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猜押专题03 高考作文之论说文类
专题剖析上海高考英语作文命题趋势与应对策略,核心价值在于将抽象的写作要求转化为可操作的分析框架和备考路径。适用于高三师生进行专题复习与精准训练,其亮点在于紧密贴合新课标导向,深度结合命题规律,从“考查什么”、“如何考查”到“如何备考”提供了逻辑清晰的完整解决方案,助力考生在掌握格式基础上,提升思维与语用的核心竞争力。
专题依据2026 新课程标准与高考命题新要求,聚焦核心考查方向,适配“思维品质提升、语篇逻辑深化、话题贴近生活”的命题导向,结合近年一模二模及真题规律,明确写作分类、命题特征及猜押重点,助力考生精准备考。
一、题型总纲领
体 裁
议论文 / 论说文(Argumentative & Expository Writing)
结构特点
论说文的类型通常有:观点对比型、问题解决型、道理/观点论证型、说明利弊型等, 各类型的论证方式有相异之处, 每一种类型都有相对固定的论证方式及句型。
· 观点鲜明,逻辑严密:全文围绕一个中心论点展开。
· 三段式经典结构:提出问题 → 分析问题 → 解决问题 / 总结。
· 以理服人:通过讲道理、摆事实、析原因进行论证。
· 客观性与思辨性:重理性分析,轻个人情感抒发。
考查核心
就某一观点进行论证并得出合理结论的一种文体, 考查学生的语言水平和逻辑思维能力。
· 立意明确:中心论点突出,不偏题、不模糊。
· 逻辑建构:论证层次清晰,推理过程严谨。
· 思维品质:体现批判性思维、辩证分析与问题解决能力。
· 语言运用:句式多变、词汇丰富、语域正式。
· 内容充实:论据充分,不空洞,有现实意义。
二、命题聚焦
① 主题宏大但切口小:聚焦中学生成长、社会热点、价值观念。
② 任务驱动明确:常要求 “谈谈你的看法 / 理解 / 建议”。
③ 强调辩证思维:鼓励多角度分析,避免绝对化表述。
④ 紧扣时代脉搏:结合科技发展、身心健康、文化自信。
⑤ 立德树人导向:弘扬自律、坚持、责任、合作、终身学习等核心素养。
三、语篇核心特征
结构逻辑
① “总 — 分 — 总” 黄金结构
· 开头:引出现象 / 名言,亮明观点。
· 中间:分层论证(原因 / 重要性 / 利弊 / 举例)。
· 结尾:总结升华,重申观点或发出呼吁。
② 线性推进逻辑遵循:What(是什么)→ Why(为什么)→ How(怎么做) 的思维路径。
语言特点
① 正式严谨:使用书面语,避免俚语、缩写。
② 衔接紧密:大量使用连接词(However, Therefore, Furthermore),体现逻辑链。
四、2026 高频猜押话题
一、自律与时间管理(Self-discipline)
二、坚持与克服困难(Perseverance)
三、科技与生活 / 学习(Technology & Life)
四、阅读的意义 / 传统文化(Reading & Culture)
五、身心健康 / 压力管理(Health & Pressure)
五、通用写作逻辑
1. 起(开头):开门见山,确立中心论点。
2. 承(主体 1):阐述重要性 / 原因(讲道理)。
3. 转(主体 2):分析现状 / 影响 / 做法(摆事实)。
4. 合(结尾):总结全文,发出倡议或展望未来。
六、备考启示
1. 论点先行:下笔前必须确定唯一中心,防止中途跑偏。
2. 逻辑为王:阅卷老师首先看段落之间是否通顺。
3. 拒绝 “假大空”:用具体理由支撑,少喊口号。
4. 句型升级:适当使用倒装、强调、非谓语提升档次。
5. 三观要正:态度积极向上,符合主流价值观。
【晨读晚默】
上海高考议论文|万能高级模板(观点类 / 利弊类 / 建议类通用)
一、开头段(3 选 1,直接背)
1. Nowadays, there is a growing concern about 主题. Whether 议题 has aroused a heated discussion.
2. When it comes to 主题, people’s views vary from person to person.
3. Recently, 主题 has become increasingly common, which brings great influences to our daily life.
二、过渡 / 主体段(论点 + 理由,高分衔接)
总起: Personally, I firmly believe that 我的观点.理由 1: To begin with, 理由 1. That is to say, 拓展.理由 2: Furthermore, 理由 2. In other words, 拓展.补充: In addition, 补充要点.
三、结尾段(升华总结,满分句型)
1. Taking all these factors into account, we should attach great importance to 主题.
2. In conclusion, only by 做法 can we make a great difference.
3. In short, it is high time that we took action to 呼吁.
可直接背诵范文(150 词|上海高三真题难度)
题目:谈谈坚持的重要性(The Importance of Perseverance)
Nowadays, there is a growing concern about personal qualities. When it comes to success, the importance of perseverance has aroused a heated discussion.
Personally, I firmly believe that perseverance plays a key role in our life. To begin with, it helps us overcome difficulties. No matter what challenges we face, keeping trying can lead us to achieve goals. Furthermore, it teaches us to be stronger and more confident. The more we insist, the better we will become. In addition, many great people succeed because of their strong perseverance.
In conclusion, perseverance is truly important. Taking all these factors into account, we should never give up easily. Only by keeping trying can we make our dreams come true.
范文结构点评
引言段:开门见山引出话题 ——坚持与成功;用热点句型点出讨论核心,直接入题,观点背景清晰,不拖沓。
中心段:作者以总 — 分结构展开,用 To begin with / Furthermore / In addition 三层逻辑,完整论述坚持的作用、意义、例证;理由充分、层次分明,紧扣中心论点,论证有力。
结束段:回归主题,重申坚持的重要性;用总结句型 + 呼吁升华,重点突出,结构完整闭环。
范文语言点评
引言段:
1. 运用高级开头 Nowadays, there is a growing concern about… 标准议论文开篇,正式地道。
2. When it comes to… 自然过渡,长短句结合,简洁有力。
中心段:
1. 逻辑衔接词 To begin with / Furthermore / In addition 规范清晰,阅卷辨识度极高。
2. 高分句型 The more… the better… 比较状语从句,提升句式档次。
3. 用词精准:overcome difficulties, achieve goals, perseverance 书面化强,符合高考要求。
4. 长短句搭配自然:简单句陈述观点,复合句拓展解释,流畅不生硬。
结束段:
1. Taking all these factors into account 高级总结短语,替代普通 in my opinion。
2. 倒装结尾 Only by… can we… 上海高考满分标志句,提升文采与气势。
3. make our dreams come true 地道收尾,自然有力。
01:课堂典例
Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学李华,你校艺术节即将举办主题为“最美瞬间”的摄影展,捕捉“热爱生活、积极向上、全面发展”等正能量的精彩瞬间。现邀请每位同学提供自己生活中的一张照片参展,并撰写摄影作品的介绍供参观者阅读。你打算提供什么样的照片?请写一篇短文作为参展摄影作品的介绍,内容包括:
1) 对该照片的简要描述;
2) 你选择该照片参展的理由。
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02:晨读晚默素材
实战演练1
1.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below.
假设你是风华中学高三学生李华。你所在的学校“创意社团(the Creative Society)”正在策划一项面向大宁社区青年的推广活动(a promotion campaign),现有三个备选项目:
① 推广一个城市漫步主题路线(a Citywalk theme route);
② 推广一个“旧物改造”环保工作坊(an “Upcycling” environmental workshop);
③ 推广一个社区“技能交换”平台(a community “Skill Swap” platform)。
请你给社团委员会(the Society Board)写一封信,提交你的想法。信中必须包含:
1. 你选择推广的一个项目;
2. 你选择该项目的理由;
3. 你的详细推广计划。
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实战演练2
2.假设你是某社区居民李华。最近,社区计划在小区中央的绿地上修建一个儿童游乐场,但部分居民反对,认为这会带来许多问题或争议。社区居委会决定召开居民会议讨论此事,请你写一封邮件给居委会主任,表达你的意见并提出建议。
要求:
1.说明可能存在的问题或争议;
2.提出合理的解决方案并阐述理由。
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实战演练3
3. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
如今,随着中华优秀传统文化的复兴,越来越多高中计划开设传统文化相关社团(如汉服社、国画社、古诗词社等)。但有人认为,这类社团会占用学生的学术学习时间,且对大学升学没有直接帮助;也有人认为,加入传统文化社团对学生的个人成长具有重要价值。
请阐述你对“高中是否应鼓励学生参与传统文化社团”这一问题的看法,并提供具体理由和例子支撑你的观点。
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实战演练4
4.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你校体育组在校园网就高三体育课程改革广泛征求意见,并提出两种方案:一、取消统一大课间操,改为自由安排。二、调整传统课程,增设健美操(aerobics)和太极拳(Tai Chi)作为选修课程。请你在论坛上发帖谈谈自己的看法,内容包括:你赞成哪种高三体育课程改革?并简要说明理由。
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实战演练 5
5.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below.
有位著名心理学家曾说:定义我们的不是想法,而是行动。(What defines us is not our thoughts, but our actions.) 请回顾你面临某个艰难抉择的时刻,写一篇个人叙事短文,阐述你在那一刻的行动(而非意图)如何深化了你对自我的认知,内容须包括:
(1) 谈谈你对这句话的理解;
(2) 描述你曾经面临的某个艰难抉择的时刻;
(3) 阐述那一刻的行动如何深化你对自我的认知。
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猜押专题03 高考作文之论说文类
专题剖析上海高考英语作文命题趋势与应对策略,核心价值在于将抽象的写作要求转化为可操作的分析框架和备考路径。适用于高三师生进行专题复习与精准训练,其亮点在于紧密贴合新课标导向,深度结合命题规律,从“考查什么”、“如何考查”到“如何备考”提供了逻辑清晰的完整解决方案,助力考生在掌握格式基础上,提升思维与语用的核心竞争力。
专题依据2026 新课程标准与高考命题新要求,聚焦核心考查方向,适配“思维品质提升、语篇逻辑深化、话题贴近生活”的命题导向,结合近年一模二模及真题规律,明确写作分类、命题特征及猜押重点,助力考生精准备考。
一、题型总纲领
体 裁
议论文 / 论说文(Argumentative & Expository Writing)
结构特点
论说文的类型通常有:观点对比型、问题解决型、道理/观点论证型、说明利弊型等, 各类型的论证方式有相异之处, 每一种类型都有相对固定的论证方式及句型。
· 观点鲜明,逻辑严密:全文围绕一个中心论点展开。
· 三段式经典结构:提出问题 → 分析问题 → 解决问题 / 总结。
· 以理服人:通过讲道理、摆事实、析原因进行论证。
· 客观性与思辨性:重理性分析,轻个人情感抒发。
考查核心
就某一观点进行论证并得出合理结论的一种文体, 考查学生的语言水平和逻辑思维能力。
· 立意明确:中心论点突出,不偏题、不模糊。
· 逻辑建构:论证层次清晰,推理过程严谨。
· 思维品质:体现批判性思维、辩证分析与问题解决能力。
· 语言运用:句式多变、词汇丰富、语域正式。
· 内容充实:论据充分,不空洞,有现实意义。
二、命题聚焦
① 主题宏大但切口小:聚焦中学生成长、社会热点、价值观念。
② 任务驱动明确:常要求 “谈谈你的看法 / 理解 / 建议”。
③ 强调辩证思维:鼓励多角度分析,避免绝对化表述。
④ 紧扣时代脉搏:结合科技发展、身心健康、文化自信。
⑤ 立德树人导向:弘扬自律、坚持、责任、合作、终身学习等核心素养。
三、语篇核心特征
结构逻辑
① “总 — 分 — 总” 黄金结构
· 开头:引出现象 / 名言,亮明观点。
· 中间:分层论证(原因 / 重要性 / 利弊 / 举例)。
· 结尾:总结升华,重申观点或发出呼吁。
② 线性推进逻辑遵循:What(是什么)→ Why(为什么)→ How(怎么做) 的思维路径。
语言特点
① 正式严谨:使用书面语,避免俚语、缩写。
② 衔接紧密:大量使用连接词(However, Therefore, Furthermore),体现逻辑链。
四、2026 高频猜押话题
一、自律与时间管理(Self-discipline)
二、坚持与克服困难(Perseverance)
三、科技与生活 / 学习(Technology & Life)
四、阅读的意义 / 传统文化(Reading & Culture)
五、身心健康 / 压力管理(Health & Pressure)
五、通用写作逻辑
1. 起(开头):开门见山,确立中心论点。
2. 承(主体 1):阐述重要性 / 原因(讲道理)。
3. 转(主体 2):分析现状 / 影响 / 做法(摆事实)。
4. 合(结尾):总结全文,发出倡议或展望未来。
六、备考启示
1. 论点先行:下笔前必须确定唯一中心,防止中途跑偏。
2. 逻辑为王:阅卷老师首先看段落之间是否通顺。
3. 拒绝 “假大空”:用具体理由支撑,少喊口号。
4. 句型升级:适当使用倒装、强调、非谓语提升档次。
5. 三观要正:态度积极向上,符合主流价值观。
【晨读晚默】
上海高考议论文|万能高级模板(观点类 / 利弊类 / 建议类通用)
一、开头段(3 选 1,直接背)
1. Nowadays, there is a growing concern about 主题. Whether 议题 has aroused a heated discussion.
2. When it comes to 主题, people’s views vary from person to person.
3. Recently, 主题 has become increasingly common, which brings great influences to our daily life.
二、过渡 / 主体段(论点 + 理由,高分衔接)
总起: Personally, I firmly believe that 我的观点.理由 1: To begin with, 理由 1. That is to say, 拓展.理由 2: Furthermore, 理由 2. In other words, 拓展.补充: In addition, 补充要点.
三、结尾段(升华总结,满分句型)
1. Taking all these factors into account, we should attach great importance to 主题.
2. In conclusion, only by 做法 can we make a great difference.
3. In short, it is high time that we took action to 呼吁.
可直接背诵范文(150 词|上海高三真题难度)
题目:谈谈坚持的重要性(The Importance of Perseverance)
Nowadays, there is a growing concern about personal qualities. When it comes to success, the importance of perseverance has aroused a heated discussion.
Personally, I firmly believe that perseverance plays a key role in our life. To begin with, it helps us overcome difficulties. No matter what challenges we face, keeping trying can lead us to achieve goals. Furthermore, it teaches us to be stronger and more confident. The more we insist, the better we will become. In addition, many great people succeed because of their strong perseverance.
In conclusion, perseverance is truly important. Taking all these factors into account, we should never give up easily. Only by keeping trying can we make our dreams come true.
范文结构点评
引言段:开门见山引出话题 ——坚持与成功;用热点句型点出讨论核心,直接入题,观点背景清晰,不拖沓。
中心段:作者以总 — 分结构展开,用 To begin with / Furthermore / In addition 三层逻辑,完整论述坚持的作用、意义、例证;理由充分、层次分明,紧扣中心论点,论证有力。
结束段:回归主题,重申坚持的重要性;用总结句型 + 呼吁升华,重点突出,结构完整闭环。
范文语言点评
引言段:
1. 运用高级开头 Nowadays, there is a growing concern about… 标准议论文开篇,正式地道。
2. When it comes to… 自然过渡,长短句结合,简洁有力。
中心段:
1. 逻辑衔接词 To begin with / Furthermore / In addition 规范清晰,阅卷辨识度极高。
2. 高分句型 The more… the better… 比较状语从句,提升句式档次。
3. 用词精准:overcome difficulties, achieve goals, perseverance 书面化强,符合高考要求。
4. 长短句搭配自然:简单句陈述观点,复合句拓展解释,流畅不生硬。
结束段:
1. Taking all these factors into account 高级总结短语,替代普通 in my opinion。
2. 倒装结尾 Only by… can we… 上海高考满分标志句,提升文采与气势。
3. make our dreams come true 地道收尾,自然有力。
01:课堂典例
Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学李华,你校艺术节即将举办主题为“最美瞬间”的摄影展,捕捉“热爱生活、积极向上、全面发展”等正能量的精彩瞬间。现邀请每位同学提供自己生活中的一张照片参展,并撰写摄影作品的介绍供参观者阅读。你打算提供什么样的照片?请写一篇短文作为参展摄影作品的介绍,内容包括:
1) 对该照片的简要描述;
2) 你选择该照片参展的理由。
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【答案】One possible version:
This is a photo depicting a sunrise over a misty mountain peak. In the image, the sun is just peeking over the horizon, casting a warm golden glow across the sky and illuminating the rolling clouds that cling to the mountain slopes.
I chose this photo for the exhibition because it captures a breathtaking moment of natural beauty and serenity. The vibrant colors of the sunrise symbolize hope and new beginnings, reflecting the theme that the art festival seeks to promote. Additionally, the tranquil atmosphere of the scene encourages viewers to pause and appreciate the wonders of nature, fostering a sense of mindfulness and gratitude. The photo invites viewers to connect with their surroundings and find inspiration in the simple joys of everyday life. It serves as a reminder to embrace each moment with enthusiasm and a positive outlook.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,参与学校艺术节即将举办的“最美瞬间”摄影展,为参展摄影作品写一篇介绍,需涵盖简要描述和选择的理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
描绘:depict→portrary
捕捉:capture→catch, seize
象征:symbolize→represent, signify
激励某人做某事:encourage sb. to do→motivate sb. to do, inspire sb. to do
培养:foster→cultivate, develop
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This is a photo depicting a sunrise over a misty mountain peak.
拓展句:This is a photo that depicts a sunrise over a misty mountain peak.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In the image, the sun is just peeking over the horizon, casting a warm golden glow across the sky and illuminating the rolling clouds that cling to the mountain slopes (运用了现在分词短语作状语、that引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I chose this photo for the exhibition because it captures a breathtaking moment of natural beauty and serenity. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
02:晨读晚默素材
实战演练1
1.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below.
假设你是风华中学高三学生李华。你所在的学校“创意社团(the Creative Society)”正在策划一项面向大宁社区青年的推广活动(a promotion campaign),现有三个备选项目:
① 推广一个城市漫步主题路线(a Citywalk theme route);
② 推广一个“旧物改造”环保工作坊(an “Upcycling” environmental workshop);
③ 推广一个社区“技能交换”平台(a community “Skill Swap” platform)。
请你给社团委员会(the Society Board)写一封信,提交你的想法。信中必须包含:
1. 你选择推广的一个项目;
2. 你选择该项目的理由;
3. 你的详细推广计划。
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【答案】Dear Society Board,
I’m Li Hua from Class X, Grade 3. I’m writing to share my idea about the promotion campaign. I think the “Upcycling” environmental workshop is a great choice.
The reason for choosing this project is that it both protects the environment and encourages creativity. By transforming old items, we reduce waste and save resources, while also bringing people together and fostering a sense of community.
Here’s my detailed promotion plan. Firstly, set up a booth in the community center to demonstrate upcycled products and explain the concept. Secondly, organize workshops with professional designers or DIY enthusiasts teaching people to make upcycled products. Thirdly, hold an upcycling competition where people bring old items to transform. The best works will be awarded and exhibited.
I believe these activities will attract more people to upcycling and our workshop. Thank you for considering my proposal.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于建议信。要求考生从三个备选项目中选择一个并给社团委员会写信提交想法,包括选择的项目、理由及详细推广计划。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
选择:choice → option
培养:foster → cultivate
解释:explain → account for
吸引:attract → appeal to/draw
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, set up a booth in the community center to demonstrate upcycled products and explain the concept.
拓展句:Firstly, set up a booth in the community center where you can demonstrate upcycled products and explain the concept.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The reason for choosing this project is that it both protects the environment and encourages creativity. (运用了连接词that引导的表语从句)
[高分句型2] Thirdly, hold an upcycling competition where people bring old items to transform.(运用了关系副词where引导的限制性定语从句)
实战演练2
2.假设你是某社区居民李华。最近,社区计划在小区中央的绿地上修建一个儿童游乐场,但部分居民反对,认为这会带来许多问题或争议。社区居委会决定召开居民会议讨论此事,请你写一封邮件给居委会主任,表达你的意见并提出建议。
要求:
1.说明可能存在的问题或争议;
2.提出合理的解决方案并阐述理由。
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【答案】Dear Community Committee Director,
I am Li Hua, a resident of our community. I am writing to share my thoughts on the plan to build a children’s playground in the central green area.
I understand that some residents are concerned about potential issues. For example, the playground might cause noise disturbances, especially during evening hours when children are more active. Additionally, there could be safety concerns if the playground equipment is not properly maintained.
However, I believe the benefits of having a playground outweigh these concerns. To address the noise issue, we could set specific operating hours, such as from 9 a.m. to 7 p.m., to minimize disturbances to other residents. Regarding safety, the community could allocate a small budget for regular maintenance and inspections of the playground equipment. This way, we can ensure a safe and enjoyable environment for our children while also respecting the needs of all residents.
I hope my suggestions can be considered in the upcoming meeting. Thank you for your attention to this matter.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生就在中央绿地上修建儿童游乐场一事提出自己的意见并阐述理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
好处:benefit →advantage
干扰:disturbances →disruptions
优先于:outweigh →surpass
分配:allocate →distribute
2. 句式拓展:
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to share my thoughts on the plan to build a children’s playground in the central green area.
拓展句:I am writing to share my thoughts on the plan, the purpose of which is to build a children’s playground in the central green area.
【点睛】【高级句型1】Additionally, there could be safety concerns if the playground equipment is not properly maintained. (运用if引导的条件状语从句)
【高级句型2】This way, we can ensure a safe and enjoyable environment for our children while also respecting the needs of all residents. (运用while 引导的状语从句省略句)
实战演练3
3. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
如今,随着中华优秀传统文化的复兴,越来越多高中计划开设传统文化相关社团(如汉服社、国画社、古诗词社等)。但有人认为,这类社团会占用学生的学术学习时间,且对大学升学没有直接帮助;也有人认为,加入传统文化社团对学生的个人成长具有重要价值。
请阐述你对“高中是否应鼓励学生参与传统文化社团”这一问题的看法,并提供具体理由和例子支撑你的观点。
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【答案】Should High Schools Encourage Students to Participate in Traditional Culture Clubs?
In my view, high schools should definitely encourage students to participate in traditional culture clubs. Such clubs play a vital role in students’ personal growth.
Firstly, these clubs offer a precious opportunity for students to immerse themselves in the profound world of traditional culture.
Secondly, joining these clubs helps develop students’ well - rounded abilities. Take the ancient poetry club as an instance. Through reciting and analyzing poems, students can improve their language skills, aesthetic judgment, and even critical thinking.
Finally, contrary to the concern that these clubs may take up academic time, they can actually relieve students’ study pressure. After a long day of intense study, engaging in activities like painting in the Chinese painting club can be a great relaxation.
In conclusion, high-school students stand to gain a great deal from participating in traditional culture clubs, both academically and personally. Therefore, high schools should encourage and support the establishment and development of such clubs.
【导语】这是一篇观点阐述类的英语作文,要求就“高中是否应鼓励学生参与传统文化社团”这一话题发表看法。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
鼓励:encourage→ motivate
占用:take up → occupy
支持:support → back
机会:opportunity → chance
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, these clubs offer a precious opportunity for students to immerse themselves in the profound world of traditional culture.
拓展句:Firstly, these clubs, which are a bridge connecting students to the essence of traditional culture, offer a precious opportunity for students to immerse themselves in the profound world of traditional culture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Secondly, joining these clubs helps develop students' well - rounded abilities.(动名词短语“joining these clubs”作主语,)
【高分句型2】Finally, contrary to the concern that these clubs may take up academic time, they can actually relieve students' study pressure.(运用that引导的同位语从句)
实战演练4
4.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你校体育组在校园网就高三体育课程改革广泛征求意见,并提出两种方案:一、取消统一大课间操,改为自由安排。二、调整传统课程,增设健美操(aerobics)和太极拳(Tai Chi)作为选修课程。请你在论坛上发帖谈谈自己的看法,内容包括:你赞成哪种高三体育课程改革?并简要说明理由。
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【答案】
My View on PE Curriculum Reform for Senior Three Recently, our school has proposed two plans to reform the PE curriculum for Senior Three students. From my perspective, I strongly support the second plan introducing aerobics and Tai Chi as optional courses.
Firstly, although Senior Three students face heavy academic pressure, physical exercise should not be cancelled. Instead, it should be made more diverse and appealing. Traditional exercises like aerobics are energetic and can help relieve stress, while Tai Chi is gentle and helps improve concentration.
Secondly, offering choices respects students’ individual preferences. Some may prefer high-intensity workouts, while others enjoy relaxing mind-body practices. Allowing students to choose what suits them can better motivate participation.
Therefore, adjusting the original curriculum rather than simply canceling group exercises is both practical and beneficial. It keeps us active while making sports more enjoyable and personalized. I hope you will consider this suggestion.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文,要求考生在校园论坛上发帖,针对学校提出的两种高三体育课程改革方案,表明个人支持的方案并阐述理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选修课:optional courses → elective courses/ selective classes
缓解压力:relieve stress → reduce pressure/ ease tension
尊重学生的个人偏好:respect students’ individual preferences → honor students’ personal choices/ cater to students’ individual tastes
激发参与度:motivate participation → encourage engagement/ boost involvement
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Recently, our school has proposed two plans to reform the PE curriculum for Senior Three students.
拓展句:Recently, our school has put forward two distinct proposals aimed at reforming the physical education curriculum for Senior Three students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, although Senior Three students face heavy academic pressure, physical exercise should not be cancelled. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】Allowing students to choose what suits them can better motivate participation. (运用了动名词短语Allowing...作主语和what引导的宾语从句)
实战演练 5
5.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below.
有位著名心理学家曾说:定义我们的不是想法,而是行动。(What defines us is not our thoughts, but our actions.) 请回顾你面临某个艰难抉择的时刻,写一篇个人叙事短文,阐述你在那一刻的行动(而非意图)如何深化了你对自我的认知,内容须包括:
(1) 谈谈你对这句话的理解;
(2) 描述你曾经面临的某个艰难抉择的时刻;
(3) 阐述那一刻的行动如何深化你对自我的认知。
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【答案】
Actions Define Who We Are
As the psychologist put it, What defines us is not our thoughts, but our actions. I used to think good intentions were enough, but a tough choice changed my mind completely.
Last term, I found a wallet with 500 yuan and an ID card on my way home. Tempted to keep the money for my new book, I hesitated for an hour. Finally, I chose to contact the owner and return it.
This act taught me that I’m not just someone with kind thoughts, but a person who dares to turn integrity into action. It deepened my self-awareness: true character lies in acting on principles, not just having them. My action proved I could resist temptation and stay honest.
【导语】这是一篇开放性作文。要求考生回顾面临艰难抉择的时刻,阐述那一刻的行动如何深化对自我的认知,同时要谈谈对“定义我们的不是想法,而是行动”这句话的理解。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想法:thoughts→ideas
意图:intention→purpose
完全地:completely→totally
抵抗:resist→withstand
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last term, I found a wallet with 500 yuan and an ID card on my way home.
拓展句:Last term, when I was on my way home, I found a wallet which contained 500 yuan and an ID card.
【点睛】[高分句型1]As the psychologist put it, What defines us is not our thoughts, but our actions. (运用了what引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2]This act taught me that I’m not just someone with kind thoughts, but a person who dares to turn integrity into action. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和who引导的定语从句)
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