摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦八年级下册Unit 4“自然奇观”单元写作专题,围绕“介绍自然景观、生态特征及与自然和谐共生”主题,引导学生运用形容词或副词比较级与最高级进行表达。课堂通过话题概述明确主题范畴,以句型荟萃(开头、中间、结尾句)为学习支架,帮助学生从基础句型积累过渡到篇章连贯写作,构建“主题理解-语言储备-篇章组织”的学习脉络。
其亮点在于融合语言能力与文化意识培养,通过“句型荟萃”提供实用表达(如“play an important role in protecting our environment”),“佳句积累”融入“绿水青山就是金山银山”等文化名句,提升学生语言表达能力与家国情怀。采用“例题展示-审题立意-谋篇布局-范文点评-实战演练”五步教学法,引导学生分析写作要点、逻辑组织内容,培养思维品质。学生能系统掌握写作技巧并深化文化理解,教师可借助完整教学资源提升教学效率。
内容正文:
八年级英语
下册 H N
Unit 4 The Wonders of Nature
Section B Why do we explore nature?
第6课时 单元写作专题
I'd like to tell you something about the famous mountain.
Yesterday we went to a good place to visit.
There are many places of interest in my hometown.
The beauty of the high mountain takes my breath away.
It is a beautiful city on the Yangtze River.
Everyone should play an important role in protecting our environment.
For people who love the flowers, visiting Qinghai Lake is the dream of a lifetime!
本单元话题以“自然奇观”展开,学会介绍不同地区的生态特征与自然景观,突出表达“热爱自然与敬畏自然,与自然和谐共生”的主题思想。同时要求学生能运用形容词或副词的比较级与最高级介绍自然景观,并谈谈在探索自然的过程中人们取得的成就。
主题范畴: 人与自然
主题群: 自然生态
子主题: ①介绍自然景观及其地理概况 ②热爱自然,与自然和谐共生
[开头句]
1.我很愿意告诉你们关于这座名山的情况。(something about)
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2.昨天我们去了一个值得参观的地方。(a good place to visit)
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3.在我的家乡有许多有趣的地方。(places of interest)
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[中间句]
1.这座高山的秀美令人惊叹。(take one's breath away)
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2.它是长江河畔的一个美丽的城市。(on the Yangtze River)
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[结尾句]
1.每个人应该在保护环境方面扮演重要角色。(play an important role in doing sth)
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2.对于喜欢花的人来说,青海湖是一生的梦想!(the dream of a lifetime)
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[佳句积累]
1.Clear waters and green mountains are as good as mountains of gold and silver. 绿水青山就是金山银山。
2.The man who is afraid to climb the peak is forever wandering at the foot of the mountain. 畏惧攀峰者,永困山脚下。
3.When dew is on the grass, rain will never come to pass.草上露珠闪,告别下雨天。
假设你是李梅,你的美国朋友Alice计划暑假去青海湖游玩。请你根据下表的提示内容,向她介绍一下青海湖的情况。
Location
in Qinghai,China
Area
about 4,317 square kilometres(the largest lake in China)
Best time
to visit
from July to August; isn't too hot or too cold; lots of wild flowers
Advice
take a hat and sunglasses
要求:
1.至少80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当添加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
Hi Alice! ________
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I hope you will have a good trip.
eq \a\vs4\al(提取要点,介绍一下青海湖的情况。)
eq \b\lc\{(\a\vs4\al\co1(时态: 一般现在时,人称: 第一人称和第二人称,要点: 介绍一下青海湖的情况, (包含表格所有信息)))
Hi Alice! I'm glad to hear that you plan to visit Qinghai Lake on summer vacation.① I'd like to tell you something about it first.
Qinghai Lake is in Qinghai, China. It's about 4,317 square kilometres and it's the largest lake in China. The best time to visit Qinghai Lake is from July to August because the weather isn't too hot or too cold. What's more②, you can enjoy lots of wild flowers at that time. For people who love the flowers, visiting Qinghai Lake is the dream of a lifetime!③ By the way②, you'd better not forget④ to take your hat and sunglasses because the sunshine in Qinghai is quite strong.
I hope you will have a good trip.⑤
名师点评
[主题评价]这则介绍简洁明了,明确了青海湖的位置、面积、最佳参观时间,最后还给出了合理建议和愿望。要点全面,时态运用正确,符合写作要求。
①开篇点题,明确指出写作主题,为下面的介绍做了铺垫。
②过渡短语运用得当,自然而然地过渡到欣赏野花,以及关切对方提出帮助性建议。
③句中现在分词短语(visiting Qinghai Lake)作主语和定语从句(who love the flowers)的恰当运用体现了作者扎实的写作功底。
④用“had better not do sth”真切地表达出善意的建议。
⑤“I hope”指出美好的祝福和愿望。
假如明天下午你将带你的美国朋友去安徽黄山游玩,请根据下列提示写一篇短文,向他们介绍一下黄山的情况。
提示:
1.位于安徽省南部,占地1 200平方千米,海拔1 864米;
2.有极其美丽的自然景色,包括云海、奇石、温泉和日出等;
3.每年都有大批中外游客来旅游观光。
要求:
1.至少80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当添加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
Welcome to Mount Huangshan. Now I'm going to tell you something about it.
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Mount Huangshan is in the south of Anhui Province. It is one of the most famous mountains in China. It covers 1,200 square kilometres and rises to 1,864 metres above sea level. Mount Huangshan is famous for its natural scenery, such as the sea of clouds, unique rocks, hot springs, sunrise and so on.
If you go to the top of the mountain in the early morning, you can enjoy the sunrise. It's wonderful. Mount Huangshan is a really nice place to visit. Every year, thousands of Chinese and foreigners come to visit it.
Hope you have a wonderful time!
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