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[答案 P3]
本单元以“课余活动及爱好”为话题, 写作时要求围绕这一话题谈论自己或他人的业余爱好, 要恰当运用频度副词描述事情发生的频率, 介绍业余活动的形式要多样化, 还要谈及带来的积极影响。
主题范畴: 人与自我
主题群: 生活与爱好
子主题: 自我管理(丰富、充实、积极向上的业余生活)
[开头句]
1.阅读是我最喜欢的业余活动之一。(one of my favourite)
Reading is one of my favourite freetime activities.
2.我有许多业余爱好, 比如绘画和练书法。(such as)
I have many freetime hobbies, such as painting and doing calligraphy.
3.我喜欢在我的空余时间弹钢琴。(like doing sth)
I like playing the piano in my free time.
[中间句]
1.我把时间花费在对我有好处的爱好上面。(spend…on)
I spend time on the hobbies that are good for me.
2.每天早上我花半小时在公园跑步。(It takes…to do sth)
It takes me half an hour to run in the park in the morning.
3.我认为在空余时间听音乐是个放松的好方式。(a good way to relax)
I think listening to music in my free time is a good way to relax.
[结尾句]
1.我很开心开始培养这个爱好。(have fun doing sth)
I have fun taking up this hobby.
2.与朋友们打篮球是很好的锻炼。(It's…to do sth)
It's good exercise to play basketball with friends.
3.我从业余爱好中受益很多。(benefit from)
I benefit a lot from my freetime hobbies.
[佳句积累]
1.A happy child has a hobby. 每一个快乐的孩子都有爱好。
2.No man is really happy or safe without a hobby.
一个人若没有点爱好,便难获真正的快乐与安稳。
假设你是小明, 你将在明天的班会上介绍你们班学生周末的业余爱好情况。请你根据图表信息写一份调查报告, 并谈谈你的看法和建议。
写作要求:
(1)层次清晰,语言流畅;
(2)词数在90~100之间,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)书写规范,卷面整洁;
(4)文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
Hello, everyone! I'm glad to have such a chance to give the report about the freetime hobbies and activities at the weekend.
I hope every student can have a nice weekend.
Hello, everyone! I'm glad to have such a chance to give the report about the freetime hobbies and activities at the weekend.①
According to the result of the survey②, 55 percent of the students in our class stay at home to spend the weekend, doing the homework or playing with smart phones③. 20 percent go out for fun that they enjoy with family or friends.③ 13 percent take exercise by running, playing basketball, table tennis and so on. The other 12 percent go to the library to read books that attract them.③ What a difference!
From this survey, we can find that more than half of the students stay at home and only a few exercise. I'm a little worried about④ the classmates' health. I advise we should spend more of our free time on exercise to keep healthy.⑤
I hope every student can have a nice weekend.
名师点评
[主题评价]文章结构清晰, 开篇点题, 指出有这样一个机会做这个调查报告。主体用一般现在时态介绍班级学生周末的业余爱好情况, 结尾谈及看法和建议。要点全面, 时态运用正确, 符合写作要求。
①开篇点题, 委婉地指出写作主题(做调查报告)。
②过渡短语运用得当, 自然而然地过渡到介绍班级学生周末的业余爱好情况。
③现在分词作伴随状语(doing the homework or playing with smart phones)和定语从句(that they enjoy; that attract them)的恰当运用体现了作者扎实的写作功底。
④“I'm a little worried about…”生动地体现了作者对于同学们健康状况的担忧。
⑤“I advise”表达出给同学们善意的建议。
没有爱好的人生是无聊的。丰富的业余爱好可以增添生活的乐趣, 陶冶情操。你在空闲时间做什么?有什么业余爱好?请在班会上和同学们分享一下吧。
写作提示:
(1)谈论你的业余爱好;
(2)你的业余爱好给你带来的好处;
(3)你的感受。
写作要求:
(1)层次清晰,语言流畅;
(2)词数在90~100之间,开头部分已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)书写规范,卷面整洁;
(4)文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
Good morning, everyone! I'm very pleased to have such a chance to share my freetime hobbies with all of you here.
The life without hobbies is boring. However, my life is wonderful because I take up some hobbies. In the morning, I get up early, open my English books and read aloud. In this way, I improve my English a lot. What's more, I enjoy drawing pictures after finishing homework, which helps to remember a beautiful landscape or object, and it can reduce stress. At weekends, I usually play sports, such as playing tennis and doing yoga. They can help me to keep fit and healthy.
Hobbies add colour and pleasure to my life. Let's take action and take up our hobbies.
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