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Section Ⅵ Writing
写作项目——Write a news report
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于保护文化遗产的新闻报道。新闻报道是记叙文的一种,其特点是以事实为依据,对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。写作过程中要保持事件的客观性、真实性、准确性,语言要准确、简练、通俗易懂,不必追求过分花哨的词语和过于复杂的句型。此外,新闻报道一般不发表主观评论,常提供背景信息,多用直接引语与被动语态。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
二、学逻辑组材
1.课文的标题使用了动词短语,体现了简明精练的特点。
2.第一段中的前两句是导语,讲该文化遗产保护项目的概况,包括时间、地点、人物、事件等要素,使读者对该新闻报道的要点一目了然。导语之后是一些支撑性细节信息。主体是第二、三段,报道了莫高窟的重要的历史文化价值和制作莫高窟文物数码图像对传承历史文化,增进国际文化理解、交流与合作的重要意义。结语是第三段的结尾部分,点明推广莫高窟文化的影响。
三、学主题深化
结语部分使用了直接引语,引用一位研究者的原话,增强了文章的真实性和权威性,起到了指明意义、深化主题的作用。
四、学亮点表达
1.第一段第二句中help increase,简洁、概括地表达出此行的目的。第三句中a key stop,意为“关键的一站”,表达简洁,清晰易懂,stop为熟词生义。
2.第二段主要用时间副词long,today和程度副词even串联本段,使表达更加灵活、确切。
3.第三段第三句句首使用了as引导的非限制性定语从句,在句中意为“正如”, 段中promote, educate, safeguard, understand等动词寓意深刻,紧扣主题。连用两次动名词短语作主语Appreciating the cultural heritage,强调了文化遗产在国际交流、增进理解方面的重要作用。同时也总结了全文,升华了主旨。
针对练笔/完成句子
①As_is_known_to_all,_fish can't live without water.
众所周知,鱼儿离不开水。
②Washing_hands_regularly_is_one_of_the_effective_ways to avoid being infected by diseases.
经常洗手是避免被疾病传染的有效方法之一。
写作项目指导
Write a news report about a person or group who works to protect our cultural heritage
——写一篇个人或团队致力于保护我们文化遗产的新闻报道
第一步:构思谋篇
Part 1
·to write a title to get the reader's attention
·to introduce briefly a person or group
(who, what, when, where, and why)
Part 2
to describe what the person or group does (the facts, details, examples etc.)
Part 3
to end with a short summary
第二步:要点表达
第一部分 导语简述新闻梗概
①The post-95s team participated in the protection and development of ancient villages in Guangxi, using “black technology” to bring_ethnic_culture_to_life.
“95后”团队参与到广西古村落的保护和开发,利用 “黑科技”让民族文化“活”起来。
②Wuhan folk customs expert Liu Qianding has long been committed to promoting the history and culture of Wuhan, and has done many practical things to protect the historical and cultural buildings of Wuhan.
武汉民俗专家刘谦定长期致力于弘扬武汉历史文化,为保护武汉历史文化建筑做了很多实事。
③Dunhuang cultural conservationist Zhang Jianjun and his wife are willing to be lonely and have_been_stationed in the depths of the desert for years, guarding_together the ancient city ruins of Dafangpan City and a section of the Great Wall that is about 2 kilometers long with care and love.
敦煌文保员张建军与妻子甘于寂寞,常年驻守在大漠深处,一起用心用情守护大方盘城古城遗址和一段长约2公里的长城。
第二部分 主体阐释个人或团队致力于保护文化遗产
1.描述文化遗产的词汇
①civilization n. 文明
②traditional adj. 传统的
③unique adj. 独特的
④date_back_to 追溯到
⑤pass_down 传递
⑥the_symbol_of ……的象征
2.保护文化遗产所用的技术
①3D laser scanning technology 三维激光扫描技术
②3D digital repair technology 三维数字化修复技术
③Mobile terminal technology 移动终端技术
④Cloud platform and application services 云平台及应用服务
3.致力于保护文化遗产常用词块
①take_effective_measures 采取有效的措施
②help_repair_old_temples 帮助修理古庙
③take_photos/pictures_of 拍照
④educate the public widely 广泛教育公众
⑤show cultural relics to the citizens 向市民展示文物
⑥raise money 筹集资金
4.细节支撑句
①They travel to search_for_and_take_pictures_of cultural relics as well as old houses.
他们四处寻找文物和老房子并且拍摄照片。
②Their money and abilities are_limited.
他们的财力和能力有限。
③They will also show the public _the_worrying_situation of cultural relics by showing the pictures to them.他们也会通过向公众展示照片的形式让公众了解令人担忧的文物现状。
④They help in the form of raising money and call_on_people to take part.他们以筹集资金的形式提供帮助,并号召人们参与进来。
第三部分 结语对新闻报道进行小结
①Our cultural heritage, our national treasure. It's everyone's duty and responsibility to_protect_it.
文化遗产,我们的国宝。保护国宝,人人有责。
②All in all, we shouldn't allow_anyone_to_destroy any our cultural heritage site.
总之,我们决不允许任何人破坏任何文化遗址。
③More importantly, we must do all we can to take_an_active_part_in protecting our cultural heritage.
更重要的是,我们要竭尽所能,积极投身于保护文化遗产。
[随堂针对练笔]
文化遗产面临着各种风险,有很多因素影响着文化遗产。请以“主题句+支撑句”的模式写一个60词左右的片段。
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参考范文:
There are many factors that affect cultural heritage. First, natural forces threaten cultural heritage. Long-term forces of nature, such as wind, water and temperature, can gradually damage the heritage. Second, another important factor is human activities, which can do a lot of damage to cultural heritage and nature. What's more, the large number of tourists also counts a lot.
写作素材储备
(一)新闻报道常用开头句
①Yesterday afternoon, Mr Liu as well as his team was working to ....
昨天下午,刘先生和他的团队正在工作……
②Last week witnessed our ... project in our city.
上周见证了我们城市……的项目。
③A/An ... exhibition was successfully held in our school today.
今天我校成功举办了……展览。
④Last Sunday, Senior One students from Hongxing High School went to ..., located in the downtown area of our city, to appreciate a/an ... exhibition.上周日,来自红星高中的高一学生去了……,位于我市的市中心,去欣赏……展览。
⑤In order to encourage students to ..., our school organized a/an ... activity on October 30th.
为了鼓励学生……,在10月30日,我们学校组织了一次……的活动。
(二)新闻报道常用结尾句
①Not only did they realize the importance of ..., but they also found the ways to ....
他们不仅意识到……的重要性,而且还找到了……的方法。
②... was a great success. It not only enriched ..., but also helped us learn more about ....
……取得了巨大的成功。它不仅丰富了……,也帮助我们更多地了解……
③With their enthusiastic support and active participation, ... was undoubtedly a success.
在他们的热情支持和积极参与下,……无疑是成功的。
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