Unit 2 Section Ⅴ Writing-【新课程学案】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第三册教师用书word（人教版）

本高中英语讲义聚焦“给编辑写信讲述生活方式”写作项目，以课文为依托，构建“篇章结构分析-亮点句型学习（如either...or..., used to等）-修辞手法（引用名言）-写作架构（首段目的、中段经历、尾段感悟）-练笔实践”的完整学习支架，系统培养书信写作能力。 资料特色在于分层训练提升语言能力，如通过亮点表达提能训练强化句型运用，融入甘地名言引用培养文化意识与思维品质，提供素材库和针对练笔，课中辅助教师教学，课后助力学生自主查漏补缺，有效发展学习能力。

Section Ⅴ　 Writing 写作项目——Write a letter to the editor about your lifestyle 　　本单元的写作任务是“给编辑写信讲述自己的生活方式”,属于分享类信件。它兼具书信和记叙文的特点。正文部分通常以记叙为主,多以第一人称的方式详述自己面临的问题、解决问题的过程以及结果,一般以时间为主线叙述事件发生的经过。在正文部分的结尾,可以发表一下自己的感悟。 |由课文学写作| 一、学写作架构 　阅读课文,总结本课的篇章结构如下: 二、学亮点表达 1.第一封信中的亮点表达: (1)I realised I hardly ever felt well, either physically or mentally.(点明了自己身体上和心理上堪忧的健康状况) (2)After that I stopped buying all the sweets, biscuits, and sugary drinks that I used to have every day.(stopped buying和used to凸显了前后生活方式的不同) (3)Whenever I went out with friends, I brought snacks from home ...(表现了作者的决心) (4)I feel more dynamic and stronger than ever, in both body and mind.I sleep soundly at night now.(对比了自己做出改变前后的身心状态,其变化引人深思) 提能训练 ①(单句语法填空)You can apply either personally or by letter. ②(完成句子)I used to hate running because it made me feel pushed outside my comfort zone.我曾经讨厌跑步,因为它让我感觉被推出了我的舒适区。  ③(完成句子)Try to do certain amounts of exercise whenever you can.  无论何时,只要可以,尽量做一定量的运动。 2.第二封信中的亮点表达: (1)I started to analyse my choices, especially what I did to relax and how it was affecting my whole life.(表明了作者决定如何做以及不良习惯如何影响作者的生活) (2)It has enhanced the quality of my life, improving my health and increasing my happiness.(描写了攀岩运动的作用和意义) 提能训练 ①(单句语法填空)Fresh vegetables can be added to the soup, making (make) it quite nutritious. ②(完成句子)I analysed my goal, especially what I should do to achieve it and how it will affect my life.  我分析了我的目标,尤其是我应当做什么来实现它,以及它将如何影响我的生活。 三、学修辞手法 　　第二封信最后一句As Gandhi said, “Be the change you want to see in the world.”,作者采用引用的修辞手法,通过引用甘地的名言,升华了主题,增强了文章的感染力,激励读者勇于改变自己,追求美好的生活。 提能训练/完成句子 As an old saying goes, a friend in need is a friend in deed.正如俗话所说,患难见真情。  |写作项目指导| Write a letter to change your unhealthy lifestyle ——写一封改变自身不健康生活方式的信件 第一步:构思谋篇 文章 结构 首段 点明写信的目的,介绍面临的问题 中段 讲述个人经历、个人改变以及改变带来的积极结果 尾段 总结:个人感悟 时态和 人称 介绍事实用一般现在时;介绍过去经历,用一般过去时;以第一人称为主 第二步:要点表达 第一部分:写信的目的 ①I’m writing to you to share my life habits.  我写信给你是为了分享我的生活习惯。 ②After I attended your lecture on healthy lifestyle, I realized that I am addicted to digital devices.  在我参加了你们关于健康生活方式的讲座后,我意识到我对数字设备上瘾了。 ③Somehow, I often find myself absent⁃minded and even fall asleep in class.不知怎么回事,我发现自己在课堂上总是心不在焉,甚至睡着。  第二部分:个人的经历/自己的决定和做法/产生的积极结果 1.个人的经历 ①When I was a little child, I was so weak that I caught a cold now and then.当我还是个小孩子的时候,我很虚弱,以至于我时不时地感冒。  ②What was worse, I was putting on weight all the time.更糟糕的是,我的体重一直在增加。  2.决定和做法 ①Now, I make it a rule to get up early and jog for about half an hour.  现在,我习惯早起,并慢跑大约半个小时。 ②Not only did I attach importance to a balanced diet, but I also learned abundant knowledge about keeping healthy.  我不仅重视均衡的饮食,而且我还学习了很多关于保持健康的知识。 3.产生的积极结果 ①At present, my body is building up by working out every day, which benefits my daily life greatly.目前,我每天坚持锻炼,我的身体日渐健硕,这对我的日常生活有很大的好处。  ②As a result, I was able to maintain an energetic state when faced with difficulties and pressure.  因此,在面对困难和压力时,我能够保持精力充沛的状态。 第三部分:个人感悟 ①Just as we all know, health is closely connected with what we eat.  正如我们所知道的,健康与我们吃什么密切相关。 ②However busy we are, remember to care for ourselves.  不管我们有多忙,记得要照顾好自己。 ③Only when both physical health and mental well⁃being are guaranteed can we ensure better academic performance.  只有保证身体健康和心理健康,我们才能确保更好的学习成绩。 [针对练笔] 假定你是李华,请根据以下提示给编辑写一封信,介绍你的生活方式。 1.你改变的生活习惯;　2.你改变的过程; 3.结果和感悟。 根据提示完成书信,选择恰当的句子并认真抄写在文中空白处。 Dear Editor, I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to you to share my life habit. Two years ago, ①　　　　　　　　 such as hamburger, potato chips, and cold drinks. These food contains too many calories, ②　　　　　　. To get rid of the bad habit, ③　　　　　　　　　 instead of eating out, to drink warm water, and to eat more vegetables. Besides, ④　　　　　　　　　　　　　. Now, ⑤　　　　　　　　　　　　.  Just as the saying goes, ⑥　　　　　　　　. ⑦　　　　　　　　　　　　.   Yours sincerely, Li Hua A.I’m in good shape B.you are what you eat C.I loved eating junk food D.which easily caused my obesity E.I made up my mind to eat at home F.Nothing is more important than health G.I insisted on taking exercise twice a week 答案:①~⑦　CDEGABF |写作素材储备| (一)写作佳句 Ⅰ.面临的问题 1.However, I formed a variety of unhealthy eating habits, such as ...and so on. 然而,我形成了各种不健康的饮食习惯,如……等。 2.Various factors, such as ..., contributed to my short⁃sightedness. 各种因素,如……,导致了我的近视。 Ⅱ.决定和举措 1.In order to maintain physical and mental health, I cultivated ...and took exercise on a regular basis. 为了保持身心健康,我养成了……,并定期锻炼身体。 2.To relieve stress and refresh myself, I spared time to ... 为了缓解压力和恢复精神,我抽出时间…… 3.I made up my mind to/was determined to ... 我决定…… Ⅲ.产生的积极效果 1.With their continuous encouragement, I managed to get rid of ...eventually. 在他们的不断鼓励下,我终于成功摆脱了…… 2.After that, I feel refreshed and energetic. 之后,我觉得神清气爽,精力充沛。 Ⅳ.个人感悟 1.Keeping healthy is also key to ... 保持健康也是……的关键。 2.Personally, I think it is important to ..., which is beneficial for building a strong body. 就我个人而言,我认为……很重要,这对强健身体是有益的。 (二)主题语段 1.过去不健康的生活方式 In the past, I had a really unhealthy lifestyle.I would often lie on the sofa and play video games for hours after school, which caused my eyesight to decline.I also had the habit of snacking on sweet and oily foods all the time. As a result, I gained some weight.Looking back, I realize how bad those choices were. 过去,我有一种非常不健康的生活方式。放学后,我经常会躺在沙发上连续玩几个小时的视频游戏,这导致我的视力下降。我还一直有吃甜食和油腻食物的习惯,结果我长胖了一些。回顾过去,我意识到那些选择是多么糟糕。 2.现在健康的生活方式 Now, I have adopted a much healthier lifestyle.I get up early every morning and go for a jog, which makes me feel energetic throughout the day.I also pay great attention to my diet, eating more fruits and vegetables.I spend less time on electronic devices and read books instead, which enriches my mind.I really enjoy this new healthy life. 现在,我已经采取了一种更加健康的生活方式。我每天早起去慢跑,这让我一整天都感觉精力充沛。我也非常注重我的饮食,吃更多的水果和蔬菜。我减少了在电子设备上花费的时间,转而读书,这丰富了我的思想。我真的很享受这种新的健康生活。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $