专题09 书面表达15篇（五大题型）（期中真题汇编，上海专用）六年级英语下学期

专题09 书面表达15篇（五大题型） 主题01 话题作文 Passage 1 1．(24-25六下·上海金川中学·期中)Write at least 50 words on the topic “My self-introduction”.（以“我的自我介绍”为题写至少50个词的短文。） 假设你是新星中学的学生李华，你到天鹅湖中学做为期一周的交换生。在天鹅湖中学举行的迎接交换生的欢迎仪式上，请你就自己的个性、兴趣、能力、习惯、不足和梦想等对天鹅湖中学的师生作自我介绍。 You may start like this: Hello, everyone... ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 2．(24-25六下·上海浦东新区惠南学区·期中)学校将举办中国传统文化节日的宣传周活动。请选择一个你最熟悉最喜爱的中国传统节日，以“My favourite traditional festival”为题写一篇不少于50词的作文，介绍一下这个节日的特色以及谈谈你最喜欢它的原因。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 Your school is planning to organize a Chinese Corner with the theme “Chinese Festivals”. Every class is going to introduce a Chinese festival. Now, you are planning for the introduction. Here are the three tasks.（假设你的学校将举办主题为“中国节日”的汉语角活动，每个班级要介绍一个中国节日，你正在为班级计划本次介绍内容，请完成以下三项任务） 注意： 1.不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄阅读语篇不予以评分。 A．Complete the question list for your plan with two more questions.（为问题清单添加两个问题） ●What is the name of the festival? ●Are there any special activities for this festival? ●_____________3_____________? ●_____________4_____________? B．Decide which festival you would choose for the class and give your reason.（从下列四个中国节日中挑选一个作为介绍主题，并阐述理由） ✿the Spring Festival ✿the Lantern Festival ✿the Dragon Boat Festival ✿the Mid-Autumn Festival “I suggest we should introduce ____________5____________ because ____________6____________ C． Write an introduction about the festival you’ve chosen for the Chinese Corner in about 50 words, including the name of the festival, the celebration activities and so on.（用大约50个单词完成一篇中国节日的介绍，内容包括节日名称和庆典活动等） An introduction to _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题02 材料作文人 Passage 1 1．(24-25六下·上海崇明区九校（五四制）·期中)Write at least 50 words about the topic “Rules in my family” (根据文字提示，以“我家的规则”为题写话，至少50字) Suggested questions: 1. Do you have rules in your family? What are they? 2. What do you think of them? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 2．(24-25六下·上海闵行区·期中)学校网站的青少年天地版块正在征稿，主题为“我的节日经历”，请结合思维导图，分享你的专属节日记忆，写一篇50词左右的帖子。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 3．(24-25六下·上海上宝中学·期中)Write a composition in at least 60 words about the topic “An Unforgettable Festival”（以“一个难忘的节日”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的作文，标点符号不占格） 节日常常给人们带来温暖和特别的回忆。描述一个你庆祝过的、给你留下深刻印象的节日。分享你的庆祝活动和感受并说明这个节日令你难忘的原因。 Guiding Questions: 1. What was the unforgettable festival? 2. What did you do during the festival? 3. Why was the festival unforgettable? （注意：1.短文中不得出现考生姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分；2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 4 4．(24-25六下·上海中学东校·期中)Write a passage of at least 50 words about “My favourite Chinese festival”, using the following questions for reference. (请根据提示问题，以“我最喜欢的中国节日”为题写一篇短文，不少于50个词，标点符号不占格) Suggested questions: (1)Which Chinese festival do you like best? (2)Why do you like it? (3)What do you usually do at the festival? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 5 5．(24-25六下·上海金山区·期中)Write a short paragraph to describe your new friend Jenny with at least 50 words, telling us her differences.（基于以下图片信息，写一篇至少50个单词的短文，介绍你的新朋友Jenny。注意介绍她的特别之处。要求紧扣题意，语句正确通顺，内容连贯。） Name: Jenny Smith Age: 12 Country: Canada Looks: blond hair and blue eyes Favourite subject: PE Best friend: Li Ming Hobbies: reading, playing sports Dream: to be a writer Comments from friends: smart and kind _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 6 6．(24-25六下·上海民办桃李园实验学校·期中)六一儿童节即将来临，作为班长，你和班委筹备了丰富的庆祝活动，请写一篇60词左右的短文，介绍你们班在儿童节当天要遵守的规则。具体内容包括： 1．(24-25六下·上海民办桃李园实验学校·期中)活动内容——班级将举行什么活动庆祝儿童节？ 2．(24-25六下·上海民办桃李园实验学校·期中)活动规则——同学们需要遵守哪些规则？ 3．(24-25六下·上海民办桃李园实验学校·期中)规则意义——为什么要遵守这些规则？ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题03 启事类 Passage 1 1．(24-25六下·上海闵行区·期中)假如你是班长，学校组织同学们去参观上海博物馆。为了保证参观顺利进行，你需要向同学们介绍集合的时间和地点，以及规则，如参观过程中需要注意的行为规范和对展品（exhibits）的保护等。写一篇50词左右短文。 We are going to visit Shanghai Museum. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题04 书信作文 Passage 1 1．(24-25六下·上海松江区·期中)假如你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友Emma对中国传统文化非常感兴趣，她想了解中国传统节日的相关情况，请阅读Emma的来信，并给她回复。 注意： 1. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名或校名； 2. 70词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Li Hua, Long time no see. In your last letter, you told me something about Chinese traditions. They are so interesting. I’m also interested in Chinese traditional festivals. What’s your favourite one? Can you introduce one of your favourite festivals and tell me how you celebrated it last year? I can’t wait to read your letter. Yours, Emma Dear Emma, I’m glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 主题05 电子邮件 Passage 1 1．(24-25六下·上海延安初级中学·期中)你是中国学生陆瑶，你有一位在学校交流活动中结识的外国朋友Alex，他正计划明年和家人一起来中国旅居一年，他写了一封电子邮件来和你交流，并询问了你一些信息。 |To: Lu Yao| |From: Alex| |Subject:| I am coming to China soon | Hi, Lu Yao! How are you doing these days? I am glad to tell you that my father is going to work in China for the coming year, so all my family will travel to your country together. I want to experience a traditional Chinese festival while I am visiting China! Can you recommend (推荐) one? Tell me why it’s special, what people do during it, and why you think I’d love it! All the best! Alex 你需要根据 Alex 的 email 写一封不少于50词的回信，向他推荐一个你喜爱的中国传统节日，并根据Alex提出的问题向他说明该节日的文化意义、相关习俗以及你喜爱这个节日的理由。 （注意：1.文中不得出现姓名、校名等真实个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 2．(24-25六下·上海民办杨浦实验（五四制）·期中)Suppose you are Li Hua. Your foreign friend, David, is interested in Chinese traditional festivals. Write an email to him to introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival (介绍中秋节). Please include the following information: 1. The time and importance of the Mid-Autumn Festival. 中秋节的时间和重要性 2. Traditional celebrations during the festival. 传统庆祝方式 3. Your personal experience and feelings about it. 个人体验与感受 要求： 1. 提示信息完整准确，语句通顺，意思清楚； 2. 词数不少于60个，不得出现真实人名和学校名称。 Dear David, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua Passage 3 3．(24-25六下·上海位育中学·期中)2024年12月4日，中国春节申遗成功。假设你是李华，你校正在进行“新春华韵·异国学子春节行”活动，来自英国的交换生Jack将在你家过春节。请你根据下表内容，给Jack写一封60词左右的邮件，简单介绍自己，介绍春节习俗以及今年你是如何度过春节的。 Name Li Hua Age 13 Hobbies cooking,... Ways to celebrate the Spring Festival have a big dinner, set off fireworks,... Dear Jack, I’m very happy that you will spend the Spring Festival with my family. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 4 4．(24-25六下·上海嘉定区·期中)Write at least 50 words according to the given situation.（根据所给情境，写一篇不少于50个词的短文。） New Star Middle School即将欢迎一批国际交流生，学校正在策划一系列精彩纷呈的中国传统文化交流展示活动。假设你是Lu Yao，请结合一个中国传统节日，给交流生们写一封邮件，介绍你对这个节日的认识以及以往相关节庆活动的经历。 要点提示： 1.表示欢迎； 2.节日的基本信息（时间，习俗等）； 3.以往的节庆活动经历（介绍2个活动和感想）。 注意： 1.词数不少于50词（标点符号不计数）； 2.不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题09 书面表达15篇（五大题型） 主题01 话题作文 Passage 1 1．(24-25六下·上海金川中学·期中)Write at least 50 words on the topic “My self-introduction”.（以“我的自我介绍”为题写至少50个词的短文。） 假设你是新星中学的学生李华，你到天鹅湖中学做为期一周的交换生。在天鹅湖中学举行的迎接交换生的欢迎仪式上，请你就自己的个性、兴趣、能力、习惯、不足和梦想等对天鹅湖中学的师生作自我介绍。 You may start like this: Hello, everyone... ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua from New Star Middle School. I’m an outgoing boy who loves making friends. I’m really into sports, especially basketball. I’m good at English and can communicate well. I have a habit of reading books every day. But I’m a bit lazy sometimes and forget to tidy my room. My dream is to be a great person. I’m excited to be here as an exchange student! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，问候并简单介绍自己的名字； 第二步，从“个性、兴趣、能力、习惯、不足”等方面来详细介绍自己； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的梦想。 [亮点词汇] ①be into sth.对某事感兴趣 ②especially尤其是 ③be good at擅长 [高分句型] ①I’m an outgoing boy who loves making friends.（who引导定语从句） ②My dream is to be a great person.（动词不定式作表语） Passage 2 2．(24-25六下·上海浦东新区惠南学区·期中)学校将举办中国传统文化节日的宣传周活动。请选择一个你最熟悉最喜爱的中国传统节日，以“My favourite traditional festival”为题写一篇不少于50词的作文，介绍一下这个节日的特色以及谈谈你最喜欢它的原因。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favourite traditional festival My favourite traditional festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is celebrated on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month.   On this day, families get together. We have a big dinner and then go outside to admire the full moon. The moon looks especially round and bright. Mooncakes are the special food, with various fillings.   I love it because it’s a time for family reunion. No matter how busy we are, we come back home. The warmth and love during the festival make me feel happy and peaceful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，涵盖了节日名称、时间、庆祝活动及喜爱原因等，注意围绕这些要点展开，可适当补充细节，着重凸显节日的特色与意义。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先介绍自己最喜欢的传统节日是中秋节以及它的时间，即农历八月十五。 第二步，再描述中秋节的庆祝活动，包括家人团聚、吃大餐、赏月以及中秋节的特色食物月饼。 第三步，最后说明自己喜欢中秋节的原因，即这是家人团聚的时刻，节日里的温暖和爱让人感到幸福安宁。 [亮点词汇] ①traditional festival 传统节日 ②get together 团聚 ③admire the full moon 赏月 ④various fillings 各种各样的馅料 ⑤family reunion 家庭团聚 [高分句型] ①The warmth and love during the festival make me feel happy and peaceful.（and连接并列成分） ②I love it because it’s a time for family reunion.（because引导原因状语从句） Passage 3 Your school is planning to organize a Chinese Corner with the theme “Chinese Festivals”. Every class is going to introduce a Chinese festival. Now, you are planning for the introduction. Here are the three tasks.（假设你的学校将举办主题为“中国节日”的汉语角活动，每个班级要介绍一个中国节日，你正在为班级计划本次介绍内容，请完成以下三项任务） 注意： 1.不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄阅读语篇不予以评分。 A．Complete the question list for your plan with two more questions.（为问题清单添加两个问题） ●What is the name of the festival? ●Are there any special activities for this festival? ●_____________3_____________? ●_____________4_____________? B．Decide which festival you would choose for the class and give your reason.（从下列四个中国节日中挑选一个作为介绍主题，并阐述理由） ✿the Spring Festival ✿the Lantern Festival ✿the Dragon Boat Festival ✿the Mid-Autumn Festival “I suggest we should introduce ____________5____________ because ____________6____________ C． Write an introduction about the festival you’ve chosen for the Chinese Corner in about 50 words, including the name of the festival, the celebration activities and so on.（用大约50个单词完成一篇中国节日的介绍，内容包括节日名称和庆典活动等） An introduction to _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】3．When does it take place 4．Is there any special food for this festival 5．the Spring Festival 6．it is the most important festival in China 7．例文 An introduction to the Spring Festival The Spring Festival, also called Chinese New Year, is celebrated on the first day of the lunar calendar. People decorate homes with red lanterns and couplets, set off fireworks, and have family reunion dinners. Traditional foods like dumplings and fish are enjoyed, symbolizing luck and prosperity. It’s a time for joy and new beginnings. 【解析】3．提两个节日的相关问题即可，参考答案：When does it take place。 4．提两个节日的相关问题即可，参考答案：Is there any special food for this festival。 5．本题属于开放性试题，言之有理即可。参考答案：the Spring Festival。 6．本题属于开放性试题，言之有理即可。参考答案：it is the most important festival in China。 7．[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍春节； 第二步，具体介绍如何庆祝春节； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①decorate...with... 用……装饰…… ②set off fireworks 燃放烟花 ③have family reunion dinners 举行家庭团聚聚餐 [高分句型] ①People decorate homes with red lanterns and couplets, set off fireworks, and have family reunion dinners. （并列结构） ②Traditional foods like dumplings and fish are enjoyed, symbolizing luck and prosperity. （非谓语动词的用法） 主题02 材料作文人 Passage 1 1．(24-25六下·上海崇明区九校（五四制）·期中)Write at least 50 words about the topic “Rules in my family” (根据文字提示，以“我家的规则”为题写话，至少50字) Suggested questions: 1. Do you have rules in your family? What are they? 2. What do you think of them? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Rules in my family In my family, we have clear rules. First, everyone must share household chores like washing dishes or sweeping the floor. Second, we must go to bed by 10 p.m. on weekdays. Third, honesty is highly valued. I think these rules are strict but fair. At first, I disliked the bedtime rule, but now I understand it keeps me energetic. Overall, these rules teach us responsibility and make our home harmonious. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示要点进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，条理清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍家里的家规有哪些； 第二步，表达自己的对这些家规的看法； 第三步，进行总结。 [亮点词汇] ①go to bed 去睡觉 ②energetic 精力充沛的 ③responsibility 责任 [高分句型] ①I think these rules are strict but fair. (宾语从句) ②At first, I disliked the bedtime rule, but now I understand it keeps me energetic. (but连接的并列句) Passage 2 2．(24-25六下·上海闵行区·期中)学校网站的青少年天地版块正在征稿，主题为“我的节日经历”，请结合思维导图，分享你的专属节日记忆，写一篇50词左右的帖子。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】    My favorite festival is the Spring Festival. Last year, my family gathered to make dumplings and decorate the house with red lanterns. At midnight, we watched fireworks light up the sky. I received lucky money in red envelopes, which made me feel joyful. The festival reminds me of the importance of family and traditions. 【详解】【总体分析】    ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时为主    ③提示：根据所给内容写作文，需包含节日活动、情感体验等，可适当发挥。 【写作步骤】    第一步：确定节日和核心活动； 第二步：按时间顺序描写准备→庆祝→感受； 第三步：升华主题，强调节日的意义 。 【亮点词汇】    ①Spring Festival春节 ②lucky money压岁钱    【高分句型】    I received lucky money in red envelopes, which made me feel joyful. （非限制性定语从句）    Passage 3 3．(24-25六下·上海上宝中学·期中)Write a composition in at least 60 words about the topic “An Unforgettable Festival”（以“一个难忘的节日”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的作文，标点符号不占格） 节日常常给人们带来温暖和特别的回忆。描述一个你庆祝过的、给你留下深刻印象的节日。分享你的庆祝活动和感受并说明这个节日令你难忘的原因。 Guiding Questions: 1. What was the unforgettable festival? 2. What did you do during the festival? 3. Why was the festival unforgettable? （注意：1.短文中不得出现考生姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分；2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 An Unforgettable Festival The most unforgettable festival I experienced was the Spring Festival last year. On that day, my family decorated the house with red lanterns and paper cuttings. We cooked dumplings together and enjoyed a big family reunion dinner. At night, we set off fireworks in the yard, lighting up the dark sky with colorful sparks.This festival was special because my grandparents, who live far away, came to celebrate with us. Their laughter and stories made the day warm and happy. Even though the fireworks faded quickly, the joy of being together stayed in my heart forever. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己最难忘的节日是春节； 第二步，根据题干的要点，描述春节期间的活动，介绍为什么这个节日令人难忘； 第三步，给出评价并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①set off引发 ②even though虽然 [高分句型] ①We cooked dumplings together and enjoyed a big family reunion dinner.（and连接并列句） ②This festival was special because my grandparents, who live far away, came to celebrate with us.（定语从句，原因状语从句） Passage 4 4．(24-25六下·上海中学东校·期中)Write a passage of at least 50 words about “My favourite Chinese festival”, using the following questions for reference. (请根据提示问题，以“我最喜欢的中国节日”为题写一篇短文，不少于50个词，标点符号不占格) Suggested questions: (1)Which Chinese festival do you like best? (2)Why do you like it? (3)What do you usually do at the festival? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Favourite Chinese Festival My favourite Chinese festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. I like it because it is a time for family reunions and enjoying delicious mooncakes. During this festival, I usually spend time with my family, eating mooncakes and admiring the full moon. We also play games and share stories about the moon. It’s a wonderful time to relax and enjoy the company of loved ones. 【详解】[整体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：采用“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并在介绍时候要注意文章的条理性和逻辑性。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图——最爱的节日是中秋节； 第二步，介绍喜欢中秋节的原因； 第三步，介绍中秋节的具体活动。 [亮点词汇] ①family reunions家庭团聚 ②admire the full moon赏月 ③a wonderful time美好时光 [高分句型] I like it because it is a time for family reunions and enjoying delicious mooncakes. (because引导原因状语从句) Passage 5 5．(24-25六下·上海金山区·期中)Write a short paragraph to describe your new friend Jenny with at least 50 words, telling us her differences.（基于以下图片信息，写一篇至少50个单词的短文，介绍你的新朋友Jenny。注意介绍她的特别之处。要求紧扣题意，语句正确通顺，内容连贯。） Name: Jenny Smith Age: 12 Country: Canada Looks: blond hair and blue eyes Favourite subject: PE Best friend: Li Ming Hobbies: reading, playing sports Dream: to be a writer Comments from friends: smart and kind _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: I have a new friend. Her name is Jenny. She’s from Canada. She has blond hair and blue eyes. She is 12 years old. Her favourite subject is PE. She likes making new friends. Her best friend, Li Ming, is from China. She likes reading and playing sports. Her dream is to be a writer one day. I think she is smart and kind. We get along well with each other. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：题目要求根据提示介绍詹妮的情况，包括她的基本信息、爱好以及梦想等。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。 [写作步聚] 第一步，开篇点题； 第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍詹妮的基本信息、爱好以及梦想； 第三步，最后描述对詹妮的评价。 [亮点词汇] ①be from来自 ②make friends交朋友 ③get along well with和……友好相处 [高分句型] ①I think she is smart and kind.（省略that的宾语从句） ②Her dream is to be a writer one day.（动词不定式作表语） Passage 6 6．(24-25六下·上海民办桃李园实验学校·期中)六一儿童节即将来临，作为班长，你和班委筹备了丰富的庆祝活动，请写一篇60词左右的短文，介绍你们班在儿童节当天要遵守的规则。具体内容包括： 1．(24-25六下·上海民办桃李园实验学校·期中)活动内容——班级将举行什么活动庆祝儿童节？ 2．(24-25六下·上海民办桃李园实验学校·期中)活动规则——同学们需要遵守哪些规则？ 3．(24-25六下·上海民办桃李园实验学校·期中)规则意义——为什么要遵守这些规则？ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     On Children’s Day, our class will have a talent show and a snack party.​     We have some important rules. First, everyone must arrive on time. Second, listen quietly when others perform. Finally, share snacks and please keep the classroom clean.     Following these rules helps everyone enjoy the day. It shows respect to classmates and keeps our class tidy. Let’s have a happy and orderly Children’s Day! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点围绕儿童节班级活动展开，明确给出了活动内容和核心规则，同时强调了遵守规则的意义。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，介绍儿童节班级活动； 第二步，具体详细地说明活动规则； 第三步，介绍规则的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①listen quietly 安静倾听 ②share snacks 分享零食 ③keep ... tidy 保持……整洁 [高分句型] ①First, listen quietly when others perform. (祈使句，时间状语从句) ②Following these rules helps everyone enjoy the day. (动名词短语作主语) 主题03 启事类 Passage 1 1．(24-25六下·上海闵行区·期中)假如你是班长，学校组织同学们去参观上海博物馆。为了保证参观顺利进行，你需要向同学们介绍集合的时间和地点，以及规则，如参观过程中需要注意的行为规范和对展品（exhibits）的保护等。写一篇50词左右短文。 We are going to visit Shanghai Museum. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】    We are going to visit Shanghai Museum. Please gather at the school gate at 8:00 a.m next Saturday. We will take the bus together. During the visit, remember to follow the rules: keep quiet, no running or shouting, and do not touch the exhibits. Taking photos is allowed, but turn off the flash. Let’s protect the exhibits and show our respect to the culture. 【详解】 【总体分析】    ①题材：本文是一篇启事类作文； ②时态：以一般将来时为主； ③提示：需包含集合时间、地点、行为规范和展品保护要求。     【写作步骤】    第一步：交代活动背景和集合信息（时间、地点）；    第二步：列举参观时的行为规范（安静、禁止触摸展品等）；    第三步：呼吁大家遵守规则，体现文明素养。     【亮点词汇】    ① keep quiet保持安静 ②turn off关掉 【高分句型】       ①Taking photos is allowed, but turn off the flash."（动名词作主语+被动语态） ②Let’s protect the exhibits and show our respect to the culture.（祈使句，并列结构） 主题04 书信作文 Passage 1 1．(24-25六下·上海松江区·期中)假如你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友Emma对中国传统文化非常感兴趣，她想了解中国传统节日的相关情况，请阅读Emma的来信，并给她回复。 注意： 1. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名或校名； 2. 70词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Li Hua, Long time no see. In your last letter, you told me something about Chinese traditions. They are so interesting. I’m also interested in Chinese traditional festivals. What’s your favourite one? Can you introduce one of your favourite festivals and tell me how you celebrated it last year? I can’t wait to read your letter. Yours, Emma Dear Emma, I’m glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】范文 Dear Emma, I’m glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals. Among all the festivals, my favorite one is the Spring Festival. It marks the beginning of the lunar new year. Now, let me tell you something about it. Last year, my family gathered to make dumplings, decorate the house with red lanterns, and set off fireworks at midnight. We also gave each other red envelopes with lucky money inside. It was so much fun! I hope you can experience it one day! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一封书信； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接已给的开头，引出话题； 第二步，介绍最喜欢的传统节日； 第三步，介绍该节日的时间以及自己和家人如何庆祝该节日。 [亮点词汇] ① traditional festival 传统节日 ② set off fireworks 放烟花 ③ lucky money 压岁钱 [高分句型] I hope you can experience it one day!（宾语从句） 主题05 电子邮件 Passage 1 1．(24-25六下·上海延安初级中学·期中)你是中国学生陆瑶，你有一位在学校交流活动中结识的外国朋友Alex，他正计划明年和家人一起来中国旅居一年，他写了一封电子邮件来和你交流，并询问了你一些信息。 |To: Lu Yao| |From: Alex| |Subject:| I am coming to China soon | Hi, Lu Yao! How are you doing these days? I am glad to tell you that my father is going to work in China for the coming year, so all my family will travel to your country together. I want to experience a traditional Chinese festival while I am visiting China! Can you recommend (推荐) one? Tell me why it’s special, what people do during it, and why you think I’d love it! All the best! Alex 你需要根据 Alex 的 email 写一封不少于50词的回信，向他推荐一个你喜爱的中国传统节日，并根据Alex提出的问题向他说明该节日的文化意义、相关习俗以及你喜爱这个节日的理由。 （注意：1.文中不得出现姓名、校名等真实个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Dear Alex, I’m glad to hear that you and your family are coming to China. I’d like to recommend the Spring Festival to you. It’s the most important traditional festival in China, symbolizing reunion and new beginnings. Before it, people clean their houses to sweep away bad luck. On New Year’s Eve, families get together to have a big dinner, with dumplings being a must-have. There are also fireworks to add to the festive atmosphere. I love it because of the warm family gatherings. Everyone is happy and full of hope for the new year. I’m sure you’ll enjoy the unique culture and the joyful atmosphere. Best wishes! Yours, Lu Yao 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生需在信中介绍中国的一个传统节日，说明该节日的文化意义、相关习俗以及喜爱这个节日的原因，同时注意信件的正确格式。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇表达对Alex来中国的欢迎并点明要推荐的节日； 第二步，具体描写这个节日的习俗、文化意义； 第三步，表达个人喜爱节日的原因，并期待Alex能够喜爱。 [亮点词汇] ①recommend推荐 ②traditional传统的 ③symbolizing象征 ④must-have必需品 [高分句型] ①There are also fireworks to add to the festive atmosphere. (there be句型) ②I’m sure you’ll enjoy the unique culture and the joyful atmosphere. (宾语从句) Passage 2 2．(24-25六下·上海民办杨浦实验（五四制）·期中)Suppose you are Li Hua. Your foreign friend, David, is interested in Chinese traditional festivals. Write an email to him to introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival (介绍中秋节). Please include the following information: 1. The time and importance of the Mid-Autumn Festival. 中秋节的时间和重要性 2. Traditional celebrations during the festival. 传统庆祝方式 3. Your personal experience and feelings about it. 个人体验与感受 要求： 1. 提示信息完整准确，语句通顺，意思清楚； 2. 词数不少于60个，不得出现真实人名和学校名称。 Dear David, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear David,     I’m glad to hear you’re interested in Chinese festivals! The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month, usually in September or October. It’s important because it symbolizes family reunion.     People celebrate by eating mooncakes and admiring the full moon. Some also light lanterns or share stories about Chang’e, the moon goddess.     In my family, we gather for a big dinner and exchange mooncakes. I love the warm atmosphere and the sight of the bright moon, which makes me feel connected to my loved ones. Best regards, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、介绍中秋节的时间和重要性； 第二步、介绍传统庆祝方式； 第三步、介绍自己的体验与感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in…对……感兴趣 ②family reunion家庭团聚 ③the full moon满月 [高分句型] I love the warm atmosphere and the sight of the bright moon, which makes me feel connected to my loved ones.(which引导非限制性定语从句) Passage 3 3．(24-25六下·上海位育中学·期中)2024年12月4日，中国春节申遗成功。假设你是李华，你校正在进行“新春华韵·异国学子春节行”活动，来自英国的交换生Jack将在你家过春节。请你根据下表内容，给Jack写一封60词左右的邮件，简单介绍自己，介绍春节习俗以及今年你是如何度过春节的。 Name Li Hua Age 13 Hobbies cooking,... Ways to celebrate the Spring Festival have a big dinner, set off fireworks,... Dear Jack, I’m very happy that you will spend the Spring Festival with my family. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Jack, I’m very happy that you will spend the Spring Festival with my family. I’m Li Hua, a 13-year-old Chinese student with a passion for cooking, and I also like doing sports. The Spring Festival is my favorite time of the year, filled with traditions like having a big family dinner and setting off fireworks. And children can get lucky money from the old. This year, we’ll make dumplings together and watch the Spring Festival Gala! I can’t wait to share these experiences with you and introduce you to the rich culture of the Chinese New Year. Looking forward to celebrating together! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，自我介绍并介绍自己的爱好； 第二步，介绍春节习俗； 第三步，介绍今年自己将如何度过春节； 第四步，表达期望。 [亮点词汇] ①passion for对……的热情 ②doing sports做运动 ③filled with充满 ④set off fireworks放烟花 ⑤lucky money压岁钱 ⑥look forward to doing sth期待做某事 [高分句型] I’m Li Hua, a 13-year-old Chinese student with a passion for cooking, and I also like doing sports.（并列句） Passage 4 4．(24-25六下·上海嘉定区·期中)Write at least 50 words according to the given situation.（根据所给情境，写一篇不少于50个词的短文。） New Star Middle School即将欢迎一批国际交流生，学校正在策划一系列精彩纷呈的中国传统文化交流展示活动。假设你是Lu Yao，请结合一个中国传统节日，给交流生们写一封邮件，介绍你对这个节日的认识以及以往相关节庆活动的经历。 要点提示： 1.表示欢迎； 2.节日的基本信息（时间，习俗等）； 3.以往的节庆活动经历（介绍2个活动和感想）。 注意： 1.词数不少于50词（标点符号不计数）； 2.不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Dear friends, Welcome to New Star Middle School! I’d like to tell you about the Spring Festival, which is the most important festival in China. It falls on the first day of the lunar new year. Last Spring Festival, I set off fireworks with my cousins and visited relatives. It was really exciting and I felt the strong festival atmosphere. I hope you’ll love it here. Yours, Lu Yao 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，包括表示欢迎、介绍节日的基本信息、分享以往的节庆活动经历和感想。考生应注意要点齐全，同时可适当补充细节，使文章更加丰富。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。欢迎交流生并介绍中国的一个重要节日——春节。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍春节的基本信息， 分享以往的节庆活动经历。 第三步，书写结语。表达希望交流生会喜欢在这里的时光，进行友好的结尾。 [亮点词汇] ①set off fireworks放烟花 ②festival atmosphere节日氛围 [高分句型] ①I’d like to tell you about the Spring Festival, which is the most important festival in China. (which引导的定语从句) 1 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $