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Period 4 Writing
主题引领 情境写作
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写作一 应用文写作(人物介绍)
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写作二 场景微续写(小丑解忧)
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PART
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写作一 应用文写作(人物介绍)
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请根据下面提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍中国相声(crosstalk)的代表人物——相声大师马三立。
1.马三立,著名相声演员,1914年9月生于北京;
2.他的相声风格自成一派,在马派相声风格化的基础上,融入自身个性化的表演;
3.拥有丰富的表演经验,善于表演反映现实百姓生活的相声作品。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
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&1& 审题谋篇
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&2& 遣词造句
巧妙对接单元词汇
1._________ v. 使快乐
2._________ adj. 极其重要的,必不可少的
3.________ v. 使钦佩,使留下深刻印象
4.________ v. 应得,应受到
5.______ n. 名声,名誉
6.____________ adj. 难处理的;难懂的
entertain
essential
impress
deserve
fame
complicated
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巧用单元句式、语法
[第一段] 简单介绍人物
1.马三立于1914年9月出生于中国北京。
Ma Sanli ____________ September 1914,Beijing,China.
was born in
2.作为一名相声演员,马三立是荧幕上必不可少的常客。
Ma Sanli was _______________________________ as a crosstalk performer.
an essential regular on the screen
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[第二段] 详细介绍其表演风格
3.他的相声风格以马派相声为基础。
His crosstalk style ____________ the Ma-style crosstalk.
is based on
4.他的相声风格是将真实的生活融进他自己个性化的表演中。
His crosstalk style _________________________ his own personalised performance.
is integrating real life into
5.他有丰富的表演经验,而且他因表演总能逗笑听众的相声作品获得了名气。
He had plenty of acting experience and __________ for performing crosstalk works ___________________________.
won fame
that always entertain audience
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[第三段] 对人物进行评价
6.他的相声作品给听众留下了很深刻的印象。
His crosstalk works ____________________ a lot.
7.它们不仅有趣,而且有意义、令人难忘。(not only...but also...)
They are ______________________________________________.
impress the audience
not only funny but also meaningful and memorable
8.不难理解他值得被誉为最受欢迎的相声演员之一。
It is not ____________ to understand that he _________________________ one of the most popular crosstalk performers.
complicated
deserves to be regarded as
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靓化表达促提升
9.用过去分词短语作状语合并句1和句2
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Born in September 1914, Beijing, China, Ma Sanli was an essential regular on the screen as a crosstalk performer.
10.用过去分词短语作状语合并句3和句4
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Based on the Ma-style crosstalk,his crosstalk style is integrating real life into his own personalised performance.
11.用定语从句合并句6和句7
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His crosstalk works impress the audience a lot,which are not only funny but also meaningful and memorable.
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&3& 衔接成篇
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One possible version:
Born in September 1914, Beijing, China, Ma Sanli was an essential regular on the screen as a crosstalk performer.
Based on the Ma-style crosstalk, his crosstalk style is integrating real life into his own personalised performance. He had plenty of acting experience and won fame for performing crosstalk works that always entertain audience.
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His crosstalk works impress the audience a lot, which are not only funny but also meaningful and memorable. Therefore, it is not complicated to understand that he deserves to be regarded as one of the most popular crosstalk performers.
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假如你最喜欢的喜剧演员是英国的罗温·艾金森(Rowan Atkinson),请根据下面的提示写一篇短文介绍这位喜剧演员。
1.英国著名喜剧演员,1955年出生于英格兰,毕业于牛津大学(University of Oxford);
2.他所扮演的憨豆先生风靡世界,其丰富的肢体语言使人发笑;
3.他出色的演技为他赢得了许多奖项,被誉为继查理·卓别林(Charlie Chaplin)之后的又一位喜剧大师。
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注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
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Born in 1955, Rowan Atkinson is a comedian who graduated from the University of Oxford. He is famous for many wonderful characters, among which the most well-known one is Mr. Bean.
Mr. Bean is an internationally recognized comedy character on TV and in films, whose rich and funny body language can always make people roar with laughter. As a comedian, Mr. Atkinson's witty humour not only amuses people but also makes people think. People all over the world are impressed by his unique acting style.
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His outstanding acting skills have won him many awards and he is hailed as another comedian master after Charlie Chaplin. As far as I am concerned, he does deserve our respect and admiration.
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第一段
简单介绍人物 1.When it comes to my favorite comedian, Mr. Bean comes to mind.
