Unit 2 Body language Writing学案：以读促写·介绍肢体语言的说明文 英语新教材沪教版八年级下册

沪教版八年级下册 Unit 2 Body language Writing 学案：以读促写·介绍肢体语言的说明文 【适用年级】：沪教牛津八下 | 写作主题：Write a passage to introduce body language 【写作要求】：介绍肢体语言的定义、常见类型及含义、重要性，可适当补充不同文化中的肢体语言差异，结构清晰，语句通顺，80词左右 【写作任务完整呈现】 Write a passage to introduce body language. You should include the following points: 1. What body language is 2. Different types of body language and their meanings 3. The importance of body language in daily life 【教材范文参考】 Body language is an important form of non-verbal communication. It includes gestures, facial expressions, eye contact and posture. Different body language has different meanings. For example, smiling shows happiness and friendliness. Nodding your head means “yes” while shaking your head means “no”. Standing straight can show your confidence. Body language is very helpful in our daily life. It can send messages without speaking and help us understand each other better. Good body language also makes us more polite and popular. We should learn to use proper body language in our life.要点勾选（对照范文，勾选包含的要点） (1) The definition of body language (2) Different kinds of body language (3) The meanings of common body language (4) The importance of body language (5) How to learn body language well (6) Body language in different cultures 【Part 1：以读促写·精读拓展】 一、拓展阅读1：Body Language in Daily Communication Body language is a kind of non-verbal communication that we use every day. It is made up of gestures, facial expressions, eye contact, posture and even the distance between people. We use it to express our true feelings and ideas without saying a single word, and it often makes our communication more vivid. In our daily life, simple body language has clear meanings. A warm smile always shows friendliness and kindness, and it can make people around us feel happy. Making eye contact when talking means you are listening carefully and respecting others. Sitting or standing straight shows that you are a confident person. Even a small action like waving a hand can tell others your greeting or goodbye. Body language is a bridge between people. It helps us communicate better with others and makes our relationship closer. If you can understand body language well, you will find it easier to know what others are thinking. 1. 阅读理解 (1) What is body language made up of? A. Only gestures and facial expressions B. Gestures, eye contact and many other things C. Spoken words and written messages (2) What does making eye contact when talking show? A. Disrespect to the speaker B. Careful listening and respect C. Lack of confidence (3) Why is body language a bridge between people? A. It makes communication better and relationships closer B. It can replace spoken language completely C. It is the same in all countries 2. 好词好句积累（从文中找英文，学生填写） 中文释义 英文原句 肢体语言是我们每天都会使用的一种非语言交流方式。 它让我们的交流更加生动。 温暖的微笑总是代表着友好和善良。 如果你能很好地理解肢体语言，你会发现更容易知道别人在想什么。 二、拓展阅读2：Body Language in Different Cultures Body language is very important in cross-cultural communication, but the same body language may have different meanings in different countries. It’s necessary for us to learn these differences to avoid misunderstanding. In most Western countries, eye contact is very important in communication. It shows honesty and attention, so people usually look at each other when talking. However, in some Asian countries, too much eye contact is not polite, especially when talking to the elderly or superiors. The “OK” gesture is a common sign of agreement in the US and the UK, but it is considered rude in Brazil and some Middle Eastern countries. Nodding the head means “yes” in China, but it means “no” in Bulgaria. Although there are many differences, some body language is universal. A smile is the most beautiful language in the world—it shows friendliness in every country. No matter where you go, a warm smile can help you make friends easily. 