Unit 2 Stay Healthy 作文讲解与练习 2025-2026学年人教版英语八年级下册

Unit2 Stay Healthy作文讲解与练习 写作话题 本单元话题围绕健康问题与安全防护展开。与该话题相关的常见写作有：描述意外（如过敏、受伤等）发生的经过及处理过程；编写医生与患者就健康问题（过敏、伤痛等）的对话；制作健康宣传手册，介绍某健康问题（过敏、眼疲劳等）的成因、症状及防护/应对方法；阐述保障自身安全、预防健康风险的举措与建议。 写此类作文时，一般先依据所给提示阐述问题，接着针对该健康问题给出合理建议，最后表达祝愿，期盼对方早日康复。提建议过程中，应恰当运用情态动词should/shouldn't和could。短文通常为记叙文或应用文，通常采用第二人称，以一般现在时为主。写作时，还可巧妙融入本单元所学的反身代词，为文章增色。 本单元相关话题写作素材有： (1)You should/shouldn't/could…你应该/不应该/可以…… (2)I have a stomachache/headache/toothache/…我胃痛/头痛/牙痛/…… (3)Avoid…避免…… (4)What's more, you should…更为重要的是，你应该…… (5)And remember, your health is in your hands.记住，你的健康掌握在自己手里。 写作佳句 1.我不停地打喷嚏，还头疼。 I_________ _________ sneezing and I_________ _________ _________. 2.他怎么了？ What's_________ _________ _________ _________? 3.医生让我吃点药。 The doctor let_________ _________ _________ _________. 4.他让我卧床好好休息。 He asked me to _________ _________ _________ and have a good rest. 5.吃了药之后，我感觉好多了。 I_________ _________ after taking the medicine. 典例1 请根据昨天的情况写一篇80词左右的日记。 早上感到头疼，打喷嚏(sneeze)，妈妈带你去医院，医生检查了一下并问了一些情况，最后给你开了一些药并让你好好休息。第二天你觉得好多了。 思路导引 1.定人称 2.定时态 3.定体裁 4.列提纲 A dairy *介绍自己感冒的情况 I felt terrible yesterday morning. *描述症状 I can't stop sneezing and I have a headache. Time: this morning. *医生建议had a bad cold, but it's nothing serious. take some medicine; stay in bed and have a good rest. *最后谈谈感受 I felt better after taking the medicine. 根据提纲成文： ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 典例2 假如你是张丽，你的美国笔友Ann近来总感觉不舒服，请你根据写作要点提示给她写一封电子邮件。词数80左右。 写作要点： 1.因知道Ann生病而感到难过； 2.结合Ann的病情给出应对方法；(1)得了重感冒；(2)咳嗽；(3)发烧 3.给她提出两条保持健康的建议； 4.表达祝愿，希望她尽快好起来。 思路导引 1.定人称 2.定时态 3.定体裁 4.列提纲 Keep healthy *信首寒暄 I'm sorry to hear that… *提出建议 You should… What's more, you should… To stay healthy, I have some suggestions… First… Second… *表达祝愿I hope… 根据提纲成文： ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Keys 写作佳句 1. can't stop; have a headache 2. the matter with him 3. me take some medicine 4. stay in bed 5. felt better 典例1 写作范例 Wednesday, March 25th I felt terrible yesterday morning. My mother took me to the hospital. “What's your trouble, little boy?” the doctor asked.“I can't stop sneezing and I have a headache.”“When did it start?”“This morning.”“Open your mouth and say‘Ah’.” My mother was worried and asked the doctor,“What's the matter with him?”“He has a bad cold, but it's nothing serious,” the doctor said. Then the doctor told me to take some medicine. He asked me to stay in bed and have a good rest. I felt better after taking the medicine. 典例2 Dear Ann, I'm sorry to hear that you don't feel well these days. I know you have a bad cold, a cough and a fever. That must be very uncomfortable. You should go to the doctor and take some medicine. What's more, you should drink enough water and have a good rest. To stay healthy, I have some suggestions for you. First, do some exercise every day, like taking a walk or doing yoga. It can make your body stronger. Second, keep a balanced diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Avoid fast food for now as it is unhealthy. I hope you will get better soon. Best wishes! Yours, Zhang Li 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $