Unit 5 Section Ⅵ Writing-【新课程学案】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第三册教师用书word（外研版）

本高中英语讲义聚焦叙事型日记写作核心知识点，通过“范文分析-框架构建-技法指导-实践练笔”的学习支架，系统梳理写作脉络。先以潜水经历范文为例，解析4W+1H要素（时间、地点、人物、事件、过程），再总结引言-主体-结论结构，辅以亮点词汇句式（如“All of a sudden”“as if”）及情节展开逻辑（由胆怯到自信的情感转变），帮助学生掌握事件叙述与情感表达。 该资料特色在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养，通过范文解构（如欲扬先抑手法、明喻修辞）提升语言表达精准性，借助情节逻辑分析（如“adjust to darkness”到“breathe normally”的细节递进）发展学生分析与推断能力。提供的随堂练笔（补全日记）和素材储备（露营遇熊案例），课中辅助教师分层教学，课后助力学生巩固写作技巧，查漏补缺。

Section Ⅵ　Writing 写作项目——Writing about a diving experience 本单元的写作任务是写一篇日记，记录一次假想中的潜水经历。日记常以第一人称记叙一天生活中的所见、所闻、所做或所想的事情，分叙事型、议论型、描写型和抒情型。本单元侧重训练的是叙事型日记，行文时应注意交代清楚事件发生的时间、地点、起因、经过、结果以及相关的人物、作者的感悟等。 写作技法指导 (一)品参考范文 I couldn't believe that I succeeded in diving and swam with the seals for 10 minutes! I never thought I could start an adventure under the sea before, till my parents took me to the Farne Islands and tried diving there. We were offered two choices, either wreck diving — to see the wrecked ship Somali, or scenic diving — to have a good time with the grey seals.I chose the second one because it was less challenging and I love sea animals. Diving turned out to be much less difficult than I had imagined.I just put on the instruments and followed my instructor.I was a bit scared, but my instructor told me to take it easy.At first, I could only see nothing, but when my eyes gradually adjusted to the darkness, I could see deep blue waves moving up and down, and small fishes swimming.Soon we reached the spot, and I could breathe normally. It was such a wonderful world.Before realising it, I had been in the seaweed forest surrounded by the young seals.They were eager to get close to me and dance around me.I reached out my hand to touch one of them.All of a sudden, something big appeared on my right.I turned around and almost got astonished.It was a huge male seal.I was so scared fearing it would attack me.But it just touched me lightly with its body, as if it wanted to hug me.I put my hands on its back, trying to feel its smooth skin.The world here was so quiet that it felt that time had stopped. Finally, my instructor gestured for me to go up.When I reached the surface, I had to readjust to the sunlight.What had happened just now was like a dream. (二)根据参考范文，可总结出该类文体的框架结构 (三)由范文学写作 1．学行文逻辑 范文的第一段以简短的语言交代潜水的背景、时间、地点及人物，以引起读者的关注。第二至第四段为主体部分，给出两种潜水选择，及详细介绍第二种观光潜水的经历：所做、所看、所感。第五段为结尾部分，描述了观光潜水经历的感受。范文架构合理，有效运用了4W＋1H(When, Where, Who, What和How)。 2.学情节展开 第三、第四段首句均为该段主题。 (1)第三段首句中“turned out to be much less difficult than I had imagined”承接上文，先表达a bit scared，随后借助过渡词but笔锋一转，为下文情节的展开埋下了伏笔；从“could only see nothing”，到“could see deep blue waves moving up and down, and small fishes swimming”，再到“could breathe normally”，表明作者对这次潜水由胆怯到自信的转变。整段文字语意连贯，一气呵成，寥寥数笔既描述了完整的事件，又穿插了作者的内心活动。也为接下来第四段在海底的所观、所感做好铺垫。 (2)第四段首句中“such a wonderful world”是整段的核心，接下来悉数登场的the seaweed forest, the young seals, a huge male seal，作者都不惜笔墨，极尽渲染。在描写中，既有作者单向的感官描写，也有作者和海豹之间的互动，语言通顺流畅、生动有趣。 3．学亮点表达 (1)亮点词汇 ①第三段句首中“much less difficult”统领全段情感基调，之后的潜水过程也印证了作者最初的选择是正确的，尤其是尾句中normally与首句相互呼应。 ②第四段第五句中“All of a sudden”意为“突然地，出乎意料地”，为副词性短语，相当于Suddenly，用来修饰整个句子，表示这件事发生的迅速、突然且出乎预料。使得潜水经历跌宕起伏，避免平铺直叙。 (2)亮点句式 ①第一段前两句“I couldn't believe that I succeeded ...! I never thought I could ...”采用欲扬先抑的写作手法，使情节多变，波澜起伏，形成鲜明对比，给读者留下更深刻的印象；更重要的是使作者的思想感情抒发得更加酣畅、深沉。 ②第四段倒数第三句“But it just touched me lightly with its body, as if it wanted to hug me.”使用了明喻的修辞手法，能够更生动、更深刻地描述在水下与海豹的互动，增强语言的表现力。 [提能训练|完成句子] ①Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation.Embarrassed, Jenny didn't say anything.All_of_a_sudden,_dead silence fell.Then came Miss Walker's voice. 每个人都目不转睛地盯着珍妮，等待解释。珍妮很尴尬，什么也没说。一片死寂突然降临。然后传来沃克小姐的声音。 ②Neil could_not_believe_that the dog which seemed to be friendly could be so fierce. 尼尔简直不敢相信，这只看起来很友善的狗竟然如此凶猛。 ③Reading this book made me feel as_if_I'd_been_woken_up_from_a_long_sleep and finally opened my eyes to the world! 阅读这本书仿佛将我从一个漫长的睡眠中唤醒，让我终于开始睁眼看世界！ 具体写作指导 How to write about an adventure experience ——如何写一篇冒险经历 第一步： 构思谋篇 Part 1 Introduction (a brief introduction of the adventure)． Part 2 Main body(detailed process, including actions and views)． Part 3 Conclusion (personal feelings and comment). 第二步：要点表达 第一部分　 初步介绍冒险经历 1．常用词汇 ①dive v．&n.　　　　　　 潜水 ②board v. 上船(火车、飞机等) ③passport n. 护照 ④application n. 申请 ⑤suitcase n. 行李箱 ⑥pack vt. 打包；包装 ⑦reserve vt. 预订 ⑧flight n. 航班 ⑨insurance n. 保险 ⑩baggage/luggage n. 行李 ⑪settle in 安顿下来 ⑫take off 起飞 ⑬check_in 登记入住 ⑭leave_for_ 动身前往 ⑮make a trip_to_ 去……旅行 2.常用句式 ①Last week, I, together with some tourists, took part in an adventurous outdoor trip organized_by_the_local_travel_agency. 上周末，我和一些游客参加了由当地旅行社组织的户外探险旅游活动。 ②I went_out_for_a_picnic today with my classmates. 我和我的同学们今天出去野餐了。 ③Two of my friends and I went_climbing_Mount_Tai last weekend. 上周末我和我的两个朋友去爬泰山了。 ④On May 1, I together with my parents and some of my relatives went_to_explore_in_a_ forest near my hometown. 5月1日，我和我的父母以及一些亲戚去我家乡附近的一片森林探险。 第二部分　冒险的详细经历 1．常用词汇 ①adjust_to　　　　　　　 适应；调节 ②with_the_help_of 在……的帮助下 ③be_attracted_by 被……吸引 ④be_determined_to_do_sth. 下定决心做某事 ⑤carry_out_a_rescue_plan 执行救援计划 ⑥a breath_of_sea air 呼吸一下海边的空气 ⑦turn to_sb. 向某人求助 ⑧fit in 相适应；相融合 ⑨in_great panic 处于极度恐慌中 ⑩keep away_from 远离；勿靠近 2.常用句式 ①The mountain was so_steep_that we had to climb very carefully. 这座山如此陡峭，所以我们必须非常小心地爬。 ②This was such_beautiful_scenery_that we took many photos. 这里的风景如此美丽，所以我们拍了很多照片。 ③After lunch we went swimming near the seaside where_the_sea_was_blue_and_the_ beach_was_golden. 午饭后我们去海边游泳。大海是蓝色的，海滩是金色的。 ④It's a beautiful island, whose scenery is breathtaking.We stood on the second floor of the boat, enjoying_the_view_of_the_sea. 那是一个美丽的岛屿，风景美得令人窒息。我们站在船的第二层，欣赏着大海的景色。 ⑤After that, we explored the virgin forest, experiencing the panic of getting lost and the excitement of finding_our_way_out_. 在那之后，我们深入原始森林探险，即经历了迷路时的恐慌又体验了找到出路的兴奋。 第三部分 　对冒险经历作出评价 1．常用词汇 ①impressive adj.　　　　 给人深刻印象的 ②splendid adj. 壮丽的；辉煌的；极好的 ③satisfying adj. 令人满意的 ④leave_a_deep_impression_on_sb./impress_sb.deeply 使某人印象深刻 ⑤a_sense_of_achievement 成就感 ⑥overcome difficulties 克服困难 ⑦appeal to ... 对……有吸引力 ⑧have a good view of 一览无余 ⑨safe and sound 安然无恙 ⑩broaden one's mind 拓宽思维 2．常用句式 ①I had_a_good_time/enjoyed_myself today. 我今天玩得很高兴。 ②Not_only_has it broadened my horizons but it also has built up my body. 它不仅拓宽了我的视野，还锻炼了我的身体。 ③Although_everyone_was_very_tired,_we felt very excited because we had experienced a real adventure. 虽然大家都很累，但我们都感觉很兴奋，因为我们经历了一次真正的冒险。 ④After this trip, we are_more_aware_of_the_importance of protecting nature.这次旅行之后，我们更加意识到保护自然的重要性。 随堂针对练笔 假定你是李华，6月16日下午你和你的家人去三亚旅游，生平第一次潜水使你很激动。请你写一篇日记，记述潜水的经历，内容包括： 1．介绍潜水中的所见、所想； 2．说明潜水的感受。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 根据括号内的汉语提示补全作文： 16 June, Friday Sunny It was a day of pure magic. I ①went_diving_under_the_sea (去海底潜水) near Sanya with my family this afternoon. The first thing ②that_I_became_aware_of (我注意到的) was all the vivid colours surrounding me. It is the fantastic corals which were shaped like fans, plates, mushrooms, the branches of trees and the horns of deer that impressed me most. And ③all_kinds_of_small_and_elegant_fish_were_swimming_in_and_around_the_corals (各种各样小巧优雅的鱼在珊瑚里面和周围游来游去). However, some big creatures were ④so_dangerous_that_I_wasn't_permitted_to_get_too_close_to_them (如此危险以至于我不被允许离它们太近)． From the experience, ⑤I_realize_that (我意识到) the amazing underwater world is waiting for us to explore. 写作素材储备 冒险经历之露营遇熊 Tom supported himself upon a tree and observed his unexpected visitor. The bear was obviously a fighter, for the black of his coat had become brown with age. There was confidence in his small, twinkling eyes. Terrified as Tom was, he must save himself. He started running around the campfire, the bear chasing after him. He was close to desperation when the tent fell down onto the burning fire, with the bear trapped inside. He then witnessed the burning tent racing in the direction of the lake, disappearing. 汤姆靠在一棵树上观察这位不速之客。这只熊显然是一个斗士，因为它黑色的皮毛随着年龄的增长已经变成了棕色。他那双闪闪发光的小眼睛里充满了自信。汤姆虽然吓坏了，但他必须自救。他开始绕着篝火跑，熊在后面追着他。就在他快要绝望的时候，帐篷倒在了熊熊燃烧的篝火上，熊被困在里面。然后，他目睹了燃烧的帐篷向湖的方向飞奔而去，消失了。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $