内容正文:
Unit 2
Unit 2
Unit 2
Growing pains and gains
Writing
Unit 2 Growing pains and gains
---Writing
教材分析
Lead in
What’s the video about?
From Failure
to success
Writing Task
人生难免遇到挫折,但往往正是看似糟糕的时刻,藏着转向美好的契机。假设你是李华,你正在参加校报主题为“My growth story”的征稿活动。请根据以下相关信息,结合自身体验,分享一次你难忘的克服困难的经历。
提示:1. What challenge did you meet?
2. How did you feel about it?
3. What did you do?
4. What do you learn from it?
要点
遇到了什么挑战?
心情如何?
你做了什么?
学到了什么?
人称
第一人称
时态
一般过去时为主
Beginning
Ending
Writing structure
Body
The meaning of growing up
My growth story
Lessons
4. What do you learn from it?
1. What chanllenge did you meet?
2. How did you feel about it?
3. What did you do?
归纳总结文章的结果和语言
Beginning
The meaning of growing up
1. 成长从来都不是一件容易的事情。
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2. 但我们需要以正确的方式去面对这些挑战。
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3. 我想与你们分享一下我的成长故事。(I’d like to do sth.)
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Growing up will never be an easy thing.
But we need to look at challenges in the right way.
I’d like to share my growth story with you.
Growing up will never be an easy thing. But we need to look at challenges the right way. I’d like to share my growth story with you.
第一段:开篇点题,引出经历
写作指导1
写作模板
Tip1:学会结合话题,引用教材的原句
Tip2:学会使用过渡句,引出正文
Body
My growth story
Beginning
Development
Climax
End
3. What did you do?
1. What chanllenge did you meet?
2. How did you feel about it?
4. What do you learn from it?
以“一次跑步比赛失利”为例
比赛输了
失落&难过
勇敢面对失败
收获
4. 上学期,一场重要的跑步比赛在我学校举办。(被动语态)
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5. 作为一名跑步爱好者,我报名参加了这次比赛。(sign up for)
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6. 为了赢得这场比赛,我每天都练习跑步。(to do 表目的; practise doing sth.)
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7. 然而,我在比赛中失败了。(fail in)
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Body
Last term, an important running race was held in my school.
As a running lover, I signed up for the race.
To win the race, I practised running every day.
However, I failed in the race.
My growth story
8. 那天我感觉非常糟糕。
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9. 起初,我感到如此失望,以至于我开始怀疑自己。(so...that+句子)
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10. 我的朋友们鼓励我继续跑步。(encourage sb. to do sth.; keep doing sth.)
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Body
I felt really bad that day.
At first, I was so disappointed that I began to doubt myself.
My friends encouraged me to keep running.
My growth story
11. 那一刻,我意识到跑步对我来说是一件重要的事情。(a big deal for sb.)
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12. 所以我决定继续努力尝试。(decide to do sth.)
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13. 从那以后,情况发生了很大的变化,我也赢得了很多比赛。(完成时)
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Body
At that moment, I realised running was really a big deal for me.
So I decided to keep trying.
Since then, things have changed a lot, and I have won many races.
My growth story
写作指导2
第二段:讲述自己的经历,起因经过结果
写作模板
Beginning
Development
Climax
End
experience
(challenge/failure)
feelings(sad/disappointed)
keep trying
growth
time order(时间顺序)
at first
then
at last/in the end
Tip3:借助故事山,分享经历或故事
Ending
14. 从这次经历中,我明白了失败是生活的一部分。(be a part of)
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15. 回首看到自己所经历的痛苦与收获,真是太棒了。(it’s great to do sth.)
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16. 实际上,生活正等着我们,伴随着很多惊喜。(with...)
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From this experience, I have learned that failure is a part of life.
It’s great to look back and see my pains and gains.
Lessons
Actually, life is waiting for us with many surprises.
From this experience, I have learned that failure is a part of life. It’s great to look back and see my pains and gains. Actually, life is waiting for us with many surprises.
写作指导3
第三段:收获与感悟
写作模板
4. What will you do to achieve it?
Tip1:学会结合话题,引用教材的原句
My growth story
Growing up will never be an easy thing. But we need to look at challenges in the right way. I’d like to share my growth story with you.
Last term, an important running race was held in my school. As a running lover, I signed up for the race. To win the race, I practised running every day. However, I failed in the race. I felt really bad that day. At first, I was so disappointed that I began to doubt myself. My friends encouraged me to keep running. At that moment, I realised running was really a big deal for me. So I decided to keep trying. Since then, things have changed a lot, and I have won many races.
From this experience, I have learned that failure is a part of life. It’s great to look back and see my pains and gains. Actually, life is waiting for us with many surprises.
Example
Beginning
Ending
Body
写作模板
Growing up will never be an easy thing. But we need to look at challenges in the right way. I’d like to share my growth story with you.
From this experience, I have learned that failure is a part of life. It’s great to look back and see my pains and gains. Actually, life is waiting for us with many surprises.
The meaning of growing up
My growth story
Lessons
归纳总结文章的结果和语言
Practice
人生难免遇到挫折,但往往正是看似糟糕的时刻,藏着转向美好的契机。假设你是李华,你正在参加校报主题为“My growth story”的征稿活动。请根据以下相关信息,结合自身体验,分享一次你难忘的克服困难的经历。
提示:1. What chanllenge did you meet?
2. How did you feel about it?
3. What did you do?
4. What do you learn from it?
分享“一次考试失利并克服困难的经历”
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