Unit 1 Period 4 Writing（Word教参）-【学霸笔记·同步精讲】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第四册（人教版）

本高中英语讲义聚焦科幻主题写作，涵盖应用文写作（如“My Amazing Experience of Time Travel”“An Exciting Space Trip”）与场景微续写（拜访外星文明）。通过审题谋篇、遣词造句（提供核心词汇如bonus、lever及句式如定语从句、强调句型）、衔接成篇等学习支架，系统指导学生完成科幻故事创作。 该资料以科幻情境激发兴趣，通过词汇积累（如alien、stunned）和句式训练（如more...than...、现在分词作状语）提升语言能力，结合情节合理与想象力培养思维品质（如火星之旅中与外星人交流的逻辑构思）。范文示例与分层练习结合，课中辅助教师高效教学，课后助力学生巩固写作技巧，查漏补缺。

Period 4　Writing 写作一　应用文写作(科幻故事) 你校英文报正在举办科幻故事征文比赛， 请你以“My Amazing Experience of Time Travel”为题写一篇科幻故事。 要求：1.内容丰富、奇特； 2．情节合理且富有想象力。 注意：可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 　审题谋篇 　遣词造句 1．bonus n.　　　　 意外收获 2．more like 更像 3．lever n. 操纵杆 4．panel n. 仪表盘 5．grip v. 紧握 6．at random 随机地 7．stunned adj. 震惊的 [第一段]　交代故事的背景 1．今晚8点，我最后一次检查了我的时光机。 It was 8：00 pm tonight and I gave my time machine a last check． 2．它的形状像一只手表。 It is shaped like a watch． [第二段]　讲述故事发展的过程及结局 3．在此期间，我紧握操纵杆，看着仪表盘。 During this period, I gripped the lever and watched the panel． 4．过了一会儿，我惊讶地发现自己来到了长安城。 A moment later, I was stunned to find myself in the Chang'an city． 5．与其说它是一座普通的城市，不如说它是一座金碧辉煌的宫殿。(more...than...) It was more like a golden palace than an ordinary city． 6．又饿又好奇，我走进了一家旅馆。(现在分词短语作状语) Feeling hungry and curious, I went into a hotel. 7．就在那个时候，我的时光机的铃声响了。(强调句型) It was at that time that the bell of my time machine rang. 8．据估计，这段旅程花了大约一个小时。 It was estimated that the journey took about an hour. [第三段]　个人收获 9．我不仅经历了一次神奇的时间旅行，而且还得到了与古人交流的机会，这真是难得的意外收获。(定语从句) I not only experienced a magical time travel, but also got a chance to communicate with the ancient, which was really a rare bonus． 10．用定语从句合并句1和句2 It was 8：00 pm tonight and I gave my time machine a last check, which is shaped like a watch. 　衔接成篇 One possible version： My Amazing Experience of Time Travel It was 8：00 pm tonight and I gave my time machine a last check, which is shaped like a watch. I pressed the time button of “Tang Dynasty” and chose the destination at random—Chang'an.During this period, I gripped the lever and watched the panel.A moment later, I was stunned to find myself in the Chang'an city. It was more like a golden palace than an ordinary city.Feeling hungry and curious, I went into a hotel.In the hotel, I came across Li Bai! Then I had a good talk with him and learned a lot about Tang poetry.It was at that time that the bell of my time machine rang.It's time to go back to my age! I pressed the button of “return” and in a few seconds I was lying in my bed.It was estimated that the journey took about an hour. I not only experienced a magical time travel, but also got a chance to communicate with the ancient, which was really a rare bonus. 假定现在是2050年，你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。在火星上你们到处参观，举行聚会，与外星人(alien)通电话……总之，你们玩得很愉快。 请根据以上材料，以“An Exciting Space Trip”为题写一篇文章，描述一下你的火星之旅。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 One possible version： An Exciting Space Trip It is the year of 2050. Our school organized a great trip to Mars a few days ago. I was thrilled to embark on this amazing trip. We took the space shuttle to Mars, on which we have discovered a lot of things that are different from those on Earth. On arrival, we made phone calls with aliens and invited many aliens to our party held in our space shuttle. They danced and sang together with us. Their songs were so awesome that all of us screamed. We all had a good time on Mars. This trip to Mars was truly unforgettable.No matter how much time passes, it will always be a memory and I hope I can travel to Mars again soon. 第一段 介绍故事的背景 1.It is seven o'clock in the morning when I wake up on April 4, 2040. 当我在2040年4月4日醒来时， 已经是早上7点了。 2.Though the scientists never saw the real aliens, I still believe that besides human beings, other life must exist in the universe. 虽然科学家们从未见过真正的外星人， 但我仍然相信除了人类之外， 宇宙中还存在其他生命。 第二段讲述故事发展的过程及结局 1.The spaceship/time machine is mainly controlled by ... 宇宙飞船/时间机器主要由……控制。 2.Everything will be done easily and automatically. 每件事都会轻而易举地自动完成。 3.Robots may be the smartest thing except humans in the future. 在未来， 机器人可能是除人类以外的最聪明的事物。 4.Looking around, I find myself surrounded by many smart devices. 环顾四周，我发现自己被许多智能设备包围。 第三段提出故事的教育意义或个人收获 1.In a word, my life will be richer and more colourful. 总之， 我的生活会更加丰富多彩。 2.The future will not only bring new challenges but also new opportunities for growth and discovery. 未来不仅会带来新的挑战，也会带来新的成长和发现机会。 3.As a matter of fact, I believe the wide spread of AI actually acts as a motivation to force us to become more intelligent. 事实上，我相信人工智能的广泛传播实际上是一种动力，促使我们变得更聪明。 写作二　场景微续写(拜访外星文明) 词 汇 积 累 [人物描写]　integrity, salary, appointment, saleswoman, guilty→guilt, chairwoman, alien, labour, niece [情感描写]　ridiculous, superior to, have an urge to do, explode, stun→stunned [动作描写]　test out, suspend, dismiss, declare, presume, calculate, take over, conflict with, fetch, turn out, pace, fall away 佳 句 积 累 [人物描写]　He was tall and handsome with smooth hair and a deep voice, although his facial expression never changed. [情感描写]　1.Claire thought it was ridiculous that she was being offered sympathy by a robot，but she gradually admired his wisdom and integrity and began to trust him. 2．Although it was completely innocent, Claire felt guilty. [动作描写]　1.She screamed, pushed him away, and ran to her room. 2．I drew a breath, gripped the lever and pushed it forwards. [拟人]It was at ten o'clock today that the first of all Time Machines began its career. [比喻]Night came as if a lamp was being turned out. [场景呈现]　汤姆总是渴望探索未知。有一天，他发现了一种可以带他穿越时空的神秘装置。他决定去拜访外星文明。当他计算好坐标后，约定在3000年抵达。当他到达后，他被外星人先进的技术惊呆了。他们表示愿意与他分享知识。汤姆有些紧张，但事实证明他学得很快。经过几个小时的交流，他意识到，尽管存在差异，但他们是有多么相似。这次经历让他对宇宙有了全新的认识。 Tom 1.always had an urge to explore the unknown．One day, he discovered a mysterious device 2.that/which could transport him through time and space (定语从句).He decided to take a journey to meet an alien civilization.As he calculated the coordinates, he 3.set an appointment to arrive in the year 3000．When he arrived, 4.he was stunned by the superior technology of the aliens．They 5.declared their intention to share knowledge with him．Tom was nervous, but he 6.turned out to be a quick learner．After hours of exchanging ideas, he realized 7.how similar they were despite their differences (宾语从句).The experience left him with a newfound appreciation for the universe. 短 语 必 记 1. be curious about　　　　　　对……感到好奇 2．out of curiosity 出于好奇 3．satisfy one's curiosity 满足某人的好奇心 4．eager to uncover the mystery 渴望揭开谜团 5.a thirst for knowledge 对知识的渴望 6．with an inquiring mind 拥有爱探究的头脑 7．cast a curious glance 投以好奇的一瞥 8．be full of curiosity 充满好奇心 必 背 金 句 1.Filled with curiosity, Alex often finds himself wandering into old bookstores, hoping to come across rare treasures hidden between the pages. 怀着好奇心，亚历克斯经常不知不觉走进旧书店，希望能偶然发现藏在书页间的稀世珍宝。 2．His curiosity drives him to ask endless questions, always seeking to understand not just the surface but the underlying principles.　好奇心驱使他不断提出疑问，总是力求不仅理解表面现象，还有背后的基本原理。 3．Her curiosity about different cultures leads her to travel around the world, collecting stories and knowledge like precious gems. 她对不同文化的好奇心促使她环游世界，像收集珍贵宝石一样积攒故事和知识。 4．Every time he reads a scientific article, he dives into it deeply as if trying to uncover the mysteries of the universe itself.　每次阅读科学文章时，他都会深入探究，仿佛试图揭开宇宙本身的奥秘。 5．Driven by his thirst for knowledge, Tom spends hours in the library, searching through piles of books as if hunting for lost artifacts. 在对知识的渴望驱使下，汤姆在图书馆里花费数小时，翻阅一堆堆书籍，仿佛在搜寻失落的文物。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $