Unit 4 The Wonders of Nature（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材人教版八年级下册

本讲义聚焦人教版八年级下册Unit 4“自然奇观广告写作”核心知识点，系统梳理从审题（明确体裁、内容、语言、结构）到写作框架（开头引入、中间特色描述、结尾呼吁）的完整脉络，提供词汇句型素材库、教材原句引用及基础与提升版范文等学习支架，助力学生构建广告写作能力。 该资料以“语言能力”为核心，通过丰富的自然景观词汇（如“breathtaking”“lush”）和功能句型（如开头引入、景色描述句式）提升表达准确性；融入青海湖、庐山等中国自然奇观及尼亚加拉大瀑布等世界景观，渗透“文化意识”，增强家国情怀与跨文化认知。课中辅助教师高效教学，课后通过变式训练（如邮件推荐、演讲稿写作）帮助学生巩固提升，查漏补缺。

Unit 4 The Wonders of Nature 同步写作课讲义-人教版八年级下册 话题解读 本单元教材写作情境为“为青海湖或其他自然景观写一则广告”，属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“自然生态”这一主题群,涉及子主题有“中国主要城市及家乡的地理位置与自然环境;世界主要国家的地理位置与自然景观;世界不同地区的生态特征”等。常见的写作任务是描述某个国家或地区的自然景观。 体裁多为书信等应用文或说明文。 写作任务 审题指导 （1）明确体裁：广告，语气需活泼、有吸引力，避免过于生硬的说明，结尾可加入呼吁性语句，引导读者前往； （2）明确核心内容：必须围绕“自然奇观”展开，不能涉及人造景观（如游乐园、人造公园），需突出自然形成的特点； （3）明确语言要求：使用八年级下册Unit 3相关词汇和句式，语法正确，句式多样，避免重复，字数控制在80-120词（贴合中考书面表达要求）； （4）明确结构逻辑：先引出自然奇观的名称和位置，再介绍其特色，最后发出邀请，层次清晰。 主题内涵 本话题的核心内涵是“用英语精准、生动地介绍自然奇观，传递其独特魅力，完成广告的宣传目的”。自然奇观涵盖自然形成的各类景观，无需刻意追求“世界级”，可选取身边的自然景观（如本地山脉、湖泊）或知名自然奇观（如桂林山水、科罗拉多大峡谷），重点突出其视觉特点、自然风貌、独特价值（如生态价值、观赏价值），同时语言需符合广告的语气——亲切、有吸引力，既能传递信息，又能激发读者的兴趣，兼顾实用性和语言表达的规范性。 1. 文体：应用文 2.人称：第二人称 3.时态：一般过去时 写作框架 ◆开头段 开头引入：用简洁的句子点明奇观名称和位置，常用“Have you ever been to...?”“There is a beautiful natural wonder in...”等句式。 Do you want to visit an unusual place full of natural wonders and a long history? ◆中间段 中间主体：介绍奇观特色，可从景色、感官体验（视觉、听觉）等角度展开，常用“ It is famous for...”“You can see...”“In different seasons, it looks different...”等句式。 1.It’s famous for its unique geological features，with lots of strange rocks and beautiful valleys. 2.Located in Jiujiang City，Jiangxi Province，Mount Lushan is a UNESCO World Heritage Site. 3.When you visit it，you can hike along the mountain paths，enjoying the fresh air and wonderful views. ◆结尾段 用亲切的语气发出邀请，常用“Come and visit...”“You will have a great time here.”“Don’t miss it!”等句式。 素材宝库 词汇 （1）自然奇观名称类 natural wonder 自然奇观；river 河流；mountain 山脉；waterfall 瀑布；canyon 峡谷；lake 湖泊；forest 森林；hill 小山；cave 洞穴；island 岛屿；spring 泉水；valley 山谷；rock 岩石；beach 海滩；volcano 火山；iceberg 冰山；gorge 峡谷；wetland 湿地；desert 沙漠；rainforest 雨林。 （2）景色描述类 beautiful 美丽的；fantastic 神奇的；wonderful 美妙的；amazing 令人惊叹的；clear 清澈的；green 翠绿的；blue 湛蓝的；white 洁白的；colorful 色彩斑斓的；magnificent 壮丽的；great 壮观的；charming 迷人的；serene 宁静的；breathtaking 令人窒息的；pristine 纯净的；lush 郁郁葱葱的；sparkling 闪闪发光的；misty 有薄雾的；sunny 晴朗的；cloudy 多云的。 例句1：The waterfall has a breathtaking view, especially in the morning. 译文：这处瀑布景色令人窒息，尤其是在早晨。 例句2：The forest is lush and green all year round. 译文：这片森林一年四季都郁郁葱葱。 （3）动作与体验类 visit 参观；travel 旅行；explore 探索；enjoy 欣赏；view 观赏；take a trip 旅行；go hiking 徒步；go boating 乘船；take photos 拍照；experience 体验；discover 发现；relax 放松；breathe 呼吸；walk 散步；climb 攀登；swim 游泳；camp 露营；admire 赞美；feel 感受；record 记录。 （4）其他相关词汇 famous 著名的；well-known 众所周知的；popular 受欢迎的；special 特别的；unique 独特的；rare 稀有的；natural 自然的；beautifully 美丽地；amazingly 令人惊叹地；around 周围；near 附近；in 在内；on 在上面；under 在下面；best 最好的；perfect 完美的；wonderfully 美妙地；together 一起；alone 独自。 句型 （1）开头引入句式 1. Have you ever been to a wonderful natural wonder? 译文：你去过一处美妙的自然奇观吗？ 2. There is a famous natural wonder in... 译文：在……有一处著名的自然奇观。 3. I want to introduce a beautiful natural wonder to you. 译文：我想给你介绍一处美丽的自然奇观。 4. If you are looking for a great place to travel, come to... 译文：如果你正在寻找一个好的旅行地点，就来……吧。 5. One of the most amazing natural wonders in the world is... 译文：世界上最令人惊叹的自然奇观之一是…… 6. Do you know a natural wonder that is worth visiting? 译文：你知道一处值得参观的自然奇观吗？ 7. Let me tell you about a fantastic natural wonder. 译文：让我来告诉你一处神奇的自然奇观。 8. Located in..., there is a beautiful natural wonder. 译文：位于……的地方，有一处美丽的自然奇观。 （2）景色描述句式 1. It is famous for its beautiful scenery. 译文：它以其美丽的景色而闻名。 2. The... is so clear that you can see... 译文：……如此清澈，你能看到…… 3. In spring, the mountains are covered with green trees. 译文：春天，山上覆盖着绿树。 4. The waterfall looks like a white curtain from far away. 译文：从远处看，瀑布像一道白色的帘子。 5. You can see colorful flowers everywhere in the forest. 译文：森林里到处都能看到五颜六色的花。 6. The lake is as blue as the sky. 译文：这片湖像天空一样蓝。 7. The scenery here is so beautiful that it attracts many visitors. 译文：这里的景色如此美丽，吸引了许多游客。 8. When the sun rises, the mountain looks golden. 译文：当太阳升起时，这座山看起来金灿灿的。 9. The air here is fresh and clean. 译文：这里的空气清新又干净。 10. There are many different kinds of plants and animals in this natural wonder. 译文：这处自然奇观里有许多不同种类的动植物。 11. The rock formations here are very unique and amazing. 译文：这里的岩层非常独特和令人惊叹。 12. In winter, the waterfall freezes and looks like a crystal. 译文：冬天，瀑布结冰，看起来像一块水晶。 （3）动作与体验句式 1. You can take a boat trip on the river. 译文：你可以在河上乘船游览。 2. We can go hiking in the mountains on weekends. 译文：我们可以在周末去山里徒步。 3. It’s a good place to relax and enjoy the nature. 译文：这是一个放松和欣赏自然的好地方。 4. You can take many beautiful photos here. 译文：你可以在这里拍很多漂亮的照片。 5. Many people come here to experience the natural beauty. 译文：很多人来这里体验自然之美。 6. You can climb the mountain and enjoy the view from the top. 译文：你可以爬山，欣赏山顶的景色。 7. It’s interesting to explore the cave with your friends. 译文：和你的朋友一起探索洞穴很有趣。 8. You can breathe the fresh air and feel the peace of nature. 译文：你可以呼吸新鲜空气，感受自然的宁静。 （4）结尾呼吁句式 1. Come and visit this amazing natural wonder! 译文：来参观这处神奇的自然奇观吧！ 2. Don’t miss this beautiful place. 译文：不要错过这个美丽的地方。 3. You will have a great time here. 译文：你会在这里度过一段美好的时光。 4. I believe you will love this natural wonder. 译文：我相信你会喜欢这处自然奇观。 5. Come with your family and friends, and enjoy the beauty of nature together. 译文：和你的家人朋友一起来，一起欣赏自然之美吧。 6. It’s worth visiting once in your life. 译文：这值得你一生去参观一次。 7. Welcome to this wonderful natural wonder! 译文：欢迎来到这处美妙的自然奇观！ 名言 1.The beauty of the natural world lies in the details.自然界的美，藏在每一 个微小的细节里。 2.If you truly love nature，you will find beauty everywhere.真正热爱自然 的人，眼中处处是风景。 参考范文 Do you love the beauty of nature? Do you want to explore ①one of the most amazing natural wonders of the world? If so，come to Qinghai Lake! ②Located in Qinghai Province，China，Qinghai Lake is one of the most wonderful salt lakes you can ever visit. It covers about 4,340 square kilometres，making it the largest lake in China. The water here is clear and blue. You can photograph lovely wildlife，like special fish and beautiful birds,③as much as you can.You can also visit the peaceful islands around the lake. Ride a bike or a horse along the banks ④bit by bit，and you’ll feel the gentle wind and the beauty of nature all around. ⑤Only if you come to Qinghai Lake will you understand why it’s a dream place for nature lovers. Come and be amazed by its beauty! 教材原句 ①【Section B 1b】To most people，Mount Qomolangma is one of the greatest wonders of the world.（one of the…natural wonders of the world 世界最……的自然景观之一） ②【Section B 2c】Located in Siberia，Russia，Lake Baikal is one of the world’s most famous lakes.（located in…坐落于……） ③【Section A 4c】It went on for as far as the eye could see. （as…as one can 尽可能） ④【Section B 1b】Bit by bit,the climbers pulled themselves up…（bit by bit一点一点地） ⑤【Section B 1b】…and that is only if they survive the terrible conditions first.（only if 只有在……的时候） 范例2： 庐山是一座承载着千年人文底蕴的千古名山。庐山是文人墨客的 “灵感源泉” 和佛道文化的 “交融圣地”，是中华大地上的 “山水诗摇篮”。请根据下面信息写一篇80词左右的英语短文介绍庐山。 What:Mount Lushan，a UNESCO World Heritage Site Where:in Jiujiang City，Jiangxi Province Special facts:famous for its unique geological features;many rare plants and animals Things to do:hike,take photos,experience the local culture 审题指导 1.应用文 2.第二人称 3.一般过去时 优秀例文 【基础版】 Do you love amazing mountains? Do you want to visit an unusual place? If so，visit Mount Lushan! Located in Jiujiang City，Jiangxi Province，Mount Lushan is a UNESCO World Heritage Site. It’s famous for its unique geological features.Also，there are many rare plants and cute animals living here. Mount Lushan is a living “treasure”! When you visit it，you can hike along the mountain paths.Take photos of the amazing scenery—like the clouds，waterfalls and special rocks. And you can experience the local culture，taste delicious local food，and learn the stories about the mountain. For those who love nature and culture，visiting Mount Lushan is a good choice! 【提升版】 Do you love amazing mountains?Do you want to visit an unusual place full of natural wonders and a long history? If so，visit Mount Lushan! Located in Jiujiang City，Jiangxi Province，Mount Lushan is a UNESCO World Heritage Site and one of the most wonderful places to explore.It’s famous for its unique geological features，with lots of strange rocks and beautiful valleys.Also，there are many rare plants and cute animals living here. Mount Lushan is a living “treasure”!When you visit it，you can hike along the mountain paths，enjoying the fresh air and wonderful views.Take photos of the amazing scenery—like the clouds，waterfalls and special rocks. And you can experience the local culture，taste delicious local food，and learn the stories about the mountain from the friendly local people. For those who love nature and culture，visiting Mount Lushan is a good choice! 写作拓展 变式提升训练 A Natural Wonder That Impressed Me (令我印象深刻的自然奇观) 写作要求 1 . 围绕一处自然奇观展开，明确说明该奇观的名称、地理位置及核心特征 (如高度、面积、独特景观等)。 2. 结合单元主题 "探索自然"，重点描述该奇观的神奇之处及给你的感受，可适当提及人类与自然的联系。 3 . 正确使用比较级、最高级形容词 / 副词及大数表达等单元语法知识，语言生动，逻辑清晰。 3. 字数不少于 80 词，文中不得出现真实人名、校名。 写作指导 结构设计：采用 "奇观介绍 - 细节描述 - 感受感悟" 的三段式结构，先明确奇观基本信息，再聚焦其独特性，最后升华对自然的认知。 内容要点 基础信息：明确自然奇观的类型 (如山脉、河流、沙漠、湖泊等)、位置及关键数据 (如珠穆朗玛峰高 8848.86 米、撒哈拉沙漠面积约 900 万平方公里)，体现大数表达的单元重点。 特色描述：结合感体验或科学事实，描述奇观的独特之处 (如 "峰顶常年积雪"" 河水呈黄色因携带泥沙 ""深海动物能发光")，可使用比较级 / 最高级 (如 "the highest mountain""the deepest trench")。 情感与联系：阐述奇观带来的震撼感受 (如 "感到人类的渺小"" 赞叹自然的伟大 ")，可提及人类对自然的探索 (如中国" 奋斗者 "号深潜) 或保护的重要性，呼应单元" 人与自然连接 " 的主题。 语言技巧 词汇运用：合理使用单元核心词汇 (如 "wonder、measurement、surface、depth、 survive、attract") 及短语 (如 "natural wonder、take up、be located in")。 句式变化：运用 "How + 形容词"(如 "How high is it?") 提问引出特征，用 "not only...but also..." 连接观的多重价值，增强表达丰富性。 逻辑衔接：用 "first、besides、most importantly" 等词串联信息，使描述条理清晰。 写作模板 ◆开头段Among all the natural wonders in the world,_(自然奇观名称，如 "Mount Qomolangma""the Great Barrier Reef") impresses me most. It is located in (地理位置，如 "the border of China and Nepal""northeastern Australia") and is famous as(核心称号，如 "the highest mountain in the world""the largest coral reef system"). ◆中间段This wonder is full of amazing facts. First, its_(特征 1，如 "height""area") is surprising-it reaches_(具体数据，如"8,848.86 metres high""345,000 square kilometres"). Besides, it has unique (特征 2，如 "landscape""living things"):_(具体描述，如"the peak is always covered with snow""thousands of colourful fish live in the clear water"). What's more, (人类与自然的联系，如 "Chinese climbers reached its top in 1960""scientists are working to protect it from pollution") shows our connection with nature. ◆结尾段Visiting or learning about this wonder makes me feel_(感受，如 "small but curious"). It teaches me that nature is both powerful and fragile. We should (行动倡议，如 "respect and protect natural wonders") so that future generations can also enjoy their beauty. Nature's wonders are gifts we should cherish forever. 范文 A Natural Wonder That Impressed Me Among all the natural wonders in the world, Mount Qomolangma impresses me most. It is located on the border of China and Nepal and is famous as the highest mountain in the world. Learning about it makes me feel the magic of nature deeply. This wonder is full of amazing facts. First, its height is surprising--it reaches 8,848.86 metres, and scientists say it is still growing taller Besides, it has harsh but unique conditions: temperatures can drop to -30 degrees, and climbers have to fight against thin air and changeable weather What's more, Chinese climbers made history here-they first reached the top from the northern "Death Road" in 1960 and measured its height accurately in 2020. Their spirit of exploration inspires me a lot. Visiting Mount Qomolangma is my dream. It teaches me that nature is both powerful and respectful. We should protect such wonders so that they can keep amazing the world. After all, nature's greatness lies not only in its size but also in the connections it builds with humans. 写作训练 1．假设你是王浩宇，你们班的交换生 Tim想在暑假参观一处自然奇观。请你根据下列内容提示，用英语写一封80词左右的邮件，向他推荐世界上最深的峡谷——雅鲁藏布大峡谷。邮件的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 长度：约505千米 深度：约6千米(最深处) 美誉：植物博物馆 the plant museum;动物王国 the animal kingdom 最佳旅游时间：春、夏 Dear Tim, I’m writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in China—the Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Haoyu 大自然中有许多壮丽的自然景观，位于中国东北吉林省的长白山以其独特的火山地貌和纯净风光闻名，人们可以在冬天看到银装素裹的世界，在夏天看到漫山遍野的树和花，这个自然界的瑰宝使人们沉浸其中。请你以“The Beautiful Changbai Mountain”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍长白山的魅力。 要求:(1)内容完整，语句通顺，语法正确； (2)文中需包含长白山的地理位置、主要特色及你的感受； (3)词数80-100左右。 提示：自然景观 natural landscape；火山 volcanic mountain；火山口 volcanic crater；天池 Tianchi；茂密的森林 dense forest；温泉 hot spring The Beautiful Changbai Mountain                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             _________________________________________________                                                                                                                                                                                                  ___________________________________ 要求） 请根据下面表格中的信息, 以The Niagara Falls为题写一篇100词左右的短文。 Where northeast of North America Description two parts： Horseshoe Falls: the larger part is in Canada, 56 metres in height, 675 metres in width； American Falls: the smaller part is in America, over 50 metres in height, more than 300 metres in width Evaluation one of the greatest wonders in the world, source of hydroelectric（水力发电的） power The Niagara Falls ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 假定你是李华，你校英语社团举办以“The Splendid Land of My Motherland”为话题的演讲比赛，请你根据以下要点并结合自身经历写一篇英语演讲稿。 要点：(1)What natural wonder would you like to introduce?           (2)What was your experience of visiting this natural wonder?           (3)What do you think of this natural wonder? 注意：(1)短文须包括要点中所有信息，可适当发挥；           (2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；           (3)词数80个左右。                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 桂林山水甲天下。以其壮美山水而闻名的广西桂林，每年都会吸引大量游客。请根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的英语文章，向游客介绍这座城市。 Location in the south of China History over 2,000 years Weather not too hot in summer or too cold in winter People warm and friendly Attraction green mountains and clean waters, the Elephant Trunk Hill , the Lijiang River Food Guilin rice noodles Culture Gui Opera                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               __________________________________________________                                                                                                                                                                                                                           7 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 4 The Wonders of Nature 同步写作课讲义-人教版八年级下册 话题解读 本单元教材写作情境为“为青海湖或其他自然景观写一则广告”，属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“自然生态”这一主题群,涉及子主题有“中国主要城市及家乡的地理位置与自然环境;世界主要国家的地理位置与自然景观;世界不同地区的生态特征”等。常见的写作任务是描述某个国家或地区的自然景观。 体裁多为书信等应用文或说明文。 写作任务 审题指导 （1）明确体裁：广告，语气需活泼、有吸引力，避免过于生硬的说明，结尾可加入呼吁性语句，引导读者前往； （2）明确核心内容：必须围绕“自然奇观”展开，不能涉及人造景观（如游乐园、人造公园），需突出自然形成的特点； （3）明确语言要求：使用八年级下册Unit 3相关词汇和句式，语法正确，句式多样，避免重复，字数控制在80-120词（贴合中考书面表达要求）； （4）明确结构逻辑：先引出自然奇观的名称和位置，再介绍其特色，最后发出邀请，层次清晰。 主题内涵 本话题的核心内涵是“用英语精准、生动地介绍自然奇观，传递其独特魅力，完成广告的宣传目的”。自然奇观涵盖自然形成的各类景观，无需刻意追求“世界级”，可选取身边的自然景观（如本地山脉、湖泊）或知名自然奇观（如桂林山水、科罗拉多大峡谷），重点突出其视觉特点、自然风貌、独特价值（如生态价值、观赏价值），同时语言需符合广告的语气——亲切、有吸引力，既能传递信息，又能激发读者的兴趣，兼顾实用性和语言表达的规范性。 1. 文体：应用文 2.人称：第二人称 3.时态：一般过去时 写作框架 ◆开头段 开头引入：用简洁的句子点明奇观名称和位置，常用“Have you ever been to...?”“There is a beautiful natural wonder in...”等句式。 Do you want to visit an unusual place full of natural wonders and a long history? ◆中间段 中间主体：介绍奇观特色，可从景色、感官体验（视觉、听觉）等角度展开，常用“ It is famous for...”“You can see...”“In different seasons, it looks different...”等句式。 1.It’s famous for its unique geological features，with lots of strange rocks and beautiful valleys. 2.Located in Jiujiang City，Jiangxi Province，Mount Lushan is a UNESCO World Heritage Site. 3.When you visit it，you can hike along the mountain paths，enjoying the fresh air and wonderful views. ◆结尾段 用亲切的语气发出邀请，常用“Come and visit...”“You will have a great time here.”“Don’t miss it!”等句式。 素材宝库 词汇 （1）自然奇观名称类 natural wonder 自然奇观；river 河流；mountain 山脉；waterfall 瀑布；canyon 峡谷；lake 湖泊；forest 森林；hill 小山；cave 洞穴；island 岛屿；spring 泉水；valley 山谷；rock 岩石；beach 海滩；volcano 火山；iceberg 冰山；gorge 峡谷；wetland 湿地；desert 沙漠；rainforest 雨林。 （2）景色描述类 beautiful 美丽的；fantastic 神奇的；wonderful 美妙的；amazing 令人惊叹的；clear 清澈的；green 翠绿的；blue 湛蓝的；white 洁白的；colorful 色彩斑斓的；magnificent 壮丽的；great 壮观的；charming 迷人的；serene 宁静的；breathtaking 令人窒息的；pristine 纯净的；lush 郁郁葱葱的；sparkling 闪闪发光的；misty 有薄雾的；sunny 晴朗的；cloudy 多云的。 例句1：The waterfall has a breathtaking view, especially in the morning. 译文：这处瀑布景色令人窒息，尤其是在早晨。 例句2：The forest is lush and green all year round. 译文：这片森林一年四季都郁郁葱葱。 （3）动作与体验类 visit 参观；travel 旅行；explore 探索；enjoy 欣赏；view 观赏；take a trip 旅行；go hiking 徒步；go boating 乘船；take photos 拍照；experience 体验；discover 发现；relax 放松；breathe 呼吸；walk 散步；climb 攀登；swim 游泳；camp 露营；admire 赞美；feel 感受；record 记录。 （4）其他相关词汇 famous 著名的；well-known 众所周知的；popular 受欢迎的；special 特别的；unique 独特的；rare 稀有的；natural 自然的；beautifully 美丽地；amazingly 令人惊叹地；around 周围；near 附近；in 在内；on 在上面；under 在下面；best 最好的；perfect 完美的；wonderfully 美妙地；together 一起；alone 独自。 句型 （1）开头引入句式 1. Have you ever been to a wonderful natural wonder? 译文：你去过一处美妙的自然奇观吗？ 2. There is a famous natural wonder in... 译文：在……有一处著名的自然奇观。 3. I want to introduce a beautiful natural wonder to you. 译文：我想给你介绍一处美丽的自然奇观。 4. If you are looking for a great place to travel, come to... 译文：如果你正在寻找一个好的旅行地点，就来……吧。 5. One of the most amazing natural wonders in the world is... 译文：世界上最令人惊叹的自然奇观之一是…… 6. Do you know a natural wonder that is worth visiting? 译文：你知道一处值得参观的自然奇观吗？ 7. Let me tell you about a fantastic natural wonder. 译文：让我来告诉你一处神奇的自然奇观。 8. Located in..., there is a beautiful natural wonder. 译文：位于……的地方，有一处美丽的自然奇观。 （2）景色描述句式 1. It is famous for its beautiful scenery. 译文：它以其美丽的景色而闻名。 2. The... is so clear that you can see... 译文：……如此清澈，你能看到…… 3. In spring, the mountains are covered with green trees. 译文：春天，山上覆盖着绿树。 4. The waterfall looks like a white curtain from far away. 译文：从远处看，瀑布像一道白色的帘子。 5. You can see colorful flowers everywhere in the forest. 译文：森林里到处都能看到五颜六色的花。 6. The lake is as blue as the sky. 译文：这片湖像天空一样蓝。 7. The scenery here is so beautiful that it attracts many visitors. 译文：这里的景色如此美丽，吸引了许多游客。 8. When the sun rises, the mountain looks golden. 译文：当太阳升起时，这座山看起来金灿灿的。 9. The air here is fresh and clean. 译文：这里的空气清新又干净。 10. There are many different kinds of plants and animals in this natural wonder. 译文：这处自然奇观里有许多不同种类的动植物。 11. The rock formations here are very unique and amazing. 译文：这里的岩层非常独特和令人惊叹。 12. In winter, the waterfall freezes and looks like a crystal. 译文：冬天，瀑布结冰，看起来像一块水晶。 （3）动作与体验句式 1. You can take a boat trip on the river. 译文：你可以在河上乘船游览。 2. We can go hiking in the mountains on weekends. 译文：我们可以在周末去山里徒步。 3. It’s a good place to relax and enjoy the nature. 译文：这是一个放松和欣赏自然的好地方。 4. You can take many beautiful photos here. 译文：你可以在这里拍很多漂亮的照片。 5. Many people come here to experience the natural beauty. 译文：很多人来这里体验自然之美。 6. You can climb the mountain and enjoy the view from the top. 译文：你可以爬山，欣赏山顶的景色。 7. It’s interesting to explore the cave with your friends. 译文：和你的朋友一起探索洞穴很有趣。 8. You can breathe the fresh air and feel the peace of nature. 译文：你可以呼吸新鲜空气，感受自然的宁静。 （4）结尾呼吁句式 1. Come and visit this amazing natural wonder! 译文：来参观这处神奇的自然奇观吧！ 2. Don’t miss this beautiful place. 译文：不要错过这个美丽的地方。 3. You will have a great time here. 译文：你会在这里度过一段美好的时光。 4. I believe you will love this natural wonder. 译文：我相信你会喜欢这处自然奇观。 5. Come with your family and friends, and enjoy the beauty of nature together. 译文：和你的家人朋友一起来，一起欣赏自然之美吧。 6. It’s worth visiting once in your life. 译文：这值得你一生去参观一次。 7. Welcome to this wonderful natural wonder! 译文：欢迎来到这处美妙的自然奇观！ 名言 1.The beauty of the natural world lies in the details.自然界的美，藏在每一 个微小的细节里。 2.If you truly love nature，you will find beauty everywhere.真正热爱自然 的人，眼中处处是风景。 参考范文 Do you love the beauty of nature? Do you want to explore ①one of the most amazing natural wonders of the world? If so，come to Qinghai Lake! ②Located in Qinghai Province，China，Qinghai Lake is one of the most wonderful salt lakes you can ever visit. It covers about 4,340 square kilometres，making it the largest lake in China. The water here is clear and blue. You can photograph lovely wildlife，like special fish and beautiful birds,③as much as you can.You can also visit the peaceful islands around the lake. Ride a bike or a horse along the banks ④bit by bit，and you’ll feel the gentle wind and the beauty of nature all around. ⑤Only if you come to Qinghai Lake will you understand why it’s a dream place for nature lovers. Come and be amazed by its beauty! 教材原句 ①【Section B 1b】To most people，Mount Qomolangma is one of the greatest wonders of the world.（one of the…natural wonders of the world 世界最……的自然景观之一） ②【Section B 2c】Located in Siberia，Russia，Lake Baikal is one of the world’s most famous lakes.（located in…坐落于……） ③【Section A 4c】It went on for as far as the eye could see. （as…as one can 尽可能） ④【Section B 1b】Bit by bit,the climbers pulled themselves up…（bit by bit一点一点地） ⑤【Section B 1b】…and that is only if they survive the terrible conditions first.（only if 只有在……的时候） 范例2： 庐山是一座承载着千年人文底蕴的千古名山。庐山是文人墨客的 “灵感源泉” 和佛道文化的 “交融圣地”，是中华大地上的 “山水诗摇篮”。请根据下面信息写一篇80词左右的英语短文介绍庐山。 What:Mount Lushan，a UNESCO World Heritage Site Where:in Jiujiang City，Jiangxi Province Special facts:famous for its unique geological features;many rare plants and animals Things to do:hike,take photos,experience the local culture 审题指导 1.应用文 2.第二人称 3.一般过去时 优秀例文 【基础版】 Do you love amazing mountains? Do you want to visit an unusual place? If so，visit Mount Lushan! Located in Jiujiang City，Jiangxi Province，Mount Lushan is a UNESCO World Heritage Site. It’s famous for its unique geological features.Also，there are many rare plants and cute animals living here. Mount Lushan is a living “treasure”! When you visit it，you can hike along the mountain paths.Take photos of the amazing scenery—like the clouds，waterfalls and special rocks. And you can experience the local culture，taste delicious local food，and learn the stories about the mountain. For those who love nature and culture，visiting Mount Lushan is a good choice! 【提升版】 Do you love amazing mountains?Do you want to visit an unusual place full of natural wonders and a long history? If so，visit Mount Lushan! Located in Jiujiang City，Jiangxi Province，Mount Lushan is a UNESCO World Heritage Site and one of the most wonderful places to explore.It’s famous for its unique geological features，with lots of strange rocks and beautiful valleys.Also，there are many rare plants and cute animals living here. Mount Lushan is a living “treasure”!When you visit it，you can hike along the mountain paths，enjoying the fresh air and wonderful views.Take photos of the amazing scenery—like the clouds，waterfalls and special rocks. And you can experience the local culture，taste delicious local food，and learn the stories about the mountain from the friendly local people. For those who love nature and culture，visiting Mount Lushan is a good choice! 写作拓展 变式提升训练 A Natural Wonder That Impressed Me (令我印象深刻的自然奇观) 写作要求 1 . 围绕一处自然奇观展开，明确说明该奇观的名称、地理位置及核心特征 (如高度、面积、独特景观等)。 2. 结合单元主题 "探索自然"，重点描述该奇观的神奇之处及给你的感受，可适当提及人类与自然的联系。 3 . 正确使用比较级、最高级形容词 / 副词及大数表达等单元语法知识，语言生动，逻辑清晰。 3. 字数不少于 80 词，文中不得出现真实人名、校名。 写作指导 结构设计：采用 "奇观介绍 - 细节描述 - 感受感悟" 的三段式结构，先明确奇观基本信息，再聚焦其独特性，最后升华对自然的认知。 内容要点 基础信息：明确自然奇观的类型 (如山脉、河流、沙漠、湖泊等)、位置及关键数据 (如珠穆朗玛峰高 8848.86 米、撒哈拉沙漠面积约 900 万平方公里)，体现大数表达的单元重点。 特色描述：结合感体验或科学事实，描述奇观的独特之处 (如 "峰顶常年积雪"" 河水呈黄色因携带泥沙 ""深海动物能发光")，可使用比较级 / 最高级 (如 "the highest mountain""the deepest trench")。 情感与联系：阐述奇观带来的震撼感受 (如 "感到人类的渺小"" 赞叹自然的伟大 ")，可提及人类对自然的探索 (如中国" 奋斗者 "号深潜) 或保护的重要性，呼应单元" 人与自然连接 " 的主题。 语言技巧 词汇运用：合理使用单元核心词汇 (如 "wonder、measurement、surface、depth、 survive、attract") 及短语 (如 "natural wonder、take up、be located in")。 句式变化：运用 "How + 形容词"(如 "How high is it?") 提问引出特征，用 "not only...but also..." 连接观的多重价值，增强表达丰富性。 逻辑衔接：用 "first、besides、most importantly" 等词串联信息，使描述条理清晰。 写作模板 ◆开头段Among all the natural wonders in the world,_(自然奇观名称，如 "Mount Qomolangma""the Great Barrier Reef") impresses me most. It is located in (地理位置，如 "the border of China and Nepal""northeastern Australia") and is famous as(核心称号，如 "the highest mountain in the world""the largest coral reef system"). ◆中间段This wonder is full of amazing facts. First, its_(特征 1，如 "height""area") is surprising-it reaches_(具体数据，如"8,848.86 metres high""345,000 square kilometres"). Besides, it has unique (特征 2，如 "landscape""living things"):_(具体描述，如"the peak is always covered with snow""thousands of colourful fish live in the clear water"). What's more, (人类与自然的联系，如 "Chinese climbers reached its top in 1960""scientists are working to protect it from pollution") shows our connection with nature. ◆结尾段Visiting or learning about this wonder makes me feel_(感受，如 "small but curious"). It teaches me that nature is both powerful and fragile. We should (行动倡议，如 "respect and protect natural wonders") so that future generations can also enjoy their beauty. Nature's wonders are gifts we should cherish forever. 范文 A Natural Wonder That Impressed Me Among all the natural wonders in the world, Mount Qomolangma impresses me most. It is located on the border of China and Nepal and is famous as the highest mountain in the world. Learning about it makes me feel the magic of nature deeply. This wonder is full of amazing facts. First, its height is surprising--it reaches 8,848.86 metres, and scientists say it is still growing taller Besides, it has harsh but unique conditions: temperatures can drop to -30 degrees, and climbers have to fight against thin air and changeable weather What's more, Chinese climbers made history here-they first reached the top from the northern "Death Road" in 1960 and measured its height accurately in 2020. Their spirit of exploration inspires me a lot. Visiting Mount Qomolangma is my dream. It teaches me that nature is both powerful and respectful. We should protect such wonders so that they can keep amazing the world. After all, nature's greatness lies not only in its size but also in the connections it builds with humans. 写作训练 1．假设你是王浩宇，你们班的交换生 Tim想在暑假参观一处自然奇观。请你根据下列内容提示，用英语写一封80词左右的邮件，向他推荐世界上最深的峡谷——雅鲁藏布大峡谷。邮件的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 长度：约505千米 深度：约6千米(最深处) 美誉：植物博物馆 the plant museum;动物王国 the animal kingdom 最佳旅游时间：春、夏 Dear Tim, I’m writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in China—the Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Haoyu 参考答案 Dear Tim, I’m writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in China—the Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon. It’s in Xizang, China. And it is the deepest canyon in the world, about 505 kilometres long. The deepest depth of it reaches around 6 kilometres. As a place that all nature lovers want to visit, the Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon is home to thousands of plants and animals. It’s called “the plant museum” and “the animal kingdom”. The best time to visit it is spring and summer. I’m sure you will have a great time there. Yours, Wang Haoyu [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇英文书信，属于应用文范畴，围绕人教版八下 Unit4 “自然奇观” 话题，向友人介绍中国的雅鲁藏布大峡谷，兼具说明性与交际性；②时态：通篇使用一般现在时，客观介绍大峡谷的地理位置、数据特征、生态价值等事实，符合介绍类文体的时态使用原则；③提示：紧扣自然奇观写作核心要点，依次介绍峡谷的名称、位置、核心数据、生态特色及最佳游览时间，信息完整且条理清晰，书信格式规范，语气亲切自然。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，以书信的交际语气切入，直接点明写作目的 —— 向对方介绍中国自然奇观雅鲁藏布大峡谷，同时交代其地理位置和核心数据（世界最深、长度、最深深度），直击主题；第二步，具体阐述大峡谷的独特价值，介绍其作为动植物栖息地的生态特征，用 “植物博物馆”“动物王国” 的别称突出特色，同时补充最佳游览时间，为友人提供实用信息；第三步，结尾表达美好祝愿，用简洁的话语预祝对方游览愉快，契合书信的交际功能，收束自然。 [亮点词汇] ①the greatest wonders of the natural world 自然界最伟大的奇观之一②the deepest canyon 最深的峡谷③nature lovers 自然爱好者④be home to 是…… 的栖息地⑤the plant museum 植物博物馆⑥the animal kingdom 动物王国⑦the best time to visit 最佳游览时间 [高分句型] ①I’m writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in China—the Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon.（不定式to tell you...作目的状语，为书信开篇经典句式，简洁明了点明写作意图；破折号起解释说明作用，突出介绍对象，句式简洁实用）②And it is the deepest canyon in the world, about 505 kilometres long.（形容词最高级the deepest突出峡谷特征，符合单元语法要求；后置短语about 505 kilometres long补充数据，句式简洁且信息完整）③As a place that all nature lovers want to visit, the Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon is home to thousands of plants and animals.（as引导方式状语从句，that引导定语从句修饰先行词a place，复合句结构让表达更有层次，避免简单句堆砌） 大自然中有许多壮丽的自然景观，位于中国东北吉林省的长白山以其独特的火山地貌和纯净风光闻名，人们可以在冬天看到银装素裹的世界，在夏天看到漫山遍野的树和花，这个自然界的瑰宝使人们沉浸其中。请你以“The Beautiful Changbai Mountain”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍长白山的魅力。 要求:(1)内容完整，语句通顺，语法正确； (2)文中需包含长白山的地理位置、主要特色及你的感受； (3)词数80-100左右。 提示：自然景观 natural landscape；火山 volcanic mountain；火山口 volcanic crater；天池 Tianchi；茂密的森林 dense forest；温泉 hot spring The Beautiful Changbai Mountain                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             _________________________________________________                                                                                                                                                                                                  ___________________________________ The Beautiful Changbai Mountain Changbai Mountain is a famous natural landscape in Jilin Province, northeast China. It is a volcanic mountain with a history of millions of years. The most famous part is Tianchi, a clear lake formed in the volcanic crater.(开篇点题,介绍了长白山的地理位置及大致情况) Around the mountain, there are dense forests and many hot springs that people love to visit. Many people say that it turns into a silver world when covered with white snow in winter.(使用了宾语从句以及时间状语从句,使句式更加志宫,表达再加生动) In summer, the green trees and colourful flowers make it full of life.(具体介绍了长白山的特点,逻辑清晰) I think Changbai Mountain is a treasure of nature. We should protect it to keep its beauty forever.(结尾传递环保意识,升华主题) [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇写景说明文，围绕自然景观长白山展开介绍，属于八年级下册 Unit4 “自然奇观” 话题的经典写作体裁，贴合单元写作要求；②时态：通篇使用一般现在时，用于客观描述长白山的地理位置、地貌特征、四季景观等客观事实，符合说明文体的时态使用规范；③提示：严格围绕自然奇观核心要点展开，依次介绍位置、地貌、标志性景观、周边特色及四季景色，无遗漏关键信息，且结尾融入环保主题，呼应 “人与自然和谐共处” 的单元核心思想。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，直接说明长白山的地理位置、所属省份及整体地貌属性（火山山系），同时引出其标志性景观天池，为下文具体描述做铺垫；第二步，分层具体阐述长白山的特色，先介绍周边的自然景观（茂密森林、温泉），再通过冬夏两季的景色对比，展现长白山不同时节的独特美，描写层次清晰；第三步，结尾抒情升华，将长白山定义为 “自然的宝藏”，并提出保护建议，传递环保意识，让文章主题从单纯的景观介绍上升到自然保护，贴合单元写作的情感要求。 [亮点词汇] ①natural landscape 自然景观②volcanic mountain 火山③volcanic crater 火山口④dense forests 茂密的森林⑤hot springs 温泉⑥a silver world 银色世界⑦full of life 生机盎然⑧a treasure of nature 自然的宝藏 [高分句型] ①The most famous part is Tianchi, a clear lake formed in the volcanic crater.（过去分词短语formed in the volcanic crater作后置定语，简洁修饰天池的形成背景，句式简洁且信息丰富）②Many people say that it turns into a silver world when covered with white snow in winter.（宾语从句that it turns into a silver world作 say 的宾语，同时包含省略式时间状语从句when covered with white snow，句式丰富且表达生动，避免简单句堆砌）③In summer, the green trees and colourful flowers make it full of life.（make it full of life为 “make + 宾语 + 宾语补足语” 结构，简洁生动地描绘出长白山夏季的生机，符合初中英语写作的高分句式要求） 请根据下面表格中的信息, 以The Niagara Falls为题写一篇100词左右的短文。 Where northeast of North America Description two parts： Horseshoe Falls: the larger part is in Canada, 56 metres in height, 675 metres in width； American Falls: the smaller part is in America, over 50 metres in height, more than 300 metres in width Evaluation one of the greatest wonders in the world, source of hydroelectric（水力发电的） power The Niagara Falls ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 The Niagara Falls Located in northeast of North America, the Niagara Falls is one of the most amazing natural wonders in the world. It consists of two main parts: the larger Horseshoe Falls on the Canadian side, which is about 56 metres high and 675 metres wide, and the smaller American Falls in the United States, with a height of over 50 metres and a width of more than 300 metres. Every year, millions of visitors come to see the breathtaking view and powerful flow of the falls. The Niagara Falls is not only a beautiful sight but also an important source of hydroelectric power. It is truly a magnificent gift from nature. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，围绕自然奇观展开介绍，属于单元话题相关的写景说明类文体；②时态：通篇使用一般现在时，用于客观描述尼亚加拉瀑布的地理位置、形态特征、价值等客观事实；③提示：围绕自然奇观核心要点展开介绍，清晰呈现其位置、构成、数据及价值，无遗漏关键信息，突出了自然奇观的独特与神奇。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，直接介绍尼亚加拉瀑布的地理位置和整体地位，引出对这一自然奇观的具体描述；第二步，具体阐述瀑布的构成部分，通过精准数字说明南北两侧瀑布的高度、宽度等核心特征，同时提及瀑布的观赏价值，展现其吸引力；第三步，书写结语，点明瀑布兼具观赏与水力发电的双重价值，总结其作为大自然馈赠的独特意义，升华对自然奇观的评价。 [亮点词汇] ①consist of 由…… 组成②breathtaking 令人惊叹的，惊险的③hydroelectric power 水力发电④magnificent 壮丽的，宏伟的⑤natural wonder 自然奇观 [高分句型] ①Located in northeast of North America, the Niagara Falls is one of the most amazing natural wonders in the world.（过去分词短语作状语，简洁点明主语的位置特征）②It consists of two main parts: the larger Horseshoe Falls on the Canadian side, which is about 56 metres high and 675 metres wide, and the smaller American Falls in the United States, with a height of over 50 metres and a width of more than 300 metres.（which 引导的非限制性定语从句，补充说明先行词特征；with 的复合结构，简洁描述事物属性，句式层次丰富）③The Niagara Falls is not only a beautiful sight but also an important source of hydroelectric power.（not only...but also... 并列结构，突出事物的双重价值，表达更全面） 假定你是李华，你校英语社团举办以“The Splendid Land of My Motherland”为话题的演讲比赛，请你根据以下要点并结合自身经历写一篇英语演讲稿。 要点：(1)What natural wonder would you like to introduce?           (2)What was your experience of visiting this natural wonder?           (3)What do you think of this natural wonder? 注意：(1)短文须包括要点中所有信息，可适当发挥；           (2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；           (3)词数80个左右。                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【解析】基础版范文： Hello everyone! Today, I want to introduce Mount Emei to you. ①Mount Emei is located in Sichuan, China. It's one of China's most famous mountains. During my summer vacation, I climbed it with my parents. The sight was very beautiful.②There were green trees and birds singing happily. On our way to the top of the mountain, we met some monkeys. They asked for nuts and fruit. ③ But the sunrise impressed me most. As I waited, the sun gradually rose, painting the sky with its red and round face. It was too fascinating to describe with words. The trip to Mount Emei was filled with fun. If you want to get close to nature, don't miss it! 提升版范文： Hello everyone! Today, I want to introduce Mount Emei to you. ①Located in Sichuan Province, China, Mount Emei is one of the country's most famous mountains. During my summer vacation, I climbed it with my parents. The sight was very beautiful. ②There were not only green trees but also birds singing happily. On our way to the top of the mountain, we met some monkeys. They asked for nuts and fruit. ③However, what impressed me most was the beautiful sunrise. As I waited, the sun gradually rose, painting the sky with its red and round face. It was too fascinating to describe with words. The trip to Mount Emei was filled with fun. If you want to get close to nature, don't miss it! [总体分析] 原版 ①题材：一篇口头介绍类记叙文，围绕自然景观峨眉山展开，结合个人游览经历介绍景观特色，贴合八下 Unit4 “自然奇观” 话题，兼具说明性与叙事性；②时态：以一般现在时介绍峨眉山基本属性，一般过去时描述个人游览经历，时态切换准确，符合 “景观介绍 + 亲身感受” 的写作逻辑；③提示：紧扣话题核心，依次介绍峨眉山位置、个人游览经历、沿途景观及印象最深的日出，结尾总结旅行感受并推荐，信息完整，语言朴实流畅，适合基础表达。 提升版 ①题材：在原版基础上优化语言表达的口头介绍类记叙文，体裁、写作逻辑与原版一致；②时态：与时态使用规范完全相同，无调整；③提示：保留原版全部核心信息，通过句式优化、词汇替换、连接词补充让表达更流畅、句式更丰富，符合初中英语高分写作的语言要求，同时贴合单元语法（比较级 / 最高级、复合句）和表达技巧要求。 [写作步骤] （原版 + 提升版写作步骤一致，均为 “开篇点题 - 具体描述 - 结尾总结”）第一步，开篇点题，以口头介绍的亲切语气切入，直接说明写作 / 表达目的 —— 为大家介绍峨眉山，引出下文的景观和游览描述；第二步，分层具体阐述，先介绍峨眉山的地理位置和地位，再讲述暑假和父母的登山经历，依次描写沿途的绿树、鸟鸣、猴子，重点突出印象最深的日出美景，细节描写生动；第三步，结尾总结升华，概括峨眉山之旅的感受，并用祈使句向听众推荐，贴合口头介绍的交际场景，收束自然。 [原版 vs 提升版 逐句优化解析] ①句优化 原版：Mount Emei is located in Sichuan, China. It's one of China's most famous mountains.提升版：Located in Sichuan Province, China, Mount Emei is one of the country's most famous mountains. 优化技巧：将被动句 is located in改为过去分词短语 Located in作前置状语，把两个简单句合并为一个复合句，避免句式重复，让句子更简洁紧凑； 细节补充：添加Province让地理表达更准确，用the country's替代China's，避免词汇重复，提升表达多样性。 ②句优化 原版：There were green trees and birds singing happily.提升版：There were not only green trees but also birds singing happily. 优化技巧：加入单元核心句式not only...but also...（不仅…… 而且……），替代简单的并列连词and，突出沿途景观的丰富性，同时贴合单元写作的句式要求，让表达更有层次。 ③句优化 原版：But the sunrise impressed me most.提升版：However, what impressed me most was the beautiful sunrise. 优化技巧 1：用However替代But，However为正式衔接词，置于句首加逗号，比单独使用 But 更符合书面 / 口头表达的语法规范，衔接更自然； 优化技巧 2：将简单句改为what 引导的主语从句（what impressed me most），复合句结构替代简单句，提升句式复杂度，符合初中英语高分句型要求； 优化技巧 3：添加形容词beautiful修饰 sunrise，让景观描述更具体，丰富细节。 [亮点词汇（含提升版新增）] ①be located in 位于②one of the most famous mountains 最著名的山脉之一③on one’s way to the top 在去山顶的路上④ask for 索要⑤impress sb most 给某人留下最深刻的印象⑥gradually rise 渐渐升起⑦too fascinating to describe 美得难以言表⑧be filled with fun 充满乐趣⑨get close to nature 亲近自然 [高分句型（含提升版核心句型）] 原版高分句型 As I waited, the sun gradually rose, painting the sky with its red and round face. 解析：as 引导时间状语从句，同时现在分词短语 painting... 作伴随状语，将太阳升起的动作和天空的景色融合，描写生动，避免简单句的平淡，是初中英语写景的经典高分句型。 提升版新增高分句型 Located in Sichuan Province, China, Mount Emei is one of the country's most famous mountains. 解析：过去分词短语作前置状语，简洁点明主语的位置特征，是介绍地点 / 景观的高频高分句式。 There were not only green trees but also birds singing happily. 解析：not only...but also... 并列结构，丰富句式表达，突出事物的多重特征，贴合单元写作要求。 However, what impressed me most was the beautiful sunrise. 解析：what 引导的主语从句，让句子结构更复杂，提升语言表达等级，是初中英语写作提分的核心句型。 2.桂林山水甲天下。以其壮美山水而闻名的广西桂林，每年都会吸引大量游客。请根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的英语文章，向游客介绍这座城市。 Location in the south of China History over 2,000 years Weather not too hot in summer or too cold in winter People warm and friendly Attraction green mountains and clean waters, the Elephant Trunk Hill , the Lijiang River Food Guilin rice noodles Culture Gui Opera                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               __________________________________________________                                                                                                                                                                                                                           【答案】范文 It's my pleasure to introduce Guilin to you. Guilin, a beautiful city located in the south of China, has a long history of over 2,000 years. The weather here is always pleasant, making it a great place to visit at any time. It is famous for its green mountains and clean waters. You can see many beautiful sights like the Elephant Trunk Hill and the Lijiang River. The local people are warm and friendly. Besides enjoying nature, you can also try special food such as Guilin rice noodles. If you are interested in the local culture, don't miss the Gui Opera. Next time when you visit Guilin, I'm sure you will fall in love with it. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇景观介绍类说明文，以简洁的语言向他人介绍桂林的城市特色，贴合人教版八下 Unit4“自然奇观 / 自然景观” 的话题要求，兼具说明性和推荐性，语言正式且亲切，适合口头或书面介绍场景；②时态：通篇使用一般现在时，客观描述桂林的地理位置、历史、气候、景观、人文美食等固定特征，符合介绍类文体的时态使用规范，时态运用统一且准确；③提示：紧扣景观介绍核心要点，从城市基础信息（位置、历史）到自然条件（气候），再到核心特色（山水景观、人文美食、本土文化），最后给出游览期许，信息层次清晰、无遗漏，全面展现桂林的旅游价值，同时衔接自然，符合初中英语写作的逻辑要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，用礼貌句式引出介绍对象 —— 桂林，同时简要交代桂林的地理位置和历史底蕴，为下文具体介绍做铺垫，开篇简洁且信息明确；第二步，分层具体阐述桂林的核心特色，先说明气候优势（四季宜居），再点出桂林的标志性特色 “青山绿水”，并列举代表性景观；接着从人文角度介绍当地民风、特色美食和本土戏曲，将自然景观与人文特色结合，让介绍更全面；第三步，结尾表达美好期许，用肯定的语气预祝游客游览时会爱上桂林，收束自然，同时呼应开篇的介绍目的，让文章结构完整。 [亮点词汇] ①It's my pleasure to... 我很荣幸……（礼貌开篇句式）②have a long history of 有…… 的悠久历史③pleasant 宜人的（形容气候）④be famous for 因…… 而闻名⑤green mountains and clean waters 青山绿水⑥warm and friendly 热情友好的⑦special food 特色美食⑧local culture 本土文化⑨fall in love with 爱上…… [高分句型] 1. Guilin, a beautiful city located in the south of China, has a long history of over 2,000 years.解析：同位语（a beautiful city）+ 过去分词短语作后置定语（located in the south of China） 修饰主语 Guilin，用插入式结构补充城市属性，避免简单句的平淡，句式紧凑且信息丰富，是介绍地点的经典高分句式。 2. The weather here is always pleasant, making it a great place to visit at any time.解析：现在分词短语 making... 作结果状语，自然衔接 “气候宜人” 和 “四季适合游览” 的逻辑关系，无需额外使用连接词，表达更简洁流畅，让句子有逻辑层次。 3. Besides enjoying nature, you can also try special food such as Guilin rice noodles.解析：besides + 动名词 作状语，表 “除了…… 之外还……”，比简单的 and 更能体现语义的递进，同时用such as举例，让表述更具体，符合初中英语写作的细节表达要求。 4. If you are interested in the local culture, don't miss the Gui Opera.解析：if 引导的条件状语从句，句式简单且实用，针对不同兴趣的游客给出具体游览建议，让介绍更有针对性，同时丰富了文章的句式类型。 7 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $