Unit 6 5 Period 4 Writing（Word教参）-【学霸笔记·同步精讲】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第三册（外研版）

本讲义聚焦高中英语写作核心知识点，涵盖安全指南类应用文写作与场景微续写。通过审题谋篇、遣词造句、衔接成篇的阶梯式学习支架，系统梳理说明文结构规范与微续写逻辑，辅以词汇积累、句型模板及范文示例，帮助学生构建从基础表达到综合运用的写作能力脉络。 该资料以情境任务驱动学习，特色在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养。如洪灾、地震安全指南写作，引导学生运用定语从句、非谓语动词等语法知识，提升语言表达准确性；场景微续写通过情感描写与主旨升华，锻炼逻辑思维与创造能力。提供的词汇表、句式模板及范文，课中辅助教师实施分层教学，课后助力学生自主复习，强化学习能力，兼具实用性与指导性。

Period 4　Writing 写作一　应用文写作(安全指南类说明文) 夏天即将来临，暴雨增多，积水增加，洪水泛滥。你校为了增加学生的安全自救常识，准备了一份关于洪灾的安全知识宣传海报。请你以“Flood Safety Guidelines”为题拟定海报内容。 注意：写作词数应为80个左右。 　审题谋篇 　遣词造句 1．disaster n.　　　　　　 灾难，灾祸 2．occur v. 发生 3．announcement n. 通告，公告 4．grab v. 攫取，抓住 5．rescue n. 营救，解救 6．shelter n. 庇护，掩蔽 [首段]　写作的背景及目的 1．夏天快到了。像洪水这类的灾害可能会发生。 Summer is drawing near. Some_disasters_like_flood_are_likely_to_occur. 2．为了在洪灾发生时保障您的安全，请记住以下几点。 In order to keep you safe in_case_of flood, please keep_the_following_in_mind． [主体]　相关建议 3．随时了解天气预报和安全通告。 Keep yourself informed of the weather forecasts and safety_announcements at any time. 4．把雨衣或雨伞放在手边。 Leave your raincoat or umbrella on_hand． 5．待在较高处并等待救援。 Stay at a higher place and wait_for_rescue． 6．抓住能浮在水面上的东西来自救。(定语从句) Grab_something_that_can_float on the water to rescue yourself. 7．多注意深水，避免在水中行走。 Pay_more_attention_to_the_deep_water and avoid walking in water. 8．不要试图在高树下寻找庇护。 Do not try to seek_shelter_under_high_trees． 9．用非谓语动词作伴随状语改写句5 Stay_at_a_higher_place_waiting_for_rescue. 　衔接成篇 _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ One possible version： Flood Safety Guidelines Summer is drawing near.Some disasters like flood are likely to occur.In order to keep you safe in case of flood，please keep the following in mind. Things to do before a flood： ·Keep yourself informed of the weather forecasts and safety announcements. ·Leave your raincoat or umbrella on hand. ·Prepare enough food and first­aid supplies. Things to do during a flood： ·Stay at a higher place waiting for rescue. ·Grab something that can float on the water to rescue yourself. ·Stay away from electricity. ·Pay more attention to the deep water and avoid walking in water. Things not to do during a flood： ·Do not try to seek shelter under high trees. ·Do not drink floodwater as it is not clean. ·Do not return home to rescue personal property. 假定你是李华，你校最近开展了“创建平安校园”活动，本周谈论的主题是“发生地震时如何保护自己”。请你以“Earthquake Safety Guidelines”为题写一份安全指南。内容包括： 1．地震来临前，做好充分准备——准备好救生包，包括手电筒、饮用水、食物和急救用品； 2．地震来临时，不要惊慌。如果在室内，要尽量躲在桌子等坚固的家具下面，并注意保护好头部、颈部。如果在室外，请远离大树、高楼等。逃生时千万不要选择乘坐电梯。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 参考词汇：救生包(emergency kit)；手电筒(flashlight) _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ One possible version： Earthquake Safety Guidelines Earthquake is unexpected and can break out anytime. However, read these tips on earthquake safety, and you can survive. Things to do before an earthquake： ·Have an emergency kit filled with flashlights, drinking water, food and first­aid supplies in your home. ·Be sure to plan escape routes and make sense of your environment. Things to do during an earthquake： ·When you are indoors, get under a strong table with a cushion protecting your head and neck. ·When you are outdoors, try to get into an open area which is away from trees, buildings and walls. Things not to do during an earthquake： ·Don't be nervous and keep calm. ·Never use the lift. 写作的背景 及目的 1.Many people have no idea what to do when a flood strikes. 很多人在洪水来袭时不知道如何应对。 2.If you are trapped in the flood, what will you do to help yourself？ 如果你被困在洪水中，你会做什么来自救呢？ 