内容正文:
甘肃
英 语
主题写作册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与社会
主题6 和谐社区与志愿服务
(2025兰州卷;2022兰州卷)
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中考话题角度解读
1. 甘肃近6年中考:2025年兰州卷——“美丽的社区”;2022年兰州
卷——暑假期间的志愿服务活动
2. 全国视野:①写自荐信参选志愿者;②分享参加志愿活动的经历
与感受;③如何创建和谐社区
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教材单元链接
人教 七(上)Unit 4 房子周围的事物
七(下)Unit 8 邻里之间
八(上)Unit 4 城镇
八(下)Unit 2 志愿服务与慈善
八(下)Unit 10 生活环境
冀教 七(下)Unit 8 暑假到了 八(上)Unit 4 我的社区
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一阶 课本句型促写作
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开头句 1. Nowadays, more and more hometowns are changing for the better. 如今,越来越多的家乡正在变得越来越好。[改编自人教八(下)U10]
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开头句 2. I live in a small but nice village. I love it
because it’s quiet, and there are a lot of trees. 我
住在一个虽小却很美的村庄里。我喜欢这里,因
为它很安静,而且有很多树。[冀教八(上)U4]
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开头句 3. I want to help out as a volunteer in your old
people’s home. 我想到你们的养老院做志愿者帮忙。 [人教八(下)U2]
4. It is my pleasure to work as a volunteer and
join you in cleaning the park.能作为志愿者和大家一起清理公园,我感到非常荣幸。
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开头句 5. We’ll make every effort to cheer the sick children up and make them feel happy and hopeful.
我们会竭尽全力让生病的孩子们振作起来,让他们感受到快乐与希望。
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中间句 角度1
志愿
活动 1. I get such a strong feeling of satisfaction
when I see the animals get better and the look of joy on their owners’ faces. 当我看到动物们渐渐好转以及它们主人脸上洋溢着喜悦时,我心中会涌起一种强烈的满足感。[人教八(下)U2]
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中间句 角度1
志愿
活动 2. In my free time, I like to… so I think I’d be good at this job. 在我的空闲时间里,我喜欢…… 所以我认为自己能胜任这份工作。[人教八(下)U2]
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中间句 角度1
志愿
活动 3. As a volunteer, you can not only help people
in need, but also learn a lot from the experience.
作为一名志愿者,你不仅能帮助那些有需要的
人,还能从这份经历中学到很多东西。
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中间
句 角度2
社区
环境 1. I live in a noisy neighborhood. There is a post
office between my house and a clothes store.
我住在一个喧闹的社区里。在我家与一家服装店
之间有一个邮局。[人教七(下)U8]
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中间句 角度2
社区
环境 2. In my hometown, there is a big old tree
opposite the school. It has become quite a symbol of the place. 在我的家乡,学校对面有一棵古老的大树。它已经成了这个地方相当有代表性的标志。[人教八(下)U10]
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结尾句 1. This is my neighborhood. Though it is not big,
I feel lucky and happy to live here.这是我的社区。虽然它不大,但住在这儿我感到既幸运又快乐。
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结尾句 2. Volunteering here is a dream come true for me. I can do what I love to do and help others at the same time. 在这里做志愿者对我来说是梦想成真。我既能做自己喜欢的事,同时又能帮助别人。 [人教八(下)U2]
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结尾句 3. Remember that everyone can do something to make a difference. 记住,每个人都能做些事情来产生影响。
4. As teenagers of the new era, we have the
responsibility to serve the society. 作为新时代的青少年,我们有责任为社会服务。
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结尾句 5. This experience made me realize that small acts of kindness can bring big happiness. 这段经历让我意识到,小小的善举能带来巨大的幸福。
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◆句子翻译
1. 在周末,我通常去社区图书馆帮忙。(Tip: help out)
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I usually help out at the community library on weekends.
2. 我们会尽一切努力清理社区,让它更绿意盎然。(Tip: make
every effort to do sth.)
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________________
We’ll make every effort to clean up the community and
make it greener.
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3. 当我作为志愿者在社区图书馆帮助学生阅读时,我有一种强烈
的满足感。(Tip: get such a strong feeling of satisfaction)
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I get such a strong feeling of satisfaction when I help
students read in the community library as a volunteer.
4. 社区广场和图书馆之间有一个小花园。(Tip: between…and…)
_______________________________________________________
_______________
There is a small garden between the community square
and the library.
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5. 即使是微小的志愿行为,也能在改善人们生活方面起到作用。
(Tip: make a difference)
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Even small volunteer acts can make a difference in
improving people’s lives.
6.每个人都有责任保持社区环境的干净和整洁。(Tip: have the
responsibility to do sth.)
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Everyone has the responsibility to keep the community
environment clean and tidy.
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7. 我很乐意参加志愿活动去帮助那些有需要的人。(Tip: It’s my
pleasure to do sth.)
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_______________
It’s my pleasure to take part in volunteer activities to help
those in need.
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◆句式升格
8. Volunteering takes time. Volunteering brings me a lot of joy
and satisfaction.(Tip: although )
_______________________________________________________
_________________
Although volunteering takes time, it brings me a lot of joy
and satisfaction.
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二阶 典例探究明思路
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每个人心里都藏着一些想做的事,比如为家人分担家务,为同学
解决困难,为社会……。你校英文报社以 “Things I want to do
for ____” 为题开展征文活动,请你补全题目并按提示写一篇短
文投稿。
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审题四要素:
审体裁:说明文
审人称:第一人称为主
审时态:一般现在时与一般将来时
审要点:
①想做的事情;
②原因;
③如何做。
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要求:
1. 请先补全标题;
2. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点;
3. 条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
4. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息,词数为80左右。
Things I want to do for___
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_________________________________________________________
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一、构思框架
I dream of doing something meaningful for my community.
to make our neighborhood more beautiful
Sharing interesting books and reading aloud can bring us closer.
like carrying heavy bags or buying food
I believe small actions can make a big difference.
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二、分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
Things I want to do
for my community
Everyone has things
they want to do. I want
to do something
meaningful for my
community. Things I want to do for my
community
Everyone has things they want
to do. I dream of doing something
meaningful for my community.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
First, I plan to
organize a “Green
Community” project.
We’ll plant trees and
clean up litter together.
Next, First, I plan to organize a
“Green Community” project. We’ll
plant trees and clean up litter
together to make our neighborhood
more beautiful. Next,
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初阶范文 高阶范文
I want to set up a
reading corner for kids
in the community center.
Finally, I’ll help elderly
people with their daily
tasks. I want to set up a reading corner for
kids in the community center. Sharing
interesting books and reading aloud
can bring us closer. Finally, I’ll offer
to help elderly people with their
daily tasks, like carrying heavy bags
or buying food.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
I believe small
actions can have a great
influence. I’m looking
forward to making my
community a better
place. I believe small actions can
make a big difference.I’m looking
forward to making my community a
better place.
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三阶 写作实战提能力
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俗话说:“远亲不如近邻。”近日,你校英文社团正在举行主
题为“My Neighborhood”的征文活动。假如你是李华,住在红梅
社区,请结合下图内容及提示,写一篇不少于80词的英文投稿。
要求:
1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点;
2.条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
4.词数:80左右。
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My Neighborhood
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My Neighborhood
My name is Li Hua. I live in Hongmei Neighborhood.
It’s a beautiful and quiet neighborhood. There’s a
beautiful park near here. People always take a walk in it.
And there’s a supermarket in our neighborhood, so it’s very
convenient for us to do some shopping. My neighbors are
very friendly to each other. As the saying goes, “A neighbor
is better than a distant relative.” I have a new neighbor,
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Peter. He lives on the fifth floor. As a policeman, he is kind-
hearted and ready to help others. When people are in
trouble, they usually ask him for help. Another neighbor is
Mr. Li, a sixty-year-old man, who always helps people fix
old things. Everyone in our neighborhood likes them.
It’s really comfortable for me to live in my
neighborhood. I’m lucky to have so many nice neighbors.
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