内容正文:
Unit 4 Reading forWriting
Travel
Journal
What do you know about Jieyang Ancient City?
Have you ever visited a beautiful old town in China?
Lead-in
Lead-in
Jieyang Ancient City
揭阳古城
Zhongshan Road Old Street
中山路古街
arcade buildings (Qilou)
骑楼建筑
City God Temple 城隍庙
Shuangfeng Temple双峰寺
Jinxian Gate Tower 进贤门城楼
Jieyang Confucian Temple
揭阳学宫
Chaoshan handicrafts
潮汕手工艺品/文创
red lanterns 红灯笼
Yingge Dance 英歌舞
local snacks 特色小吃
sugar scallion thin pancake
糖葱薄饼
anti-sand salted egg yolk
反沙咸蛋黄
sugar cane juice甘蔗汁
Jieyang cultural and creative ice cream
揭阳文创雪糕
Writing
A Letter about My Trip to Jieyang Ancient City
假定你是李华,英国笔友Tom来信询问你的假期旅行情况,请你写一封回信,分享你在揭阳古城的难忘旅行经历。
要点提示:
1.写信目的;
2.在旅行的见闻感受等;
3.旅游的好处并推荐父母也来玩。
注意:
1.词数90左右。可适当补充细节使行文流畅。
2.不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息。
篇章结构:
1.时态:正文________ 描述旅行经历。
2.旅游进程时要有一个清晰明确的顺序。
注意事项:
过去时
Para. 1:开头:问候 + 写信目的(开门见山,说明要分享揭阳古城旅行)
Para. 2:主体:旅行见闻与感受
(按时间顺序:出发→景点→文化体验→ 总体感受)
Para. 3:结尾 :推荐 + 期待回复(点明旅行好处,推荐Tom来玩)
揭阳古城相关名词短语
•Jieyang Ancient City 揭阳古城
•Zhongshan Road 中山路
•City God Temple 城隍庙
•Shuangfeng Temple 双峰寺
•Jinxian Gate Tower 进贤门
•Jieyang Confucian Temple 揭阳学宫
•square 广场 •old streets 老街
•red lanterns hanging on the arcade buildings 挂在骑楼上的红灯笼
•Yingge Dance 英歌舞
• local snacks 当地小吃
•attractive shops 特色店铺
•Chaoshan handicrafts 潮汕手工艺品/文创
感受类核心词汇
•glad 高兴的 •eager 渴望的
•attractive 有吸引力的 •lively 热闹的
•spectacular 壮观的 •unique独特的
•amazed惊讶的 •excited 兴奋的
•wonderful 很棒的 • meaningful 有意义的
•tired/ exhausted 疲惫的 •impressive 令人印象深刻的 •warmth 温暖(氛围)
重点短语
•share my experience with sb. 和某人分享我的经历
•take the bus to... 乘公交车去…… •go on to... 继续前往……
•Chinese traditional culture 中国传统文化
•Chinese ancient architecture 中国古老的建筑
•take one's breath away 令人惊叹
•be full of warmth 充满温暖
•strongly advise/ recommend that... 强烈建议……
•be worth visiting 值得参观
•look forward to your reply 期待你的回复
1.How to greet in a letter
Sentence structures
How is everything going?最近一切都好吗?/ 近来可好?
I’m glad to receive the email you sent me yesterday.
我很高兴收到你昨天发给我的邮件。
Para.1:
问候
点题
+
How is everything going? I ... share my ______ (经历 / 体验) in ______ (地点) with you, because you .....
最近怎么样?我……想和你分享我的______(经历 / 体验)在______(地点)的经历,因为你 ..... 。
【例】
一切都好吗?我很高兴和你分享我在加拿大的旅行经历,因为你一直对它很感兴趣。
How is everything going?I’m glad to share my travel experience in Canada with you, because you have always been interested in it.
一切都好吗?我很高兴和你分享我在揭阳古城的旅行经历,因为你一直对中国古老的建筑很感兴趣。
How is everything going? I’m glad to share my travel experience in ___________ with you, because you have always been interested in _ .
【仿写】
Chinese ancient architecture
Jieyang Ancient City
Para.2:
你的体验
①First of all, we ______ (交通方式) to ______ (地点), where we visited some ______ (形容词) ______ (地点类名词) ______ (doing 短语,表展示 / 售卖 / 包含的内容).
【课文例句】
首先,我们飞往温哥华,在那里参观了一些出售手工艺品及古董的绝佳商店。
First of all, we flew to Vancouver, where we visited some wonderful shops selling crafts and antiques.
首先,我们坐公交去了揭阳古城,在那里我们参观了一些售卖潮汕当地小吃的特色店铺。
【仿写】
First of all, we ____________ to ___________ , where we visited some ____________ shops selling .
attractive
Jieyang Ancient City
took the bus
Chaoshan local snacks.
Para.2:
你的体验
②After that, we went on to ______ (地点). It was its ______ (名词,描述景物特征) that took our breath away with its ______ (形容词,描述美感) beauty.
【课文例句】
之后我们去了路易斯湖(Lake Louise)。其蔚蓝色的湖水呈现出令人叹为观止的美丽景色,实在让人惊叹不已。
After that, we went on to Lake Louise.It was its blue water that took our breath away with its exceptional beauty.
之后我们去了中山路。正是挂在骑楼上的红灯笼以它壮观的美让我们惊叹不已。
After that, we went on to ____________ It was( its)____________ that took our breath away with its/ their ____________ beauty.
【仿写】
Zhongshan Road
red lanterns hanging on the arcade buildings
spectacular
Para.2:
你的体验
③When we arrived in ______ (地点), we were ______ (情绪形容词) to see ______ (事物 1) and ______ (事物 2) were ______ (描述状态 / 特征).
【课文例句】
当我们抵达蒙特利尔(Montreal)时,看到到处都是法语标识和广告,我们感到十分惊讶。
When we arrived in Montreal, we were amazed to see signs and advertisements were in French.
【仿写】
当我们到达广场时,我们惊讶地看到了热闹的英歌舞,老街里充满了温暖的氛围。
When we arrived in/ at ____________ , we were ____________ to see ____________ and ____________ were ____________ .
the square
amazed
the lively Yingge Dance
the old streets
full of warmth
Para.2:
你的体验
④All in all, ______ (疲惫类形容词) as we were, we felt it was a ______ (感受形容词) experience.
【例】
尽管我们疲惫不堪,但总体而言,这仍是一次富有意义的经历。
All in all, exhausted as we were,we felt it was a meaningful experience.
尽管我们疲惫不堪,但总体而言,这仍是一次令人印象深刻的经历。
【仿写】
All in all, ____________ as we were, we felt it was ___________ .
tired
an impressive experience
Para.3:
结尾 : 推荐 + 期待回复
【仿写】
If you are ______ (表空闲的形容词), I strongly recommend/ advise that you come to visit ______ (旅游地点). It is really worth ______ (doing / 名词). Looking forward to your reply.
【例】
如果你有空的话,我强烈建议你去加拿大看看。那里真的很值得一去。期待你的回复。
If you are free/ available, I strongly advise that you come to visit Canada. It is really worth visiting. Looking forward to your reply.
如果你有空的话,我强烈建议你和父母一起来揭阳古城看看。那里真的值得一游。期待你的回复。
If you are ____________ , I strongly recommend that you come to visit
_____________________ It is really worth ____________ .
Looking forward to your reply .
free
Jieyang Ancient City with your parents
visiting
【模板】
How is everything going? I ... share my ______ (经历 / 体验) in ______ (地点) with you, because you .....
①First of all, we ______ (交通方式) to ______ (地点), where we visited some ______ (形容词) ______ (地点类名词) ______ (doing 短语,表展示 / 售卖 / 包含的内容).②After that, we went on to ______ (地点). It was its ______ (名词,描述景物特征) that took our breath away with its ______ (形容词,描述美感) beauty.③When we arrived in ______ (地点), we were ______ (情绪形容词) to see ______ (事物 1) and ______ (事物 2) were ______ (描述状态 / 特征). ④All in all, ______ (疲惫类形容词) as we were, we felt it was a ______ (感受形容词) experience.
If you are ______ (表空闲的形容词), I strongly recommend that you come to visit ______ (旅游地点). It is really worth ______ (doing / 名词). Looking forward to your reply.
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? How is everything going?I’m glad to share my travel experience in Canada with you, because you have always been interested in it.
①First of all, we flew to Vancouver, where we visited some wonderful shops selling crafts and antiques.②After that, we went on to Lake Louise.It was its blue water that took our breath away with its exceptional beauty. ③When we arrived in Montreal, we were amazed to see signs and advertisements were in French. ④All in all, exhausted as we were,we felt it was an impressive experience.
If you are available, I strongly recommend that you come to visit Canada. It is really worth it. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours ,
Li Hua
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
Greeting and purpose
What you experience
Ending :Recommendation
A
letter
about
your
journey
Summary
what you saw
what you did
what you hear
how you felt
1. Rewrite and correct your letter. Make it clean and tidy.修改并誊写你的书信,做到整洁工整。
2.Use the template to write about another place in Jieyang, like Jinxian Gate Tower..运用模板描写揭阳另一处景点,比如进贤门。
3.Introduce one place in Jieyang to
your family in simple English.
用简单英语向家人介绍一处揭阳景点
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? I’m glad to share my travel experience in Jieyang Ancient City with you, because you have always been interested in Chinese ancient architecture.
①First of all, we took the bus to Jieyang Ancient City, where we visited some attractive shops selling Chaoshan local snacks.②After that, we went on to Zhongshan Road. It was red lanterns hanging on the arcade buildings that took our breath away with their spectacular beauty. ③ When we arrived at the square, we were amazed to see the lively Yingge Dance and the old streets were full of warmth.. ④All in all, exhausted as we were,we felt it was a meaningful experience.
If you are free, I strongly recommend that you come to visit Jieyang Ancient City with your parents. It is really worth visiting. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours ,
Li Hua
Thank you!
$马踏春风来,古城焕新彩。这个新村不妨把目光投向岭南水城揭阳。2月11日,揭阳古城整体焕新升级。白天漫步于晋城公园骑楼老街,看青砖黛瓦,在冬日暖阳下尽数千年往事。夜幕降临,古城墙化身巨幕光影画卷,天幕奇观在头顶铺展金龙腾云、锦鲤细波、繁花似锦这不是普通的灯会,更像是一场穿越古今的光阴盛宴。华灯初上,马月星辰、马年大吉一盏盏花灯藏着对来年的美好期许。春节期间,英歌舞青春、贺岁潮剧等潮汕民俗轮番上演,锣鼓喧天,热闹非凡。马年新春的第一站就从揭阳开始吧,把年味拉满把福气带回家,在流光溢彩中跟家人朋友一起共度一个温暖、喜庆、难忘的中国年。