3.If you find somewhere around you is on fire, how will you escape safely？ 如果你发现身边有地方着火了，你要怎样安全地逃离呢？ 4.When there is an earthquake, you must obey the following rules to keep yourself safe. 当地震发生时，你必须遵守以下规则以保障自身安全。 5.To prevent such tragedies from happening to you, this guideline presents a set of practical safety measures. 为了防止此类悲剧发生在你身上，本指南提供了一套实用的安全措施。 续　表 相关建议 1.If you have to walk in water, walk where the water is not moving. 如果你不得不在水中行走，那就走水流不动的地方。 2.Do not touch electrical equipment if you are wet or standing in water. 如果你身上有水或者站在水中，请不要触碰电气设备。 3.Call an emergency number if the telephone is by your side. 如果身旁有电话，就拨打紧急电话。 4.Avoid standing near such places as large windows and mirrors if you are in a room when an earthquake happens. 发生地震时，如果你在房间内应避免站在诸如大窗户和镜子这样的地方附近。 5.Don't stand under hanging objects or beside heavy furniture in an earthquake. 地震发生时，不要站在悬挂物下方或重型家具旁边。 6.People should stay in their homes until the storm has passed. 人们应该待在家里，直到风暴过去。 7.Keep in mind that you should keep calm and don't panic. 请记住，你应该保持冷静，不要惊慌。 8.Only when we know what to do when caught in a storm can we survive. 只有当我们明白在遭遇风暴时该如何应对，我们才能生存下来。 9.To reduce the number of victims, we can't be too careful in the flood. 为了减少受灾人数，我们在遭遇洪水时必须格外小心。 10.As long as we can keep these tips in mind, we can increase the chances of surviving the disaster. 只要我们能牢记这些提示，就能增加在灾难中幸存下来的几率。 写作二　场景微续写(路边遇困，温暖相助) 词汇积累 [人物描写]　reliable [动作描写]　forecast, grab, rescue, threaten, shelter [环境描写]　disaster, emergency, crisis 佳句积累 [情感描写]　1.Looking through my newspaper，I'm shocked by photos showing that a typhoon in Asia has destroyed a town. 2.Stepping out of the station with a heavy heart, I suddenly feel a fresh wind on my face. 3.I was so frightened that I just froze. [主旨升华]　Now we have another chance to look up at the stars of New Orleans, their beauty inspiring us and giving us confidence to move on. [场景呈现]　艾达心情很沉重，她知道自己必须立即营救罗伊。她把衬衫包在罗伊的腿上，并用一根长棍把他的腿伸直。罗伊痛得大叫，一把抓住了艾达的手臂。“我知道很痛。”艾达轻声说。“但这会把腿固定住，直到直升机救你出去。”他们安全到达医院的那一刻，罗伊说：“幸亏你在紧急情况下保持了冷静，否则我会受更严重的伤。你真是一个可靠的朋友啊！” With a heavy heart, Ada knew she had to 1.rescue_Roy_immediately. She wrapped the shirt around Roy's leg and straightened his leg with a long stick. Roy cried out in pain and 2.grabbed_Ada's_arm. “I know it hurts，” Ada said softly. “But this will hold it still until you are rescued by the helicopter.” 3.The_moment_they_arrived_at_the_hospital_safely(the moment引导时间状语从句), Roy said，“Luckily, you 4.kept_calm_in_an_emergency,_otherwise I would have suffered a more serious injury. 5.What_a_reliable_friend_you_are(感叹句)！” 短语必记 1.carry out a rescue　　　　实施救援 2.pull sb. out 把某人拉出来 3.cry for help 呼救 4.lift sb. to safety 将某人抬到安全地带 5.hold on tightly 紧紧抓住 必背金句 1.They immediately deployed the rescue equipment, ready to save those trapped. 他们立即部署救援设备，准备营救那些被困人员。 2.As soon as the helicopter landed, the rescuers rushed out and made their way towards the disaster area. 直升机一降落，救援人员就冲了出来，朝着受灾区域前进。 3.With a combined effort, the rescuers managed to pull the trapped man out of the rubble. He let out a sigh of relief, tears of gratitude streaming down his face. 经过共同努力，救援人员成功将被困男子从废墟中拉了出来。他松了一口气，感激的泪水顺着脸颊流了下来。 4.The firefighters carefully lifted the child from the burning building and carried her to safety. The on­lookers cheered in relief. 消防员小心翼翼地将孩子从着火的大楼里抱出来，带到安全地带。旁观者松了一口气，欢呼起来。 5.After they were out of danger, the rescued individuals were provided with warm clothes and hot food. They couldn't stop thanking the rescuers for their heroic deeds. 获救人员脱险后，便被提供了保暖衣物和热食。他们不停地感谢救援人员的英勇行为。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $