读后续写之助人篇 穿错衣服 课件-2025届高三英语二轮复习专项

Continuation Writing ——How to read and complete stories 2024.11 某某某 1. 不随意增加主要人物 2. 不添加与原文脱节的细节 3. 避免频繁使用对话 4. 段落与两段首句保持一致性，衔接有逻辑，第一段内容与文章衔接紧密，第一段最后一句与第二段开头呼应衔接，第二段最后一句总结升华主题 5. 续写内容传播正能量弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言归于好,和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法等等。 I and the other fifty girls sat on the chairs in the gym of my middle school. We waited there for the coach to give the results of the competition for roles as cheerleaders(啦啦队队员). One by one, each girl left her seat, jumping up and down as their number was called out.“Will I be one of them?”I wondered. I was getting more nervous, and each second felt like a century. “Number seventeen,” the coach called out.Hearing it, I jumped right away from my seat. And I ran over to stand next to the girls who had been chosen to be cheerleaders. We smiled and hugged each other because we became members of the 10-girl cheerleading team. During the following days, I and the other nine cheerleaders practiced for the performance. We were dressed in our blue uniforms before the upcoming sports meeting.It was going to be held on a Friday morning. However, the night before the sports meeting, I got very nervous, and worried what if I made a mess in the performance. I tried to comfort myself, “You can make it. Just calm down and relax.” The next morning, my parents left home for work and I hurried to go to school. Unluckily, when I arrived at school, I found the other nine cheerleaders were all in their white uniforms. But I was still in my blue uniform. At once I realised I had made a mistake: wearing the wrong uniform. There was not much time left before the cheerleading performance started. What should I do? Both my team members and the coach were worried. Then a cheerleader called Tammy offered to help me. She said, “My home is quite close to our school. Maybe I could give my mother a call. She is at home now. She could drive Jane to her home, so Jane can change her uniform quickly.” 1. 阅读所给文章，以及两句段首句，整理补充主要情节线。 When Where Who What Why How Friday morning，表演当天 学校、家 I，Jammy，Jammy’s mom 我穿错了制服（白色--蓝色） 表演前我很焦虑，早上匆忙赶到学校 introduction build-up problem/dilemma resolution ending 我加入啦啦队。 我和大家一起努力训练，表演前一天我很紧张。 我在表演当天穿错了制服，而且表演很快要开始。 续写部分 Jammy的妈妈带我回家换制服。 我顺利参加演出。 The coach allowed Tammy to give it a try. I joined the other girls for the cheerleading performance. Tammy给她妈妈打电话，她妈妈同意，并带我回去成功换好衣服。 表演过程，表演结果，升华主题。 续写的主要内容 Para1:The coach allowed Tammy to give it a try. Para2:I joined the other girls for the cheerleading performance. Tammy马上打电话给她妈妈。 加形容词副词，丰富表达 最终，我们及时赶到学校。我向Tammy妈妈道谢，然后跑向队友。 场景一（承上） 场景二（过渡） 场景三（启下） 最后一句衔接下一段 她妈妈同意了，并在五分钟后赶来学校。 在路上我很紧张，忍不住想要是迟到怎么办？ 到家后，我飞快下车，冲进我的房间，并换好衣服。 加细节 加心理描写 加连续动作描写 场景四（承上） 场景五（结局） 场景六（点题） 舞台上，我有些紧张，但想到我付出的努力，我深吸一口气然后开始表演。 加心理描写，衔接第二段第一句 我和我的队友欢呼，跳上跳下，最终完成了表演。 观众台上，所有人欢呼鼓掌。我们教练笑着看着我们。 那一刻，喜悦感向我袭来。 加动作描写 从众人表现写表演成功 感受的变化 表演过后，我再次向Tammy和她妈妈表达了我的感谢。 正是她们的帮助我才没有错过这次机会。 点明主题+主题升华 The coach allowed Tammy to give it a try. 表达 Tammy马上打电话给她妈妈。 她妈妈同意了，并在五分钟后赶来学校。 在路上我很紧张，忍不住想要是迟到怎么办？ 到家后，我飞快下车，冲进我的房间，并换好衣服。 最终，我们及时赶到学校。 我向Tammy妈妈道谢，然后跑向队友。 Tammy called her mom at once. Her mom agreed and came to the school five minutes later. On our way home, I couldn’t help thinking what if I was late for the performance? After coming back my home, I got off the car quickly, rushed into my room and put on my white uniform. Luckily, we came to the school in time. I thanked for Tammy’s mom and ran over to my roommates. call her mom/quickly/at once/immediately couldn’t help doing sth. 忍不住做... what if...? 要是...怎么办？ rush to/run to 冲向/跑向 in time 及时 舞台上，我有些紧张，但想到我付出的努力，我深吸一口气然后开始表演。 我和我的队友欢呼，跳上跳下，最终完成了表演。 观众台上，所有人欢呼鼓掌。 我们教练笑着看着我们。 那一刻，喜悦感向我袭来。 我再次向Tammy和她妈妈表达了我的感谢。 正是她们的帮助我才没有错过这次机会。 有时，一个小小的善举足以产生巨大的影响。 I joined the other girls for the cheerleading performance. Standing on the stage, I felt a little nervous, but thinking about the efforts I paid, I took a deep breath and then focused on the performance. My teammates and I cheered, jumped up and down and finished the performance. In the stands, everyone cheered and clapped. Our coach looed at us with smile. At that moment, a sense of joy came over me. After it, I expressed my thanks to Tammy and her mom. It was because of their help that I didn’t miss the chance. Sometimes，a small act of kindness can be powerful enough to make a huge difference. take a deep breath 深吸一口气 cheer 欢呼 jump up and down 跳上跳下 in the stands 观众台上 look at sb. with smile a sense of joy came over me It is/was 强调部分 that 其他部分 The coach allowed Tammy to give it a try. Tammy called her mom at once. Her mom agreed and came to the school five minutes later. On our way home, I couldn’t help thinking what if I was late for the performance? After coming back my home, I got off the car quickly, rushed into my room and put on my white uniform. Luckily, we came to the school in time. I thanked for Tammy’s mom and ran over to my roommates. I joined the other girls for the cheerleading performance. Standing on the stage, I felt a little nervous, but thinking about the efforts I paid, I took a deep breath and then focused on the performance. My teammates and I cheered, jumped up and down and finished the performance. In the stands, everyone cheered and clapped. Our coach looed at us with smile. At that moment, a sense of joy came over me. After it, I expressed my thanks to Tammy and her mom. It was because of their help that I didn’t miss the chance.Sometimes，a small act of kindness can be powerful enough to make a huge difference. $