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Learn the structure of the text about a lesson from the nature;
Apply the P.E.E.L. writing logic to write;
Develop an awareness of appreciating and protecting the nature.
The struggle to break out of the pupa was necessary for the butterfly’s survival because it enabled its wings and body to grow strong.
We must go through some difficult things
if we really wish to spread our wings and fly.
a man found the pupa of a butterfly...then died.
One day; However; But instesd of flying away; In the same way
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Writing techniques:
1. a combination of narration and discussion;
Structure
2. an extended metaphor
a comparison between two things over many lines of text, or throughout an entire work of literature.
拓展隐喻:通篇不提“你”,却句句都是“你”
Choose one picture and write about what you can learn from nature with the help of P.E.E.L. and the two writing techniques.
The Meaning of Perseverence
One day, a traveller noticed a smooth stone with a tiny hollow in its top. Drop by drop, water fell from above, hitting the same spot again and again. At first, the stone seemed unshakable. But over months and years, the constant dripping wore a deep hole right through its hard surface.
Just like the water and stone, small, consistent efforts can overcome even the toughest obstacles. We don’t need to do great things all at once —if we keep trying, even our slowest, most steady actions will eventually break through challenges and help us reach our goals.
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The Meaning of Unity
One day, a group of ants found a heavy trunk on the ground. A single ant tried to lift it but failed. Soon, more ants gathered around. They linked their bodies and pulled together, slowly moving the crumb toward their nest.
The teamwork of the ants was necessary for their success, because no ant could carry the crumb alone. Unity gave them strength beyond any individual. In the same way, we need cooperation to face challenges. We must work together if we really wish to reach our goals.
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The Meaning of Devotion
Early every morning, a mother bird flies out to find worms and insects. She flies far and wide, tired but determined, to bring food back to her sleeping chicks in the nest. All day long, she works to keep them safe and fed, putting their needs before her own.
This reminds us of the love and care that surrounds us—from parents, teachers, and friends. It also teaches us to be responsible: to look after those who depend on us, and to give our time and energy to help others grow and thrive.
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Look deep into nature,
and then you will understand everything better.
— Albert Einstein
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Unit5 Learning from nature
Writing about a lesson from nature
编制:韩静静 审核:郭春霞 姓名:_______ 班级:_______
Learning objectives:
1. Learn the structure of the text about a lesson from the nature;
2. Apply the P.E.E.L. writing logic to write;
3. Develop an awareness of appreciating and protecting the nature.
PartⅠ: Figure out what “P.E.E.L. “ means.
P______________ E______________ E______________ L______________
PartⅡ: Mark “P.E.E.L. “ in the text.
P:________________________________________________________
E:________________________________________________________
E:________________________________________________________
L:________________________________________________________
PartⅢ: Writing techniques.
1. The genre(体裁):The text is a combination of ______________ and ______________,which is also the structure of the text.
2. Figure of speech(修辞手法):__________________________________________
PartⅣ:Writing task
1. Work in groups to name each picture.
The first picture:_____________________________________________
The second picture:__________________________________________
The third picture:_____________________________________________
2. Choose one picture and write about what you can learn from nature with the help of P.E.E.L. and the two writing techniques.
Check while you write
Language
Have I used appropriate words and expressions to write the lesson from nature?
Coherence
Have I organized my ideas clearly and applied "P.E.E.L." properly?
Content
Have I considered the structure and kept it balanced to the task?
Reader Awareness
Have I written in a way that suits the reader's expectations and purpose?
My writing:
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