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Writing
Time to Relax
Section B How can a hobby improve your life?
Unit 1
TIME TO RELAX
Writing
Look and share
From this photo, what can we know about this girl?
She loves horses and she may like riding.
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Look and share
From this photo, what can we know about this boy?
He may like photography.
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Look and share
Do you have intersesting hobbies?
If you want to take up an interesting hobby, who do you turn to for advice?
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Look and share
Do you have intersesting hobbies?
If you want to take up an interesting hobby, who do you turn to for advice?
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If you want to take up an interesting hobby, who do you turn to for advice?
Think and share
friends
family
who else?
teachers
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Read and answer
2.Who does Jason turn to ?
Jason from the UK
ask for advice on a new free-time activity
Shuyin from China
introduce her favourite one: horse riding
1. Who are they and what are they doing?
Friends online.
Read and answer
Jason from the UK
ask for advice on a new free-time activity
Shuyin from China
introduce her favourite one: horse riding
What does Shuyin introduce?
Shuyin
horse riding
HOW
When she was six, she visited her grandfather's farm, and he took her to ride a horse.
WHEN
WHERE
WHY
At her grandfather’s farm.
Every weekend.
did it start?
does she do it now?
does she do it now?
does she like it?
Because it lets her spend time with herfavourite horse, Nini.
Because she enjoys being in nature.
Because it helps her stay fit.
Read and answer
Does Shuyin introduce her acitiavity clearly? Why do you think so?
Clear structure.
Linking words
Lively details
Lead in
beginning
body
HOW
WHEN
WHERE
WHY
did it start?
does she do it now?
does she do it now?
does she like it?
Good language
How to make it better?
Think and answer
How to make it better?
Clear structure.
Lead in
beginning
body
HOW
WHEN
WHERE
WHY
did it start?
does she do it now?
does she do it now?
does she like it?
ending??
All in all, horse riding not just a hobby —it’s a way to connect with nature and feel love. From it , I know the best things in life are free!
Tip 1: Have a clear and complete structure.
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Think and answer
How to make it better?
All in all, horse riding not just a hobby —it’s a way to connect with nature and feel love. From it, I know the best things in life are free!
Tip 2: Write topic sentences.
Here is how I learned to ride a horse.
I have many free-time activities, like painting, writing poems, and reading. But my favourite free-time activity is horse riding.
Here is how I learned to ride a horse.When I was six, I visited my grandfather's farm, and he took me to ride a horse. It was such an amazing experience! Now I ride my favourite horse, Nini, at his farm every weekend.
There are many reasons why I love it so much. I love horse riding because I enjoy being in nature. Horse riding also helps me stay fit. But most importantly, it lets me spend time with Nini! She's my best friend. She's happy to see me whenever I visit, especially when I bring her some carrots for a snack! I'm lucky to have her in my life.
All in all, horse riding not just a hobby —it’s a way to connect with nature and feel love. From it I know the best things in life are free!
There are many reasons why I love it so much.
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Think and answer
How to make it better?
Tip 3: Interact with the last post.
I have many free-time activities, like painting, writing poems, and reading. But my favourite free-time activity is horse riding.
Here is how I learned to ride a horse.When I was six, I visited my grandfather's farm, and he took me to ride a horse. It was such an amazing experience! Now I ride my favourite horse, Nini, at his farm every weekend.
There are many reasons why I love it so much. I love horse riding because I enjoy being in nature. Horse riding also helps me stay fit. But most importantly, it lets me spend time with Nini! She's my best friend. She's happy to see me whenever I visit, especially when I bring her some carrots for a snack! I'm lucky to have her in my life.
All in all, horse riding not just a hobby —it’s a way to connect with nature and feel love. From it, I know the best things in life are free!
Why not have a try? You may like it.
Hi, Jason.
Hi, Jason.I have many free-time activities, like painting, writing poems, and reading. But my favourite free-time activity is horse riding.
Here is how I learned to ride a horse.When I was six, I visited my grandfather's farm, and he took me to ride a horse. It was such an amazing experience! Now I ride my favourite horse, Nini, at his farm every weekend.
There are many reasons why I love it so much. I love horse riding because I enjoy being in nature. Horse riding also helps me stay fit. But most importantly, it lets me spend time with Nini! She's my best friend. She's happy to see me whenever I visit, especially when I bring her some carrots for a snack! I'm lucky to have her in my life.
All in all, horse riding not just a hobby —it’s a way to connect with nature and feel love. From it, I know the best things in life are free! Why not have a try? You may like it.
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Hi, Jason.I have many free-time activities, like painting, writing poems, and reading. But my favourite free-time activity is horse riding.
Here is how I learned to ride a horse.When I was six, I visited my grandfather's farm, and he took me to ride a horse. It was such an amazing experience! Now I ride my favourite horse, Nini, at his farm every weekend.
There are many reasons why I love it so much. I love horse riding because I enjoy being in nature. Horse riding also helps me stay fit. But most importantly, it lets me spend time with Nini! She's my best friend. She's happy to see me whenever I visit, especially when I bring her some carrots for a snack! I'm lucky to have her in my life.
All in all, horse riding not just a hobby —it’s a way to connect with nature and feel love. From it, I know the best things in life are free! Why not have a try? You may like it.
Linking words
Lively details
Good language
Tip 1: Have a clear and complete structure.
Tip 2: Write topic sentences.
Tip 3: Interact with the last post.
Let’s reply Jason too.
Summary
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Step 1: Analyze
Type:_______________________
Person:_______________________
Tense:_______________________
Words:_______________________
Key points:____________________
a reply post
the first person
about 80 words
present and past tense
when, where how, why
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Step 2: Structure
HOW
WHEN
WHERE
WHY
did it start?
do I do it now?
do I do it now?
do I like it?
beginning
body
ending
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Step 3: Language
HOW
WHEN
WHERE
WHY
did it start?
do I do it now?
do I do it now?
do I like it?
beginning
body
ending
My favorite free-time activity is ...
I started this activity when I was ...
I like to do it because ...
It make me really happy when ...
I find it fun to ... It lets me ...
I enjoy .. when I ...
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Step 3: Language
HOW
WHEN
WHERE
WHY
did it start?
do I do it now?
do I do it now?
do I like it?
beginning
body
ending
My favorite free-time activity is ...
I started this activity when I was ...
Any more sentences?
My … introduced it to me … years ago.
I first tried it/It all started when I was …
Hello/Hi, Jason! / I’d like to tell you about my favourite activity—.....
My favourite way to spend free time is …
I usually do it … times a week/month at/in …
I like to do it because ...
It make me really happy when ...
I find it fun to ... It lets me ...
I enjoy .. when I ...
I’m really glad I started … / I feel lucky to have …
It’s not just a hobby—it’s a way to relax/connect with...
I hope to keep doing it for a long time.
I often ... in/on/at sp with ...
Why not ...?
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Step 4: A sample
Hi Jason.My favourite free-time activity is playing the guitar.
I started this activity when I was 12 years old, after watching a concert that inspired me. I find it fun to learn new songs and challenge myself with different music styles.
There are many reasons why I love it so much. It makes me really happy when I can play a song perfectly after practising. I also like to do it because music helps me relax and express my feelings. More importantly, I enjoy performing for my family and friends when I have gatherings at home.
If you're looking for a new hobby, I highly recommend trying music! It’s creative and rewarding.
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Step 5: Write
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Step 6: Check and polish
clear frame
(结构清晰)
complete content
(内容完整)
Rich language
(语言)
good adjectives
(好的形容词)
good phrases
(好的词组)
use clauses
(使用从句)
use linking
words
(使用连接词)
Correct grammar
(语法)
correct tense
(时态)
spelling words
(单词拼写)
punctuations
(标点符号)
Good handwriting
(书写)
clean and neat
(干净整洁)
Frame and content
(结构和内容)
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Step 7: Reflect
How well can you do these things?` Very well OK Needs work
I can read and understand the post and its reply.
I can sort out the structure and language of the post.
I can write a reply post with a good structure and suitable language.
What I need to improve is _________________________.
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Time to Relax
TIME TO RELAX
Writing
Goodbye
Language points
1. I'd like to take up a new free-time activity.
She decided to take up gardening after retirement.
她决定退休后开始学习园艺。
take up a hobby表示“开始从事一项新的爱好或活动”,强调从无到有的过程。 take up(动词短语)+ 名词(活动/爱好)主语通常为人,可用于各种时态
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Language points
2. I'm hoping to get some ideas.
句意:“我希望得到一些想法”
hope to do sth.“希望做某事”,是表达主观愿望的常用结构,强调对未来的期待(但不涉及 “计划”,只是愿望)
⚠注意:没有hope sb. to do sth.结构
例句: I hope to visit Japan during the summer vacation.
我希望暑假期间去日本旅游。
She hopes to become a teacher when she grows up.
她希望长大后成为一名教师。
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Exercises
1.Lily hopes ______ her grandparents this weekend, because
she misses them very much.
A. see B. seeing C. to see D. sees
2.适当形式填空。
They hope ________ (win) the school singing competition this time.
C
to win
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Language points
3. It was such an amazing experience!
句意:“那是一次如此奇妙的经历!”
such+a/an +形容词+可数名词单数 “如此......的一......”
such+形容词+可数名词复数/不可数名词
例句: It’s such a cold day that we don’t want to go out.
今天天气如此冷,我们不想出门。
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Language points
4. I love horse riding because I enjoy being in nature.
句意:“我喜欢骑马,因为我喜欢亲近自然。”
enjoy doing sth. “喜欢做某事;享受做某事的乐趣”,强调从某一活动中获得愉悦感。
例句:I enjoy listening to soft music before going to bed.
我喜欢睡前听轻音乐。
My grandparents enjoy walking in the park every morning.
我的祖父母喜欢每天早上在公园散步。
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Language points
5. I'm lucky to have her in my life.
句意:“我很幸运在我的生活中拥有她。”
be lucky to do sth. “很幸运做某事;有幸做某事”
例句:I am lucky to have such a kind teacher.
我很幸运有一位这么善良的老师。
He was lucky to pass the final exam without studying hard.
他很幸运,没怎么努力学习也通过了期末考试。
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