1. 阅读理解 (1) Why do we need to learn body language differences in different cultures? A. To make our body language more beautiful B. To avoid misunderstanding in communication C. To learn more about different countries’ history (2) What does eye contact show in Western countries? A. Honesty and attention B. Rudeness and disrespect C. Shyness and nervousness (3) Which body language is universal in the world? A. Nodding the head B. The “OK” gesture C. Smiling 2. 好词好句积累（从文中找英文，学生填写） 中文释义 英文原句 相同的肢体语言在不同的国家可能有不同的含义。 过多的眼神交流在一些亚洲国家是不礼貌的。 尽管有很多差异，但一些肢体语言是通用的。 温暖的微笑能帮助你轻松交到朋友。 三、拓展阅读3：Good Body Language Makes You Better Good body language can bring us a lot of benefits in our study and life. It not only makes us look more polite, but also helps us leave a good impression on others. When you have a class or a meeting, sitting straight and keeping your eyes on the speaker shows your attention. This small action can also help you focus on what you are learning and get better grades. When you meet new people, shaking hands gently and smiling can show your kindness, which is a good way to start a new friendship. When you talk with your parents or teachers, a slight nod now and then tells them you understand their words, making the communication more smooth. Bad body language, on the other hand, can bring trouble. For example, looking around when talking makes people think you are not interested in what they say. Standing too close to others may make them feel uncomfortable. So we should learn to use good body language and avoid bad ones. 1. 阅读理解 (1) What can good body language bring us? A. More money and gifts B. Good impression and smooth communication C. Better physical health (2) What should you do when having a class to show attention? A. Sit straight and look at the speaker B. Look around and talk with classmates C. Lie on the desk and close your eyes (3) Which of the following is bad body language? A. Shaking hands gently when meeting new people B. Nodding slightly when talking with teachers C. Looking around when someone is talking to you 2. 好词好句积累（从文中找英文，学生填写） 中文释义 英文原句 良好的肢体语言能在我们的学习和生活中给我们带来很多好处。 这一小小的举动也能帮助你专注于所学的内容，取得更好的成绩。 相反，不好的肢体语言会带来麻烦。 我们应该学会使用良好的肢体语言，避免不好的肢体语言。 四、框架拆解（从教材范文和拓展阅读中总结） 结合以上三篇拓展阅读和教材范文，总结介绍肢体语言说明文的核心框架 段落 功能 核心特征 开头段（Paragraph 1） 定义肢体语言 用简洁的句子说明肢体语言是什么，包含哪些基本类型，使用简单的下定义句型 中间段1（Paragraph 2） 常见肢体语言及含义 列举3-4种日常常见的肢体语言，说明其具体含义，用For example/Such as等连接词举例 中间段2（Paragraph 3） 肢体语言的重要性/文化差异 可选择说明肢体语言在生活中的作用，也可补充不同文化中的肢体语言差异，丰富内容 结尾段（Paragraph 4） 总结+建议 总结肢体语言的价值，提出“学会使用恰当的肢体语言”的建议，升华主题 【Part 2：核心语料积累与仿写训练】 一、核心语料积累 1. 开头段：肢体语言的定义 中文释义 英文句型 肢体语言是一种重要的非语言交流形式。 Body language is an important form of non-verbal communication. 肢体语言是我们不用说话就能表达感受的方式。 Body language is a way for us to express feelings without speaking. 它包括手势、面部表情、眼神交流和姿势。 It includes gestures, facial expressions, eye contact and posture. 肢体语言是我们日常生活中不可或缺的一部分。 Body language is an indispensable part of our daily life. 2. 中间段1：常见肢体语言及含义 中文释义 英文句型 微笑代表着快乐和友好。 Smiling shows happiness and friendliness. 点头意味着“是”，而摇头意味着“不”。 Nodding your head means “yes” while shaking your head means “no”. 眼神交流表明你在认真倾听并尊重他人。 Eye contact shows that you are listening carefully and respecting others. 站直身体能展现你的自信。 Standing straight can show your confidence. 挥手是一种常见的问候或告别方式。 Waving a hand is a common way to greet or say goodbye. 轻轻握手能表现你的友善。 Shaking hands gently can show your kindness. 3. 中间段2：肢体语言的重要性/文化差异 （1）重要性相关 中文释义 英文句型 肢体语言让我们的交流更加生动和顺畅。 Body language makes our communication more vivid and smooth. 它能帮助我们更好地理解彼此的想法。 It can help us understand each other’s ideas better. 良好的肢体语言能让我们给别人留下好印象。 Good body language can help us make a good impression on others. 肢体语言是人与人之间沟通的桥梁。 Body language is a bridge for communication between people. 理解肢体语言能让我们的人际关系更亲密。 Understanding body language can make our interpersonal relationships closer. （2）文化差异相关 中文释义 英文句型 相同的肢体语言在不同国家可能有不同的含义。 The same body language may have different meanings in different countries. 在西方国家，眼神交流代表诚实和专注。 In Western countries, eye contact shows honesty and attention. 微笑是世界通用的肢体语言，代表着友好。 Smiling is a universal body language in the world and it shows friendliness. 了解不同文化的肢体语言差异能避免误解。 Learning the differences of body language in different cultures can avoid misunderstanding. 4. 结尾段：总结+建议 中文释义 英文句型 肢体语言在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。 Body language plays an important role in our life. 我们应该学会理解和使用恰当的肢体语言。 We should learn to understand and use proper body language. 良好的肢体语言能让我们的生活变得更美好。 Good body language can make our life better. 让我们学会用正确的肢体语言与他人交流。 Let’s learn to communicate with others with proper body language. 掌握肢体语言的技巧能帮助我们更好地与人相处。 Mastering the skills of body language can help us get along better with others. 二、分步仿写训练（从开头到结尾，逐段仿写，多主题多变化） 仿写要求：根据括号内的提示，完成不同难度的仿写，夯实写作基础，灵活运用语料 1. 仿写开头段（定义肢体语言） 范例：Body language is an important form of non-verbal communication. It includes gestures, facial expressions, eye contact and posture. 仿写1：________________________________________________ 仿写2：________________________________________________ 2. 仿写中间段1（常见肢体语言及含义） 范例：Different body language has different meanings. For example, smiling shows happiness and friendliness. Nodding your head means “yes”. 仿写1：Different body language has different meanings. For example, ________________________. ________________________.（提示：挥手表示问候；眼神交流代表尊重） 仿写2：There are many common body languages in our life. ________________________ shows ________________________. And ________________________ means ________________________.（提示：站直身体；自信；轻轻握手；友善） 3. 仿写中间段2（肢体语言的重要性/文化差异） （1）仿写“重要性” 范例：Body language is very important in our life. It helps us communicate better and understand each other easily. 仿写1：Body language plays a key role in daily communication. ________________________. ________________________.（提示：它让交流更顺畅；帮我们留下好印象） 仿写2：Good body language brings us many benefits. ________________________. It also ________________________.（提示：它是人与人之间的沟通桥梁；让人际关系更亲密） （2）仿写“文化差异” 范例：The same body language may have different meanings in different countries. For example, nodding means “yes” in China but “no” in Bulgaria. 仿写1：There are many differences of body language in different cultures. For example, ________________________. ________________________.（提示：眼神交流在西方代表诚实；在一些亚洲国家不宜过多） 仿写2：We should learn body language differences across cultures. ________________________ is polite in ________________________, but it is rude in ________________________.（提示：OK手势；美国；巴西） 4. 仿写结尾段（总结+建议） 范例：Body language is very helpful for us. We should learn to use proper body language in our daily life. 仿写1：________________________________________________. We should ________________________.（提示：肢体语言在生活中不可或缺；学会理解和运用良好的肢体语言） 仿写2：________________________________________________. Let’s ________________________ to communicate better with others.（提示：掌握肢体语言技巧很重要；用正确的肢体语言） 【Part 3：完整写作步骤指导】 Step 1：Plan（规划） 根据教材写作要求和拓展阅读的框架，完成以下写作笔记，理清写作思路，内容可自选搭配： 1. 肢体语言定义：________________________ (用1-2句话概括，如：非语言交流方式，包含手势、表情等) 2. 常见肢体语言及含义： ① ________________________ → ________________________ ② ________________________ → ________________________ ③ ________________________ → ________________________ 3. 核心拓展内容：________________________ (选其一：重要性/文化差异，简要写要点) 4. 总结与建议：________________________ (如：学会使用恰当的肢体语言，让交流更顺畅) Step 2：Write（写作） 结合上面的框架、核心语料和仿写训练，完成介绍肢体语言的说明文，参考以下模板，可灵活修改内容： ________________________________________________ (开头：定义肢体语言，说明包含类型) Different body language has different meanings in our daily life. For example, ________________________. ________________________. ________________________ also shows ________________________. These simple actions can help us send messages easily. ________________________ (中间：重要性/文化差异). ________________________. ________________________. It makes our communication more colorful and smooth. ________________________ (结尾：总结+建议). We should ________________________. If we can use body language properly, we will get along better with others. Step 3：Check and Revise（自查修改） 对照以下清单，检查自己的作文，及时修改错误，让文章更完美： [ ] 开头是否清晰定义了肢体语言，说明基本类型？ [ ] 中间是否写了3种及以上常见肢体语言，说明其含义？ [ ] 是否补充了肢体语言的重要性或文化差异，内容丰富？ [ ] 结尾是否有总结和使用肢体语言的建议，结构完整？ [ ] 是否使用了本单元核心词汇（body language, gesture, expression, contact等）？ [ ] 拼写、语法、标点是否正确，语句是否通顺？ [ ] 词数是否符合要求（80词左右），无过多废话？ 【Part 4：写作能力提升】 一、中翻英句型训练（实战演练，全覆盖写作考点） 1. 肢体语言是一种不用说话就能表达我们真实感受的交流方式。 2. 面部表情是肢体语言的重要组成部分，它能轻易展现我们的情绪。 3. 当和别人交谈时，眼神交流表明你在认真倾听。 4. 良好的肢体语言能帮助我们在生活和学习中给别人留下好印象。 5. 了解不同文化中的肢体语言差异，能让我们避免交流中的误解。 6. 肢体语言在人与人的沟通中扮演着重要的角色，我们应该学会正确使用它。 二、句式升级训练（从基础句到高分句，让作文更出彩） 基础句→升级句，掌握高分表达技巧 1. 基础句：Body language is very important. 升级句：Body language plays an extremely important role in our daily communication. 2. 基础句：Smiling is friendly. 升级句：A warm smile is the most universal expression of friendliness in the world. 3. 基础句：We should use proper body language. 升级句：It is necessary for us to learn to understand and use proper body language in our life. 4. 基础句：Body language helps us communicate better. 升级句：Body language can not only help us communicate better but also make our relationships closer. 5. 基础句：The same body language has different meanings in different countries. 升级句：The same body language may carry different meanings in different cultural backgrounds. 自主升级（根据技巧，将以下基础句升级为高分句） 1. 基础句：Eye contact shows respect. 升级句：________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：Good body language brings us many benefits. 升级句：________________________________________________ 三、实战写作题（多主题变式，灵活运用所学） 写作题1（基础版，贴合教材要求） 题目：Write a passage to introduce body language. You should include what it is, its common meanings and its importance. (80词左右) 写作题2（提升版，增加文化差异） 题目：Write a passage about body language. Tell us what body language is, some common body language and its differences in different cultures. (80-100词) 写作题3（拓展版，结合生活实际） 题目：Write a short passage about good body language. Tell us what good body language is and why it is important in our daily life. (80-100词) 【Part 5：写作必备·背诵默写版】 一、【必备核心词汇】 最新沪教版八年级学习资料 八年级备课组 姓名： 班级： 1. 2. body language 肢体语言 3. communication n. 交流，沟通 4. gesture n. 手势 5. expression n. 表情；表达 6. facial adj. 面部的 7. contact n. 接触；联系 8. eye contact 眼神交流 9. posture n. 姿势，姿态 10. proper adj. 恰当的，合适的 11. confident adj. 自信的 12. universal adj. 通用的，普遍的 13. respect v.&n. 尊重 14. 二、【必备核心短语】 1. 2. non-verbal communication 非语言交流 3. facial expression 面部表情 4. make a good impression on sb. 给某人留下好印象 5. listen carefully 认真倾听 6. play an important role in 扮演重要角色 7. communicate with sb. 与某人交流 8. avoid misunderstanding 避免误解 9. in different cultures 在不同的文化中 10. get along with sb. 与某人相处 11. send messages 传递信息 三、【必备万能句型】 （1）开头段：定义句型 1. Body language is an important form of non-verbal communication in our daily life. 2. It is a way for us to express feelings and ideas without speaking. （2）中间段：含义/举例句型 3. Different body language has different meanings in our life. 4. For example, smiling shows friendliness and nodding means agreement. （3）中间段：重要性/差异句型 5. Body language is a bridge for communication between people and it helps us understand each other better. 6. The same body language may have different meanings in different countries, so we need to learn these differences. （4）结尾段：总结/建议句型 7. Body language is very important and it makes our daily communication more vivid. 8. We should learn to understand and use proper body language to get along better with others. 四、【必备万能范文】（3篇不同版本，背熟默写，适配不同写作要求） 范文1（基础版·贴合教材，80词） Body language is an important form of non-verbal communication. It includes gestures, facial expressions, eye contact and posture. Different body language has different meanings. Smiling shows friendliness and happiness. Nodding means “yes” while shaking head means “no”. Eye contact shows we respect others and listen carefully. Body language helps us communicate better without speaking. It makes us understand each other easily. We should learn to use proper body language in our daily life. 范文2（提升版·含文化差异，90词） Body language is a special way to express feelings without speaking. It has many forms, such as gestures, facial expressions and eye contact. Common body language has clear meanings: a smile is friendly, and standing straight shows confidence. But it’s different in cultures—eye contact is honest in the West, but too much is impolite in some Asian countries. Smiling is universal all over the world. Body language is important for communication. We should learn its cultural differences and use it properly to avoid misunderstanding. 范文3（拓展版·讲良好肢体语言，95词） Good body language is an important part of our life and it brings us many benefits. It includes gentle smiles, proper eye contact and straight posture. Good body language can make us look confident and polite. It helps us leave a good impression on teachers and classmates. When talking, a slight nod shows we listen carefully, making communication smoother. Bad body language, like looking around, will make people feel unhappy. We should learn to use good body language every day. It can help us communicate better and get along well with others. 五、【默写版】（空白填空·自查专用，对应基础版范文） Body language is an important form of ____________. It includes ____________, facial expressions, ____________ and posture. Different body language has different meanings. ____________ shows friendliness and happiness. ____________ means “yes” while shaking head means “no”. ____________ shows we respect others and listen carefully. Body language helps us ____________ better without speaking. It makes us understand each other easily. We should learn to use ____________ body language in our daily life. 六、【自查清单】（背完默写后对照检查，确保掌握） □ 核心词汇（body language/gesture/expression等）拼写全部正确 □ 万能句型8句能熟练背诵，可灵活运用 □ 3篇万能范文能完整默写，框架清晰 □ 能准确区分肢体语言的定义、含义、重要性等写作要点 □ 会用For example/Such as等连接词举例，语句通顺 【Part 6：参考答案与解析】 一、写作任务完整呈现·要点勾选 答案：(1)✓ (2)✓ (3)✓ (4)✓ 解析：教材范文明确给出了肢体语言的定义、类型、常见含义和重要性；未提及“如何学好肢体语言”和“不同文化中的肢体语言差异”，故(5)(6)不选。 二、Part 1 精读拓展·阅读理解答案+解析 拓展阅读1 1. B 解析：细节题，根据原文“It is made up of gestures, facial expressions, eye contact, posture and even the distance between people.”可知肢体语言包含多种形式，并非只有手势和表情。 2. B 解析：细节题，根据原文“Making eye contact when talking means you are listening carefully and respecting others.”可知交谈时的眼神交流代表认真倾听和尊重。 3. A 解析：细节题，根据原文“It helps us communicate better with others and makes our relationship closer.”可知肢体语言作为沟通桥梁的原因是让交流更顺畅、关系更亲密。 拓展阅读2 1. B 解析：细节题，根据原文“It’s necessary for us to learn these differences to avoid misunderstanding.”可知学习不同文化的肢体语言差异是为了避免交流中的误解。 2. A 解析：细节题，根据原文“In most Western countries, eye contact is very important in communication. It shows honesty and attention.”可知西方国家中眼神交流代表诚实和专注。 3. C 解析：细节题，根据原文“Although there are many differences, some body language is universal. A smile is the most beautiful language in the world—it shows friendliness in every country.”可知微笑是世界通用的肢体语言。 拓展阅读3 1. B 解析：细节题，根据原文“It not only makes us look more polite, but also helps us leave a good impression on others.”和后文内容可知良好的肢体语言能带来好印象，让交流更顺畅。 2. A 解析：细节题，根据原文“When you have a class or a meeting, sitting straight and keeping your eyes on the speaker shows your attention.”可知上课坐直、看着讲话者是表示专注的方式。 3. C 解析：细节题，根据原文“For example, looking around when talking makes people think you are not interested in what they say.”可知交谈时东张西望是不好的肢体语言。 三、Part 1 精读拓展·好词好句积累（英文原句） 拓展阅读1 1. Body language is a kind of non-verbal communication that we use every day. 2. It often makes our communication more vivid. 3. A warm smile always shows friendliness and kindness. 4. If you can understand body language well, you will find it easier to know what others are thinking. 拓展阅读2 1. The same body language may have different meanings in different countries. 2. Too much eye contact is not polite in some Asian countries. 3. Although there are many differences, some body language is universal. 4. A warm smile can help you make friends easily. 拓展阅读3 1. Good body language can bring us a lot of benefits in our study and life. 2. This small action can also help you focus on what you are learning and get better grades. 3. Bad body language, on the other hand, can bring trouble. 4. So we should learn to use good body language and avoid bad ones. 四、Part 2 分步仿写训练（参考答案） 1. 仿写开头段 Body language is a non-verbal way for us to express feelings. It includes gestures, facial expressions and posture. Body language is an important way of communication in daily life. We can send messages without speaking and it includes many forms such as eye contact and gestures. 2. 仿写中间段1 waving a hand shows greeting; eye contact means respect Standing straight; confidence; shaking hands gently; kindness 3. 仿写中间段2 （1）重要性 It makes communication more smooth; it helps us make a good impression on others It is a bridge between people; makes our interpersonal relationships closer （2）文化差异 eye contact shows honesty in the West; too much eye contact is not polite in some Asian countries The “OK” gesture; the US; Brazil 4. 仿写结尾段 1. Body language is indispensable in our life; learn to understand and use good body language 2. Mastering the skills of body language is very important; use proper body language 五、Part 4 写作能力提升·参考答案 一、中翻英句型训练 1. Body language is a way of communication for us to express our true feelings without speaking. 2. Facial expressions are an important part of body language and they can show our emotions easily. 3. Making eye contact when talking with others shows that you are listening carefully. 4. Good body language can help us make a good impression on others in our life and study. 5. Learning the differences of body language in different cultures can help us avoid misunderstanding in communication. 6. Body language plays an important role in communication between people and we should learn to use it properly. 二、句式升级训练·自主升级（参考答案） Making proper eye contact with others when talking shows that you respect them. Good body language can bring us a lot of valuable benefits in our daily study and life. 六、Part 5 背诵默写版·默写版填空答案 1. 2. non-verbal communication 3. gestures 4. eye contact 5. Smiling 6. Nodding 7. Eye contact 8. communicate 9. proper 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $