专题10 书面表达（期中真题汇编，上海专用）高二英语下学期

专题10 书面表达（期中真题汇编，上海专用） 主题01 建议信 Passage 1 1．(24-25高二下·上海华东师范大学第二附属中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的高二学生李华，在寒假游学期间住在英国当地人家中（homestay）。你发现房主一家在家中车库囤积杂物，杂乱不堪的状态令他们头痛不已。回到中国后你咨询了收纳达人，并写了一封邮件给英国的房主。邮件的内容必须包括： 1. 囤积杂物的弊端； 2. 你的收纳建议。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 2．(24-25高二下·上海控江中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你是明启中学高三学生李华，最近你所在学校要接待一些外籍学生来校进行为期两天的中西方文化交流活动，现在向全校师生征集活动策划案。请给学生会写一封邮件表达你的想法。你的邮件须包括以下内容： 1.介绍具体活动方案； 2.说明理由。 注：文中可以出现真实地名，但不得提及真实姓名或学校。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 3．(24-25·高二下·复旦大学附属中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120 — 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明信中学的学生李华，你的好友李明在完成英语作业时，过度依赖电子设备，如电子辞典等，你觉得这不利于他的学习，想与他进行沟通。写封信给李明，内容须包括： 1) 向李明说明该行为带来的弊端； 2) 给出建议并说明理由。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题02 投稿征文 Passage 1 1．(24-25高二下·上海闵行区莘庄中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的李明，最近你校英语报正发起“暑假我最想去的一个地方的”征文，你有意参加投稿：内容包括1、对最想去的地方的描述；2.你的理由。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 2．(24-25高二下·上海松江区第四中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是实验中学高二学生李华，你校正在开展“美丽校园计划”征集活动，现向学生征求以下两个方案的意见。请你仔细阅读方案内容，选择其中一个方案，并给校长写一封信。信中必须包含以下内容： 1）选择其中一个方案： 2）说明你推荐该方案的理由。 方案一：在图书馆设立“阅读分享角”，放置坐垫、书架等； 方案二：在教学楼走廊设立“文化展示长廊”，展示学生作品、学校历史文化、科普知识等。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题03 其他应用文 Passage 1 1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below. 你是明启中学高三学生王华，你的好友李明来信邀请你和他一起创办一个公众号（a public account），通过文字、图片、视频等多种形式向国内外读者推广和传播中国文化。请你给他回信，内容须包括： (1)你对该想法的支持和赞赏； (2)你对合作的期待和对分工的建议。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是李华，你们学校将为学生开设一系列微课程，每人可以选择其中的一项参加课程包括“文学欣赏”（Literature Appreciation）、“厨艺”（Cooking Skills）和“野外生存”（Wilderness Survival Skills）。你在英国留学的表哥Wilson很关心你这次课程的选择。请你写E-mail给他，说说你选择的结果，并简要谈谈你这样选择的理由。 主题04 开放性作文 Passage 1 1．(24-25高二下·上海嘉定区中光高级中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in about 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校计划设定每周三为高三年级的无作业日，并就这一做法听取高三学生意见。写一篇文章表达你的观点。内容包括： 1)你是否赞同这一措施（如是否需要无作业日，每周一天是否合适等）； 2)你的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 2．(24-25高二下·上海行知中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 生活中的微小善意之举（random kindness）却往往带来巨大的能量，你有过类似的经历吗？有何感想呢？请结合自己的亲身经历写一篇作文，内容须包括： 1、描述一次你经历的微小善意之举； 2、这次经历对你产生了怎样的影响？ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题01 建议信 Passage 1 1．(24-25高二下·上海宜川中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你是李华，你的学校拟邀请一位名人来参加你校高三毕业典礼。有三位候选人：1.一位体育明星；2.一位企业家；3.一位科学家。请你写信给校长，谈谈你的看法。信中包括： 1.你希望邀请的名人； 2.说明理由； 3.对当天的活动提出建议。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 2．(24-25高二下·上海青浦高级中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 5月12日是全国防灾减灾日（National Disaster Prevention and Mitigation Day）, 每年学校都会组织疏散演练（evacuation drill）, 但是大部分学生对此不够重视, 参与度不高。为完善现有活动, 学校正在向全体同学征集建议。假设你是该校的学生李明, 请你写一封信给学校, 信中需包括: 1. 简述疏散演练中的2点不足之处; 2. 提供相应的完善建议, 并分析其预计效果。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 3．(24-25高二下·上海交通大学附属中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是某社区居民李华。最近，社区计划在小区中央的绿地上修建一个儿童游乐场，但部分居民反对，认为这会带来许多问题或争议。社区居委会决定召开居民会议讨论此事，请你写一封邮件给居委会主任，表达你的意见并提出建议。 要求： 1.说明可能存在的问题或争议； 2.提出合理的解决方案并阐述理由。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题02 投稿征文 Passage 1 1．(24-25高二下·上海金山华东师范大学第三附属中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的学生李乐，学校即将举办科技节，想要向全校师生征文，主题为“对你生活影响巨大的科学发明”。写一篇文章，内容需包括： 1）你认为对你生活影响巨大的一项科技发明； 2）阐述你的理由。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 2．(24-25高二下·上海嘉定一中等四校·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高二学生李明，你校英语报正在举行征文比赛，主题为“The change that I expect AI to bring about”，写一篇文章参赛，内容须包括： (1)你最期待AI会带来的变化； (2)你期待这一变化的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题03 开放性作文 Passage 1 1．(24-25高二下·上海浦东新区·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 随着人工智能技术的飞速发展，社会各界对其影响展开了热烈讨论。有人担忧AI会引发失业、隐私安全等社会问题，也有人认为人机协作(human-machine cooperation)将创造更美好的生活。请畅想“30年后的人类社会”，表达看法。 内容需要包括：（1）．你所设想的30年后社会生活图景(可从日常生活、工作方式、教育医疗等角度展开) （2）．联系自身经历或观察，阐述你对人机关系的看法。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第6页，共7页 试卷第7页，共7页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题10 书面表达（期中真题汇编，上海专用） 主题01 建议信 Passage 1 1．(24-25高二下·上海华东师范大学第二附属中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的高二学生李华，在寒假游学期间住在英国当地人家中（homestay）。你发现房主一家在家中车库囤积杂物，杂乱不堪的状态令他们头痛不已。回到中国后你咨询了收纳达人，并写了一封邮件给英国的房主。邮件的内容必须包括： 1. 囤积杂物的弊端； 2. 你的收纳建议。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Sir/Madam, I hope this email finds you well. I’ve been thinking about the cluttered garage situation at your home since I returned to China. I consulted professional organizers and realized there are several drawbacks to hoarding items. Firstly, it is hard to find things quickly in a messy garage. It can also create a stressful environment, affecting your mood and daily life. Moreover, accumulated clutter might attract pests and pose potential safety hazards. To address this, I suggest a step-by-step approach. You can sort items into three categories: keep, donate, and discard. Use labels and bins to store the items you keep, and arrange them systematically on shelves. Consider vertical storage solutions, like pegboards, to maximize space. For seasonal items, use vacuum-sealed bags to save room. Finally, make a habit of regularly reviewing and tidying up the garage. I hope these suggestions are helpful. If you need more advice, feel free to let me know. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国的房主写信告知囤积杂物的弊端和给出收纳的建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 考虑：think about → consider 首先：Firstly → First of all 处理：address → deal with 建议：suggestion→ advice 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：It can also create a stressful environment, affecting your mood and daily life. 拓展句：It can also create a stressful environment, which can affect your mood and daily life. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Use labels and bins to store the items you keep, and arrange them systematically on shelves.（运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】If you need more advice, feel free to let me know. （运用了if引导的条件状语从句） Passage 2 2．(24-25高二下·上海控江中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你是明启中学高三学生李华，最近你所在学校要接待一些外籍学生来校进行为期两天的中西方文化交流活动，现在向全校师生征集活动策划案。请给学生会写一封邮件表达你的想法。你的邮件须包括以下内容： 1.介绍具体活动方案； 2.说明理由。 注：文中可以出现真实地名，但不得提及真实姓名或学校。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 With the upcoming of the cultural exchange program, I am thrilled to submit my proposal for the 2-day schedule. On the first day, a welcoming ceremony will be organized in the assembly hall, followed by a showcase of international students’ cultural presentations. This will set the tone for an open and inclusive exchange, allowing each group to exhibit their unique cultural heritage. After the ceremony, it’s a good idea to organize some interactive activities to deepen our cultural exchange. On the second day, I recommend hosting a joint cooking class. I believe that this activity teaches cooking skills and deepens understanding of each other’s dietary habits and cultural values. In the evening, what about holding a farewell party for our foreign students, which serve as a tie bridging Sino-Western cultures? I sincerely hope that my proposal will be considered and accepted.                                             Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写邮件向学生会介绍对接待外籍学生开展两日中西方文化交流活动的策划想法，包含介绍具体活动方案与说明理由 。 【详解】1.词汇积累 即将到来的：upcoming → coming 提交：submit → present 组织：organize → arrange 展示：showcase → display 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：With the upcoming of the cultural exchange program, I am thrilled to submit my proposal for the 2-day schedule. 拓展句：As the cultural exchange program is approaching, I am thrilled to submit my proposal for the 2-day schedule. 【点睛】【高分句型1】On the second day, I recommend hosting a joint cooking class.（运用了动名词hosting作宾语） 【高分句型2】I believe that this activity teaches cooking skills and deepens understanding of each other’s dietary habits and cultural values.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） Passage 3 3．(24-25·高二下·复旦大学附属中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120 — 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明信中学的学生李华，你的好友李明在完成英语作业时，过度依赖电子设备，如电子辞典等，你觉得这不利于他的学习，想与他进行沟通。写封信给李明，内容须包括： 1) 向李明说明该行为带来的弊端； 2) 给出建议并说明理由。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文1 Dear Li Ming, Recently I have found you relied heavily on electronic devices, like electronic dictionaries, to accomplish your English homework. As your friend, I think it necessary to offer my view. Despite the convenience and accuracy of electronic “learning assistants”, I have to remind you that the original purpose of English homework should be to enhance your own language proficiency. In an examination, no electronic devices are ever allowed, so your long-term reliance on tools may hamper your own performance at length. I suggest putting your electronic devices away and forcing yourself to stay focused. It can contribute to an improvement, though little every time, and finally help you make progress. Of course, you may get frustrated or puzzled when encountering unknown words, but bear in mind that over-relying on tools