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Section Ⅵ Writing
[课时跟踪检测]
一、写作专项训练
Ⅰ.靓表达升级(8分)
1.Thomas Edison, born in America, was a great scientist and inventor full of curiosity and imagination.(用定语从句升级)
→Thomas_Edison,_who_was_born_in_America,_was_a_great_scientist_and_inventor_full_of_curiosity_and_imagination.
2.I appreciate his landscape poems most, which are clear and natural in words with profound messages.(用what引导的主语从句升级)
→What_I_appreciate_most_are_his_landscape_poems,_which_are_clear_and_natural_in_words_with_profound_messages.
3.In his life, he always came up with new ideas and had more than 1,000 inventions, and many of them still have a great influence on our life today.(用“介词+which”引导的定语从句升级)
→In_his_life,_he_always_came_up_with_new_ideas_and_had_more_than_1,000_inventions,_many_of_which_still_have_a_great_influence_on_our_life_today.
4.Our oral English teacher is so good a teacher that we all love him very much.(用倒装句升级)
→So_good_a_teacher_is_our_oral_English_teacher_that_we_all_love_him_very_much.
Ⅱ.微语境写作(共6空,12分)
1.Lao She, one of the best-known Chinese writers, is_deeply_rooted_in (深深扎根于) Chinese society and famous_for (因……著名) his novels and plays.
2.He is so_energetic_and_patient_a_young_man_that (一个如此富有精力和耐心的年轻人以至于) everyone that knows him likes to make friends with him.
3.He leaves a good impression on me because of the_great_contributions_made_to_our
_society (对我们社会做出的巨大贡献).
4.I admire Helen because although she became deaf and blind when 19 months old, she was very optimistic about life, who_set_an_excellent_example_for_all_of_us (她给我们所有人树立了一个好榜样).
5.I want to learn from her and make_a_difference_to_our_society (对我们的社会产生影响).
Ⅲ.应用文写作(15分)
假定你是李华,请根据下列表格中的内容提示,为校报的英语园地写一篇英语短文,介绍你最崇拜的一位中国科技名人。
姓名
梁建英
出生年份
1972年
职务
高铁设计师
主要经历
(1)1995年大学毕业后开始从事高铁研究工作
(2)研制出时速300~350千米的高速动车组
(3)2015年获奖
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:高速动车组high-speed EMU
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参考范文:
Liang Jianying, general designer of China's high-speed EMU, was born in 1972. Since she graduated in 1995, she has been devoting all her time to the development of China's high-speed railway.Afterwards, she invented the 300-350 km/h high-speed EMU, making it more convenient for us to get around quickly. It is because of her outstanding contributions to our country that China is playing a leading role in high-speed railways all over the world. As a consequence, she was awarded in 2015. However, she never shows any signs of pride.
Liang Jianying has set a good example for us. From her,I realize that we should keep on trying until we realize our dreams.
Ⅳ.读后续写(25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a bright, sunny day and Amelia was on the way to the grocery store that was not far from her house.
Suddenly, she saw an old man holding a cardboard sign (纸牌) near a street crossing.Although some stores hired people to hold signs around to attract business, this man was sitting on the ground, so Amelia thought he was homeless and asking for money.Luckily, she had some bills in her wallet and decided to give him some.
As she got closer, she offered him a $5 bill.To her complete shock, the man refused it.“No, madam.I don't need money.What I really need is a job,” the old man said.
Amelia walked a few steps more to get a good look at his cardboard sign.It read:“A shoemaker is looking for work.I can repair any kind of footwear!” She realized the man was actually not a homeless man begging for money.“Oh! You're a shoemaker.I think many factories out there will offer you some jobs,” she told the man, finally noticing some of his tools around him.
“No, miss.At my age, no one wants to hire me anymore, so I'm trying to find some work this way.If you know someone who needs shoe repair, please let them know about me,” the man said.
Amelia nodded, thinking about a few pairs of shoes at home that needed repairing.Generally, she would donate them and buy new ones, but if this man could repair them, she could keep using them.“What's your name, sir?” Amelia asked.
“I'm Martin, young lady,” he said and smiled at her.“OK, sir.I have to go shopping now, but I'll return with a few pairs of shoes that need some fixing,” Amelia told him with a smile and then walked towards the store.After she finished her shopping, she went back home.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Then Amelia returned to Martin and gave him her shoes for repair.______________
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That night, she posted Martin's story online along with the picture. _______________
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参考范文:
Then Amelia returned to Martin and gave him her shoes for repair.“How much would it be?” she asked.“I'll work on them and have them ready by tomorrow.It'll be $10.Would that be alright?” the man asked, watching her expression to see if that was a fair price.“Of course!” Amelia replied, smiling widely.The following day, Martin gave Amelia her shoes and they were in fantastic shape.“Sir, you are skilled!” Amelia said.At that moment, she had an idea of further helping Martin.She took a picture of the man with his sign and went home.
That night, she posted Martin's story online along with the picture.There were tons of messages on the post the following day.She told Martin about the success of her post and asked for his address.People started mailing shoes to him directly.Martin became famous all of a sudden.Everyone who needed footwear repairing went to him, and he eventually ended up opening a shoe store.Martin made Amelia a unique pair of shoes, grateful for her kindness that changed his life.
二、阅读拓展训练
阅读七选五
Self-disciplined people are not all outstanding people. __1__ Some of them read every day. Some of them never run late. The real difference between an elite person and an ordinary person is that an elite person can manage his or her time well. __2__
What people call self-discipline is in fact self-management. One example is staying fit. Never underestimate someone who is in good shape. Anyone who has ever tried to lose weight knows that it's not easy. __3__ If someone is in good shape, it shows that he knows the principles of staying fit and is able to stick to a plan that uses these principles.
If someone is in good shape, it means that this person is good at managing themselves and their time. __4__ It also shows that this person is able to keep persevering and can balance long-term goals with short-term goals. So if someone is in good shape, he or she is more than just healthy.
__5__ First of all, set a goal and write down your reasons for wanting to achieve it. Create a list of all the things you need to do to achieve this goal and start to work on them one at a time. With self-discipline, small things in life will no longer trouble you. Only through self-discipline can you truly own your future.
A.How do you learn self-management?
B.That's where their success comes from.
C.It's even harder to avoid putting weight back on.
D.Whether it is natural or acquired, it is a great skill.
E.This skill gives you the power to stick to your decisions.
F.But nearly all outstanding people are self-disciplined people.
G.Self-discipline means self control, which is a sign of inner strength.
语篇解读:本文是一篇说明文。文章主要说明了自律的人并不都是优秀的人,但是几乎所有杰出的人都是自律的人。文章论述了自律的重要性以及进行自我管理的方法。
1.选F 根据上文“Self-disciplined people are not all outstanding people.”以及下文“Some of them read every day. Some of them never run late.”可知,后文列举了一些自律的人的良好行为习惯。本句与上文构成转折,指出杰出的人都很自律。F选项中all outstanding people对应后文中them。故F选项“但是几乎所有杰出的人都是自律的人”符合语境。
2.选B 上文提到,精英能很好地管理自己的时间。本句为本段最后一句,应承接上文,说明这一做法的意义:是他们成功的来源。故B选项“那就是他们成功的来源”符合语境。
3.选C 根据空格前后句可知,本段主要是关于保持健康和好身材的人是如何做的。上文提到减肥并不容易,故本句也应是与体重相关的论述。C选项中weight与上文中weight相对应。故C选项“要避免体重反弹就更难了”符合语境。
4.选D 根据空格前后句可知,本段主要说明了“一个人状态很好,说明这个人善于管理自己和自己的时间”。故本句应承接上文,对“这个人善于管理自己和自己的时间”这一技能进行评价。故D选项“无论是天生的还是后天习得的,这都是一项了不起的技能”符合语境。
5.选A 根据空后内容可知,本段的主旨是如何进行自我管理。故A选项“你如何学习自我管理?”符合语境。
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