Unit 3 Trees and us Period 5 Writing 课件 2025-2026学年沪教版英语七年级下册

Unit 3Trees and us Period 5 Writing Good morning, everyone! Are you ready for today’s lesson? Great! Today, we’re going to talk about something very important—trees! 1 写一篇植树节的现场报道脚本 你想成为一名记者吗?请你写一篇植树节当天的现场报道脚本,参加学生记者竞赛。获胜者将成为下一次学生活动的记者。 写作任务 Task 1: 范文赏析 Hello, tree lovers! Today is 12 March-Tree Planting Day. Some Grade 7 students are here in People's Park. Come with me to see what is happening. To begin with, many students are using tools to dig holes. Second, they are planting saplings into the ground. Third, they are using sticks to support the saplings and then watering the trees. Trees are good for humans because they can provide us with clean air. I think it is meaningful for us to plant' trees and we should call on people to plant trees and protect trees. 请从文章结构、内容、语言赏析本篇范文 Task 1: 范文赏析 Hello, tree lovers! Today is 12 March-Tree Planting Day. Some Grade 7 students are here in People's Park. Come with me to see what is happening. To begin with, many students are using tools to dig holes. Second, they are planting saplings into the ground. Third, they are using sticks to support the saplings and then watering the trees. Trees are good for humans because they can provide us with clean air. I think it is meaningful for us to plant' trees and we should call on people to plant trees and protect trees. 文章结构、内容 本文“现场报道” 的经典 段式结构 三 Part 1:时间、地点、原因 Part 2:按序叙事,还原活动全过程用To begin with Second Third的顺序连接词,严格按照植树的真实流程(挖坑 栽苗 支撑 + 浇水) Part 3:表达个人感悟,再用we should call on people to...发出呼吁 Task 1: 范文赏析 语言 时态: 连接词: 核心句型短语提取: are using tools to dig holes 现场报道用现在进行时(be+doing),符合语境 To begin with, Second, Third 按顺序串联动作,让文章逻辑清晰 use sth. to do sth. 用某物做某事 provide sb. with sth. 为某人提供某物 it is + adj. + for sb. to do sth. 做某事对某人来说是…… 的 call on sb. to do sth. 号召某人做某事(结尾升华必备) Task 2:句型仿写(夯实基础) Today is Tree Planting Day, and I am going to report on the students' tree planting activities. Many students are using tools to dig holes. Task 2:句型仿写(夯实基础) We plant trees because trees provide us with clean air. We should call on people to protect trees and plant trees. 假如今天是3月12日植树节。学校开展种树活动。此刻,一些学生正在操场种树。你作为学校学生会成员负责对本次活动进行直播报道。请以Tree Planting Day 为题,根据以下图片及要求写一篇直播稿。 Suppose today is March 12th. It is Tree Planting Day. There is a tree planting activity at school. Students can choose one of them to plant. Now, some students are planting trees near the playground. You are responsible to make a live report about it. Task 3:实战训练 1. Get ready: 目的 读者 文体 人称 时态 To make a live report Teachers and students in British schools A live report The third/first person The present continuous tense /The simple past tense Task 3:实战训练 1. When, where, why 2. What are they doing? Characters, weather, activity, place How do they plant tree? How do they feel? 3. How do you feel about the day? Task 3:实战训练 2. Make an outline Para.1 Para.2 Para.3 Rose Jack Tom Marry Mark (1) characters, weather, activity, place The weather is fine and students are now planting trees on some empty land near the playground. Task 3:实战训练 Task 3:实战训练 Rose Jack Tom Marry Mark (2) What are they doing? carrying a sapling taking a rest digging a deep hole planting a sapling into the hole Rose Jack Tom Marry Mark (3)How do they feel? happy sweaty tired Task 3:实战训练 Rose Jack Tom Marry Mark 3. How do you feel about the day? Adj./ Exclamation (感叹句) Task 3:实战训练 高分句型&短语银行 第一段(开头) - 短语:tree-planting activity - 句型:Come with me to see what is happening. - 时态:现在进行时(are having) 第二段(中间) - 连接词:To begin with, Second, Next, Then, Finally - 句型:use sth. to do sth.;plant the sapling into the ground - 短语:carry a sapling - 时态:统一现在进行时(is carrying/is standing/is using等) 第三段(结尾) - 句型:provide sb. with sth.;it is + adj. + for sb. to do sth.;call on sb. to do sth.;Trees are good for us because... - 短语:protect our environment Task 3:实战训练 Grade and share Elements要素 Level档次 Content内容(8分) 要点齐全,切合题意 适当发挥 Accuracy准确性(7分) 语法,大小写,拼写等格式错误 语言使用恰当,丰富 Fluency流畅性(3分) 分段,衔接,过渡 Handwriting书写(2分) 书写及卷面整洁清晰 互评总分 参考范文 Tree Planting Day Hello, everyone! Today is Tree Planting Day. We are having a tree-planting activity on our school playground. Come with me to see what is happening. To begin with, a girl is carrying a sapling, ready to plant it. Second, a boy is standing beside her, looking excited. Next, a student is using a shovel to dig holes. Then, another student is using a shovel to support the sapling, and a little girl is planting the sapling into the ground. Finally, a teacher is watching them and giving guidance. Trees are good for us because they can provide us with clean air. I think it is meaningful for us to plant trees. We should call on people to plant more trees and protect our environment. Must-do: 完成作文 背诵课文,下周三截止 Homework Beautiful scenery is our golden hills 1 $