内容正文:
如何写——好作文
1.图表类作文
2.学会谋篇
3.学会谋句
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谋篇:
1.阐述事件,问题,现象,(背景,目的)。
2.按要求描写具体情况,论述观点,活动内容。
3.个人意见,愿望,结论,体会,呼吁。
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谋句
1.使用高端词汇,最新学过的,同意不同词,短语优先。
2.合理使用复杂句式,定从,名从,状从,倒装,强调。
3.让内容充实,列举,状语(目的,结果,原因,方式
定从,个人感受,评价益处/坏处,希望,倡议。
当看到资源被浪费,我们感到非常担心。
1.扩展句子,罗列名词。
,such as…and…/For example
/For instance/…as well as…
When seeing all kinds of resources wasted , such as _________________________________,we all feel more than worried.
paper, food, water and electricity
2.举事例。观点,论据。
人物简介,尊敬和爱戴的原因。
作为一个父亲,他关心我,对我寄予厚望,鼓励我实现自己的目标。
我总是和他交流我的想法。他不仅是我的父亲还是我的朋友。
There are many respectable people around us.
….The reasons why I respect him are as follows.
As a father, he cares about me and have high hopes of me, who always encourage me to realize my goal.
care for/about have high hopes of sb
I always communicate my thoughts with him so
he not only is my father but also he is my friends.
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not only is he
为了增强我们的节约资源的意识,我们学校将会发起一个抵制浪费的活动。
3.扩展句子,目的。
in order to do sth /so that/aiming to do sth
with the purpose of
———————————————————————,our school is to launch a campaign against waste.
In order to arouse our awareness of saving resources
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,which is about resisting waste.
在我看来,我们不应该过度分享。这种行为会打扰别人,更糟糕的是,会泄露个人信息。
4.扩展句子,做法的影响/结果。
In my opinion, we should not overshare.
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Improve/cultivate /be vital/be beneficial to
/do damage to/be harmful to /result in/lead to
The action will distract others and what’s worse, it will give away personal information.
3.图中的数字表明,随着现代科技的发展,学习英语的方式多种多样,学生们可以选择他们喜欢的方式去学习英语。
4.在我看来,我们应该充分利用好网络工具,它丰富我们接触英语的途径,对于我们的英语学习有极大的帮助。
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As…show,句子。
adopt/make use of
different/a variety of/a wide range of
As the chart show , students make use of a variety of learning methods to study English beyond the classroom.
Students listen to English songs .
The percent of students is up to 65%.
The percent of students who listen to English songs is up to 65%.
The percent of students listening to English songs is up to 65%.
account for占多少比例,是…的原因
The figures show that there are many different ways to learn English with the development of modern technology. Students can choose the ways that they like to study English.
3.图中的数字表明,随着现代科技的发展,学习英语的方式多种多样,学生们可以选择他们喜欢的方式去学习英语。
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what
_______
be fond of/be keen on/be interested in
In my opinion, we can take full advantage of the Internet ,which can enrich our ways to be exposed to English and be beneficial to our English learning.
4.在我看来,我们可以充分利用好网络工具,它丰富我们接触英语的途径,它对于我们的英语学习有极大的帮助。
开始一件事的方式是不再动嘴而开始动手。
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