Unit 3 Section B 第6课时 单元写作专题-【勤径学升】2025-2026学年八年级下册英语同步练测教师用书（人教版·新教材）吉林专版

[答案　P9] 本单元的话题是“成长”，要求能描述中学生成长过程中所遇到的情感困惑与心理挑战，并且能够对给自己提供帮助的人表达感激之情，培养学生懂得感恩的高尚情操，保持积极乐观的心态。 主题范畴： 人与社会 主题群： 生活与人际沟通 子主题： ①正确面对和处理成长过程中的麻烦或情感等问题　②懂得感恩 [开头句] 1．我想感谢您三年来对于我的帮助。(thank sb for doing sth ) I want to thank you for helping me over the past three years. 2．我们青少年在成长的过程中有越来越多的压力。(while doing sth) We teenagers have more and more stress while growing up. [中间句] 1．你的耐心指导和生动的课堂慢慢地改变了我的想法。(change one's mind) Your patient guidance and lively classes slowly changed my mind. 2．对于我来说最重要的是在我困难时期你的善举。(What meant the most to sb) What meant the most to me was your kindness during my difficult times. 3．无论何时你感觉好或不好，和你喜欢的人谈谈，这样你的欢喜就会加倍，你的问题就会减半。(whenever) Talk to your loved ones whenever you feel good or bad so that your joy will be doubled, and your problems will be reduced by half. 4．如果你站在他的角度，你就会容易理解他。(put oneself in one's shoes) You will understand him easily if you put yourself in his shoes. [结尾句] 1．我希望事情可以解决得好。(work out) I hope things can work out well. 2．只要我们努力，没有什么事情不能被解决。(as long as; be solved) As long as we try hard, nothing can't be solved. 3．我将永远记得您的善良和关照！(remember…forever) I'll remember your kindness and care forever! [佳句积累] 1．If you love, life becomes lovely everywhere.如若爱，生活处处皆可爱。 2．If you hate, life can be hateful anywhere.如若恨，生活无处不可恨。 3．The outer world you see is a reflection of your inner self.你是什么样的人，你看到的世界就是什么样子。 假如你是初三学生孙明，请用英语给你的英语老师(Miss Liu)写一封感谢信，感谢她三年来对你英语的帮助。 要点提示： (1)开始不爱学习英语，现在英语成为最擅长的学科； (2)感谢老师一直以来对你的友善，在你最困难的时候给你鼓励； (3)老师的帮助对你的影响。 写作要求： (1)层次清晰，语言流畅； (2)词数在90～100之间； (3)书写规范，卷面整洁； (4)文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 提取要点 1．开始不爱学习英语，现在英语成为最擅长的学科； 2．感谢老师一直以来对你的友善，在你最困难的时候给你鼓励； 3．老师的帮助对你的影响。 Dear Miss Liu， I'm writing to thank you for your help over the past three years.① You took the time to help me, although you were so busy. First②， thanks a lot for helping me with English. When I first started junior high, I hated English and often avoided studying it. But your patient guidance and lively classes slowly changed my mind. Now, English is my strongest subject, and I even enjoy speaking it! What great progress！③ Second②， what meant the most was your kindness during my difficult times.④ When I felt lost or stressed, you always listened, encouraged me, and reminded me to keep going. You weren't only a teacher, but you also became a trusted friend who made learning fun and meaningful.④ I'm very grateful for your kindness. Thank you for believing in me. Your help has inspired me to work harder and dream bigger. I'll remember your kindness and care forever！⑤ Sincerely， Sun Ming 名师点评 [主题评价]这封信简洁真挚，通过对比学习态度的转变和描述具体鼓励场景，突出了老师的关怀与影响，符合学生身份且情感自然。要点全面，时态运用正确，符合写作要求。 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 ①开篇点题，表达出对老师的感激之情。 ②层次分明，“First” “Second”运用得当，从两个方面表达感激的内容。 ③感叹句生动地体现了作者英语取得的长足进步。 ④主语从句(what meant the most)和定语从句(a trusted friend who made learning fun and meaningful)的恰当运用体现了作者扎实的写作功底。 ⑤文章最后一句表达出作者的情感，感恩之心溢于言表，铭记师恩。 假设你叫李明，被歌曲《时间都去哪了》深深感动，决定给自己的父母写一封信，表达对他们的感激之情。 写作要点： (1)表达对父母的感情； (2)具体表述父母对你的呵护与教育； (3)谈谈你的想法和打算。 写作要求： (1)层次清晰，语言流畅； (2)词数在90～100之间，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (3)书写规范，卷面整洁； (4)文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 Dear Mum and Dad， Thank you for bringing me to this world. Suddenly I find that I have told you how grateful I am to you! I was deeply moved by the moving song called “Where has the time gone？”. As I grow up, you both get older. At the moment, I would like to say thanks to both of you from my heart. Thanks for your care so long since I was born. Thank you for your love that helps me to grow up healthily. Besides, I'm thankful for your strictness that is symbol of your love. As time passes by and it can't come back again, I make up my mind to value time. What's more, I make a decision to make good use of every minute to do everything better. I'll try my best to work hard so that you, my dearest parents, can live a more wonderful life as a reward. Thank you, Mum and Dad. I love you! Yours sincerely， Li Ming 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $