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Period 4 Writing
主题引领 情境写作
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写作一 应用文写作(招聘广告)
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写作二 场景微续写(家庭之旅的美好回忆)
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写作一 应用文写作(招聘广告)
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假定你是李华,你校校报急需在校内招聘一位同学担任英语编辑,请你以学生会的名义,以“English Editor Wanted” 为题,用英语写一则招聘启事。要点如下:
1.工作内容:从英语报纸、杂志及互联网上选择适合学生的文章;挑选和编辑同学们的来稿;
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2.要求:乐于贡献出一些业余时间为同学们服务;英语、美术皆好;能熟练使用电脑;
3.请感兴趣的同学在本周内与学生会联系。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
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&1& 审题谋篇
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&2& 遣词造句
巧妙对接单元词汇
1.______ v.运用;涂,敷;申请→_________ n.申请人
2._________ v.(为……)做广告(宣传)
3._______ v.更喜欢;宁愿;偏爱→__________ n.优先(权);优待
4._______ v. 合格;使合格;具有资格→____________ n.技能条件,资格
apply
applicant
advertise
prefer
preference
qualify
qualification
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巧用单元句式、语法
[第一段] 说明招聘的工作内容
1.我们校报正在做广告招聘一名英语编辑。
Our school newspaper is ______________________________.
2.这个工作主要包括两项内容。
The job mainly _________________.
advertising for an English editor
includes two parts
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3.一项内容是从英文报纸、杂志及互联网上选择文章。这些文章要适合广大学生。
One part is ______________________ English newspapers, magazines or the Internet. These articles are suitable for students.
to choose articles from
4.另一项内容是从我校同学们的来稿中挑选合适的稿件并编辑,以供使用。
The other is ___________ suitable articles from students in our school and edit them for use.
to pick out
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[第二段] 说明对应聘者的要求
5.我们希望应聘者能够符合以下条件。
We hope that the _____________________ the following requirements.
applicant could qualify
6.首先,你应该乐于贡献出一些业余时间为其他人服务。
First, you should _____________________________________________
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prefer to devote some spare time to serving others
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7.其次,你应该擅长英文和美术。
Second,you should ___________ both English and art.
8.并且,熟练使用电脑的能力也很重要。
____________, the ability _______ the computer skillfully is important as well.
be good at
What's more
to use
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[第三段] 表达对应聘者的期待
9.无论谁想申请这份工作,请在本周与学生会联系。
No matter who wants to __________ it, please _________________ the Student Union this week.
apply for
get in touch with
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靓化表达促提升
10.用形容词短语作后置定语改写句3
______________________________________________________________________________________________
One part is to choose articles suitable for students from English newspapers,magazines or the Internet.
11.用it作形式主语改写句7
_________________________________________________________________
Second,it is necessary that you should be good at both English and art.
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&3& 衔接成篇
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One possible version:
English Editor Wanted
Our school newspaper is advertising for an English editor. The job mainly includes two parts. One part is to choose articles suitable for students from English newspapers, magazines or the Internet. The other is to pick out suitable articles from students in our school and edit them for use.
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We hope that the applicant could qualify the following requirements. First, you should prefer to devote some spare time to serving others. Second, it is necessary that you should be good at both English and art. What's more, the ability to use the computer skillfully is important as well.
No matter who wants to apply for it, please get in touch with the Student Union this week.
The Student Union
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假定你是李华,你校将和当地动物保护组织合作绘制一系列墙上宣传画。请你以学生会的名义写一份招聘广告,在你校招聘一批志愿者帮助完成这项工作。内容包括:
1.宣传主题——提高公众的野生动物保护意识;
2.志愿者的条件;
3.活动时间;
4.报名方式和截止时间。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
____________________________________________________________
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One possible version:
Volunteers Needed
In order to raise public awareness of wildlife protection in the whole society, our school will cooperate with the local animal protection organisation to create a series of posters on the walls.
Some volunteers who are good at painting and calligraphy are needed to help complete the work. The project will take place on weekends. It's not only a good chance to sharpen your skills but
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also a way to show your concern and love for wildlife! If you are interested in it, please sign up at the Student Union before 11 July.
Take action at once! We are looking forward to your participation.
The Student Union
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第一段
说明招聘的工作内容 1.To promote our scenic spot, we need 10 volunteers this weekend!
为了宣传我们的景区,这个周末我们需要10名志愿者!
2.Intending to open a new column, we need an editor for the school newspaper.
打算开一个新栏目,我们需要一个校报编辑。
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第一段
说明招聘的工作内容 3.The work involves taking photos, making videos and writing articles.
这项工作包括拍照、制作视频和撰写文章。
4.Protecting the natural habitat for wildlife is routine work.
保护野生动物的自然栖息地是日常工作。
5.Key duties include picking out and editing articles concerning traditional Chinese culture.
主要职责包括挑选和编辑与中国传统文化有关的文章。
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第一段
说明招聘的工作内容 6.You are required/expected/requested to promote the local unique and appealing attractions through newspapers, magazines and websites.
你需要/被期望/被要求通过报纸、杂志和网站来宣传当地独特的和吸引人的景点。
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第二段
说明对应聘者的要求 1.All applicants are welcomed but preference will be given to those with related experience.
欢迎所有申请者,但有相关经验者优先。
2.Among all the applicants/candidates, those who have had previous work experience are preferred.
在所有应聘者中,有工作经验者优先考虑。
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第三段
表达对应聘者的期待 1.We warmly welcome a candidate who brings a wealth of experience and a fresh perspective to our team.
我们热烈欢迎能为我们的团队带来丰富经验和全新视角的候选人。
2.We look forward to having you join us and add luster to our team.
我们期待您的加入,并为我们的团队增光添彩。
续表
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PART
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写作二 场景微续写(家庭之旅的美好回忆)
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词汇积累 [动作描写] catch one's eye, wander, roar, disturb, advertise, preference→prefer
[环境描写]massive, delicate, splendid, wetland, grassland, mirror-like, scenery, jungle
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佳句积累 [比喻] The words “railways like massive dragons are winding among the mountains” seem particularly vivid as I travel across the “roof of the world”.
[情感描写] As we pass Cuona Lake, I feel a sense of pride and achievement.
[景色描写] Cuona Lake is so close to the railway that I want to reach out and touch its pale blue mirror-like surface.
[环境描写] Water birds playing in the lake,and cattle and sheep wandering the grasslands bring the scenery to life.
续表
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[场景呈现]我们把车停在草地旁,眼前是连绵起伏的山峦和点缀着无数野花的草原。妈妈兴奋地下了车,悠闲地四处漫步,然后催促我们搭起帐篷。与此同时,周围的风景以及那条如镜般的河流吸引了我们的目光。突然,我们那健忘的妈妈疑惑地喃喃自语:“哦,我怎么忘了带枕头!”我们听了都哄堂大笑。尽管第二天脖子有些疼痛,但这次旅行给我们留下了甜蜜的回忆。
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Pulling over beside the grass,we were greeted with rolling mountains and 1.________________________________________(过去分词短语作后置定语). Mom went out of the car excitedly, 2.____________________________________ and urged us to put up the tent. At the same time,3._________________________________ _______________________________.Suddenly,our forgetful mom murmured in a puzzled voice,“Oh,why I forgot the pillows!”We 4.___________________.Despite the ache of our necks the next day,we had sweet memories of the trip crowding in on us.
grassland dotted with countless wild flowers
wandered around at leisure for a while
the surrounding scenery as well as the mirror-like river caught our eye
roared with laughter
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短语必记 1.beyond description/words 难以用语言表达
2.create a magic scene创造一个神奇的场景
3.wave at us to the wind迎风向我们招手
4.break through the clouds穿云而过
5.bathe the mountains in golden sunlight
使大山沐浴在金色的阳光里
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必背金句 1.On arriving there,I was attracted by the fantastic scenery of nature.
一到那里,我就被迷人的自然景色所吸引。
2.In the west of the city stands a tower, from where you can get a bird's-eye view of the whole city.
城市的西方有一座塔,从那里你可以鸟瞰整个城市。
3.Bathed in the sunshine and delighted by fantastic scenery,we headed for the destination.
沐浴在阳光下,享受着美丽的风景,我们向目的地出发了。
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必背金句 4.The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street. Occasionally,one would fall past me,lightly swaying in the breeze.
漫步街头,树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔,有叶子会从我身边掉落,在微风中轻轻摇摆。
5.Everything was so peaceful and quiet and the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.
一切都那么平静安详,棕色的岩石、深绿的松树和傍晚的阳光混在一起,形成了一种神奇的景观。
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