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[答案 P19]
本单元的话题是“学校旅行”,要求能描述学校旅行期间所发生的事情及个人感受。写作时,首先要注意正确使用一般过去时;其次要注意使用正确的人称;最后要注意交代事情发生的时间、地点、经过及个人感受等。
范畴:人与自我
主题群:生活与学习
子主题:丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
[开头句]
1.我和……参加了一次学校旅行。
I went on a school trip with…
2.上周日,我和……参观了……
Last Sunday, I visited…with…
[中间句]
3.我们乘坐……去了……
We went to…by…
4.我们花了……到达那里。
It took us…to arrive/get there.
5.我们玩得很开心。
We had fun/had a great time.
[结尾句]
6.总的来说,这是一次令人兴奋的旅行。
All in all, it was an exciting trip.
7.我们感到很累,但很高兴。
We felt tired but happy.
假如今天是5月18日(周日),你们班组织了一次学校旅行。请你写一篇日记,介绍一下此次学校旅行。内容包括参加旅行的人员、集合时间、天气、旅行地点、交通方式、活动内容及个人感受等。
要求:(1)条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确;
(2)词数60左右。
提取要点
今天是周日,你们班组织了一次学校旅行。内容包括参加旅行的人员、集合时间、天气、旅行地点、交通方式、活动内容及个人感受等。
Sunday, 18 May
I went on a school trip with my classmates today.①
It was sunny and warm. We met at 7:30 in the morning and we went to the countryside by bus.① It took us two hours to get there.② We saw quite a lot of animals there. There I fed chickens and milked a cow. I also learned to ride a horse. It was so much fun. In the afternoon, we helped the farmers pick apples. I was interested in it. Then a farmer showed us around the farm and we learned a lot about farming.
All in all, it was really an interesting trip.③
名师点评
[主题评价]文章结构清晰,首尾呼应,要点全面,按照时间顺序描述了上午和下午的活动。作者通过描述此次去农村郊游的经历,表达了对生活的热爱。
①较好地运用一般过去时描述去农村郊游的经历(包括时间、地点、交通工具等)。
②用“It took sb+时间+to do sth”说明去往目的地所用的时间。
③用“All in all, it was an interesting trip”表达自己对这次学校旅行的感受。
请根据下面的内容提示写一篇英语日记,描述你们周六去农场郊游的经历。
内容提示:
(1)今天是6月7日,你们骑自行车去阳光农场(Sunshine Farm)郊游;
(2)上午你们给奶牛挤奶、喂鸡,还摘了新鲜的(fresh)蔬菜;下午你们在农场散步,和农场主聊天;
(3)你们玩得很开心。
写作要求:
(1)文中须包含所有要点提示,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
(3)词数70左右。
Saturday, 7 June
Today, we had a great trip. We went to Sunshine Farm by bike. In the morning, we milked cows and fed chickens. We also went to the field to pick some fresh vegetables. It was interesting. In the afternoon, we went for a walk on the farm. We talked with the farmer and he told us something about his farm. We learned a lot and we had a good time on the farm. We were tired but happy.
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