UNIT 2 Section Ⅳ Writing a biography-【优学精讲】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第三册教用课件（外研版）

该高中英语课件聚焦人物传记写作，以屠呦呦传记范文为导入，通过品范文、析语言结构、背出彩佳句搭建学习支架，再以钱学森传记写作为实践，形成“输入—分析—模仿—输出”的连贯学习脉络。 其亮点在于融合语言能力、文化意识与思维品质培养。通过分析范文时态运用（如“By+过去时间点用过去完成时”）和“总—分—总”结构，提升语言表达与逻辑思维；借助屠呦呦、钱学森事迹渗透家国情怀，增强文化意识。实例丰富，如写作步骤分解（审题、要点、衔接）和词汇语料积累，助力学生系统掌握写作技巧，教师可直接用于教学，提升教学效率。

Section Ⅳ　Writing a biography 目 录 01 细品课文·学手法 02 演练佳作·写美文 03 教材词汇·练续写 04 课时检测·提能力 细品课文·学手法 目 录 Step 1｜品教材范文 　　In 2015， for the first time， a Chinese scientist won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine.She is Tu Youyou. 　　Born in Ningbo， Zhejiang Province on 30 December 1930， Tu Youyou studied at Beijing Medical College （now Peking University Health Science Centre） from 1951 to 1955.Since 1955， she has worked at China Academy of Chinese Medical Sciences as a tenured and chief researcher.In 1969， she worked as the leader of a research team aiming 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） to discover a treatment for malaria. By 1972， she had managed to extract qinghaosu from a Chinese herb， which is very effective in fighting malaria.Fourteen years later， she obtained a New Drug Certificate for qinghaosu， issued by the Ministry of Health of China.Because of her great contribution， she was presented with the Nobel Prize at the age of 85.In 2019， she was also nominated for “The Greatest Person of the 20th Century”. 　　Not only has she saved many people suffering from malaria， but also she has proved the effectiveness of Chinese herbs.Furthermore， she is admired because she devotes most of her time and energy to medical research. 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） Step 2｜析写作手法 学语言 　　首段中使用了时间状语for the first time，强调了获得此奖项的重 要性。 　　主体段中使用了过去分词短语Born in Ningbo ...1930作状语，语 言简洁，语义表达明确；用“Since＋过去的时间点（主句使用现在完 成时）”进一步说明了屠呦呦的奉献精神；使用动词-ing短语aiming to ...for malaria作后置定语，明确指出该研究团队的目标；用“By＋ 过去的时间点（主句使用过去完成时）”说明了所取得的成绩，同时 用which引导的非限制性定语从句说明了青蒿素的疗效。 　　尾段中使用了部分倒装句Not only has she ...from malaria，使句 式富有变化，突出屠呦呦所做出的贡献。 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 　　本文使用了“总—分—总”结构。首段开门见山，通过叙述屠呦 呦的主要成就，对其进行总体介绍，以引起读者的关注；主体段以屠 呦呦为中心组织材料，按时间顺序介绍其出生、教育背景、工作经历 以及突出贡献等；尾段对屠呦呦进行评价，主要从所带来的影响或给 人们的启示等方面进行展开。 学结构 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） Step 3｜背出彩佳句 一、开门见山，介绍人物的一些个人信息 1. Known as a famous medical scientist in the Ming Dynasty， Li Shizhen was born in 1518. 李时珍生于1518年，是明代一位著名的医学家。 2. Having a gift for writing， he made up his mind to become a writer when he grew up. 他有写作的天赋，并决心长大后成为一名作家。 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 二、个人的成长经历以及取得的成就 1. Li Shizhen wrote a book called Ben Cao Gang Mu， which is a collection of Chinese herbs including over 2，000 Chinese herbs with millions of characters. 李时珍著有《本草纲目》一书，这是一本中草药的集锦，收录了2， 000多种中草药，有数百万字。 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 2. In order to finish the task， he visited mountains， called on ordinary people， tasted different kinds of herbs and even did experiments by himself. 为了完成这项任务，他走访了大山，拜访了普通人，品尝各种药草， 甚至亲自做试验。 3. It took him 37 years to finish the task， and his book is considered to be a great contribution to the development of Chinese medicine. 他花了37年才完成这一任务，他的书被认为对中医药的发展作出了巨 大贡献。 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 三、总结概括人物形象 1. Such is Wang Xiaoping， a simple man who has made great achievements in the field of medicine. 这就是王小平，一个在医学领域取得巨大成就的普通人。 2. His story tells us that we should value what we have and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life. 他的故事告诉我们，我们应该珍惜我们所拥有的，尽我们最大的努力 克服生活中的任何困难。 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 3. Madame Curie made great contributions to the development of science， which paved the way for further research. 居里夫人对科学的发展作出了巨大的贡献，为进一步的研究铺平 了道路。 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 演练佳作·写美文 目 录 　　某中学生英文报开设了“人物传记”栏目。请你根据以下内容，为这个栏目写一篇关于钱学森的英文传记。 人物身份 杰出科学家，我国航天事业的先驱者 生平 （1）1911年12月11日出生于一个富裕家庭，少时天资聪 颖，被称为“神童”； （2）1934年大学毕业，1935年前往美国深造； （3）1955年回国，致力于中国航天事业，参与火箭研究，开启中国航天时代； （4）2009年10月31日于北京逝世 评价 成绩斐然，被誉为“中国航天之父” 注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 一、审题谋篇，结构分明 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 二、要点陈述，语言规范 1. 钱学森是中国最杰出的科学家之一，也是中国航天事业的先驱者。 （outstanding， aerospace industry） ⁠ ⁠ 2. 钱学森于1911年12月11日出生于一个富裕的家庭。（be born into） ⁠ Qian Xuesen is one of the most outstanding scientists in China and a pioneer of China’s aerospace industry. Qian Xueshen was born into a wealthy family on 11 December 1911. 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 3. 他非常聪明，以至于童年时被称为“神童”。（so ...that ...， refer to） ⁠ ⁠ 4. 1934年大学毕业后，他于次年前往美国深造，并获得了博士学位。 （graduate from， further studies， gain） ⁠ ⁠ He was so clever that he was referred to as a “wonder child” in his childhood. He graduated from university in 1934， and went to America for further studies in the following year and gained his doctorate. 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 5. 1955年回国后，他投身于中国的航空航天事业。（devote oneself to） ⁠ ⁠ 6. 他在火箭的研发中发挥了重要作用。（major） ⁠ 7. 2009年10月31日，钱学森于北京逝世。（pass away） ⁠ After he returned to China in 1955， he devoted himself to China’s aerospace programme. He played a major role in the development of rockets. On 31 October 2009， Qian passed away in Beijing. 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 8. 因为他的杰出成就，钱学森被誉为“中国航天之父”。（be regarded as， because of） ⁠ ⁠ Qian Xuesen is regarded as the “father of Chinese aerospace” because of his outstanding achievements. 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 三、句间衔接，过渡自然 9. 用过去分词短语作状语合并句2和句3。 ⁠ ⁠ 10. 用动词-ing短语的完成式作状语改写句4。 ⁠ ⁠ Born into a wealthy family on 11 December 1911， Qian Xuesen was so clever that he was referred to as a “wonder child” in his childhood. Having graduated from university in 1934， he went to America for further studies in the following year and gained his doctorate. 11. 用强调句改写句8。 ⁠ ⁠ It is because of his outstanding achievements that Qian Xuesen is regarded as the “father of Chinese aerospace”. 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 四、检查誊写，卷面整洁 　　 ⁠ ⁠ 　　 　Qian Xuesen is one of the most outstanding scientists in China and a pioneer of China’s aerospace industry.　 　　 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ 　　 　Born into a wealthy family on 11 December 1911， Qian Xuesen was so clever that he was referred to as a “wonder child” in his childhood.Having graduated from university in 1934， he went to America for further studies in the following year and gained his doctorate.After he returned to China in 1955， he devoted himself to China’s aerospace programme.He played a major role in the development of rockets.On 31 October 2009， Qian passed away in Beijing.　 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 　　 ⁠ ⁠ 　　 　It is because of his outstanding achievements that Qian Xuesen is regarded as the “father of Chinese aerospace”.　 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 教材词汇·练续写 目 录 词汇 情感 描写 sensitive adj.敏感的，容易生气的 relief n.减轻，缓解→relieved adj.放心的，感到宽慰的 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 词汇 动作 描写 earn v.挣（钱） donate v.捐赠，捐献 extend v.持续；延伸 break into a smile突然笑起来 hesitate v.迟疑，犹豫→hesitation n.犹豫 assistance n.帮助，援助→assist v.帮助 rise to one’s feet站起身来 obtain v.获得，得到 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 词汇 人物 描写 insight n.顿悟，猛醒 disability n.残疾，残障 perseverance n.不屈不挠，坚持不懈 generous adj.慷慨的，大方的 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 佳句 ①At first， his plan was to earn money to build a single well somewhere in Africa. （动作描写） 起初，他的计划是挣些钱在非洲某个地方挖一口井。 ②He started to ask for help from his classmates and neighbours and persuaded them to donate money. （动作描写） 他开始向他的同学和邻居求助，劝说他们捐款。 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 佳句 ③A shocked Winton watched as the majority of people rose to their feet. （动作描写） 温顿震惊地看到在场的大多数人都站了起来。 ④The whole family was relieved when they found out that their missing dog had been found by a kind neighbor. （情感描写） 当全家人得知失踪的狗被一位好心的邻居找到时，他们都感到宽慰。 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 情境导语：马克在骑车时突然听到保罗的呼喊，他毫不犹豫地跳下 车，冲进了保罗的车里。然而，当他意识到其他同伴还在修理自行 车时，他的心一下子提到了嗓子眼…… 第一步：完成句子雏形现 1. 保罗透过窗户喊道：“快上车！” ⁠ Paul shouted through the window，“Get in the car quickly！” 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 2. 马克毫不犹豫地跳下自行车，坐到汽车后座上。 ⁠ ⁠ 3. 在他的帮助下，马克安全了。 ⁠ 4. “哦，天哪，我的朋友还在修自行车！”马克喊道。 ⁠ ⁠ 5. 保罗很快把车开回去了。 ⁠ Mac jumped off the bicycle and into the back seat of the car without hesitation. With his assistance， Mac was safe. “Oh，my god，my friends are still repairing the bicycle！” shouted Mac. Paul drove the car back quickly. 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 6. 幸运的是，几分钟后，他们找到了另外两个骑自行车的人。 ⁠ 7. 马克松了一口气，对保罗说：“没有你的慷慨相助，我将成为狼的 晚餐。” ⁠ ⁠ 8. 听到这些，保罗笑了起来。 ⁠ Luckily， a few minutes later， they found the other two cyclists. Mac breathed a sigh of relief and said to Paul， “Without your generous assistance， I would be the dinner of the wolf.” Hearing this， Paul broke into a smile. 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 第二步：过渡衔接连成篇 　　 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ 　　 　Paul shouted through the window，“Get in the car quickly！” Mac jumped off the bicycle and into the back seat of the car without hesitation.With his assistance， Mac was safe.“Oh， my god， my friends are still repairing the bicycle！” shouted Mac.Paul drove the car back quickly.Luckily，a few minutes later，they found the other two cyclists.Mac breathed a sigh of relief and said to Paul，“Without your generous assistance， I would be the dinner of the wolf.” Hearing this， Paul broke into a smile.　 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 课时检测·提能力 目 录 Ⅰ.完形填空 　　（2025·辽宁抚顺高一下期中） After the Hurricane Francine， a dramatic rescue was broadcast on live television.On the evening of Wednesday， 11 September， Miles Crawford， an off-duty emergency nurse in Lakeview， Louisiana， sprang into action when he learned someone was  　　1　 in a sinking （下沉的） pickup truck in floodwaters just 200 feet from his home. 　　At around 8：45 pm， Crawford received an  　　2　 call from his brother， saying that a news reporter accidentally caught a（n）  　　3　 scene.A truck dived into a nearby river with the driver stuck in it. 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 　　Without hesitation， Crawford  　　4　 to the scene.As Crawford got closer to the sinking  　　5　， a police officer told him about the  　　6　 conditions.Despite the  　　7　， Crawford quickly took matters into his own hands.At the sudden realisation of the  　　8　 of a tool to break the window， he rushed back to his house to take a hammer.When he  　　9　 the chest-high floodwaters and came to the vehicle， the water had  　　10　 the driver’s chin （下巴）， and time was running out.Crawford  　　11　 the man to move to the back of the truck， where the water was slightly shallower （浅）， and  　　12　 the back window with his hammer. 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 　　He pulled the man out， guided him through the floodwaters， and helped him climb over to  　　13　.Just 10 minutes later， the truck  　　14　 fully into the water. 　　Crawford said his background as an emergency nurse helped him stay  　　15　 throughout the rescue.“I’m used to high stress and high level of things on a daily basis，” he told news reporters. 语篇解读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了迈尔斯·克劳福德救 出掉入水中的卡车司机的故事。 语篇解读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了迈尔斯·克劳福德救 出掉入水中的卡车司机的故事。 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 1. A. recognised B. trapped C. filled D. concentrated 解析： 　根据下文可知，有人被困在下沉的皮卡车里。 √ 2. A. unacceptable B. unbelievable C. unavoidable D. unexpected √ 解析： 　根据下文可知，这是一场事故，所以当克劳福德接到电话 时是非常意外的。 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 3. A. heart-breaking B. funny-looking C. heart-warming D. eye-catching √ 解析： 　根据下文可知，司机被困在车里，车在下沉，这个场景是 令人心碎的。 4. A. jumped B. drove C. ran D. hike 解析： 　根据上文Without hesitation可知，由于情况紧急，克劳福德 毫不犹豫地跑到现场。 √ 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 5. A. truck B. water C. house D. river 解析： 　根据上文可知，司机被困在卡车里，所以克劳福德靠近的 是下沉的卡车。 6. A. unique B. amazing C. safe D. dangerous 解析： 　根据上文可知，卡车在下沉，情况很危险。 7. A. prevention B. alarm C. warning D. efforts 解析： 　根据上文可知，警察给了克劳福德危险警告。 √ √ √ 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 8. A. delivery B. control C. loss D. need 解析： 　根据上下文可知，上文讲到司机被困在车里，所以需要一 个工具来打破窗户。 √ 9. A. dived into B. checked out C. looked into D. worked out 解析： 　根据下文可知，克劳福德潜入了很深的水里。 √ 10. A. attempted B. reached C. washed D. damaged √ 解析： 　根据上下文可知，此处指水位已经达到了司机的下巴。 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 11. A. appreciated B. promised C. prevented D. instructed 解析： 　根据下文可知，克劳福德指导司机逃生。 √ 12. A. closed B. struck C. broke D. conducted 解析： 根据下文可知，为了逃生，必须打破窗户。 √ 13. A. safety B. distance C. source D. entrance √ 解析： 　根据上文可知，克劳福德最终将司机带到了安全的地方。 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 14. A. survived B. sank C. damaged D. dropped 解析： 　根据第一段中的in a sinking （下沉的） pickup truck in floodwaters可知，最后卡车下沉了。 15. A. smart B. formal C. calm D. different 解析： 　根据下文可知，对于克劳福德来说，高压工作是正常的， 因此，这种训练能帮助他在救援中保持冷静。 √ √ 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） Ⅱ.语法填空 　　（2025·广东高一下期中） If you look around your city， you might spot people wearing hanfu in subways or on the streets.A new trend is taking hold in China-guochao， or “China-chic”. 　　According to a report 16. 　　 （publish） recently， a large number of searches related to guochao on Dianping， a lifestyle information platform， 17. 　　 （conduct） at home and abroad over the past few years.China-chic is happening， but what is it？ 　　18.  　　 has been confirmed that China-chic came under the spotlight in 2018. 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 　　During the 2018 New York Fashion Week， Li-Ning introduced its Wu Dao collection which 19. 　　 （inspire） by Taoism.The collection not only had a striking look， but it also included elements of traditional Chinese culture.So attractive was the collection 20. 　　 the company recorded 20 per cent revenue growth in 2018.It was the first time that the brand’s revenue 21. 　　 （hit） the-10-billion-yuan mark since its founding.Now， the guochao trend is moving to the next stage 22. 　　 its success will rely first and foremost 23. 　　 gaining cultural confidence rather than Western recognition. 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 　　No matter 24. 　　 the guochao trend develops， there’s one thing that won’t change： The passion comes from people’s positive attitude toward the country’s development and their 25. 　　 （grow） confidence in national culture， said Yao Linqing， a professor in the School of Economics and Management at Communication University of China. 语篇解读：本文是一篇新闻报道。文章主要介绍了中国“国潮”现 象的兴起、发展及其背后的文化意义。 语篇解读：本文是一篇新闻报道。文章主要介绍了中国“国潮”现 象的兴起、发展及其背后的文化意义。 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 16. published　考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，本空用非谓语 动词，report和publish之间是逻辑上的动宾关系，因此空处用过去分 词表被动，作后置定语。故填published。 17. have been conducted　考查时态、语态和主谓一致。根据over the past few years可知，句子时态用现在完成时；searches和conduct之间是 逻辑上的动宾关系，因此空处用现在完成时的被动语态；主语是复 数。故填have been conducted。 18. It　考查代词。that China-chic came under the spotlight in 2018是主 语从句，空处用it作形式主语，位于句首首字母应大写。故填It。 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 19. was inspired　考查时态、语态和主谓一致。由by可知，句子用被 动语态，由During the 2018 New York Fashion Week可知，句子描述过 去的事情，因此空处用一般过去时的被动语态，which指代的先行词 Wu Dao collection是单数。故填was inspired。 20. that　考查结果状语从句。根据语境可知，句子表示“这个系列非 常吸引人，以至于该公司在2018年的收入增长了20％”，句子用 so ...that ...引导结果状语从句，且句子用了倒装。故填that。 21. had hit　考查时态。It was the first time that sb had done sth是固定 句型，意为“这是某人第一次做某事”。故填had hit。 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 22. where　考查定语从句。空处引导限制性定语从句，从句中不缺主 语或宾语，先行词stage是抽象地点名词，应用where引导定语从句。 故填where。 23. on　考查介词。rely on是固定短语，意为“依赖”。故填on。 24. how　考查让步状语从句。根据语境可知，句子表示“无论国潮 趋势如何发展，有一点始终不变——这股热潮的根源，在于民众对国 家发展的积极态度以及对民族文化日益增长的自信”，空处意为“如 何”，应用how，no matter how意为“无论如何”，引导让步状语从 句。故填how。 25. growing　考查形容词。空处用形容词作定语，修饰名词 confidence，grow的形容词是growing，意为“日益增长的”。故填 growing。 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） Ⅲ.读后续写 　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文。 　　（2025·陕西榆林高一下期中） Emily was struggling to make ends meet， working two jobs just to afford a tiny apartment in the heart of the city.Despite her efforts， she often found herself feeling overwhelmed by the hardship of city life. 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 　　One cold evening， as Emily got home from her second job， she noticed a homeless man on the street corner， shaking under a thin blanket （毯子）.His eyes， filled with a mixture of hopelessness and tiredness， met hers briefly before he lowered his head. 　　Without a second thought， Emily approached the man and offered him her scarf.“Here， you must be cold，” she said softly， putting the scarf around his shoulders.The man looked up at her， his eyes widening in surprise at this unexpected act of kindness.“Thank you，” he said. 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 　　From that day on， Emily made it a habit to stop and chat with the homeless man， whose name she learned was Greg.She brought him hot meals， blankets， and sometimes even books to pass the time.In return， Greg shared stories of his past — a life once filled with love and laughter， now lost to the cold streets. 　　As the days passed by， Emily found herself looking forward to their daily encounters （相遇）.In Greg， she found a similar spirit — a gentle soul beaten by life’s hardships but still resilient （坚韧的）.And in Emily， Greg found a light of hope — a reminder that even in the darkest of times， there are still pockets of light to be found. 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 　　One evening， as Emily sat beside Greg on the cold street， she noticed something unusual in his eyes.“What is it， Greg？” she asked， sensing his unspoken thoughts.Greg hesitated for a moment before speaking， his voice shaking with emotion.“I want to change my life， Emily，” he said.“I want to leave these streets behind and start a new.” 注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式作答。 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 　　“I believe in you， Greg，” Emily smiled， with pride for her friend. 　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　One sunny afternoon， Greg went to the same street corner. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 参考范文： 　　“I believe in you， Greg，” Emily smiled， with pride for her friend.She placed a hand on his shoulder.“And I’ll be here to support you every step of the way.” With Emily’s support， Greg started a new journey.He worked in local shelters to rebuild his life from the ground up.Later， he found a job to support himself.Then he rented a small apartment， where he could enjoy good sleep and hot food.He bore in mind that through it all， Emily stood by his side， offering encouragement. 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） 　　One sunny afternoon， Greg went to the same street corner.He waited there until he noticed a familiar figure approaching — yes， it was Emily.Greg’s eyes were bright with joy.“Emily，” he called out， his voice filled with excitement.“Thank you for believing in me when no one else would.You’ve given me a second chance at life， and I’ll never forget it！” Tears welled up in Emily’s eyes as she saw a totally different Greg.“You did this all on your own， Greg，” she said， her heart overflowing with pride. 目 录 英语·必修第三册（WY） $