内容正文:
成长中的痛苦与收获
Growing pains and gains
Review
What happened?
How did it make her feel?
What did she do?
What does she learn from it?
How does the writer write about her experience from pain to gain?
Organise your ideas by answering the following questions.
1. What happened?
She failed to join the basketball team because she wasn’t tall enough.
I got a bad grade.
I failed to pass the exam.
I didn’t win a competition.
...
Organise your ideas by answering the following questions.
I felt very bad.
I was so disappointed.
It made me want to cry.
My heart felt heavy.
I was scared to try again.
...
2. How did it make her feel?
Organise your ideas by answering the following questions.
3. What did she do?
a turning point
(转折点)
action
the result
a friend’s / a teacher’s / parents’ advice;
a book / movie;
...
4. What does she learn from it?
I understand that...
Failure is a part of life.
Organise your ideas by answering the following questions.
I... to take my mind off things. / I kept practising. / I tried... instead.
In the end, I... / As a result, I... / It ended in...
Complete the chart by yourself.
I failed to.../ I coudn't...
I was hurt by .../ It was painful because...
I... to take my mind off things. / I kept practising.
/ I tried... instead.
Now I understand that failure is a part of life. /...
Write your passage.
Answer all the questions in Step 1.
Use the words and expressions from the reading passage.
Give your opinion about failure.
Sample
Last year, I failed to join the school band. During the tryout, I was so nervous that a big mistake was made. Everyone looked at me and my face turned red.
I was hurt by my failure. It was painful because I knew I could play well. I was just too shy to show my true ability.
However, I didn’t want to give up, so I practised harder and performed in different public settings. Slowly, I got over my fear of the stage. I also started to think about failure in a different way. It became a valuable lesson and made me stronger. Later, I joined the band successfully.
Now I understand that failure is a part of life. It helps us improve. Don’t be afraid of it!
Writing task
人生难免遇到挫折,但往往正是看似糟糕的时刻,藏着转向美好的契机。假设你是李华,你正在参加英语校报主题为“My growth story”的征稿活动。请根据以下相关信息,结合自身体验,分享一次你难忘的克服困难的经历。
注意:
1.语句通顺、语言连续。
2.语句连贯,词数80左右。
3.不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
写作内容:1. 遇到的困难(growing pains)
2.你的解决办法(solutions)
3.你最终的收获(gains)
审主题
人称
Writing steps
审体裁
My growth story
记叙文
一般过去时为主
第一人称
时态
审要点
遇到什么困难或挑战,解决办法是什么,最终收获了什么
Beginning
Ending
Writing structure
Body
the meaning of growing up 成长的意义
my growth story 我的成长故事
lessons 收获的教训
列提纲
➢What challenge did you meet?
➢ How did you feel about it?
➢What did you do?
➢What do you learn from it?
1.成长从来都不是一件容易的事情。(引用课文句子)
Growing up will never be an easy thing.
Beginning: the meaning of growing up 成长的意义
2.但我们需要以正确的方式去面对这些挑战。(引用课文句子)
But we need to look at challenges in the right way.
3.我想与你们分享一下我的成长故事。(I'd like to do sth.)
I'd like to share my growth story with you.
Body: my growth story 我的成长故事
4.上学期,一场重要的跑步比赛在我学校举办。(被动语态)
5.作为一名跑步爱好者,我报名参加了这次比赛。(Sign up for)
6.为了赢得这场比赛,我每天都练习跑步。(to do表目的; practise doing sth.)
7.然而,我在比赛中失败了。(fail in)
Last term, an important running race was held in my school.
As a running lover, I signed up for the race.
To win the race, I practised running every day.
However, I failed in the race.
Body: my growth story 我的成长故事
8.那天我感觉非常糟糕。
9.我的朋友们鼓励我继续跑步。( encourage sb. to do sth.; keep doing sth.)
10.那一刻,我意识到跑步对我来说是一件重要的事情。
11.所以我决定继续努力尝试。(decide to do sth.)
I felt really bad that day.
My friends encouraged me to keep running.
To win the race, I practised running every day.
So I decided to keep trying.
Body: my growth story 我的成长故事
12.从那以后,情况发生了很大的变化,我也赢得了很多比赛。(完成时)
Since then, things have changed a lot, and I have won many races.
Ending: lessons 收获的教训
13.从这次经历中,我明白了失败是生活的一部分。(be a part of)
14.回首看到自己所经历的痛苦与收获,真是太棒了。(it’'s great to do sth.)
15.实际上,生活正等着我们,伴随着很多惊喜。
From this experience, I have learned that failure is a part of life.
Actually, life is waiting for us with many surprises.
It's great to look back and see my pains and gains.
My growth story
Growing up will never be an easy thing. But we need to look at challenges in the right way. I'd like to share my growth story with you.
Last term, an important running race was held in my school. As a running lover, I signed up for the race. To win the race, I practised running every day. However, I failed in the race. I felt really bad that day. My friends encouraged me to keep running. To win the race, I practised running every day. So I decided to keep trying. Since then, things have changed a lot, and I have won many races.
From this experience, I have learned that failure is a part of life. It's great to look back and see my pains and gains. Actually, life is waiting for us with many surprises.
My growth story
Growing up will never be an easy thing.
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