说到我最喜欢的喜剧演员,我想到的是憨豆先生。
2.It is generally believed that Rowan Atkinson is one of the most famous comedians and enjoys popularity among many people.
人们普遍认为罗温·艾金森是最著名的喜剧演员之一,受到许多人的欢迎。
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第一段
简单介绍人物 3.As for how to make people laugh, I think nobody is better at it than Charlie Chaplin.
至于如何让人发笑,我认为没有人比查理·卓别林更擅长。
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第二段
说明喜欢他/她的原因 1.What impresses me most is her particular style of acting, which makes people laugh.
让我印象最深的是她独特的、令人发笑的表演风格。
2.I'm deeply attracted by his performance, which combines humour with relatively serious content.
他的表演将幽默与比较严肃的内容结合在一起,深深地吸引了我。
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第二段
说明喜欢他/她的原因 3.After seeing Chaplin's film The Gold Rush, I laughed out loud for his great performance, which helped to reduce my stress and lift my spirits.
看完卓别林的电影《淘金记》后,我因他的精彩表演放声大笑,这有助于减轻我的压力,振奋我的精神。
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第三段
对人物进行评价 1.In my opinion, he was one of the best comedians of his time.
在我看来,他是他那个年代最好的喜剧演员之一。
2.In conclusion/In a word/In short/All in all, the power of his works is not only in his acting, but also in the characters he created.
总之,他的作品的力量不仅在于他的表演,还在于他塑造的人物。
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PART
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写作二 场景微续写(小丑解忧)
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词汇积累 [情感描写] mood, entertain, cheer up, impress, long face, amusing, enthusiasm
[动作描写] spot, examine, grin, deserve, crack a smile, flatter, illuminate
[人物描写] wig, ankle, clown, employer, witty, emotive, mischievous, barber, fellow, gentle, cruel, composer
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佳句积累 [人物描写] I speak with the on-duty nurse, who tells me that Lara's parents rushed her to the hospital after she fell off her bicycle. Since getting here, Lara has spent her time crying in pain.
[情感描写]1.Anxious parents do what they can to comfort nervous and crying children.
2.I spent much of the time when I was there feeling frightened and more than a little bored!
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佳句积累 3.Although she is clearly still in some pain, her scared and anxious look has been replaced—first by a small smile, and then by loud laughter as I “magically” produce her sock from out of my pocket. Seeing their daughter so much happier has in turn made Lara's parents more relaxed.
[主旨升华]1.Laughter is the best medicine.
2.Humour isn't just about laughter, but is a way of life and a tool that can be used to illuminate the world.
3.Humor is mankind's greatest blessing.
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[场景呈现] 玛丽想说出真相,做个诚实的女孩,但她却没有勇气。由于不知道如何解决这个棘手的问题,她心情很不好。就在这时,一个戴着卷曲彩虹假发和大红鼻子的小丑轻轻地走进了理发店。他直接走到玛丽面前,在她耳边轻声说了些逗乐的话,这立刻让她高兴起来。她忍不住大笑起来,暂时忘记了自己的困境。
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Mary wanted to tell the truth and be an honest girl, but she didn't have the courage. Not knowing how to solve the tricky problem, she was 1._______________.Just then, 2._________________ _________________________________________________________________.He directly came up to Mary and 3._______________________ __________in her ear,4._______________________________(which引导定语从句). She 5.________________ burst into laughter, temporarily forgetting her dilemma.
in a bad mood
a clown wearing a curly rainbow wig and a big red nose gently walked into the barber's shop
whispered some amusing
which immediately cheered her up
couldn't help but
words
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短语必记 1.jump for joy 高兴得跳起来
2.with tears filling one's eyes热泪盈眶
3.be overwhelmed with joy快乐至极
4.yell with delight 乐得大叫
5.brighten sb.'s heart使某人心情愉快
6.be in high spirits兴高采烈
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必背金句 1.She rode the rest of the way home wearing a happy smile.
她带着幸福的微笑,骑车走完了回家的剩余路程。
2.A sense of joy and happiness suddenly went through him.
突然,一种喜悦和幸福的感觉涌上他的心头。
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必背金句 3.She gave me a hug, wearing a smile, which greatly encouraged me.
她面带微笑,给了我一个拥抱,这极大地鼓励了我。
4.She jumped for joy when I gave her a present she liked very much.
当我送给她一件她非常喜欢的礼物时,她高兴得跳了起来。
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