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[答案　P6] 本单元以“健康与急救”为话题，围绕这话题谈论生活中存在的健康问题或意外事件，并学会保护自己。写作时，要学会用“have a/an ＋表示疾病的名词(短语)”来描述健康问题。然后针对这些问题，运用could/should/shouldn't句式提出合理的建议。 主题范畴： 人与自我 主题群： 生活与健康 子主题： ①注意身心健康　②提高抗挫折的能力，培养珍爱生命的意识 [开头句] 1．众所周知， 健康对于我们所有人来说都是重要的。(as we know) As we know, health is very important to all of us. 2．听说你生病我很难过。(be sorry to do sth) I am sorry to hear that you are ill. 3．这里是几条可以帮助你的建议。(here is some advice to…) Here is some advice to help you. [中间句] 1．首先， 我们应该有一个健康的饮食。(should do sth) First, we should have a healthy diet. 2．每天做些锻炼是必要的。(It's necessary to do sth) It is necessary to take some exercise every day. 3．放弃坏的习惯， 比如熬夜到很晚。(give up) Give up bad habits like staying up late. [结尾句] 1．保持健康是世界上最重要的事情。(the most important thing) Keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world. 2．好好休息一下， 你就会很快好起来的。(…and you'll…) Have a good rest, and you'll be well soon. 3．我祝你早日康复。(wish sb sth) I wish you a speedy recovery. 4．保重身体，早日康复。(and) Take care, and get well soon. 5．安全第一！(come) Safety comes first! [佳句积累] 1．The greatest wealth is health. 健康是最大的财富。 2．Emergencies don't wait. Be ready now. 紧急情况不会等待，现在就做好准备。 3．If you don't make time for exercise, you'll probably have to make time for illness. 如果你不腾出时间进行锻炼，你很可能就不得不腾出时间应对疾病。 假如你的朋友Jack有个不好的爱好，沉溺于网络， 花费大量时间玩电脑游戏，现在头痛、背疼、眼睛不舒服，并且睡不好觉。请你写一篇英语短文，内容包括： (1)他平时有什么样的生活习惯； (2)他的不良习惯对他造成了什么影响； (3)你的建议和愿望。 写作要求： (1)层次清晰，语言流畅； (2)词数在90～100之间； (3)书写规范，卷面整洁； (4)文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 提取要点 1．他平时有什么样的生活习惯； 2．他的不良习惯对他造成了什么影响； 3．你的建议和愿望。 Jack is my friend. He has a bad hobby that he loses himself in the Internet.① He is used to playing② computer games. He spends a lot of time on the computer every day. He often sits in the same way for too long without moving. As a result③， now he has a headache, a sore back and sore eyes④. He doesn't sleep well at night, so he feels tired every day. I think he could take breaks, away from the computer from time to time. He shouldn't use the computer for too long.⑤ He should also do eye exercises to relax his eyes and go to bed early at night. I think if he has a good rest, he will feel better soon.⑥ 名师点评 [主题评价]文章结构清晰，开篇引出话题，指出Jack的不良生活习惯。主体用一般现在时态介绍平时的爱好情况，然后指出造成的影响，接着提出建议，结尾表达美好的愿望。要点全面，时态运用正确，符合写作要求。 ①开篇点题，介绍朋友不好的爱好，引出平时的表现情况。 ②用“be used to doing sth”介绍Jack的坏习惯。 ③过渡短语“As a result”运用得当，自然而然地过渡到不良爱好引发的后果。 ④用“have a＋疾病”和“have(a)sore＋身体部位”说明 Jack的身体情况， 运用恰当，体现了作者扎实的写作功底。 ⑤用could和shouldn't提建议，完美地融合了本单元语法，做到学以致用。 ⑥用含有if引导的第一条件句表达愿望，表现出对朋友委婉的建议。 众所周知，健康的身体是中学生有效学习的保证。但是网络抢走了我们的锻炼时间，垃圾食品危害着我们的健康……请根据下面的思维导图，以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇英语短文。 写作要求： (1)层次清晰，语言流畅； (2)词数在90～100之间，标题已给出，不计入总词数； (3)书写规范，卷面整洁； (4)文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 How to Keep Healthy It's important for us to keep healthy. As middle school students, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Here is some advice. First, we should do exercise at least one hour a day，such as running and walking. Second, have a healthy diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Try not to eat junk food. Third, we shouldn't spend too much time going online. It is bad for our eyes. Fourth, go to bed early and don't stay up too late, because enough sleep is good for our health. Finally, be happy as often as we can. Learn to smile at ourselves at any time. If we do so, I believe we can keep healthy. All in all, we should do what we can to learn to keep healthy and protect ourselves. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $