内容正文:
甘肃
英 语
主题写作册
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第一部分 写作六大微技能
微技能二 写出正确的句子
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技巧1 熟悉句子成分
成分 作用 位置 示例
主语 动作的执行者、事物
或被描述的对象 放在句
首,动词
之前 Maria and her
sister go to piano
classes every week.
谓语 对主语的行为和状态
加以陈述 主语后 They create and
play beautiful
music.
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成分 作用 位置 示例
宾语 动作的对象或承受者 动词或介
词后 Maria’s brother
plays the guitar
and the violin.
宾语补
足语 补充说明宾语的动
作、身份或状态等 宾语后 I find this story
interesting.
表语 说明主语的性质、状
态或特征 系动词
之后 She is my mother.
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成分 作用 位置 示例
定语 对名词或代词进行修
饰或限定的词、词组
或句子 一般放在所修饰的成分之前;不定式、短语或从句放在所
修饰的成分之后 The woman with a baby in her arms is my mother.
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成分 作用 位置 示例
状语 表示动作的时间、地点、方式、原因、目的等,用于修饰动词、形容词、副词或句子 ①一般修饰形容词或副词时,放在
其前
②修饰动词时,通常放在其后
③若修饰整个句
子,通常放在句子
的开头或句末
①He is quite tall
for his age.
②They sang
happily at the party.
③I love my mother
deeply.
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成分 作用 位置 示例
同位语 一个名词对另一个名
词或代词进行解释或
补充说明 名词或代
词之后 We students should
study hard.
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技巧2 排查常见错误
1.检查句子成分是否完整#1
错误原因
缺主语 John is my brother.
Works at Ames Bank. John is my brother.He
works at Ames Bank.
缺谓语 Many people white
cars. Many people have white
cars.
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缺宾语 She always carries in
her pocket. She always carries a pen
in her pocket.
缺宾补 She found the room
very. She found the room very
cold.
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2.检查名词是否正确使用#2
错误原因
可数名词单数形式
不能单独出现 Jill made
sandwich. Jill made a sandwich./Jill
made sandwiches.
可数名词复数形式
错误 I saw some
sheeps. I saw some sheep.
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将不可数名词用作
可数名词 I will give you
two advices. I will give you two
pieces of advice.
不可数名词误用不
定冠词/复数形式 ①Sara has an
information.
②Sara has
informations. Sara has information.
集合名词主谓一致
错误 The team are
winning. The team is winning.
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3.检查动词是否正确使用#3
错误原因
易混动词
误用 There have a book on
the desk. There is a book on the
desk.
主谓一致
错误 ①He call his parents
every day.
②There is ten people in
my office. ①He calls his parents
every day.
②There are ten people in
my office.
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be动词形
式错误 I is a student. I am a student.
否定形式
错误 ①You not at school
today.
②Ella did not wrote a
report. ①You are not at school
today.
②Ella did not write a
report.
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情态动词
后动词形
式错误 We might to play
football tomorrow. We might play football
tomorrow.
动词搭配
错误 She tried to avoid to
meet him. She tried to avoid
meeting him.
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时态错误 ①We call our parents
yesterday.
②They will not came to
the party.
③The environment in
our school is become
better and better. ①We called our parents
yesterday.
②They will not come to
the party.
③The environment in our
school is becoming better
and better.
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语态错误 The book wrote by Mo
Yan. The book was written by
Mo Yan.
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4.检查形容词和副词是否正确使用#5
错误原因
形容词位置错误 I have a car red. I have a red
car.
多个形容词修饰同一名
词,顺序混乱
(形容词顺序一般是描
绘类/大小/形状/新旧/颜
色/国籍/材料/用途) ①I bought a wooden
big table.
②He has a blue new
car. ①I bought a
big wooden
table.
②He has a
new blue car.
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形容词、副词混用 ①The flower smells
sweetly.
②She looks happily
today.
③She sings beautiful. ①The flower
smells sweet.
②She looks
happy today.
③She sings
beautifully.
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5.检查代词是否正确使用#6
错误原因
主格与宾
格混淆 ①Her and I are good
friends.
②Mom gave he a new
book. ①She and I are good
friends.
②Mom gave him a new
book.
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物主代词
误用 Their classroom is big.
Our is small. Their classroom is
big. Ours is small.
some/any
错用 I don’t have some books. I don’t have any books.
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相似词
错用 ①They are five people in
my family.
②Piano keys have two
colors. There are black
and white. ①There are five people
in my family.
②Piano keys have two
colors.They are black
and white.
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复合不定
代词用法
错误 ①Everybody know the
answer.
②I have important
something to tell you. ①Everybody knows the
answer.
②I have something
important to tell you.
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6. 检查介词是否正确使用#7
错误
原因
介词
错用 ①I was born on 2010.
②She is at Beijing now.
③He is waiting on the
bus. ①I was born in 2010.
②She is in Beijing now.
③He is waiting for the bus.
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介词
遗漏 He is good playing
basketball. He is good at playing
basketball.
介词
多余 I go to home at 5
o’clock. I go home at 5 o’clock.
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7. 检查冠词是否正确使用#8
错误原因
a/an 混用(看首字母发音音素,不要只看字母) ①I have an useful
book.
②It was raining
hard, and she didn’t
have a umbrella. ①I have a useful
book.
②It was raining
hard, and she didn’t
have an umbrella.
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冠词的缺失或多余 ①I saw elephant in
the zoo.
②Pass me book on
the desk.
③He plays the
basketball well. ①I saw an elephant
in the zoo.
②Pass me the book
on the desk.
③He plays
basketball well.
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8. 检查数词是否正确使用#9
错误原因
序数词前忘加
the/其他限
定词 She is first student to
arrive. She is the first student
to arrive.
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基数词当序数
词用 Tomorrow is my ten
birthday. Tomorrow is my tenth
birthday.
概数词是否
加-s ①There are two
thousands students in
our school.
②There are thousand
of birds in the sky. ①There are two
thousand students in
our school.
②There are thousands
of birds in the sky.
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9.检查是否为“中式英语”#10
错误原因
句子结构
顺序颠倒 ①I very much like
English.
②He yesterday went
to school. ①I like English very much.
②He went to school yesterday.
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直译思维 Because he was ill,
so he didn’t go to
school. Because he was ill, he didn’t
go to school./He was ill, so
he didn’t go to school.
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句子改错
例:My uncle is play basketball now.. .play改为playing. .
1. My father a doctor in the hospital. ______________________
father后加is或works as
2.I want to buy book.
__________________________
3. There are five child in the classroom. __________________
4. The girl with two cats are playing in the yard.
_________________________
child改为children
are改为is或把with改为and
book前加a/the或book改为books
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5.We aren’t have a meeting today. _______________________
6.She can sings very well. _______________________
7.She apologized for his mistake. _______________________
8.He has lunch at 12 o’clock yesterday. ____________________
9.The letter was wrote by my sister. _______________________
10.Many trees plant in spring every year. _____________________
aren’t改为don’t
sings改为sing或去掉can
his改为her或She改为He
has改为had
wrote改为written
plant改为are planted
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11.She wants to eat delicious something.
________________________________________
delicious something改为something delicious
12.She has a red beautiful dress.
_____________________________________
red beautiful改为beautiful red
13.This book is real interesting. ______________
14.My mom bought I a new bag. _______________
15.This is mine book. _______________
real改为really
I改为me
mine改为my
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16.There are any apples on the table. _______________________
17.I’m interesting in English. _______________________
18.He arrived to London last night. _______________________
19.She is afraid from dogs. _______________________
20.We’ll have a party on next Friday. _______________________
21.My sister will look our pet dog. ________________________
any改为some
interesting改为interested
to改为in
from改为of
删除on
look后加after
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22.He is a honest boy. ____________________
23.There is an university in this city. ____________________
24.He plays piano very well. ____________________
25.He is one of best students in our class. ____________
26.My birthday is on July five. ____________________
27.Thousand of students joined the volunteer activity.
________________________
a改为an
an改为a
piano前加the
best前加the
five改为fifth
Thousand改为Thousands
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