only offers you a “weak confidence”. What’s more, I’m not saying that electronic devices should be banned. Instead, it’s more sensible to employ them when you’ve already finished a task. In a word, I sincerely hope you can take my advice into account. Yours, Li Hua 范文2 Dear Li Ming, I’ve noticed that you have been relying on electronic devices such as electronic dictionaries too much when doing English homework, and as it can be harmful to your studies, I genuinely want to talk to you about it. Over-relying on these external resources has many drawbacks. It skips the process of recalling what you’ve already mastered, which gives you the illusion that there’s no room for improvement and conceals potential mistakes. Additionally, it weakens your independent thinking skills and discourages you from autonomous learning. To adapt a learning method that is more beneficial, I suggest that you put your electronic devices away when doing English homework, focus on your paper at hand and resist your urge of consulting external resources. In this way, you’ll have space to think independently and complete the work with your own knowledge. After finishing the homework, you can make full use of these devices to check whether your knowledge is accurate, so as to correct the mistakes and enlarge your vocabulary. English learning is a process of accumulation, while relying on external resources can hinder you from making progress. I hope my advice helps, and let’s improve our English together! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给完成英语作业时过度依赖电子设备的好友李明写一封信，告知他该行为带来的弊端，为他提供改正的建议，并说明自己的理由。（详解以范文1为例） 【详解】1. 词汇积累 依赖：rely on→depend on, be dependent on 完成：accomplish→complete 提高：enhance→improve, sharpen 阻碍：hamper→obstruct, hinder 遇到：encounter→run across, face 简而言之：in a word→in short, in a nutshell 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I suggest putting your electronic devices away and forcing yourself to stay focused. 拓展句：I suggest that you (should) put your electronic devices away and force yourself to stay focused. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Despite the convenience and accuracy of electronic “learning assistants”, I have to remind you that the original purpose of English homework should be to enhance your own language proficiency. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] Instead, it’s more sensible to employ them when you’ve already finished a task. (运用了when引导时间状语从句) 主题02 投稿征文 Passage 1 1．(24-25高二下·上海闵行区莘庄中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的李明，最近你校英语报正发起“暑假我最想去的一个地方的”征文，你有意参加投稿：内容包括1、对最想去的地方的描述；2.你的理由。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Place I Want to Visit Most This Summer I’m Li Ming from Mingqi Middle School. The place I want to visit most this summer is Lijiang, Yunnan. Lijiang is a beautiful ancient city with unique Naxi ethnic culture. There are winding cobblestone streets, clear brooks and traditional wooden houses. It’s like a peaceful paradise away from the hustle and bustle of the city. I want to go there mainly because I’m fascinated by its rich ethnic customs. I can experience the Naxi people’s special festivals and traditional handicrafts. Also, the natural scenery around Lijiang, like the Jade Dragon Snow Mountain, is extremely charming. It will surely bring me an unforgettable vacation. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于征文。要求考生以明启中学李明的身份，投稿说明暑假最想去的地方以及给出相应理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 独特的：unique → distinctive 传统的：traditional → conventional 远离：away from → far from 迷人的：charming → attractive/fascinating 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Lijiang is a beautiful ancient city with unique Naxi ethnic culture. 拓展句：Lijiang is a beautiful ancient city which has unique Naxi ethnic culture. 【点睛】[高分句型1] The place I want to visit most this summer is Lijiang, Yunnan. (运用了省略关系代词that的定语从句) [高分句型2] I want to go there mainly because I’m fascinated by its rich ethnic customs. (运用了because引导原因状语从句) Passage 2 2．(24-25高二下·上海松江区第四中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是实验中学高二学生李华，你校正在开展“美丽校园计划”征集活动，现向学生征求以下两个方案的意见。请你仔细阅读方案内容，选择其中一个方案，并给校长写一封信。信中必须包含以下内容： 1）选择其中一个方案： 2）说明你推荐该方案的理由。 方案一：在图书馆设立“阅读分享角”，放置坐垫、书架等； 方案二：在教学楼走廊设立“文化展示长廊”，展示学生作品、学校历史文化、科普知识等。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Principal,      I am Li Hua, a senior student at our school. As part of the “Beautiful Campus Project,” I would like to propose a creative and practical plan to optimize our school’s library area.      I suggest transforming it into a “Reading and Sharing Corner” This space could include comfortable seating cushions , bookshelves, and small water features to create a serene environment for students to read and relax. The reason for this recommendation is that a tranquil outdoor reading space can promote mental well-being, encourage more reading habits, and offer a peaceful retreat from the busy school life. This idea, which won’t require extensive resources, can be implemented and will serve as an excellent addition to our educational environment.     I hope you consider this suggestion.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours,                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Sincerely,                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校正在开展“美丽校园计划”征集活动，要求考生给校长写一封信，推荐一个你认为既有创意又易于操作的优化方案并说明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：propose → recommend 宁静的：serene → peaceful 促进：promote → boost 提供：offer → provide 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：As part of the “Beautiful Campus Project,” I would like to propose a creative and practical plan to optimize our school’s library area. 拓展句：As part of the “Beautiful Campus Project,” I would like to propose a creative and practical plan, which is designed to optimize our school’s library area. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The reason for this recommendation is that a tranquil outdoor reading space can promote mental well-being, encourage more reading habits, and offer a peaceful retreat from the busy school life.（运用了that引导的表语从句） 【高分句型2】This idea, which won’t require extensive resources, can be implemented and will serve as an excellent addition to our educational environment.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句） 主题03 其他应用文 Passage 1 1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below. 你是明启中学高三学生王华，你的好友李明来信邀请你和他一起创办一个公众号（a public account），通过文字、图片、视频等多种形式向国内外读者推广和传播中国文化。请你给他回信，内容须包括： (1)你对该想法的支持和赞赏； (2)你对合作的期待和对分工的建议。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Li Ming, Thank you for your invitation to start a public account together to promote Chinese culture to domestic and international audiences. I am truly impressed by your idea, and I wholeheartedly support this initiative. I believe that utilizing various media forms like text, images, and videos will effectively showcase the richness and diversity of our culture. I am looking forward to working with you on this exciting project. As for our collaboration, I suggest we divide the tasks based on our strengths. You could handle video production and editing, given your excellent skills in that area, while I focus on creating engaging written content and selecting captivating images. This way, we can complement each other and ensure the quality of our content. I’m excited to embark on this cultural journey with you and can’t wait to see the impact we will achieve together. Best regards, Wang Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。好友李明来信邀请考生和他一起创办一个公众号，通过文字、图片、视频等多种形式向国内外读者推广和传播中国文化，要求考生按照要求给他回信。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 支持：support → endorse 前景：initiative → endeavor 展示：showcase → exhibit 集中注意力于：focus on → concentrate on 2. 句型拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Thank you for your invitation to start a public account together to promote Chinese culture to domestic and international audiences. 拓展句：Thank you for your invitation, which is to start a public account together to promote Chinese culture to domestic and international audiences. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I believe that utilizing various media forms like text, images, and videos will effectively showcase the richness and diversity of our culture.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和动名词作主语） 【高分句型2】As for our collaboration, I suggest we divide the tasks based on our strengths.（运用了省略了引导词that的宾语从句且从句使用了虚拟语气） Passage 2 2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是李华，你们学校将为学生开设一系列微课程，每人可以选择其中的一项参加课程包括“文学欣赏”（Literature Appreciation）、“厨艺”（Cooking Skills）和“野外生存”（Wilderness Survival Skills）。你在英国留学的表哥Wilson很关心你这次课程的选择。请你写E-mail给他，说说你选择的结果，并简要谈谈你这样选择的理由。 【答案】Dear Wilson， I have learnt that our school will be open new train courses to satisfy our needs, including Literature Appreciation, Cooking Skills and Wilderness Survival Skills. As for me, I won't hesitate to choose Wilderness Survival Skills. Most projects of Wilderness Survival Skills are designed to improve the quality of people's psychology, to improve self-control ability of students to continually overcome the psychological fear, to challenge themselves, overcome themselves and shape the good will quality of calm, resolute, indomitable. In addition, Outward Bound can cultivate students’ sense of team work. Obviously, Wilderness Survival Skills can achieve educational goals of psychological and social adaptation, which, for the long run, pays off and benefits us for a life-long term.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给在英国留学的表哥Wilson写封信，介绍你对微课程的选择，说说结果，谈谈理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 满足：satisfy→ meet 目的是：be designed to → be intended to 不断地：continually → constantly 有益：benefit → be beneficial to 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Obviously, Wilderness Survival Skills can achieve educational goals of psychological and social adaptation, which, for the long run, pays off and benefits us for a life-long term. 拓展句：It is obvious that Wilderness Survival Skills can achieve educational goals of psychological and social adaptation, which, for the long run, pays off and benefits us for a life-long term. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I have learnt that our school will be open new train courses to satisfy our needs, including Literature Appreciation, Cooking Skills and Wilderness Survival Skills. (运用了宾语从句和不定式作目的状语) [高分句型2] Obviously, Wilderness Survival Skills can achieve educational goals of psychological and social adaptation, which, for the long run, pays off and benefits us for a life-long term. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 主题04 开放性作文 Passage 1 1．(24-25高二下·上海嘉定区中光高级中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in about 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校计划设定每周三为高三年级的无作业日，并就这一做法听取高三学生意见。写一篇文章表达你的观点。内容包括： 1)你是否赞同这一措施（如是否需要无作业日，每周一天是否合适等）； 2)你的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 As Li Ming, a senior student at Mingqi High School, I wholeheartedly support the proposal of a homework-free Wednesday for Grade 12. Firstly, the intense pressure of college entrance exams is undeniable. Having one day completely free from homework allows us to recharge, reducing stress and preventing burnout. Secondly, constantly doing homework isn’t always the most effective way to learn. A break provides valuable time to review weak areas independently, consolidate knowledge, or simply rest, which can boost overall efficiency for the rest of the week. Finally, Wednesday, positioned mid-week, is an ideal time for this reset. Therefore, I believe this weekly break is both necessary and well-timed. It offers crucial breathing space, ultimately contributing to our well-being and academic performance under immense pressure. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇文章表达对于高三年级的无作业日这一做法的观点以及说明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 全心全意地：wholeheartedly→absorbedly 压力：pressure→stress 最后：ultimately→finally 重要的：crucial→vital 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：Therefore, I believe this weekly break is both necessary and well-timed. It offers crucial breathing space, ultimately contributing to our well-being and academic performance under immense pressure. 拓展句：Therefore, I believe this weekly break is both necessary and well-timed because it offers crucial breathing space, ultimately contributing to our well-being and academic performance under immense pressure. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Having one day completely free from homework allows us to recharge, reducing stress and preventing burnout.（运用了动名词作主语） 【高分句型2】Therefore, I believe this weekly break is both necessary and well-timed.（运用了省略that的宾语从句） Passage 2 2．(24-25高二下·上海行知中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 生活中的微小善意之举（random kindness）却往往带来巨大的能量，你有过类似的经历吗？有何感想呢？请结合自己的亲身经历写一篇作文，内容须包括： 1、描述一次你经历的微小善意之举； 2、这次经历对你产生了怎样的影响？ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Impact of Random Kindness In my life, a small act of kindness once left a lasting impression on me. It was a rainy afternoon when I was rushing to catch the last bus home. As I stood at the bus stop, drenched and frustrated, a stranger approached and offered me his umbrella. He insisted that I take it, saying he lived nearby and didn’t need it anymore. I was taken aback by his generosity and accepted the umbrella with gratitude. This simple act of kindness had a profound impact on me. It reminded me that even the smallest gestures can make a big difference in someone’s day. The stranger’s selflessness warmed my heart and made me realize that kindness is not about grand gestures but about noticing and helping others in need. Since then, I’ve made a conscious effort to pay it forward. I’ve started small, like helping someone carry groceries or offering my seat on the bus. These actions may seem insignificant, but they have the power to brighten someone’s day and create a ripple effect of kindness. 【导语】这篇写作是一篇开放式作文，要求考生就“善意之举”写一篇短文，考生应该囊括题目要求的2个要点，并且补充合理细节。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： ①深刻的印象：lasting impression → enduring impact, deep mark ②慷慨：generosity → magnanimity, liberality ③深远的影响：profound impact → significant influence, substantial effect ④微不足道的：insignificant → trivial, negligible 2. 句式拓展： 介词短语变非谓语结构 原句：I’ve started small, like helping someone carry groceries or offering my seat on the bus. 拓展句：I’ve started small, ranging from helping someone carry groceries to offering my seat on the bus. 【点睛】【高级句型1】He insisted that I take it, saying he lived nearby and didn’t need it anymore. (宾语从句中的虚拟语气，现在分词作状语) 【高级句型2】As I stood at the bus stop, drenched and frustrated, a stranger approached and offered me his umbrella. (as引导的时间状语从句，形容词作状语) 主题01 建议信 Passage 1 1．(24-25高二下·上海宜川中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你是李华，你的学校拟邀请一位名人来参加你校高三毕业典礼。有三位候选人：1.一位体育明星；2.一位企业家；3.一位科学家。请你写信给校长，谈谈你的看法。信中包括： 1.你希望邀请的名人； 2.说明理由； 3.对当天的活动提出建议。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Headmaster,       I’m honored to write to you to express my opinion on the celebrity to be invited to our graduation ceremony.       I’m interested in the third candidate — a scientist. I sincerely hope you can invite him to give us a speech. As is known to all, the scientist is famous for a series of scientific inventions that have greatly changed people’s way of life. He has made great contributions to our country and has been awarded many prizes. Not only can he inspire us students to pursue our dreams but also he can pass on some life lessons.       As for the activity, I think it will be great if the speech can be combined with a short video showing his achievements. In addition, we can prepare some questions in advance and let the students ask questions at the end of the speech.       I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.                                                                                                                         Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给校长写封信，说明你希望邀请的参加学校高三毕业典礼的名人，说明理由，并对当天的活动提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 荣幸的：honored→privileged 真诚地：sincerely→genuinely 改变：change→alter 另外：in addition→what’s more 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’m honored to write to you to express my opinion on the celebrity to be invited to our graduation ceremony. 拓展句：I’m honored to write to you to express my opinion on the celebrity who will be invited to our graduation ceremony. 【点睛】[高分句型1] As is known to all, the scientist is famous for a series of scientific inventions that have greatly changed people’s way of life. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句和that引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Not only can he inspire us students to pursue our dreams but also he can pass on some life lessons. (运用了部分倒装句) Passage 2 2．(24-25高二下·上海青浦高级中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 5月12日是全国防灾减灾日（National Disaster Prevention and Mitigation Day）, 每年学校都会组织疏散演练（evacuation drill）, 但是大部分学生对此不够重视, 参与度不高。为完善现有活动, 学校正在向全体同学征集建议。假设你是该校的学生李明, 请你写一封信给学校, 信中需包括: 1. 简述疏散演练中的2点不足之处; 2. 提供相应的完善建议, 并分析其预计效果。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear School Administration,       I’m Li Ming, a student at our school. I’m writing to share my thoughts on enhancing our evacuation drills. Currently, there are two significant issues. Firstly, the drills follow a fixed routine every year. Students just line up and walk out quickly, regarding it as a tiresome task rather than a life-saving practice. Secondly, we rarely receive any feedback after the drills. Without understanding our mistakes, we can’t improve our emergency response skills.       To address these problems, I have two suggestions. First, we could vary the drill scenarios, such as simulating a gas leak or a night-time evacuation, which would make the drills more challenging and engaging. Second, teachers should hold a brief meeting after each drill to analyze our performance, showing us what we did wrong and how to do better. This way, students will take the drills more seriously and truly learn how to protect ourselves in disasters. Sincerely, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就为完善学校现有疏散演练活动提出建议。其内容包括：述疏散演练中的2点不足之以及提供相应的完善建议，并分析其预计效果。 【详解】1.词汇积累 目前：currently→at present 重要的：significant→important 首先：firstly→to begin with 解决：address→solve 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’m writing to share my thoughts on enhancing our evacuation drills. 拓展句：I’m writing to share my thoughts on how we can enhance our evacuation drills. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 Students just line up and walk out quickly, regarding it as a tiresome task rather than a life-saving practice.（运用了现在分词作状语） 【高分句型2】First, we could vary the drill scenarios, such as simulating a gas leak or a night-time evacuation, which would make the drills more challenging and engaging.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） Passage 3 3．(24-25高二下·上海交通大学附属中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是某社区居民李华。最近，社区计划在小区中央的绿地上修建一个儿童游乐场，但部分居民反对，认为这会带来许多问题或争议。社区居委会决定召开居民会议讨论此事，请你写一封邮件给居委会主任，表达你的意见并提出建议。 要求： 1.说明可能存在的问题或争议； 2.提出合理的解决方案并阐述理由。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Community Committee Director,     I am Li Hua, a resident of our community. I am writing to share my thoughts on the plan to build a children’s playground in the central green area.     I understand that some residents are concerned about potential issues. For example, the playground might cause noise disturbances, especially during evening hours when children are more active. Additionally, there could be safety concerns if the playground equipment is not properly maintained.     However, I believe the benefits of having a playground outweigh these concerns. To address the noise issue, we could set specific operating hours, such as from 9 a.m. to 7 p.m., to minimize disturbances to other residents. Regarding safety, the community could allocate a small budget for regular maintenance and inspections of the playground equipment. This way, we can ensure a safe and enjoyable environment for our children while also respecting the needs of all residents.     I hope my suggestions can be considered in the upcoming meeting. Thank you for your attention to this matter. Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】这篇写作是一篇建议信，要求考生就在中央绿地上修建儿童游乐场一事提出自己的建议。考生要囊括题目要求的几个要点，还要补充合理细节。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： 潜在的：potential → possible, likely 干扰：disturbances → disruptions, interferences 优先于：outweigh → exceed, surpass 预算：budget → financial plan, allocation 2. 句式拓展： 简单句变复合句 原句：I am writing to share my thoughts on the plan to build a children’s playground in the central green area. 拓展句：I am writing to share my thoughts on the plan, the purpose of which is to build a children’s playground in the central green area. 【点睛】【高级句型1】Additionally, there could be safety concerns if the playground equipment is not properly maintained. (if引导的条件状语从句) 【高级句型2】This way, we can ensure a safe and enjoyable environment for our children while also respecting the needs of all residents. (while 引导的状语从句省略句) 主题02 投稿征文 Passage 1 1．(24-25高二下·上海金山华东师范大学第三附属中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的学生李乐，学校即将举办科技节，想要向全校师生征文，主题为“对你生活影响巨大的科学发明”。写一篇文章，内容需包括： 1）你认为对你生活影响巨大的一项科技发明； 2）阐述你的理由。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                            The Scientific Invention That Changed My Life       Among various technological innovations, smartphones have exerted the most profound influence on my daily life. This pocket-sized device has become an indispensable part of my existence.     Firstly, smartphones revolutionize communication. Through instant messaging apps like WeChat, I can maintain real-time contact with family and classmates, sharing study materials and coordinating group projects efficiently. Secondly, it serves as a portable learning tool. With educational apps and online courses, I can access knowledge anytime, anywhere, significantly enhancing my academic performance. Moreover, mobile payment functions eliminate the need to carry cash, making transactions safer and more convenient.       This versatile invention perfectly illustrates how technology simplifies life while expanding our capabilities. It has fundamentally transformed my lifestyle and learning patterns, making me a true beneficiary of the digital age. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校即将举办的科技节写一篇主题为“对你生活影响巨大的科学发明”的征文，描述你认为对你生活影响巨大的一项科技发明，并阐述理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： 创新：innovation→creation 影响：influence→effect 立刻的、马上的：instant→immediate 维持、保持：maintain→keep 加强、增强：enhance→strengthen 扩大：expand→enlarge 2. 句式拓展： 同义句转换： 原句：With educational apps and online courses, I can access knowledge anytime, anywhere, significantly enhancing my academic performance. 拓展句：With educational apps and online courses, I can access knowledge anytime, anywhere, which significantly enhances my academic performance. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Moreover, mobile payment functions eliminate the need to carry cash, making transactions safer and more convenient.（运用了现在分词作状语。） 【高分句型2】This versatile invention perfectly illustrates how technology simplifies life while expanding our capabilities.（运用了以连接副词how引导的宾语从句以及连词while引导的时间状语从句的省略句。） Passage 2 2．(24-25高二下·上海嘉定一中等四校·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高二学生李明，你校英语报正在举行征文比赛，主题为“The change that I expect AI to bring about”，写一篇文章参赛，内容须包括： (1)你最期待AI会带来的变化； (2)你期待这一变化的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Change That I Expect AI to Bring About As a senior high school student, I’m highly interested in the potential of AI. The change that I most expect AI to bring about is in the field of education. I hope AI can provide personalized learning experiences for every student. In traditional classrooms, teachers have to teach a large group of students with different learning paces and styles. However, AI can analyze students’ learning data, such as their strengths, weaknesses, and learning speeds. Then it can customize study plans and materials for each individual. The reason for my expectation is that personalized learning can greatly improve learning efficiency. Students can focus more on the areas where they need improvement, and they won’t waste time on things they already know well. Moreover, it can also increase students’ enthusiasm for learning as they are more likely to achieve better results with a more suitable learning method. In this way, AI can help every student reach their full potential in education. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于征文类作文。要求考生以高二学生李明的身份，围绕“The change that I expect AI to bring about”这一主题进行写作，需包含最期待 AI 带来的变化以及期待这一变化的理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 希望：hope → wish 提供：provide → offer 然而：however → nevertheless 提高：improve → enhance 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：However, AI can analyze students’ learning data, such as their strengths, weaknesses, and learning speeds.    拓展句：However, AI, which has powerful computing capabilities, can analyze students’ learning data, such as their strengths, weaknesses, and learning speeds. 【点睛】[高分句型1] The change that I most expect AI to bring about is in the field of education. (运用了关系代词that引导限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] The reason for my expectation is that personalized learning can greatly improve learning efficiency.(运用了连词that引导表语从句) [高分句型3] Moreover, it can also increase students’ enthusiasm for learning as they are more likely to achieve better results with a more suitable learning method. (运用了从属连词as引导原因状语从句) 主题03 开放性作文 Passage 1 1．(24-25高二下·上海浦东新区·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 随着人工智能技术的飞速发展，社会各界对其影响展开了热烈讨论。有人担忧AI会引发失业、隐私安全等社会问题，也有人认为人机协作(human-machine cooperation)将创造更美好的生活。请畅想“30年后的人类社会”，表达看法。 内容需要包括：（1）．你所设想的30年后社会生活图景(可从日常生活、工作方式、教育医疗等角度展开) （2）．联系自身经历或观察，阐述你对人机关系的看法。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】   In 30 years, AI will revolutionize human society. In daily life, smart homes will adjust temperature and lighting automatically, and self-driving cars will ensure safer commutes. At work, people will collaborate with AI assistants to boost efficiency. In education, personalized learning plans will be provided by AI tutors, and in healthcare, AI will help doctors diagnose diseases more accurately.       From my experience, when using translation tools powered by AI, I’ve seen how it aids my language learning. AI isn’t a threat but a powerful partner. Humans offer creativity and emotional intelligence, while AI provides speed and accuracy. With human-machine cooperation, we can build a future where technology truly enriches our lives. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求考生请畅想“30年后的人类社会”，表达看法。其内容包括：你所设想的30年后社会生活图景并联系自身经历或观察，阐述你对人机关系的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 协作：collaborate→cooperate 促进：boost →promote 提供：provide→offer 帮助：help→assist 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：AI isn’t a threat but a powerful partner. 拓展句：It is obvious that AI isn’t a threat but a powerful partner. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 From my experience, when using translation tools powered by AI, I’ve seen how it aids my language learning. （运用了状语从句的省略和how引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】With human-machine cooperation, we can build a future where technology truly enriches our lives.（运用了where引导的定语从句） 试卷第22页，共22页 试卷第21页，共22页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $