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英语
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主题2 身心健康,抗挫能力,珍爱生命[2020]
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【主题角度探究】①疾病与身体健康[2020]; ②心理健康; ③安全意
识与自我保护
【教材主题链接】
角度 人教版教材单元&话题
疾病与身体健康 七上U6食物 七下U10食物
八上U2保持健康 八下U1健康与急救
心理健康 九全U11感受 /
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温馨提示: 该主题优质写作范文见《晨读册》P11
疾病与身体健康(illnesses and physical health)
What's wrong/the matter with you?
★I have a headache/ ____________________________________________.
have a cold 感冒 have a fever 发烧 have a cough 咳嗽
have a headache 头疼 have a toothache 牙疼 have a stomachache 胃疼
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have a sore throat 喉咙疼 have a runny nose 流鼻涕 cut oneself 割伤自己
hurt the leg 伤到了腿 have poor eyesight 视力不好
★①I have a pain in my leg/ _____________________________________.
②There is something wrong with my knee/ _______________________.
head 头 eye 眼睛 nose 鼻子
neck 脖子 shoulder 肩膀 arm 胳膊
hand 手 knee 膝盖 leg 腿
foot 脚 back 背部
What advice will the doctor or others give you?
★①You should/had better ________________________________________.
②You need to/Don't forget to/It's important to _____________________.
see a doctor 看医生 take one's temperature 量体温
take some medicine 吃药 stay in bed 卧床休息
have a good rest 好好休息 drink more water 多喝水
eat light food 吃清淡食物 avoid cold drinks/sweets 避免冷饮/甜食
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Why is health so important?
Health is so important because it is the foundation(基础) of everything
we do.
Good health is the key to a happy and successful life.
There's no doubt that nothing is more important than our health.
As is known to all, good health is the first step to do everything well.
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How can you keep physically healthy?
★①In order to keep physically healthy, we'd better/should (not)_______
___________________________________________________________.
②We're supposed to __________________________________________.
③It's necessary/important for us to ______________________________.
stay up late 熬夜 take/do more exercise 多运动
have a healthy diet 健康饮食 eat less junk food 少吃垃圾食品
eat more fruit and vegetables 多吃水果和蔬菜
have/get enough sleep 得到充足的睡眠
go to bed early and get up early 早睡早起
take breaks away from computers 离开电脑休息片刻
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The more you exercise, the healthier you will be.
It's of great importance to get enough sleep, or we'll feel sleepy the
next day.
Going to bed early and getting up early is one of the good habits of a
healthy life.
If you want to stay healthy, you'd better eat more fruit and vegetables
instead of junk food.#4.15
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心理健康(mental health)
Do you have any mental health problems in your life? Why?
feel lonely 感到孤独 too much homework 过多的作业
worry about exams 担心考试
feel stressed about grades 对成绩感到压力大
high expectations from parents 父母的高期望
argue with parents 与父母争吵
have trouble(in) making friends 交朋友有困难
compare oneself to others 将自己与他人进行比较
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I often feel nervous before exams because I'm afraid of getting bad grades.
Many students begin to lose interest in learning because of too much
homework.
Sometimes, I don't know how to talk to my parents when we have
different ideas.
High expectations from parents can make us try harder, but they can
make us feel stressed about grades as well.#1.12
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How do you deal with mental health problems?/How do you reduce
stress?
learn to relax 学会放松 listen to music 听音乐
do/play sports 做运动 take a deep breath 深呼吸
develop a hobby 培养一个爱好 ask others for help 向他人求助
join a school club 加入一个学校社团
have a positive attitude 保持积极的态度
share feelings with others 与他人分享感受
talk to parents and friends 与父母和朋友交谈
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We can relax ourselves by listening to music and doing sports.
Whenever you feel stressed, talking to someone you trust is always the
first step to feel better.
Sharing our feelings with other people, such as parents and friends, is
also a helpful way.
We should have a positive attitude towards failures and problems. In this
way, we will have more courage to face the challenges ahead.#2.14
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What can you do to protect yourselves?
★①We must/should/had better ____________________________________.
②We mustn't/shouldn't/had better not ____________________________.
swim alone 独自游泳 keep/stay calm 保持冷静
call the police for help 报警求救 talk to strangers 和陌生人交谈
be careful with fire 小心用火 stay/keep away from danger 远离危险
follow the traffic rules 遵守交通规则
cross the street at the crosswalk 在人行横道处过马路
be careful when making friends 谨慎交友
protect personal/private information 保护个人信息
安全意识与自我保护(safety awareness and self-protection)
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Before crossing the street,we must always look both ways to make sure
it is safe.
Never swim alone in the river,and we'd better go to the swimming pool
with our parents if we really want to swim.
If we are in danger, we should call the police for help in time so that
we can keep safe.
It's best to take care of your private information. Never tell an online
stranger where you live.#1.1.13
以下句子可连成一篇小作文
1.在我看来,健康是世界上最重要的东西。
In my opinion, health is the ________________ thing in the world.
2.因此, 我们有必要知道如何保持健康。
So, it is necessary for us to know how to _________________.
most important
keep/stay healthy
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3.强烈建议我们应该吃更多健康的食物而不是垃圾食品。
It is strongly suggested that we should eat more healthy food
___________ junk food.
instead of
4.下定决心对熬夜说“不”是个明智的选择。
It's a wise choice to make up our mind to say “no” to _______________.
staying up late
5.最重要的是,我们最好每天都进行锻炼。
The most important thing is that we'd better ________________ every
day.
take/do exercise
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As is known to all, ① nothing is more important than health. One
can achieve nothing without a healthy body. So you must take good care
of your health. Here are some suggestions.
Firstly, ② it's important to keep your body healthy. In my opinion,
having a healthy diet and doing sports will help you have a strong body.
What's more, to take good care of yourself, learning some life skills
is necessary. ③ For example, learn to cook and do the dishes in your
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free time. It not only helps your parents with housework,but also makes
you more independent. Last but not least, ④ good sleep habits are so
important that they directly affect your energy and mood. So you should
avoid staying up late and get enough sleep every day.
All in all, ⑤the better you take care of yourself, the brighter
future you'll have.#1.2
①比较级“more important”结合否定词“nothing”, 表达最高级的含义。开
门见山强调健康至高无上, 立场鲜明, 感染力强。
②固定句式it's+adj.+(for sb.) to do sth., (对某人来说)做某事是……的。
③For example扩写具体事例, 贴近生活, 增强说服力。
④巧用so…that…结果状语从句, 强调睡眠习惯对精力和情绪的直接影响。
⑤结尾套用“the+比较级…, the+比较级…”结构, 凝练有力。
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Task 1:What is the passage mainly about?
_______________________________________________________
Some suggestions on how to take good care of our health.
Task 2:请根据上面的短文完成以下思维导图
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Task 3: 写作素材积累
1.好好照顾 __________________
2.在我看来 _______________
3.拥有健康的饮食 ___________________
4.例如 ____________
5.最后但同样重要的是 _________________
6.避免做某事 ________________
take good care of
in my opinion
have a healthy diet
for example
last but not least
avoid doing sth.
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7.熬夜; 晚睡 _____________
8.总之 __________
stay up late
all in all
9.锻炼得越多, 你就会越健康。
__________________ you do, _____________ you will be.
The more exercise
the healthier
10.蔬菜对健康如此有益, 我们应该每天都吃。[so… that…]
________________________________________________________________
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Vegetables are so good for health that we should eat them every day.
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Task 4: 写作微技能训练(针对亮点赏析②)
1.对年轻人来说, 花太长时间在手机上是不健康的。
_________________________________ spend too much time on their phones.
It's unhealthy for young people to
2.运动使晚上入睡更容易。[make it+adj.+to do sth.]
_____________________________________________
Exercise makes it easier to fall asleep at night.
3.Daily exercise has improved my health. [用强调句型升格]
_______________________________________________
It is daily exercise that has improved my health.
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巧用it的特殊句式
1.It's+adj.(+for sb.)+to do sth.(对某人来说)做某事是……的。
Skating is easy for me.→It is easy for me to skate.
2.It's+adj.(+of sb.)+to do sth.(某人)做某事是……的。
He helped me a lot. He is kind.→It's kind of him to help me a lot.
3.It's time to do sth./It's time for(doing) sth. 是(做)某事的时间了。
It's time to go to school./It's time for school.
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4.It takes/took sb.+一段时间+to do sth. 做某事花费某人……(多长)时间。
He spent two days making the kite.→It took him two days to make the
kite.
5.It is+adj.+that从句 ……是……的。
We should arrive on time. This is important.→
It is important that we should arrive on time.
6.It seems that… 似乎/好像……
I feel like everyone likes him.→It seems that everyone likes him.
续表
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7.find/think/make/feel it+adj.+to do sth. 发现/认为/使/感觉做某事是……的。
I find it hard to finish the work today.
8.It's a good idea to do sth. 做某事是个好主意。
It's a good idea to ask our parents for advice.
9.It is/was+被强调部分+that/who+句子剩余部分(强调句型: 被强调部分
是人时, 可用who或that, 强调其他成分, 一律用that)
The doctor told me to go to bed early.→
It was the doctor who/that told me to go to bed early.
续表
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假如你是李华, 请阅读你的英国笔友Jenny写给你的邮件, 并给她
回复。#1
Dear Li Hua,
How is it going?I'm writing because I'm worried about my eyesight
lately. It's getting poor, and my eyes often feel tired when I read or
use my phone. Could you tell me the reasons for poor eyesight? And
I'm not sure what to do with it.Would you please give me some advice? Thanks so much.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Jenny
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参考词汇: eyesight(视力), mobile phone, bad habits, be bad for,
have a break, do eye exercises, …
要求:
1.邮件必须包括来函询问的所有要点信息, 选择使用参考词汇, 可适当
发挥;
2.语句正确, 意思通顺、连贯, 书写规范;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数: 不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出, 但不计入总词数。)
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Dear Jenny,
I'm sorry to know that your eyesight is getting worse. ____________
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Yours,
Li Hua
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Step 1 审好题, 定方向
1.定主题: 介绍近视的原因及保护视力的建议;
2.定文体: 根据题干要求给笔友回复邮件可知, 文体属于 ________;
3.定人称: 根据题干邮件里Jenny的问题可知, 介绍近视原因应用第三人
称, 提建议应用 __________;
4.定时态: 客观介绍近视原因及保护视力的做法建议, 应用 __________;
5.定要点: ① __________; ② ________________; ③表达希望(补充)。
应用文
第二人称
一般现在时
近视原因
保护视力的建议
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Step 2 搭框架, 写句子
近视原因及保护视力的建议
开头 要点①:开篇点题, 阐述视力问题, 引出近视的原因
I'm sorry to know that your eyesight is getting worse.(已给出)
参考词汇: bad habits; read in the sun; read in bed; sit in
a wrong way; use mobile phones
参考句型: ①The main reason why… is that…
②Many people have poor eyesight because of…
③There are many reasons for poor eyesight, such as…
造句: ___________________________________________________
_____________________
Many people have poor eyesight because of many bad
habits of using eyes.
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近视原因及保护视力的建议
中间 要点②:介绍保护视力的建议
参考词汇: do eye exercises; have eyes examined regularly;
reduce the use of electronic products; have a rest after reading
for a while
参考句型: ①I think you should/had better… ②Why not…?
③It's important/necessary for us to…
④I believe it's a good idea to…
造句: ①_______________________________________________________
②______________________________________________
续表
I think you should spend less time using electronic products.
Why not have a rest after reading for a while?
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近视原因及保护视力的建议
结尾 要点③:重申保护视力的重要性并表达希望
参考句型: ①I hope you can… ②I hope my advice will…
③If you follow my advice, I believe…
造句: _______________________________________
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
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Step 3 成语篇, 润词句
组句成篇 润色美文
Dear Jenny,
I'm sorry to know that your eyesight is
getting worse. As far as I'm concerned, ①the main reason for poor eyesight is the bad habits of using eyes,such as reading in wrong positions,reading in bed and spending much time using electronic products. They're bad for our eyes. Here is some advice on how to protect your eyes. (针对划波浪线的句子)
①用why引导的定语从句
升格
______________________
______________________
______________________
______________________
_______________
The main reason why
many people have poor
eyesight is that they
form the bad habits of
using eyes.
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组句成篇 润色美文
First of all, ②try hard to avoid using
mobile phones or computers for a long time.
You know, the light they give off is
harmful to our eyes. Secondly, in order to
have good eyesight, you'd better go out of
the classroom to play with your classmates
or do physical exercise during the breaks. ②用it's+adj.+(for sb.) to
do sth. 句式升格
______________________
______________________
______________________
It's important to try hard to avoid using mobile phones or computers for a long time.
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组句成篇 润色美文
Besides, doing eye exercises plays an
important role in relaxing our tired eyes.
Lastly,③you should have your eyes
examined every term to make them stay
healthy.
I hope you'll find my advice helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua ③用it's a good idea to do sth. 句式升格
______________________
______________________
______________________
It's a good idea to have your eyes examined every term to make them stay healthy.
续表
温馨提示: 润色完成后, 请通篇检查一遍后在练习本上誊写下最终
范文。
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良好的身心健康能为我们的未来打下
坚实的基础, 为此, 学校校报特发起关
于青少年的心理健康(mental health)的征文
活动。请你结合所给要点, 写一篇英语
短文投稿, 谈谈我们作为青少年学生,
可以从哪些方面来帮助自己保持心理健康。
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要求:
1.短文必须包含右图提示的所有信息, 可适当发挥;
2.语句正确, 意思通顺、连贯, 书写规范;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名);
4.词数: 不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出, 但不计入总词数。)#1.2.4
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As is known to all, mental health is as important as physical
health. __________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
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As middle school students, how can we develop our mental
health? I think the following suggestions might be helpful.
Firstly, we should communicate with not only our parents and
friends but also our teachers and classmates. Communication is a
bridge that connects people. Secondly, don't be afraid of all kinds
of problems. We should be brave to face them. Thirdly, we should
be confident in ourselves. Believe that it's you who shape your own
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I hope these suggestions will help you.#1.3.2
future. What's more,we should love both ourselves and others,which
makes us become a warm person. Last but not least,be independent.
We should learn to look after ourselves so that we can live on our
own when we grow up.
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