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北师大版 必修第二册
UNIT 6 THE ADMIRABLE
写作课件——教考衔接
本单元主题是“杰出人物”,属于人与社会的主题语境。高考在设题时通常以征文投稿、推荐信、告知信、新闻报道、演讲稿等形式考查著名人物的介绍、身边人物的介绍或个人介绍等内容,引导学生了解中外各行各业优秀人物的精神品质,学习他们的工匠精神,学会做人做事,发现自己的人生价值,树立正确的人生观与价值观。
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应用文写作
主题:杰出人物
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写作任务
你们学校正举办主题为“用英语讲中国科学家的故事”的征文活动。请你以“一位中国著名科学家”为题写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.人物简介及其成就;
2.评价。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
A famous scientist in China
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PART
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第一部分
引出人物
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【头脑风暴】
人物介绍类写作引出人物的常用表达:
When it comes to the scientists in China that are widely acknowledged, I have to mention Yuan Longping.
2. 在中国令人钦佩的科学家中,袁隆平是值得我尊敬的一位。(定语从句)
3. 至于中国令人钦佩的科学家,那一定是袁隆平。(as for)
1. 说到广泛认可的中国科学家,我不得不提到袁隆平。(when it comes to)
Among the admirable scientists in China, Yuan Longping is the one that deserves my respect.
As for the admirable scientists in China, it must be Yuan Longping.
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PART
02
第二部分
介绍人物的主要经历
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要点 :介绍科学家的早期生平
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1. 随着科技的发展
2. 配备多媒体
3. 致力于研究……
【头脑风暴】
with the development of technology
be equipped with the multimedia
有哪些词块可以表达科学家的生平?
袁隆平1930年生于北京。他在大学里主修农学。1953年毕业后,他致力于研究杂交水稻。
【连词成句】
Yuan Longping was born in 1930 in Beijing. He majored in agriculture at college. After graduating in 1953, he was devoted to studying hybrid rice.
be devoted to studying...
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【从教材中学】
1. The reason why this was difficult was that the team had limited
resources.
2. It was only due to the ongoing support of his wife, parents and
friends that he eventually found the will to live again.
3. He also flew the flags of China and the United Nations, symbolising
China’s wish to explore and use space peacefully.
要点 :介绍科学家的研究过程和结果
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The reason why he did so was that he saw many people suffer from hunger.
It was through his constant efforts that he eventually developed the first hybrid rice
【到写作中用】
1.他这样做的原因是他看到许多人遭受饥饿。
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, which greatly increased the output of rice,
.
要点 :介绍科学家的研究过程和结果
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making great contributions to the world
正是通过他的不断努力,他终于研制出了第一代杂交水稻,大大提高了水稻的产量,为世界作出了巨大的贡献。
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PART
03
第三部分
对人物的评价
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【到写作中用】
遗憾的是,袁隆平在2021年去世了,但他仍然作为一位伟大的科学
家被人们铭记。
【从教材中学】
Sadly, on 10 October, 2004, Christopher Reeve passed away. He will
always be remembered as a superhero — in more ways than one.
Sadly, Yuan Longping passed away in 2021, but he is still remembered as a great scientist.
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PART
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连句成篇
运用过渡与衔接,将上述语句连接成篇
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A famous scientist in China
Among the admirable scientists in China, Yuan Longping is the one that deserves my respect.
Yuan Longping was born in 1930 in Beijing. He majored in agriculture at college. After graduating in 1953, he was devoted to studying hybrid rice. The reason why he did so was that he saw many people suffer from hunger. It was through his constant efforts that he eventually developed the first hybrid rice, which greatly increased the output of rice, making great contributions to the world.
Sadly, Yuan Longping passed away in 2021, but he is still remembered as a great scientist.
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人物的外表和品质
1. a middle-aged man 一个中年男人
2. a beautiful girl with curly brown hair 有着卷曲的棕色头发的漂亮女孩
3. a handsome young man usually wearing a bright smile
一个通常带着灿烂笑容的英俊的年轻人
4. have an inquiring mind 爱动脑筋
5. Nancy has an athletic build, fair skin and straight black hair.
南希有着运动员般的身材、白皙的皮肤和黑色的直发。
6. Not only is he outgoing, but he also has a strong sense of humor.
他不仅性格外向,而且很有幽默感。
素材积累
人物的生平和成就
1. be born in ... 出生在……
2. at the age of five 在五岁时
3. major in 主修……专业
4. gain scholarship 获得奖学金
5. get a master's degree 获得硕士学位
6. graduate from 毕业于
7. be experienced in 在……方面有经验
8. be devoted to 致力于,献身于
9. Tu Youyou was born in Zhejiang Province, China, on 30 December, 1930.
1930年12月30日,屠呦呦出生于中国浙江省。
素材积累
对人物的评价
1. be regarded as 被认为是
2. be honoured for 因……而受到尊敬
3. make contributions to 对……做出贡献
4. a qualified teacher 一名合格的教师
5. As a teacher, she is kind, helpful and patient, so all of us like her.
作为一名教师,她善良、乐于助人且有耐心,因此我们都喜欢她。
6. As a monitor, he is hard-working and warm-hearted, who sets a good
example for us.
作为班长,他勤奋、热心,为我们树立了好榜样。
素材积累
7. Even though Tu Youyou is not interested in fame,
she has become a scientist whose work is
internationally renowned.
尽管屠呦呦对名声不感兴趣,但她已经成为一位国际知名的科学家。
8. Li Hua, considered to be optimistic and versatile, is liked by both his
classmates and teachers.
李华被认为是一个乐观和多才多艺的人,他的同学和老师都喜欢他。
9. Today Madame Curie is remembered not only as a great scientist but also
for her determination and courage.
今天人们怀念居里夫人,不仅因为她是一位伟大的科学家,而且因
为她的决心和勇气。
素材积累
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