内容正文:
How to write a blog post
Unit 3 The Internet
Reading for writing
Learning Aims
Master the organization and language features
of a blog.
Talk about how to stay safe online and avoid
bad experiences on the Internet.
Write a blog post about online shopping safety.
Lead in
上周末,我的同桌Tom为了领折扣券,在一个App上绑定了银行卡,结果账户被扣了不明费用,这件事在班里引发了热烈讨论。今天,我想分享我的想法和建议,聊一聊在网购世界中如何保护自己。
审题
1.确定文体:这是一篇博文。写作时注意博文的写作特点。
2.主体时态:文章应以一般现在时为主。
3.主体人称:由于是向读者提出网络安全的建议,所以应该以第一或第二人称为主。
谋篇
Headline:Online Shopping Safety
第一段:Introduction引出话题
第二段:Body 围绕话题提出建议
第三段:Conclusion 邀请评论
Useful words and chunks
1.网民
2.建议
3.网址
4.密码
5.账户
6.链接
7.发表
8.评论
netizen
advice;suggestion;tip
website;site
password
account
link
post
comment
1.当谈到
2.想要
3.熟悉
4.点击
5.黄金法则
6.小心驶得万年船
when it comes to
would like to
be familiar with
click on
the golden rule
Better safe than sorry
linking words连接词
Body:
首先first of all, to begin with firstly, first, in the first place, on top of the list, for a start...
其次secondly,
besides,
in addition, additionally, moreover, what's more, furthermore
最后lastly,
finally,
in the end, eventually, consequently, last but not least
Useful expressions about giving advice
It is highly recommended that............
It is a good idea to do.........
You should not do..........
Blog Outline
Begining
When it comes to ________________, as an experienced netizen, I would like to do...
Body
First of all, it is highly recommended that............
In addition, it is a good idea to do.........
Last but not least,you should not do..........
Ending
All in all, remember the golden rule:.......
Do you have..... ? Please post your comments.
Para1: Introduction topic
+ transitional sentences过渡句
1.当谈及网上购物安全,作为一个有经验的网民,我想分享一些建议。(When it comes to)(tip/advice/suggestion)
When it comes to online shopping safety, as an experienced netizen, I would like to share some tips .
Para2:Body
advice linking words+imperative sentences祈使句
首先,强烈建议你使用熟悉的购物网站。(it is highly recommended that...)
First of all, it is highly recommended that you use the shopping websites you are familiar with.
其次,设置一个强度高的密码是好主意。你的密码越强,你的账户越安全(it is a good idea to do...)(the+adj.比较级,the+adj.比较级)
In addition, it is a good idea to use a strong password .The stronger your passwords are, the safer your account is.
最后,你不要点击陌生和不安全的链接。(you should not do...)
Last but not least, you should not click on strange and unsafe links.
Para3: Conclusion (ask others to give comments)
1.总之,记住一个黄金法则:小心驶得万年船。(Better safe than sorry)
All in all, remember the golden rule: “Better safe than sorry.”
2.你有什么好的建议吗?欢迎在下方评论!(comment)
Do you have any good advice ?Please post your comments.
Evaluation Criteria 评价标准
items Scores (15’)
Contents内容(8’) Introduce the topic
Include examples, comparisons, or explanations
Ask readers to leave comments or suggestions
Structure
(2’)
The tips and suggestions are well organized(有条理的) by using link words
Include transitional sentences过渡句
Language
(3’)
Advanced高级的 expressions or sentence patterns句型 ; grammar or spelling mistakes
Others (2’)
Handwriting书写
Let's polish the passage.
Online Shopping Safety
When it comes to online shopping safety, as an experienced netizen, I would like to share some tips .
First of all, it is highly recommended that you use the shopping websites you are familiar with. In addition, it is a good idea to use a strong password .The stronger your passwords are, the safer your account is. Last but not least, you should not click on strange and unsafe links.
All in all, remember the golden rule: “Better safe than sorry.” Do you have any good advice ? Please post your comments.
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