrated on the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month, this tradition involves cooking a nutritious porridge made from various grains, beans, nuts, and dried fruits. 拓展句：This tradition, which is celebrated on the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month, involves cooking a nutritious porridge made from various grains, beans, nuts, and dried fruits. 【点睛】[高分句型1] The Laba Festival, as it is known, marks the beginning of the preparations for the Chinese New Year. (运用了as引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] In modern times, the tradition is passed down through generations, with schools and communities organizing activities to make Laba porridge, ensuring the custom thrives and adapts to contemporary life. (运用了现在分词作状语) $