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英语应用文写作讲解与练习
一、演讲稿:Say No to Playing Balls in Teaching Buildings
你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在教学楼随意玩球的现象写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:1.介绍具体情况;2.呼吁文明活动。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Say No to Playing Balls in Teaching Buildings
Good morning, everyone!
Thank you!
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段介绍学生在教学楼随意玩球现象(要点1);第二段阐明在教学楼随意玩球存在的可能风险;第三段呼吁文明活动(要点2)。
【参考范文】
Say No to Playing Balls in Teaching Buildings
Good morning, everyone! Recently, I’ve noticed some of us playing ball in the hallways and stairways of the teaching buildings during breaks, chasing each other around, with the ball frequently hitting the walls, doors, and windows.
The teaching buildings, with their limited space and crowded hallways, are where we study. Playing balls here risks not only damaging school property, but also injuring passing students. That’s a safety hazard we can’t afford to ignore.
Let’s act responsibly and take our enthusiasm for sports to the playground, for our safety, and for our shared learning environment. Let’s work together, for a quieter building, for a safer building, and for all of us. (106 words)
Thank you!
【中文翻译】
不要在教学楼里打球
大家早上好!最近,我注意到有部分同学在教学楼的走廊和楼梯间随意玩球。大家追逐嬉戏,球也不时撞到墙壁或门窗。
教学楼是我们学习的地方,空间有限,人员密集。在此玩球,不仅容易损坏公物,更可能误伤路过的同学,存在很大的安全隐患。
为了大家的安全,也为了维护我们共同的学习环境,我呼吁同学们文明活动,将运动的热情带到操场上去。让我们一起努力,让教学楼多一份宁静,多一份安全!
谢谢大家。
【参考范文解析】
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应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为演讲稿;
(2)因文体是演讲稿,故李华身份不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为描述高中生在教学楼随意玩球现象并呼吁文明活动,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
02
本文亮点
(1)with the ball frequently hitting the walls, doors, and windows运用with的复合结构
(2)risks not only damaging ... but also injuring ...不但有风险做某事,而且有风险做某事
(3)we can’t afford to ignore承担不起忽视的代价(不容忽视)
二、回复信:中国文化周三分钟短视频
假定你是李华,英国朋友Peter发来邮件邀请你制作一段3分钟的视频,介绍中国某个传统节日,助力其学校“中国文化周”展示。请你给他回信,内容包括:1.选定的节日;2.说明要制作的视频内容。3.征求意见。
注意1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
I’m delighted to have the opportunity to introduce Chinese culture to your schoolmates during the upcoming Chinese Culture Week.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段说明选定的节日(要点1);第二段说明要制作的视频内容(要点2);第三段征求意见(要点3)。
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m delighted to have the opportunity to introduce Chinese culture to your schoolmates during the upcoming Chinese Culture Week.Using a 3-minute video, I will take you into the Dragon Boat Festival, a tradition passed down for millennia, boasting a rich history and enduring vitality.
It begins with the story of Qu Yuan, a patriotic poet who drowned himself out of concern for his country. From this act came the traditions of dragon boat racing and eating zongzi. My camera will then capture the exquisite craftsmanship of making zongzi, as well as the thrilling scene of dragon boat racing with thundering drumbeats. To conclude, I will explore the deeper meaning behind this commemoration spanning over two millennia: loyalty, remembrance, and the tender warmth of a bond faithfully preserved across generations.
I wonder if you like this idea. Feel free to share any thoughts on the details! (127 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
【中文翻译】
亲爱的彼得:
我很高兴能有机会在即将到来的中国文化周期间向你的同学们介绍中国文化。我选定端午节,打算用视频带你们走进这个传承千年的中国节日。
视频从屈原的故事说起——这位爱国诗人因忧心国事投江,由此有了赛龙舟和吃粽子的习俗;接着我会镜头记录包粽子的巧手工艺,还有赛龙舟时鼓声震天的热烈场面;最后想说说这份延续两千多年的纪念,其实藏着中国人的忠诚、怀念,还有代代相守的温情。
不知这样的构思你是否喜欢?视频细节上有什么想法,随时告诉我!
李华
【参考范文解析】
01
应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为回复信;
(2)因两人是笔友关系,故李华的身份不必交代;
(3)因文本的主体部分为说明制作以中国节日为主题的三分钟视频内容,故本文总体时态定调为一般将来时和一般现在时。
02
本文亮点
(1)boasting a rich history and enduring vitality拥有丰富的历史和持续的活力
(2)From this act came the traditions of dragon boat racing and eating zongzi运用部分倒装结构
(3)as well as=not only ... but also ...
(4)To conclude最后
(5)spanning over two millennia横跨2千年
(6)Feel free to随意做某事
三、发言稿:Does listening to music disturb your study
外教Jenny计划在下周的口语课上开展题为“Does listening to music disturb your study?”的讨论。请你写一篇发言稿,内容包括:1.陈述观点;2.阐释理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning! I feel honored to deliver a speech today.
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:主体部分三段论。第一段表明观点(要点1);第二段阐述理由(要点2);第三段总结。
【参考范文】
Good morning! I feel honored to deliver a speech today. In my opinion, it all comes down to how well we strike a balance when it comes to whether listening to music disturbs our study.
Proper music, especially soft background music, helps us block out external noise, allowing us to enter a focused state faster and boost learning efficiency. Studying while listening to songs with complex lyrics or strong beats, however, can easily distract our attention and therefore reduce the depth of our thinking.
In a nutshell, music is more of a seasoning for studying than a necessity. Learn to be the master, not the servant, of music. By making flexible choices tailored to what we are studying, we can transform it into a help rather than a hindrance. (119 words)
【中文翻译】
早上好!今天我很荣幸能发表演讲。我认为听音乐是否影响学习,关键在于如何把握“度”。
适当的音乐,尤其是舒缓的纯音乐,能帮我们隔绝外界噪音,更快进入专注状态,提升学习效率。但若边学边听歌词复杂或节奏劲爆的歌曲,注意力容易被分散,思考深度也会下降。
总而言之,音乐是学习的“调味剂”,而非必需品。我们要学会做它的主人,根据学习内容灵活选择,才能让它成为助力,而非干扰。
【参考范文解析】
01
应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为发言稿;
(2)因文体是发言稿,故李华的身份不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为表明自己对听音乐是否干扰学习的观点并说明理由,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
02
本文亮点
(1)it all comes down to how well we strike a balance取决于我们把握的“度”
(2)block out external noise阻止外部的噪音
(3)boost learning efficiency提升学习效率
(4)In a nutshell简而言之
(5)music is more of a seasoning for studying than a necessity与其说音乐是必需品,倒不如说它是调味剂。
(6)tailored to量身定制的,个性化的
(7)transform it into把它变成
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