Unit 4 5 Period 5 Writing（Word教参）-【学霸笔记·同步精讲】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第三册（人教版）

本讲义聚焦高中英语写作核心能力，围绕“太空探索议论文”和“争吵后温暖场景微续写”两大主题构建学习支架。议论文部分通过审题指导、遣词造句（如核心词汇universe、explore space，句型whether...or not、not only...but also...倒装）、正反观点梳理及范文示例，引导学生从引出话题到阐述观点再到个人总结；微续写部分则以情感动作描写为核心，提供词汇积累（如情感词disappointed、动作词leap）、句型模板（现在分词作状语、强调句型）及场景呈现，形成从输入到输出的完整训练链。 该资料以语言能力和思维品质培养为核心特色，通过议论文正反观点对比训练学生分析与评价能力（如太空探索利弊讨论），借助微续写情感动作描写提升语言表达精准度（如“Having argued with my mother fiercely”现在分词状语运用）。教学方法上融合“支架式教学”，课中教师可利用句型模板引导学生仿写，课后学生通过范文对比和词汇积累自主查漏补缺，既落实语言知识，又培养逻辑思维与自主学习能力，助力核心素养全面发展。

Period 5　Writing 写作一　应用文写作(关于太空探索的议论文) 最近，你班同学就“人类是否应该进行太空探索”这一话题展开了激烈讨论。请你根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍讨论的情况，并发表自己的观点。 有的同学认为应该进行太空探索： 理由： 1.探索太空能让人类更好地了解宇宙的发展； 2.指导农业生产； 3.把一些探索太空的高新技术应用于现实生活。 有的同学认为不应该进行太空探索： 理由： 1.探索太空花掉了大量的人力、物力； 2.影响了人们的生活水平。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 　审题谋篇 　遣词造句 1．universe n.　　　　　 宇宙 2．explore_space 探索太空 3．figure_out 弄懂；弄清楚；弄明白 4．whether...or_not 是否…… 5．argue_that... 主张/认为…… 6．provide_sb._with_sth./provide_sth._for_sb. 为某人提供某物 [第一段]　引出话题 1．最近，我们就“人类是否应该进行太空探索”这个问题进行了激烈的讨论。 Recently, we have_held_a_heated_discussion about the problem whether_humans_should_explore_space_or_not． [第二段]　阐述支持和反对的理由 2．一些人认为，太空探索能让我们弄清楚宇宙是如何发展的。 Some people hold the view that space exploration will enable us to figure_out_how_the_universe_develops． 3．更重要的是，它还可以帮助农民种植更多的食物，并将新的先进技术应用到我们的生活中。 What's more, it can also help farmers to grow more food and apply_the_new_advanced_technology_to our lives. 4．然而，另一些人认为我们应该停止探索太空。 However, other people argue_that_we_should_stop_exploring_space． 5．它花费太多的时间和金钱。 It costs too_much_time_and_money． [第三段]　表达个人观点 6．在我看来，人类探索太空是非常有必要的。(it作形式主语) From my point of view, it_is_very_necessary_for_humans to explore space. 7．它可以为世界提供许多不同的好处。 It can provide_the_world_with_many_different_benefits． 8．它还可以解决人们的短期和长期问题。 It can also solve_people's_short­term_and_long­term_problems． 9．用原因状语从句合并句4和句5 However,_other_people_argue_that_we_should_stop_exploring_space_because_it_costs_too_much_time_and_money. 10．用“not only...but also...”的倒装结构合并句7和句8 Not_only_can_it_provide_the_world_with_many_different_benefits,_but_it_can_also_solve_people's_short­term_and_long­term_problems. 　衔接成篇 _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ One possible version： Recently, we have held a heated discussion about the problem whether humans should explore space or not.Opinions are divided. Some people hold the view that space exploration will enable us to figure out how the universe develops.What's more, it can also help farmers to grow more food and apply the new advanced technology to our lives.However, other people argue that we should stop exploring space because it costs too much time and money. From my point of view, it is very necessary for humans to explore space.Not only can it provide the world with many different benefits, but it can also solve people's short­term and long­term problems. 假定你是李华，最近你们班的同学就“太空探索是否值得”这一话题展开了一场激烈的讨论。请你根据以下提示，用英文写一篇文章，介绍此次讨论的结果。内容包括： 1.太空探索的弊端； 2.太空探索的好处； 3.你的观点。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ One possible version： Recently, the students in our class had a heated discussion on whether space is worth exploring. On one hand, some students think space exploration is not worthwhile. They think space is too far away from us and our daily life. And a lot of money spent on space exploration can be used to solve many problems such as pollution and starvation. On the other hand, other students think space exploration is necessary because people have benefited a lot from it, such as using satellites for communication and weather forecast. Besides, space research will enable people to find new resources to solve the problem of energy shortages on the Earth. In my opinion, we should support space exploration, which will bring more benefits to the future. Space exploration is a challenge to human beings, that's why several countries try hard to carry it out continuously. 引出话题 1.Recently, our class had a heated discussion about whether to carry on space exploration. 最近，我们班就是否要进行太空探索展开了激烈的讨论。 2.Our class discussed whether to carry on space exploration or not. 我们班就是否进行太空探索展开了讨论。 3.As for the space exploration, different people have different opinions. 对于太空探索，不同的人有不同的看法。 阐述正反双 方观点及 理由 1.Space exploration has advantages and disadvantages.　太空探索有利有弊。 2.There are some people who support the idea because they believe space exploration can improve a country's comprehensive national strength. 有些人支持这个想法，因为他们认为太空探索可以提升一个国家的综合国力。 3.Exploring space has already made a great contribution to giving us more information about our solar system and universe. 探索太空在给我们提供更多关于太阳系和宇宙的信息方面做出了巨大贡献。 4.Some people think space exploration is a waste of time and money. 有些人认为太空探索浪费时间和金钱。 5.Astronauts who are sent into space are faced with many dangers and some even lose their lives.　进入太空的宇航员面临着许多危险，有些甚至会失去他们的生命。 6.The money spent on space exploration can be used to solve the Earth's problems, such as pollution and starvation. 花在太空探索上的钱可以用来解决地球上的问题，比如污染和饥饿。 表达个人观点 1.As the old saying goes，“Every coin has two sides.” 常言道：“任何事情都有两面性。” 2.I think space exploration benefits the country and the people. 我认为太空探索利国利民。 3.I hope our country will make greater progress in space exploration. 我希望我国在太空探索方面取得更大进步。 写作二　场景微续写(争吵后的温暖) 词 汇 积 累 [情感描写]　intelligent, determined, disappointment, disappointed, desire, independent, keen, shallow, in the hope of [动作描写]　launch, leap, carry on, signal, recycle, lack, float, figure out, argue, result in, monitor, provide for sb., run out 佳 句 积 累 [动作描写]　People have always looked up at the stars and wondered about space. Today, scientists design vehicles to carry astronauts into space to make important discoveries. [情感描写]　1.However, scientists were determined to realise that dream. 2.However, while such disasters brought much sadness and disappointment, the desire to explore the universe did not die. [主旨升华]　Despite the difficulties，scientists hope to make more valuable discoveries that will enable the human race to survive well into the future. [场景呈现]　和妈妈激烈争吵之后，我怒气冲冲地冲出家门，并重重地关上了门。我既失望又沮丧，感觉自己好像漂浮在无限悲伤的海洋里。我太饿了，走到一个摊位旁，但由于缺钱叹了口气。摊主注意到了我的窘境，微笑着向我打招呼，示意我坐下，并为我提供了一碗免费的面条。我感动得热泪盈眶。我向摊主解释发生了什么。摊主微笑道：“孩子，正是你的妈妈从你出生那天起就一直在为你提供生活所需！”吃完面后，我擦干眼泪，跳了起来，像风一样跑回家。 1．Having_argued_with_my_mother_fiercely [现在分词(短语)作状语], I stormed out of the house, closing the door heavily.2.Disappointed_and_frustrated [形容词(短语)作状语], I felt like floating in an ocean of limitless sadness. I was so hungry that I walked up to a stand but 3.sighed_for_lack_of_money．The seller noticed my dilemma, greeted me with a kind smile, 4.signalled_me_to_sit_down and offered me a bowl of noodles for free. I was moved to tears. I explained to the seller what had happened. The seller smiled，“Girl, 5.it_is_your_mother_who_has_been_providing_for_you_since_you_were_born(强调句型)！” After finishing eating the noodles, I wiped my tears, leapt to my feet and ran for home like a wind. 短 语 必 记 1.feel disappointed and frustrated 感到失望和沮丧 2.be in a bad mood 心情不好 3.feel blue 情绪低落 4.break one's heart 使某人心碎 5.get a face like a wet weekend 摆着一张阴沉郁闷的脸 6.lump in one's throat 喉咙哽咽 必 背 金 句 1.He felt sad and his eyes watered a little.　他感到难过，眼睛有点儿湿润了。 2.She suddenly felt blue and thought that her mother would never forgive her rudeness. 她突然情绪很低落，心里想着，妈妈一定不会原谅自己的粗鲁。 3.Carol is a bit down in the dumps because she failed her final exam. 卡尔因为期末考试不及格有点情绪低落。 4.He's got a face like a wet weekend.　他摆着一张阴沉郁闷的脸。 5.He had a lump in his throat when saying goodbye to his best friend. 与好朋友说再见时，他哽咽起来。 6.She walked slowly down the road, evidently in pain.　她沿路慢慢地走着，显然很痛苦。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $