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Section Ⅵ Writing
[课时跟踪检测]
一、写作专项训练
Ⅰ.靓表达升级(10分)
1.He was so old that he couldn't carry the heavy boxes.That made him lose his job unwillingly.(用“too ...to结构”和“非限制性定语从句”升级)
→He_was_too_old_to_carry_the_heavy_boxes,_which_made_him_lose_his_job_unwillingly.
2.From 1753, as his skills were increasing, he began to become popular and awesome.(用with复合结构升级)
→From_1753,_with_his_skills_increasing,_he_began_to_become_popular_and_awesome.
3.I want to stress that each of us should be open-minded to different opinions.(用what引导的主语从句升级)
→What_I_want_to_stress_is_that_each_of_us_should_be_open-minded_to_different_opinions.
4.She not only speaks Spanish, but she's also good with computers.(用倒装句升级)
→Not_only_does_she_speak_Spanish,_but_she's_also_good_with_computers.
Ⅱ.微语境写作(共8空,16分)
1.It_is_my_great_honor_to_make_a_speech_here (我很荣幸能在这里演讲) about a cultural celebrity.Today, I_will_introduce_a_well-known_person (我将介绍一位知名人士), Yu Guangzhong.As a brilliant star in the literary circle, he is entitled as the “Bright Multicolored Pens”.
2.Not only can_she_teach_you_how_to_write_Chinese_characters (她能教你怎么写汉字), but she can also offer you some information about Chinese culture.In addition, Ms Li is kind and will_be_pleased_to_teach_you (将会很乐意教你).
3.I admire Edison a lot because of his great contributions to the world.He had more than 1,000 inventions.In his life time, he was always eager to know how_things_worked (事物是如何起作用的).He was also so diligent that he worked day and night.And this explained why he had so many great inventions (他为什么有这么多伟大的发明).
4.I admire Helen Keller because she was_optimistic_about_life (对生活积极乐观).She became deaf and blind when she was 19 months old.Since then she lived in a world of darkness and silence,and communication seemed only a dream for her.But she never_gave_up_and_struggled_
to_lead_an_active_life (从未放弃,努力过着积极的生活).
Ⅲ.应用文写作(15分)
假定你是李华,将参加主题为“My favorite figure in Chinese history”的演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:1.人物和贡献(郑和,著名的航海家,七次下西洋,促进了中国与其他国家间文化和技术的交流);2.你的评价。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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参考范文:
Hello, everyone.
Glad to be here to make a speech. As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Zheng He, a famous voyager.He built a great fleet of ships, which was the biggest in the world at that time.From 1405 to 1433, Zheng He went on seven trips to trade valuable goods, such as gold, silver and silk, which encouraged the exchange of cultures and technologies between China and other countries.Zheng He is really an international hero and his voyages are such a huge achievement that people still remember him as a pioneer in opening up cultural contacts between different peoples around the world.
Thank you !
Ⅳ.读后续写(25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When a tornado touched down in a small town nearby, many families were left completely ruined. One Sunday, a particular picture especially touched me. A young woman stood in front of an entirely ruined home. A young boy, seven or eight years old, stood at her side, eyes downcast. Clutching (紧握) at her skirt was a tiny girl who stared into the camera, eyes wide with confusion and fear. The article that went with the picture gave the clothing sizes of each family member. With growing interest, I noticed that their sizes closely matched ours. This would be a good opportunity to teach my children to help those less fortunate than themselves. I taped the picture of the young family to our refrigerator, explaining their difficulty to my seven-year-old twins, Brad and Brett, and to three-year-old Meghan.
“These poor people now have nothing,” I said. “We'll share what we have with them.”
I brought three large boxes and placed them on the living room floor, encouraging the boys to go through their toys and donate some of their less favorite things. Meghan watched seriously, as the boys and I filled one of the boxes with canned goods and foods that they no longer needed.
Meghan walked up with Lucy, her much loved doll, hugged tightly to her chest. She stopped in front of the box, gave her doll a final kiss, then laid her gently on top of the other toys.
“Oh, Honey,” I said. “You don't have to give Lucy. You love her so much.”
Meghan nodded seriously, “Lucy makes me happy, Mommy. Maybe she'll make that other little girl happy, too.”
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
The boys had watched, open-mouthed, when their sister placed her favorite doll in the box.
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I looked at my children for a long moment.
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参考范文:
The boys had watched, open-mouthed, when their sister placed her favorite doll in the box. Without a word, the boys rose and went to their rooms and came back carrying their favorite toys to the living room. Astonished, I realized that the boys had also recognized what little Meghan's action meant. I think all of them want to make these poor people who have nothing happy like them. Swallowing back tears, I pulled all three of them into my arms.
I looked at my children for a long moment. I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes, too. Then I replaced it with the new hunter green jacket that I had found on sale last week. I hoped the young woman in the picture would love it as much as I did. It was what Meghan did that taught me a lesson that the true spirit of donating is to give with your heart.
二、阅读拓展训练
阅读七选五
Mary went through a personal experience 40 years ago that changed her life path and established her connection with Chinese herbal medicine.
Still childless after 13 years of marriage, Mary longed to become a mother.For years she travelled from country to country and visited top experts in the field, but without success. __1__ However, her Chinese herbalist grandmother gave her hope through a herbal treatment.
After three and a half years she became pregnant. __2__ The expectant mother's delight was shared by the rest of her family, too.This was the point when she made up her mind to carry on her grandmother's work and devote her life to herbal medicine research, development and promotion.To this end, she invested in a large herbal garden in the suburbs of Jakarta, where more than 30,000 plants are grown. __3__
Through the application of great effort and resources over many, many years, Mary's career has developed vigorously, as has her garden. __4__ When she was asked whether it was worthwhile to have devoted so much of her life to this research, she firmly responded,“What I have done is to fulfill a promise I once made.More importantly, I want to bring Chinese herbal medicine to all those in need. __5__ ”
A.More than 7,000 of these can be used as medicine.
B.The moment the news was confirmed, she burst into tears of happiness.
C.I believe it can help relieve pain and enable the sick to regain their hope of life.
D.The heartbreak and disappointment was so great that she came close to giving up.
E.I'm so happy that the local people like to use Chinese herbal medicine for treatment.
F.Although she is now 80 years old, she is still committed to the study of Chinese herbal medicine.
G.Mary decided to make great contributions to the development of Chinese herbal medicine.
语篇解读:本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了玛丽和中草药结下不解之缘的励志故事。
1.选D 根据上文中的“Still childless after 13 years ...but without success.”可推知,多年来求
子无果的经历让玛丽很是伤心和失望,所以D项符合语境。D项承接上文且与空后一句形成转折。
2.选B 根据空后一句“The expectant mother's delight was shared by the rest of her family, too.”可知,通过中草药疗法,多年不孕的玛丽终于怀孕了,梦想达成,自然是喜出望外,所以选B。
3.选A 根据上文中的“devote her life to herbal medicine research”及“To this end ...where more than 30,000 plants are grown.”可推知,玛丽决定致力于中草药研究工作,这些植物很多可以用作中草药,所以A项符合语境。
4.选F 根据下文中的“When she was asked whether it was worthwhile to have devoted so much of her life to this research, she firmly responded”可推知,玛丽后来多年一直致力于中草药的研究工作,所以选F。
5.选C 根据空前一句“More importantly, I want to bring Chinese herbal medicine to all those in need.”并结合玛丽自身的经历可知,玛丽认为中草药能帮助有需要的人,所以C项承接上文,符合语境。
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