Unit 3 5 Period 5 Writing（Word教参）-【学霸笔记·同步精讲】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第三册（人教版）

本高中英语讲义聚焦应用文写作（地点介绍类说明文）与场景微续写核心知识点，通过审题谋篇、遣词造句、句子合并（如现在分词作状语、倒装结构、非限制性定语从句）及范文示例，搭建从词汇句型到篇章结构的学习支架，系统提升写作能力。 该资料亮点在于融合语言能力与文化意识培养，应用文写作融入青岛、丽江等地历史文化元素，微续写注重情感动作描写（如独立主格、分词结构），通过模板化步骤与实例练习，助力学生提升语言表达准确性与思维品质，课中辅助教师高效教学，课后便于学生自主复习查漏补缺。

Period 5　Writing 写作一　应用文写作(地点介绍类说明文) 假定你是李华，是一名导游，你将带领一个外国旅游团游览青岛。请你用英语写一篇导游词来简单介绍青岛。要点如下： 1.地处中国东部，是中国的重点城市之一； 2.面积约11 300平方千米； 3.是沿海重要中心城市和国际性港口城市； 4.著名旅游景点有道教名山崂山、栈桥等。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 　审题谋篇 　遣词造句 1．diverse adj.　　　　 多种多样的 2．serve_as 担任/充当 3．tourist_draw 旅游景点 4．climate n. 气候 5．mild adj. 温和的 6．to_name_but_a_few 仅举几例 7．be_located_in 位于 8．a_history_of...years ……年的历史 [第一段]　表示欢迎 1．欢迎来到青岛！我非常高兴能向你们介绍这座城市的一些情况。 Welcome to Qingdao! I'm more_than_glad_to_tell_you something about this city. [第二段]　详细介绍 2．青岛是中国的重点城市之一，地处中国东部。 Qingdao, one of the important cities of China, is_located_in_the_east_of_China． 3．青岛面积约11 300平方千米。 Qingdao covers_an_area_of about 11，300 square kilometres. 4．这里的气候温和，所以非常适合游玩。 The_climate_here_is_mild,_so it is fine to visit. 5．青岛是一个历史文化名城，有6 000多年的历史。 Qingdao is a famous historical_and_cultural_city_with_a_history_of_over_6，000_years． 6．它是沿海重要中心城市和国际性港口城市。 It serves_as_an_important_coastal_centre_city and an international port city. 7．而且，青岛有多种多样的旅游景点，如道教名山崂山、栈桥等，仅举几例。(there be句型) What's more, there_are_diverse_tourist_draws in Qingdao, such as the famous Taoist mountain Laoshan and Zhanqiao, to_name_but_a_few． 8．它们吸引了来自世界各地的大量游客。 They attract a_great_many_tourists from all over the world. [第三段]　表示祝愿 9．祝你玩得开心！ Wish you to have_a_good_time! 10．用现在分词(短语)作伴随状语合并句2和句3 Qingdao,_one_of_the_important_cities_of_China,_is_located_in_the_east_of_China,_covering_an_area_of_about_11，300_square_kilometres.________________________________________________________________________ 11．用“not only...but also...”的倒装结构合并句5和句6 Not_only_is_Qingdao_a_famous_historical_and_cultural_city_with_a_history_of_over_6，000_years,_but_it_also_serves_as_an_important_coastal_centre_city_and_an_international_port_city.________________________________________________________________________ 12．用非限制性定语从句合并句7和句8 What's_more,_there_are_diverse_tourist_draws_in_Qingdao,_such_as_the_famous_Taoist_mountain_Laoshan_and_Zhanqiao,_to_name_but_a_few,_which_attract_a_great_many_tourists_from_all_over_the_world.________________________________________________________________________ 　衔接成篇 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version： Ladies and gentlemen， Welcome to Qingdao! I'm more than glad to tell you something about this city. Qingdao, one of the important cities of China, is located in the east of China, covering an area of about 11，300 square kilometres. The climate here is mild, so it is fine to visit. Not only is Qingdao a famous historical and cultural city with a history of over 6，000 years, but it also serves as an important coastal centre city and an international port city. What's more, there are diverse tourist draws in Qingdao, such as the famous Taoist mountain Laoshan and Zhanqiao, to name but a few, which attract a great many tourists from all over the world. Wish you to have a good time! 假定你是李华，你校英文报要刊登关于热门旅游城市的文章。请你用英语写一篇短文介绍丽江，要点如下： 1．位置：云南西北部； 2．气候：全年温和； 3．历史：曾是茶马古道的站点； 4．特征：以纳西文化为代表的多元文化； 5．旅游景点：丽江古城、玉龙雪山、泸沽湖等； 6．交通：飞机、火车、汽车均可到达。 注意：写作词数应为80个左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version： When it comes to tourist cities, Lijiang must be the one that attracts people most, which is located in the northwest of Yunnan Province. With the climate here always fairly mild, it is fine to visit Lijiang throughout the year. Lijiang is mostly known for its diverse cultures of the Naxi ethnic group. As an ancient city, Lijiang was once an important stop on Ancient Tea and Horse Road. Walking around the Old Town of Lijiang, travellers can enjoy various ethnic songs，dances and food at first hand. If tourists like natural scenery, they can go to many tourist attractions: the Yulong Snow Mountain，the Lugu Lake，to name but a few. Lijiang now can be easily reached by air, by train or by car. Welcome to Lijiang for a visit! 第一段 表示欢迎 1.I warmly welcome you to China for your travels. 我热情欢迎你来中国旅行。 2.Welcome to discover the culture and history hidden in our ancient cities. 欢迎来探索我们古老城市中所隐藏的文化和历史。 第二段 详细介绍 该地点 1.Qianmen Street, with a history of 600 years, is 800 metres in length, along which there are more than 300 shops. 前门大街有600年的历史，800米长，沿街有300多家店铺。 2.The village, located on the North Sea, has a history of more than 400 years and a population of 300，000. 这个村庄坐落在北海之滨，有着400多年的历史和30万人口。 3.There are quite a lot of places of interest in Beijing, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and so on. 北京有很多名胜古迹，比如故宫、颐和园等。 4.Firstly, I'd like to tell you something about the weather in the city, which is often windy and very cold in winter. 首先，我想给你们介绍一下这个城市的天气。它通常多风而且冬天非常寒冷。 5.Beijing is a city where the old cultural traditions and the modern civilization are well combined.　北京是一个古老的文化传统和现代文明完美融合的城市。 6.With its pleasant climate, rich natural resources and beautiful scenery, Haikou is one of China's major tourist cities. 海口气候宜人，自然资源丰富，风景优美，是中国主要的旅游城市之一。 第三段 表示祝愿/ 总结概括 1.Wish you can unlock the beauty of nature in our picturesque landscapes. 希望你们可以在我们美丽的风景中解锁大自然之美。 2.I hope you have enjoyed the tour and gained a deeper understanding of the Summer Palace's historical and cultural significance. 我希望你享受了这次旅程，并对颐和园的历史和文化意义有了更深入的了解。 3.I think that you will quickly adjust to them although the weather and the food are different from yours. 我认为你们会很快适应它们，尽管天气与食物都与你们的不同。 4.Mount Huangshan is a place you have to visit and the extraordinary view will make you unwilling to leave. 黄山是一个你必须去参观的地方，非凡的景色会让你不愿离开。 5.We can know more about the life of great people as well as history and cultures of other countries. 我们能够了解更多伟人的生活以及其他国家的历史和文化。 写作二　场景微续写(关于水果农场的一个伤心事) 词汇积累 [情感描写]　fortune, admit, mild, suit [动作描写]　occur, head to, seek, earn a living, select, claim, escape, fold, settle, contain 佳句积累 [动作描写]　1.I walked around looking at the street art for a few hours. 2.Many others found jobs on farms，joined the gold rush, or went to build the railway that joined California to the eastern region of the country. 3.Visitors can also spend hours just exploring the interesting sights，smells，and sounds of China. [情感描写]　I have to admit that it definitely feels good to be back in the city again. [场景呈现]　我和哥哥向亚当爷爷的水果农场走去，试图摘些苹果。正在那时，低沉的声音传来。我们没有从农场逃跑的机会。他没有责备我们，而是亲手给我们挑选了几个苹果。几个月后，亚当爷爷发生了不好的事情——他不幸从苹果树上掉下来失去了生命。听到这个坏消息，我们不能控制我们的情绪，伤心的泪水像断了线的珠子一样从我们的脸上落下来。 My brother and I headed to Old Man Adam's fruit farm，1.seeking_to_pick_some_apples[现在分词(短语)作伴随状语]. At that time, a low voice came. We 2.had_no_chance_to_escape_from_the_farm. He didn't blame us and instead 3.selected_several_apples_for_us_first_hand. Several months later, something bad—unfortunately, his falling from the apple tree claimed his life—occurred to Old Man Adam. 4.Hearing_the_bad_news[现在(分词)短语作时间状语], we couldn't contain our emotions, 5.tears_of_sadness_running_down_our_faces_like_a_broken_string_of_pearls(独立主格结构). 短语必记 1.be close to tears　　　　　快要哭了 2.tears cloud one's eyes 泪水模糊了双眼 3.tears well up in one's eyes 热泪盈眶 4.be wet with tears/in tears 泪流满面 5.with a lump in one's throat 喉咙哽咽 6.tears roll/stream/run/flow down one's cheeks 泪水滑落脸颊 必背金句 1.There was a lump in my throat and I didn't speak because I knew I would cry. 我哽咽了，没有说话，因为我知道我会哭。 2.I left quickly，not wanting to break down in front of the children. 我赶快离开了，不想在孩子们面前崩溃大哭。 3.Realizing she would never come back to the land and never see her dear friends and teachers, Emma's eyes went red and watery. 意识到她将不会再回到这片土地上，再也见不到她亲爱的朋友和老师了，埃玛双眼发红，泪水盈盈。 4.Hearing the news of her father's death, she had a good cry. 听到父亲去世的消息，她痛哭流涕。 5.The little boy lay on the ground, crying for the toy car. 小男孩躺在地上，哭着要那个玩具车。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $