摘要:
本讲义聚焦高中英语核心词汇(disturb, go to great lengths to do sth., adjust)用法及问题解决型议论文写作,构建“词汇解析-听力语料-写作应用”学习支架,先通过例句感知、归纳点拨、语法填空等巩固词汇,再结合近视主题听力训练积累语料,最终指导写作结构与衔接。
该资料以“语言能力+思维品质”为核心,词汇教学融入多场景例句提升运用能力,听力与写作结合近视现实问题培养分析解决能力,提供写作框架与范文。课中辅助教师系统授课,课后助力学生通过练习与范文回顾,弥补知识盲点。
内容正文:
Section Ⅳ Integrated skills
1.The figures disturb the school authorities, who have decided to tackle this problem head-on.
这些数字使校方感到不安,他们已决定积极处理这个问题。
★disturb vt.使不安;打扰;搅乱
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•(“心理描写”佳句)The house appeared completely empty and it disturbed her to realize that she was alone.
房子里空荡荡的,她意识到自己孤单一人,心里很不安。
•(“景物描写”佳句)There was peace deep in the woods and not a sound disturbed nature's meditation.
树林深处一片宁静,没有声音打扰到大自然的沉思。
•On the other hand, online voting makes many people feel disturbed especially when they have to take part in it.
另一方面,网络投票也让很多人感到心烦,特别是当他们不得不参与其中时。
[归纳点拨]
(1)It disturbs sb.to do sth. 做某事使某人不安
be disturbed by 为……感到不安;被……打扰
(2)disturbing adj. 令人不安的;引起烦恼的
disturbed adj. 感到不安的;心烦意乱的
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(1)单句语法填空
①I am very disturbed (disturb) by the complaints that have been made against you.
②The frequent change of a job can be a very disturbing (disturb) experience for most people.
(2)替换加黑词汇
③The following programme contains violent scenes that may be upsetting to some viewers.disturbing
④Whether you play or watch TV, you mustn't bother me. disturb
2.No.9 High School is one of those that have gone to great lengths to protect students' eyes, coming up with many effective solutions.
第九中学是那些竭尽全力保护学生眼睛的学校之一,提出了许多行之有效的解决办法。
★go to great lengths to do sth.竭尽全力做某事,不遗余力做某事
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•(“环境保护”主题佳句)What we should go to great lengths to do is raise the public awareness of protecting the animals in danger.
我们应该不遗余力地提高公众保护濒临灭绝动物的意识。
•Rather than discuss all of these questions at length, we focus on a few of them.
我们没有详细讨论所有这些问题,而是集中讨论了其中几个。
[归纳点拨]
at length 长久地;详尽地;终于,最后
keep sb.at arm's length 与某人保持距离;不亲近某人
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(完成句子) ①He decided to_go_to_great_lengths_to_fulfill his ambition.
他决定不遗余力地去实现他的雄心壮志。
②We have already discussed the fire and its likely cause at_great_length.
我们对那场火灾及其可能的起因进行了全面讨论。
③She couldn't put her finger on why everyone in the company should keep_her_at_arm's_length.
她搞不清楚为何公司里的每个人都不愿意接近她。
3.The school has adjusted all the lights to make sure the classrooms are well lit.
学校调整了所有的灯光,以确保教室照明良好。
★adjust vt.& vi.调整,调节;适应,习惯;整理
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•Nevertheless, I am sure that you will be able to adjust to the life there.
不过,我相信你会适应那里的生活。
•We are supposed to take practical action to adjust ourselves to the new environment.
我们应该采取实际行动使自己适应新环境。
•(“告知”类佳句)I'm writing to tell you that we have to make a few adjustments to our travelling plan.
我写信是想告诉你我们必须调整一下旅行计划。
[归纳点拨]
(1)adjust to ... 适应……(to为介词)
adjust ...to (doing) sth. 调整……以适应(做)某事
adjust oneself to ... 使某人自己适应……
(2)adjustable adj. 可调节的
adjustment n. 调整;调节;适应
make an adjustment/adjustments to 对……做出调整
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(单句语法填空) ①It took him quite a while to adjust to living (live) alone.
②Some schools will have to make adjustments (adjust) in agreement with the national soccer reform.
③The shoes with adjustable (adjust) heels were invented by Julie Thompson.
④You'd better learn some basic Chinese before you come.That way, you can adjust yourself (you) to the life here in Beijing soon.
一、由听力厚积语料库
1.根据 according_to
2.遭受 suffer_from
3.增加到 increase_to
4.对……有重大影响 have_a_significant_effect_on
5.在某些情况下 in_some_cases
6.give rise to other eye problems 导致其他眼睛问题
7.a large amount of time 大量时间
8.at higher risk of developing short-sightedness
有更大的患近视风险
9.complain of tired eyes 抱怨眼睛疲劳
10.be affected by short-sightedness 受近视的影响
二、教材录音材料的发掘训练
1.What's the percentage of primary school students with short-sightedness in China?
A.36%. B.71.6%. C.81%.
2.Which of the following is not the reason causing short-sightedness?
A.Poor lighting.
B.Playing outside.
C.Bad reading habits.
3.What's the bad effect caused by short-sightedness?
A.It's inconvenient to play certain sports.
B.It's inconvenient to work at a computer.
C.It's inconvenient to watch a smartphone screen.
答案:1~3 ABA
三、依据教材听力完成句子
1.It can make_it_inconvenient_for_them_to_play_certain_sports,_such as basketball and swimming.
2.What_causes_short-sightedness has not been fully understood.
3.It_is_commonly_believed_that people whose parents are short-sighted are more likely to suffer from the condition.
4.These activities become even more dangerous when_coupled_with_poor_lighting or bad reading habits such as reading in bed.
5.Students with short-sightedness may look at things with_their_eyes_partly_shut or move closer to objects to see clearly.
四、听力同类主题的微写作
假定你们学校最近就学生的近视问题做了调研,发现有近一半的学生眼睛近视。请你围绕这一调查结果发表一下自己的看法。
参考范文:
Recently, our school has done a survey about the short-sighted students in our school.According to the result, nearly 50% of the students have become short-sighted.This is mainly because we often use our eyes for too long.Also, activities like focusing on screens are harmful to our eyes.So I call on everyone to take measures to protect our eyes.Firstly, stick to doing eye exercise.Second, try to form good reading habits.After reading for a long time, do have a rest by looking at distant things.
■写作项目——Write an article on short-sightedness among Chinese students
本单元的写作任务是完成一篇中国学生近视问题的文章,属于问题解决型议论文。此类文体要求在分析现状、成因、后果的基础上提出自己的解决措施,写作思路一般是:提出问题→分析问题→解决问题。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
根据本课时Part D中的写作指导,可总结出该类文体的框架结构如下:
二、学要点构思
为使文章更加充实,在分析现象背后的成因以及提出解决措施时应注意从微角度切入,避免泛泛而谈。找准微点才能做到下笔成章、有理有据。如Part A的听力文本中,在讨论近视的成因时,从“遗传因素”及“自身用眼习惯”两个角度切入;Part B中更是从“make students' eyes get regular breaks” “provide an eye-friendly environment”及“raise people's awareness”三个角度提出了详实具体的解决措施,增强文章的说服力。
三、学衔接过渡
在分析现象背后的成因或造成的影响时,可灵活使用一些表示原因或结果的动词、副词、介词短语等,以避免千篇一律的because、for等引导的原因状语从句。如Part C中的句式:
①Due to/Because of/As a result of ..., short-sightedness has become a serious problem.
②As a result/Consequently, more and more students ...
③Such problems arise out of/arise from ...
④...is caused by ...
写作项目指导
Write an article on short-sightedness among Chinese students
——写一篇中国学生近视情况的文章
第一步:构思谋篇
Part 1
What's the current situation of short-sightedness among Chinese students?
Part 2
What are effective measures of dealing with the rising percentage of short-sightedness?
Part 3
Conclude the article or describe the improvement you want to see.
第二步:要点表达
第一部分 描述现象
描述现象、引出问题的方式有哪些?
①These days more_and_more_Chinese_students_are_affected_by short-sightedness, increasingly at a younger age.
如今,越来越多的中国学生受到近视的影响,并呈低龄化趋势。
②According_to_a_national_survey_of_students'_health,_the percentage of Chinese primary school students who suffer from short-sightedness is thirty-six per cent. 根据一项全国学生健康调查,中国小学生近视率为36%。
③A_survey_has_fuelled_concerns about eyesight problems among China's youth that roughly three out of four high school students wear glasses.
一项调查引发了人们对中国青少年视力问题的担忧,大约四分之三的高中生戴眼镜。
第二部分 分析现象的成因及造成的影响
1.造成这一现象的原因有哪些?
①From my perspective, people's bad reading habits make_their_eyesight_weaker.
依我看来,人们不良的阅读习惯使得他们视力变弱。
②For one thing, many students are_used_to_reading_in the dark situation; for_another_thing,_they often stare at TVs, computers or cellphones for a long time. 一方面,许多学生习惯于在光线昏暗的环境中看书;另一方面,他们经常长时间地盯着电视、电脑或手机。
2.有哪些不好的影响?
①It_is_not_convenient for short-sighted children to do some sports.
近视的孩子不方便参加一些运动。
②They may_not_see_the_blackboard_clearly so they cannot follow the teacher in class.
上课时,他们可能看不清黑板,进而跟不上老师的讲课进程。
③Their eyes will_get_tired_more_easily and they will even suffer from headaches.
他们的眼睛会更容易疲劳,甚至会头疼。
第三部分 提出解决措施
1.自身行为方面
①Students should stop for a few minutes during their study and_look_at_distant_objects.
学生们应该在学习过程中停下来休息几分钟,看看远处的物体。
②They should often_go_outdoors and enjoy themselves in the sun.
他们应该经常到户外去晒晒太阳。
③It's_helpful_to_keep screens and books at a safe distance from your eyes.
让屏幕、书籍与眼睛保持安全距离是很有帮助的。
2.外在环境方面
①We should ensure proper lighting whenever_we_read,_so that our eyes do not need to work too hard.
无论何时读书,我们都应该保证照明适度,这样我们的眼睛就不需要太费力了。
②Choose_the_proper_chairs that can be adjusted to ensure the best sitting position when you study.
选择合适的、可以调节的椅子,以确保学习时的最佳坐姿。
3.思想意识方面
Both parents and students should improve their_awareness_of_the_importance for good eye health.
家长和学生都应该提高认识,意识到眼部健康的重要性。
第四部分 总结全文,表达自己的希望
收束全文的方式有哪些?
①It is my belief that with these measures, our eye health would_be_greatly_improved.
我相信,有了这些措施,我们的眼睛健康会大大改善。
②If we obey the rules above, I think we can_prevent_our_eyes_from_becoming short-sighted.
如果我们遵循上述规则,我认为我们可以防止自己的眼睛变近视。
[针对练笔]
目前,中小学生的近视问题比较严重。请你就用眼卫生问题,谈谈你的建议。注意运用恰当的衔接词,增加上下文的连贯性。
To keep our eyes healthy, we should develop the following good habits.
参考范文:
To keep our eyes healthy, we should develop the following good habits.Firstly, we should keep a good sitting position while reading or writing.Secondly, it's of great benefit to us to take a short break every hour of reading by looking at the distance.What's more, not only should we do the eye exercises every day, but we should also avoid using computers or cellphones for a long time.
写作素材储备
(一)写作佳句
1.现象描述
(1)Nowadays/At present, ...is quite universal and has become an increasingly serious problem.
(2)With the development of ..., more and more students ...
(3)Recently the issue of/the problem of/the phenomenon of ...has been brought into public attention.
(4)Nowadays, an increasing number of people come to realize/are aware of the importance of ...
(5)It is undeniable/There is no denying the fact that ...has become the utmost concern among people nowadays.
2.问题分析
(1)There are several reasons for ..., but in general, they come down to three major ones.
(2)There are many factors that may account for ..., but the following are the most typical ones.
3.解决措施
(1)Confronted with ..., we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.
(2)It is essential/indispensable that proper actions/effective measures should be taken to reverse this situation/trend.
(3)It is necessary that ...On (the) one hand ...On the other hand ...
(二)主题语段
1.分析近视的成因
In my opinion, there are mainly three reasons.First, their ways of using eyes are not healthy.Second, because of the high pressure of study, they often study without any break for too long.Third, some spend too much time in front of televisions or computers.
在我看来,主要有三方面的原因。首先,他们的用眼方式不卫生。其次,由于学习压力大,他们经常长时间学习,没有休息时间。第三,有些人花太多时间看电视或电脑。
2.避免近视的措施
However, much can be done to protect our eyesight.When reading, make sure we are in bright places and let our eyes have a rest every hour.Whenever we are free, we can do some eye exercises so that our tired eyes can be restored quickly.
然而,我们可以做很多事情来保护我们的视力。我们应确保在光线充足的地方看书,并且每小时休息一次眼睛。只要有空,我们就可以做一下眼保健操,这样我们疲劳的眼睛可以很快恢复。
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