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Section Ⅵ Writing
[课时跟踪检测] (标题目配有教师讲评课件)
一、写作专项训练
Ⅰ.靓表达升级(6分)
1.Online payment develops very fast and the age of noncash has come.(用so ...that升级)
→Online_payment_develops_so_fast_that_the_age_of_noncash_has_come.
2.In China, more and more people use their smartphones to pay bills wherever they go.(用no matter where升级)
→In_China,_more_and_more_people_use_their_smartphones_to_pay_bills_no_matter_where_they_go.
3.The age of technology changes people's lives and makes the world smaller and promotes the communication between countries.(用定语从句升级)
→The_age_of_technology_changes_people's_lives,_which_makes_the_world_smaller_and_promotes_the_communication_between_countries.
Ⅱ.微语境写作(共8空,16分)
1.According_to_the_research (根据研究), most people leave little cash in their wallets, and some even don't use it for a long time.Noncash age brings_great_convenience (带来了巨大的便利).
2.Online payment was advocated not many years ago and it was_soon_accepted_by_the_public (很快就被公众接受).Now, even small businesses like the street vendors will ask_you_to_pay_online (要求你网上支付).
3.Electronic Payment App is_getting_more_and_more_popular (变得越来越流行) now.People don't have to bring credit cards any more.All they need to do is use their smartphones when_they_go_shopping (当他们购物时), check bills or dine in restaurants.It's very convenient but some security issues occur.
4.By_sending_and_receiving_bills_online (通过在线收发账单), customers and businesses are reducing the amount of paper tossed in the trash and doing their part to help_save_the_environment (帮助保护环境).
Ⅲ.应用文写作(15分)()
随着技术和网络的快速发展,在世界上很多国家,尤其是中国,人们越来越多地使用“无现金支付”。请针对该现象写一篇文章,内容包括:
1.什么是“无现金支付”;
2.“无现金支付”的利与弊;
3.你的观点。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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参考范文:
Nowadays,noncash payments are becoming increasingly popular across the world, especially in China,which refer to the method of making payments with cards,mobile phones or other electronic devices.
Obviously, there are many benefits of noncash payments.Firstly,they're so convenient and fast that people could make almost all the payments with a single click on their smartphones.Secondly,they free people from carrying a wallet,thereby reducing the risk of losing money or the wallet.
However, as the old saying goes, every coin has two sides,and so do the noncash payments.Hackers may have access to your bank account,stealing the money and committing personal information theft.Meanwhile,noncash payments may encourage overconsumption.
As to me,I prefer the convenient noncash payments.However,I hold the belief that they should coexist with the oldfashioned ways.
Ⅳ.读后续写(25分)()
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Morty was checking out his library books when it caught his eye — a poster for Adventure Rocks Kids Camp.“Check this out!” Morty called to Ben and Fred as he grabbed three brochures and dashed to catch up with his best buddies.They all stopped, books in hands, to stare at the pictures of kids flying above canyons suspended from zip lines.They instantly believed the brochure's headline: Summer won't be complete until you Take it to the Limit at Adventure Rocks Kids Camp.
Ben broke the silence, “We have less than two weeks until registration opens, and it says the camp fills up fast.” Then an idea popped into Morty's head.“Why don't we sell lemonade and snacks by the side of the road? We can pool our earnings for the camp.” “That's a great idea,” Ben said.
The sun had barely come up on Saturday morning when the kids set up their business.They chose a spot, asked permission from the homeowner, and then asked to use her garden hose (软管) for water to make lemonade.
Their business went smoothly until Ben announced that they had a comparatively small stock of lemons shortly after noon.Morty decided to make their stock go further.“Fred, when the jug (罐) gets down to onefourth full, just fill it to the top with the water hose.” Morty was thinking out loud, “I'll change the sign and charge 30 more cents for each cup of lemonade.” Their business went on and the three were secretly proud of the little tricks they had done.
Just as Morty finished refilling the jug with water for the third time, a vehicle rounded the corner.Morty saw the minivan with his father at the roadside, wheel and his family inside.They pulled up to the roadside, and his brothers and sisters jumped out, each clutching a coin or two.They were eager to support their brother's bustling business.Morty's family bought the last of the brownies (巧克力方块蛋糕) and drank the last drop of watereddown lemonade.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Morty's father frowned at the sip of the lemonade.
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They decided to fix their wrongdoings the next week.
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参考范文:
Morty's father frowned at the sip of the lemonade.As to him, it tasted more like water.Overwhelmed with confusion, he asked directly, “What's wrong? It tastes just like cold water.” The moment Morty heard his father's doubt, he stood awkwardly, not sure what to say.Fred and Ben were also speechless.A moment later, they admitted what they had done.Although Morty's father was disappointed, he said, “You still have time to correct your wrongdoings.” Hearing this, they nodded immediately.
They decided to fix their wrongdoings the next week.Ben suggested to use the money earned to prepare enough lemons first and then reduce the price.They all agreed.When they restarted their business, they even stood a sign, saying, “We send a cup of lemonade to customers who bought it last Saturday afternoon for free.” They made over 50 cups of lemonade for a constant stream of customers with a low price and over 20 cups were for free.As you can imagine, they didn't get enough money for the camp.But they learned a valuable lesson that one should always be honest.
二、阅读拓展训练
阅读七选五
We all want to save money, and with the cost of living on the rise, it's become more important than ever to watch what we spend. One of the biggest increases in our spending at the moment is on energy. __1__ That's why many of us are looking at ways to save energy.
__2__ To try to achieve this, new homes in some countries will be banned from fitting new gas and oil boilers by 2025.Having a heat pump (热泵) instead can help save energy, but it's unaffordable for many people, unless they've got spare cash.
For people who have to live within a tight budget, there are some lowbudget solutions to lower energy usage. __3__ Adding rolledup towels to block the gaps will help. Investing in new double glass windows will certainly prevent heat from leaking, but if it's still too costly, it might be worth using some heavy curtains to stop the heat escaping.
There are lots of other little things we can do around the home that will help save energy, don't cost a fortune and just require changes to our behaviour. They could be as good as fitting or making something. Put covers on pots and pans when cooking — the food will be ready more quickly. Don't overfill the container when boiling water, and don't leave electrical items on standby. __4__
So, we're being encouraged to make the use of fuel more efficient. __5__ We need to do it to reduce our carbon footprint, so that our energy usage doesn't cost the Earth.
A.Warm air can escape from rooms easily.
B.It's advisable to make the best of energy.
C.But our main aim isn't just a financial saving.
D.The oil, gas and electricity used in our homes are costly.
E.We should consider more about the possible ways to deal with it.
F.Making our home more energyefficient is the obvious way to save money.
G.A combination of such small measures could reduce energy bills by about 10%.
语篇解读:本文是一篇说明文。随着生活成本的上升,人们都想减少日常开销。目前我们支出增长最大的方面之一是能源,文章给出了一些在家中节约能源减少开支的方法。
1.选D 空前提到“目前我们支出增长最大的方面之一是能源”,空后提到“这就是为什么我们一直在思考节能的方法”,故空处内容应涉及能源方面的花费。D项承上启下,符合语境。
2.选F 下文提到“为了实现这一目标,到2025年,一些国家的新住宅将被禁止安装新的燃气和燃油锅炉,用热泵代替它们以帮助节省能源”。分析本段结构和大意可以看出,空后的this指代的应是空处出现的内容,且与节能做法有关。故F项符合语境。
3.选A 空后提到“用卷起的毛巾、双层玻璃窗和厚重的窗帘等物品来阻止热量逸出”,A项“温暖的空气可以很容易地从房间逸出”提出了问题,与后面的解决办法相呼应。
4.选G 本段主要讲了可以在家里做很多其他的小事情来节约能源,如烹饪时盖上锅盖,烧开水时不要将容器装得太满,不要让电器处于待机状态。故G项“这些小方法结合起来可以减少约10%的能源费用”总结上文,符合语境。
5.选C 空前提到“因此,我们被鼓励更加有效地利用燃料”,空后提到“我们需要这样做来减少碳足迹,这样能源使用就不会以破坏地球为代价”。由此可知,空处应起到过渡作用,将节能从减少日常开支引到环境保护,故C项“但我们的主要目标并不仅仅是省钱”符合语境。
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